My Adventure in Equestria

by King primal Michael

Chapter 10 (unedited)

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Disclaimed All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony. Thanks man *brohoof*

Story is told from narrator's POV.

CHAPTER 10

I wake up open the next morning I look around Rainbow Dash house it look I am along. “ I guess Nancy and Rainbow is at the school.” I thought to myself

So I pull my phone I went on youtube go on one of my playlist and hit play while the music was playing I clean around the house.

after few minute of from me cleaning the house I found guitar “ I hope Rainbow don’t mind of me play with her guitar for little bit but first I will try to call my brother.” I thought to myself

so I call my big brother it ring ring ring

“ come on pick up big brother.” I said to myself

I got his voicemail

“ This is Billy Goodwin I can answer my phone right now leave your name and your number and a short message after sound beep and I will get back to you have a nice day.”

“ Hey bro it is me call me back I would like to talk to you ok bye.” I left a message

So I pick up Rainbow Dash guitar and went back on youtube and pick one of the song on my playlist and started to play the guitar some odd happen to me I look on my back I wings. the wings on my back was brown the some color of my hair on my head

“ wow that is 20% cooler how did you do that?” a voice said so I stop playing the guitar the wings on my back disappear and turn around and I that Rainbow and Rarity was standing in the doorway

“ hey girls how was your day oh I use to play guitar so I thought it be ok to play with your guitar when I started play the guitar that I notice the wings on my back.” I said with a smile at them.

Before one of the them can answer me my phone began to ring so I answer my phone

“ hello.” I said

“ hey Kelly you call what up.” Billy said

“ yea I want to said I am doing well and see how are you and they rest of the family is doing.” I said

“ oh we all doing well we miss you but they want to see you.” he said

“ I know but right now is not good time maybe in two month I can see what I can do to visit you guys ok.” I said

“ OK.” he said

“ I have to go I have somethings to right now I will try call you guys tomorrow ok bye.” I said

“ ok bye.” he said I hang up the phone

“ so what you guy going to say before my phone ring “ I said

“ our day was great but Nancy run away we need your help,” Rarity said

“ ok but first you guys need to tell what happen to make her run away.” I said with anger in my voice

“ ok she was bully but two snobs in school call her freaks and catwoman because her eyes look like cat's eyes they made her cry she got up started run to somewhere we do not know Applejack , Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are looking for her and VP Luna also is looking for her said that you must stay here and wait for word and Principal Celestia is taking care of those snobs.” Rainbow said

“ ok but I want go and look for my daughter but I will trust you so while we wait want to play music?” I said I hand Rainbow her guitar and I pick up extra guitar

as we play I see Rainbow and I have wings on our back.

(SUNSET SHIMMER P.O.V.)

as we enter the throne room I notice a dark blue mare with the cutie mark as Luna oh shit. I ran up to the mare and help her up

“ are you ok what happen to you?” I ask this mare

“ I ran away from two bullies next thing I know I am here where is dad is he here o.” Nightmare Moon ask

“ no Kelly is not here. He is still in other world that you came from but right now we need to find a way for him come back to us.” I said

we look at the mirror Celestia speak up “ well it look we can fix but it will take two month to fix it we need to let Kelly know how long he is going to stay there and Nightmare Moon is her.”

“ I will do it since I know where is I will do it.” I said so I got paper started to write

Dear Kelly

hey I am sorry but you have to stay where at right now because we can fix the mirror here but it will take us two month to fix it also Nightmare Moon is here we do not know how she got here but we will ask her again to see if there any clue if we use the same way I will let you know if we find anything else just stay where at ok. The three of your wives said HI and they miss you.

your wife

SUNSET SHIMMER

( BACK TO KELLY POV )

as Rainbow and I play the guitar the book began to glow

“ hey Kelly the book is glowing.” Rarity said

so we stop I pick up the book and began to read the letter

Dear Kelly

hey I am sorry but you have to stay where at right now because we can fix the mirror here but it will take us two month to fix it also Nightmare Moon is here we do not know how she got here but we will ask her again to see if there any clue if we use the same way I will let you know if we find anything else just stay where at ok. The three of your wives said HI and they miss you.

your wife

SUNSET SHIMMER

“ who is it from.” Rainbow said

“ it from Sunset Shimmer she said that it will take two month to fix the portal on her end and Nancy is with her right now so let everyone know to stop looking for her she is ok where she at so it look like I need to stay here until they fix the portal.” I said

“ ok.” Rarity said as she and Rainbow sit down next to me

so I pull out my phone and call my grandma I have not talk with her in long time so I dial her number

it ring five time

“ hello.” a voice said

“ nothing much just looking outside it beauty how are you doing last time I talk to you we did not see eye to eye what you been up to lately did you get marry did you give me grandchildren?” my grandma ask me

“ for info I am in another world with talking pony I found out that I am their chosen one and to find out I have to marry three and one of them she and I have child.”

“ you in hell and you have a child outside marriage you should know better you get out there now I raise you that way.” she said with anger in her voice

“ no I know I made a mistakes I am trying own up failures I call you to tell you I am fin but I am getting yelled at by you any way I can not because one of their book I read say I am their chosen one because one of the princess pull me into her world that why and so if you can not handle it then I will never talk to you again.” I said

so I hang up before my grandma get a another word in I pick up the guitar started to play like before I got wings on my back “ this going be a longest two month for me.” I thought to myself

first couple weeks I started looking for a job instead of setting around Rainbow while I looking for a job my phone began to ro ring

“ Hello “ I said

“ how dare you hang up on me while I am talking to you look at yourself you are going against what I teach you you need to break up with those horse and find a human woman who is a christian and love the lord what are you doing is going against what Word of God say.” my grandma said to me

“ now look here Blanche I do not care what you have to say because I know what God said in his word but I am in another world I went into the library in one of old castle I found a book in one of their old castle a book of prophecy “ a human will come this Equestria by a Princess help out all ponykind and he / she would save life and have three cutie mark one is the Princess that bring him here the other is one first love and last is hard working pony the mark on his/her body those three most get marry within a year because there was danger coming to their world that I was sent to by one of their princess I know that I am help them out so if you can stop acting like little bitch let me live my life as I see fit to me and to God and yes I did funny business to a princess of the land I am in and I got her pregnant she banish before she tell me do not ask why because I do not know all the info but now she and I made it up for my failure I want be there for my daughter and that princess.” I said to my grandma

“ you still have a child outside of marriage.” one of my grandma said

I hang up on my grandma as I stand in front of the canterlot high I went to the Principal office once inside the I met with with Principal of the school were my daughter use to go in hope of getting a job for two month

“ Ah Mr.Goodwin how are you it is nice finally to met you the vp of this school tell me a lot about you. My name is principal Celestia. I would like to say I am sorry that your daughter got bully here at CHS we dealt with them. What can I do for you on this nice day.” Celestia said

“ thank you Miss Celestia. I hope to get a job just for to month then I moving back where I came from because my daughter just move back just few hours ago with her mother and she just call me and said that Nancy went back home with her. Nancy mother want me to move in with her and she said that she wanted be a family and was sorry that she did not let me that she was pregnant because she was business my was at made at me first because I was not there for her when I told Nancy why at that time Nancy mother and I met in my hometown at one of the game that I was doing before the game I went up to her and started to talking with her after the game that I was doing as a referee we went to my place for coffee. I found out that she was a princess of another world and share a bed together I got her pregnant.” I said

“ oh who is this princess that you got her pregnant?” Celestia said to me

“ Her name is Princess Luna.” I said

“ Let me get this right you need a job just for two month then you can go meet Nancy mother who is a princess? “ Celestia said

“ yes I help coaches and clean the school and help in the office .” I said

“ I would like for you to do help coach Spitfire in weight class starting tomorrow then day after that I would like for you help in the office I want for you stay in the office when you started for two month ok.” Celestia said

“ ok.” I said
I stand and hold out my hand “ Thank you for your time Miss Celestia.” I said

“ your welcome.” she reply she take my hand and we shake

after the meeting with principal Celestia I was walking out the school I went up to the statue and I touch it to make sure that I can not go through I did not I walk back to Rainbow Dash place.

“ where were you been?” a voice said

“ oh hi Rainbow what up how are you I was talking with principal Celestia I got a job for two month first I am helping with coach spitfire then help in the office for the rest of the month that I am here.” I said

“ I am doing good just hang oh by the way the book glow while you are out.” Rainbow said

DEAR KELLY

we almost got the portal fix it only be one month instead of two month unlike I thought it will take us Nightmare Moon and others miss you we hope that you doing good come back to us safe ok

your wives

Princess Luna , Rainbow Dash , Applejack and me

after I read the letter I think to myself “ I going homing in one month instead of two yea I can go home I can not wait to see my daughter and my wives.”

So I write Sunset back

Dear Sunset Shimmer

Tell the girls I am good and can not wait to come back and your friends said HI they miss you they want me to tell you that come to visit them anytime you want ok.

your husband

Kelly Goodwin

“ I am going for a walk to think ok.” I said to Rainbow

“ ok do not stay out too late and be careful.” Rainbow said

( SUNSET SHIMMER P.O.V. )

I got a letter back from Kelly

Dear Sunset Shimmer

Tell the girls I am good and can not wait to come back and your friends said HI they miss you they want me to tell you that come to visit them anytime you want ok.

your husband

“ oh hey girls I got letter back from Kelly.” I said

Rainbow and Applejack and Luna come to me and they read the letter and they are happy to hear that Kelly is ok and be glad he be home in a month instead of two month

“ hey Sunset try the portal and see if you can go through it and you can get him come home early.” princess Celestia said

“ Yes princess he will be happy to see me.” I said

“ can I come with you I want to see Kelly and what that world he is in like.” Rainbow Dash said

“ No I do not think so if you go in there you might run into yourself I do not want that happen ok just trust me to bring him back safe and sound ok?” I said

“ ok. “ they said all at once

with that I went into the portal

( END OF SUNSET SHIMMER P.O.V. 3RD PERSON P.O.V. )

After Sunset went into the portal Rainbow went up to the portal and touch it her hoof went through it did

“ hey girls I am going through I just set here and wait you all know me I am not a waiting type.”

“ no Rainbow Sunset shimmer said that we can not go with because you might run into yourself the way she said it will danger if you run into yourself.” Luna said

“ fin I’ll stay.” Rainbow said

while everyone back is turn

Rainbow run into the portal the portal close after her

“ Celestia dammit Rainbow we said that you have to stay with us now you made it danger in that world because of you.” Applejack said with a mad look on her with Luna

Luna got a paper and began to write

dear Kelly

something bad just happen Rainbow just run into the portal while our back is turn she might run into herself if that happen it might cause a big problem for the world so find her and keep her safe and whatever you do do not let her see herself we are counting on you so be careful

with love your wives

Applejack and Luna

( END OF 3RD PERSON P.O.V. BACK TO KELLY P.O.V. )

I just run into Sunset we walk to the park we found a bench we sat down the book started to glow so I open it my and Sunset eyes went wide

dear Kelly

something bad just happen Rainbow just run into the portal while our back is turn she might run into herself if that happen it might cause a big problem for the world so find her and keep her safe and whatever you do do not let her see herself we are counting on you so be careful

with love your wives

Applejack and Luna

“ ah ah I am going to hurt Rainbow when I see.” Sunset said

“ no you won’t we need to find her before she run into herself.” I said
so Sunset and I run around the town that when my phone began to ring

“ hello this kelly how may I help you.” I said

“ hey this Rainbow I found person who look like me what do you want me to do with her.” Rainbow said

“ Take her to your place and whatever you do do not let her out of your sight ok.” I said

“ok.” Rainbow said

“ hey sund we need to go to Rainbow place there other Rainbow is with her we need to her place and pick her up and go back to equestria. write to Luna and tell her what just happen tell her that we are going to fix this.” I said

“ ok.” Sunset said

she took the book from me and began to write

Dear Princess Luna

I just been informed that Rainbow Dash just run into herself this bad right now but do not worry Kelly and I are taking care of this we are going to pick her up and come house

your wife

Sunset shimmer

“ I hope that both world do not fall apart on us.” I thought to mysel


Author's Note

what will happen when to Rainbow Dash meet will the universe exposes or will it something more then that find out next time on all new My ADVENTURE IN EQUESTRIA

I am not going to write chapter 11 after I move into my new place because this chapter took me so long from middle of January to now I need some rest I would to thank Darkmaster0224 for letting me use Hikari and being my editor if you have any idea what you want to see in the future chapter pm me or leave comment I will see them until then everypony have a nice day

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