Have you ever heard of what's outside the boarders of Equestria?
I'll tell ya, once, along time ago, pony kind tried to expand there land, big mistake. What happened? Find out and read on fellow readers.

This is my first story, I would like some critique advice if you may. No hate, but just some writing advice for me, k? That's it for now ;) p.s cover art?

Re edit: this may go on hiatus for a little while. I have to work on another story, which you can read here