My Adventure in Equestria

by King primal Michael

CHAPTER 9 ( UNEDITED )

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Disclaimed All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony. Thanks man *brohoof*

Story is told from narrator's POV.

CHAPTER 9

As I sitting in the dungeon I notice Princess Celestia , Twilight , Pinkie Pie , Rarity and Fluttershy hugging each other I hear fear in Rarity voice

“ I can not take this anymore If I have one more cotton candy and chocolate milk I will go crazy and I will not eat that fat stuff anymore.” Rarity said

I still have my bag still on my back so I check what I can find in it. I found a chocolate cake so I give it to Princess Celestia next I find a big cupcake so I give it to Pinkie Pie next I find two celery soup and daffodil sandwiches so I give it to Rarity and Twilight and I find grass sandwiches so I give it to Fluttershy last I find vegetarian soup so I eat.

after we out meal Celestia came up to me and ask me question “ how did you get those food without they know about it?”

“ I do not know I just look in the bag I just found it.” I said Celestia just nodded

I look in the bag again to find something to help us to get out of the dungeon I found a lock pick

“ Is that a lock pick to help us to get out this dirty dungeon?” Rarity ask me I nodded

“ yes it is I just need some time to get this door open.” I said they all nodded agreement

Before I use the lockpick I check the door so I push the door to my surprise the door open then a creature was made of an array of body parts of different animals He had a deer antler on the right top of his head, a blue goat horn on the left, wide eyes of sun yellow and bright crimson, a face of a goat with white bushy brows, and a short white beard. He had a short black mane on the back of his head which was that of a pony. His head and face were all charcoal grey, his middle was a dark brown, and his end which was that of a dragon's tail was crimson red with a white tuft. A bat wing stuck out on the right side of his back while a pegasus wing stuck out on the left side. For his right arm it was that of a lion, his left was that of an eagle, his right leg was that of a lizard, and for his left leg was a goat. He had one long fang stick out from his upper lip on the right and had a snake-like tongue. His body was in the shape of a snake. he came out pink cloud and he was laughing

“ oh my my so this is the chosen one he just weak letting have second chance once you are out the way the chaos will last forever ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.” he said

“ who is this asshole I do not like him already.” I said with anger in my voice

“ his name is Discord he should be reform not like this.” Fluttershy said

“ why you act this you should be reformed not be all evil what happen to you I thought we were friend.” Fluttershy said to Discord with a tears in her eyes while being hug by Pinkie pie

“ Kelly go and beat my nephew and take the throne away from him. Leave us we can take care of Discord and please do not kill him.” Celestia said to me with sad look on her face

“ I will try but no promise if he want to fight to the death then he and I will fight to the death.” I said Celestia nodded.

So I run to the throne room I made there luke for me there were no guards I made my way in the throne room in the room there is mirror next to the throne

‘ well well look who is back now it is time to finish what we started on the train.” A voice said I know that it was the one who sent me Princess Luna and Rainbow Dash to my world.

“ well yea I am back to take throne back from Blueblood and take down anyone else who want to take it away from the Princesses Nightmare moon.” I said

“ oh really I will take you out and no pony can’t stop after I take you out oh say hi to your daughter.” a new voice said

“who are you you asshole and what do you mean by saying hi to your daughter far I know I do not have a daughter.” I said walking in a pure white unicorn with a light dark blond mane

“ for who I am. I am prince Blueblood the new ruler of Equestria after I take you out nopony can not stop me hahaha. Nightmare moon tell him the truth that you are his daughter.” Blueblood said while laughing

“ I am your daughter if you do not believe me go ask Princess Luna who is my mother.” Nightmare moon said to me

“ what do you me______ I stop because I just remember something again about my past

(FLASHBACK)

I was working as a basketball referee I had to work at middle school on the same day that just meet
Sunset Shimmer. before the game start I saw woman she look like my age so I walk up to her she was wearing a navy blue dress with half of the moon on the front her hair was dark blue. so we started to talk for a minute

“ hey beautiful what is your name my name is Kelly Goodwin.” I said to her

“ my name is Luna.” she said I raise my eyebrow

“ well Luna I would talk with you some more after the game if that ok with you?” I said she nodded

after two hours

after I talking with my partner I meet up with Luna

“ so where you want to go to sit down and talk?” I ask her

“ I do not know you pick.” she said

“ ok let’s go back to my place for some coffee if that ok with you.” I said to her

“ it good idea can I stay at your place for the night because my sister will not pick me up until tomorrow I will give her your address so she pick me at your place tomorrow if that ok with you.” she said

“ sure I do not mind Let’s go.” I said she nodded. so we walk to my car I open the front passenger door she got in “ thank you my good sir.” she said I nodded I shut her door then I get on the driver side once I got in I said “is your seatbelt on?” she nodded

after few hours of driving I finally got my house I turn the car unbelt she did the same I got of my side and walk to her side and open her door again she said “ thank you my good sir.”

we walk up to my house I pull my keys to my to house and unlock my door and said with a bow “ lady first.’ we walk into the living room “sit down make yourself at home while I us some coffee.” I said with a smile

I made two cup of coffee one for Luna and other was for me I have her hers she said “ thank you.”

“ so tell me about you.” I said with a smile thought to myself “ she look look a princess with name like Luna.”

“ I am princess by the way she came over about round 10 tomorrow.” she said

“ ok..” I said to her smile “ a princess in my house should I bow to her.” I thought to myself

so I bow down to her saying “ forgive me princess for not bow down to you earlier as where is your guards if you are princess?” I ask her with a smile

“ I am on a vacation so I told my guards to stay so they did I just want to be by myself for a while. So tell me about yourself I would to know my host even it is for one night.” she said

So I did tell her about me she listen to me for start to finish

after we talk I had an idea “ so do you want to watch a movie.” I said to her. Luna nodded

So we watch Iron man after the movie was over I look at Luna “ it time for bed so you are well rested when your sister come here and pick up ok.I have one bedroom you can stay in there I will not let you sleep on the couch ok.” I said to her. she nodded

so I show her where the bedroom is I told her were the bathroom is she nodded

“ so good night Luna see you in the morning.” I said to her

“ good night Kelly would you like to sleep with me instead of sleeping on the couch.” Luna ask me

“ are you sure I mean we just met I would not mind to sleep on the couch.” I said

“ I do not mind I do not want you have back pain by sleeping on the couch by looking at the bed it big enough for the both.” Luna said in her mind “ I am in heat so I going to have fun with him.”

“ alright I will sleep with you but no funny business ok.” I said she nodded

so sleep together let’s just say we did funny business after I no funny business.

( END OF FLASHBACK.)

“so I got Princess Luna pregnant?” I ask Nightmare moon nodded

“ ok so how come she did not come and tell me I will be with her.” I said to Nightmare Moon

“ SHe got banished to the Moon when she had me with that how I was born dad.” Nightmare Moon said

“ hate to back father and daughter moment.”Blueblood said

“ you are right I need to take you out Princess Celestia can on throne as Equestria rightful ruler with her sister Luna let’s fight one of us need to submit to other in odor to win” I said to blueblood

“ fine by me I will make submit then I will banish you out of Equestria.” Blueblood said

we started to fight I back up to throne to mirror and I went through the mirror

“ dad noooooooooooooooo.” Nightmare said

Nightmare Moon went through the mirror to go after her father

“ I guess that she want to be like her father I can not blame her want be with her dad first king Sombra next her who next I do not know I hope that Discord keep aunt Celestia at bay until I become Equestria new ruler hahaha.” Blueblood said

BlueBlood touch the mirror to see if he can go through it. He did not “ now that I can not go through the mirror I will destroy the mirror and he and Nightmare bitch can not come back hahaha.” blueblood said

he light up his horn aim at the mirror and shot the mirror into destroy the mirror

(SUNSET SHIMMER POV.)

“ No we are too late but we can fight this asshole and finish what Kelly had started and take back the throne for Princess and Luna.” I said

“ you are right partner.” Applejack agree with a node

“ sorry we are late what happen?” Luna ask me

‘ All that I know Kelly and Nightmare Moon went through the mirror and the mirror is destroyed by Blueblood.” I said

“ oh no Kelly find out that Nightmare moon is his daughter I was hoping that I will tell him after this all done but right now we need take Blueblood out.” Luna said

“ yes after this all done Applejack and I need to talk with you about what happen when you and Rainbow and Kelly disappear ok. I said to luna and Rainbow. They both nodded in agreement

So we fight Blueblood and we win without Kelly being here we put him in the dungeon alongside discord where the both of them can not hurt another pony again.

Equestria had their true rulers back and we had a party to celebrate our win over Blueblood

“ so Luna what happen to You , Rainbow and Kelly when you guys disappear.” I said

“ yes sister we like to know what happen to when I was in the dungeon Kelly appear in the same cell as twilight , Rarity , Pinkie Pie , Fluttershy and me.” Princess Celestia said

“ well I do know how all that I do remember that Nightmare Moon zip Rainbow , Kelly and myself. When we appear in Kelly world Rainbow and I was standing on two legs we wear clothes and in Rainbow case she still had her wings and for myself I still had my horn and wings so we were standing in front of his brother house so we walk up to the house and knock on the door his brother open it and let us in so we told him what happen his brother name is Billy when he hear that his brother marry to Rainbow ,you Sunset , you too Applejack and myself he pass out then an old man walk in ask what happen so we told him too Kelly father his name is Bill. so Kelly Rainbow and I we look around the house to find our way back as Rainbow and I look around we hear Kelly said something but Rainbow and I can’t make out what he said so Rainbow and I went to look for Kelly but we find nothing. Rainbow and I still looking for a way back we did that when Rainbow and I was in my bedroom so we ran to the throne room to help Kelly take down my sister and I nephew but when I got there you and Applejack already did it for Kelly.” Luna said

“ Thanks Princess Luna. When you say that Nightmare Moon is Kelly daughter what in hell did you two do and why you call your own daughter Nightmare Moon?” I said to Luna

So Princess Luna told us everything from the first time they met to her banish to the moon and the birth of Nightmare Moon.

“ So that is why Nightmare Moon hate you and Kelly for leaving her on streat.” I said

“ No she do not know that Kelly is her father unless somepony told her that Kelly is her father. my guess that Blueblood did just that.” Luna said

“ ok what are we going to do the mirror is destroyed that means that Kelly and Nightmare Moon is stuck another world until we find a way back for them or they find a way back.” Applejack said

“ I hope that they ok.” Fluttershy said

“ I am sure that they are ok and be side we need work on getting them back. I hope C.M.C reform Sombra.” I said

(END OF SUNSET SHIMMER POV AT C.M.C. CLUBHOUSE)

“ ok let try being be nice to other pony Sombra first I want you to do greet other a good afternoon.” Apple Bloom said

“ ok.” Sombra said. Sombra walk up to Hikari

“ Good afternoon ma'am.” Sombra said

“ Very Good Sombra now let’s try when you find somepony thing and you found that pony and return it.” Apple Bloom said

“ ok.”Sombra said

so Sombra walk up to Scootaloo

“ is your school bag?” Sombra said

“ yes it.” Scootaloo said

“ I saw you drop it and I just want return it to you well here you go.” Sombra said

“ very good Sombra let’s try it in the ponyville so we test to see if you reform or not.” Apple Bloom said Sombra nodded with that they went out to test Sombra

( BACK TO KELLY P.O.V)
As I look around I saw I in front of a school I felt a push on my back I feel to the ground with a thud I push myself up with extra weight off of me.

“ what the fuck why did you follow me.” I ask Nightmare Moon

she lower her head and started to cry “ I am sorry I just want be with my dad I want to change my ways because I hate you for not being there for me and mom.” Nightmare Moon said through her sobs

“ ok. let’s get this right if I know that Luna was pregnant I will stay with her we will talk more about this later ok. right now we need our way back.” I said Nightmare Moon nodded

So I walk up to the statue and I touch it because I know it was the patrol to Equestria where Nightmare Moon and I belong my hand did not go through. I turn and look at Nightmare Moon who look in her teens she was wearing a dark purple dress with a white half moon on the front her dress she wear a high heel shoes no wing and no horn.

“ can we go home dad I want to say I am sorry to mom and aunt Celestia and move on from there.” Nightmare Moon said with tear in her eyes

“ no someone destroyed the patrol so we are stuck her until they find a way to get us back to them. we need find a way to contact them but for now we need get you in school we will change your name for now because I do not want you get bully ok.” I said Nightmare Moon

“ ok your name for now is Nancy Goodwin. let’s go Nancy.” I said with a smile

“ But dad I do not want to go to school today I want to stay home and bake cookies with you.” Nancy (Nightmare Moon) said

with that we enter the school we walk around to find the office of this school I run into someone we both fall to the floor I pick myself up and offer my hand to this person

“ Oh I am sorry are you ok my name is Kelly what is your name.? ” I said with a smile

“ dad are you ok.” Nancy said

“ yea I am ok Nancy.” I said

“ I am ok nice to meet you mr. Goodwin my name is Applejack.” Apple said with a smile

“ nice to me you this here is my daughter Nancy she and I just move here I need sign her up to start going to school here. Can you show me where is the office is?” I ask

“ sure it just over there also it is a nice to meet you too Nancy .” Applejack said she pointing to the door

“ thanks I would talk with you later if that ok with you.” I said Applejack node

Nancy and I walk into the office of the school we were greeted by woman who like one of my wives back in Equestria

“ well hello welcome to Canterlot High School how may I help you my name is Vice Principal Luna.” Miss Luna said holding out her hand

I took her hand into my and sake it “ it nice to meet to Ms. Luna. My name is Kelly Goodwin this here my daughter Nancy I would like to register her up to go to school.” I said Vice Principal nodded

She hand me paper to register Nancy “ here fill this out then I will put her in the computer as student.” she said to me. so I did

After I fill out paperwork I walk up to the dask hand her the paperwork “I would like to talk with you if you got a chance.” I said

“ I got sometime let’s go to my office so talk in private.” VP Luna said so we walk into her office once in the door behind me close and VP Luna walk to other side of her desk

“ mr. Goodwin how may I help you?” VP Luna ask me

“ well first I need you get Applejack and Rainbow Dash so I tell all you at once because what I am going to say it is important.” I said VP Luna nodded went out of her office to get Applejack and Rainbow

“ Nightmare Moon good job for not give your true name to Luna and tell her that you are her daughter I know it is hard to tell her that I am her husband.” I said Nancy nodded

Few minute later walking is Rainbow Dash and Applejack once again the door shut close

“ I know you three but you do not know me let me induce my name is Kelly Goodwin.” I said

“ How do you know us are you spy going around ours house to spy on us? ” Rainbow said with anger in her voice

“ what no where I come from you three are pony and you three are my wives and you miss Luna you have daughter.” I said

“ oh really where is she last time I check I do not have a daughter.” VP Luna said

“ the other you do Nancy real name is Nightmare Moon your daughter.” I said to VP Luna

“ with that being said we can not go home because the patrol that we came from is close my guess someone on other side destroy the patrol on the side where we came from so we are stuck here until Nightmare Moon and I can find our way back.” I said

“ oh ok I guess you two need a place to stay right.” Applejack ask me and I nodded

“ ok you two can stay with me at my place until you two find way back to where you belong.” Rainbow said

“ thanks.” I said

“ I will show your daughter to her class she start today if she wants.” VP Luna said

“ it is good idea.” I said with a smile

I look at Nancy and said “ remember that you should not give your real name.” I said to Nancy she nodded.

“ I will be back to pick you up after school and Rainbow after school I would like to talk with you ok.” I said

“ ok dad just be careful.” Nancy said

“ ok sir.” Rainbow said

with that they walk to class and as for me I walk to the park to think. “ I hope everything is ok in Equestria.”
I finally make it to the park. I look around for a empty bench I found one so I made my way to the bench and I sit down and I to think “ is Sunset , Rainbow , Applejack and Princess Luna are ok did they take down that no good of the Prince or did he put them dungeon or worst. I started to cry but I need be strong for Nightmare Moon ( Nancy) I got up and started to walk back to school to pick Nancy.

I made to the school right in time so I pick up Nancy “ hey sweet did you have a nice day of your first day school?” I ask Nancy (Nightmare Moon )

“ Yes I did I made some friends you already know Rainbow and Applejack. I like you to meet Pinkie pie, Fluttershy and Rarity.” Nancy said with a smile

“ it nice to meet you three.” I said with a smile they nodded

“ hey dad can I go to sugarcube corner to hang out with me new friends?” Nancy said

“ I do not know do you any homework?” I said

“ yes but I can do it later.” Nancy said

“ ok but I am going with you because I need to talk with Rainbow anyway.” I said

“ but dad I want to be with my friends along.” Nancy

“ no buts I am going that is final or do you want do your homework now?” I said

“ fine do not anything that would embarrass me ok.” Nancy said

“ ok.” I said

we make our way sugarcube corner we order what we want Nancy got banana milkshake , Rainbow , Applejack and I got chocolate milkshake , Rarity and Fluttershy got icetea

“ hey girls what I going to tell you is the truth.” I said to them

“ what every it is I think we can handle it.” Rarity said with a smile

“ ok first do you know Sunset Shimmer.” I said

“ oh my how did you know Sunset Shimmer if you do not mind of me asking.” Fluttershy said

“ yes I do know Sunset Shimmer.” I said

“ so how did you know our good friend Sunny.” Pinkie pie said

so I did tell them everything

“ so what you saying that our Sunset went your universe and got last you saw her while you were driving so you pull over to see if she need a ride to somewhere she said yes and tell you where she wants go so you give her a ride to the store that want to go after you got to the you too say goodbye and hope you see each other in future and one you when it started to rain down hard to see couldn’t see anything, until the rain finally stopped.you looked around you found were in a forest and you meet Sunset again but you did remember her later that day and you went into the forest for a walk that when you hear wolf call and you ran into a castle you look around the dirty castle and found a library you found a book and that point you found that you are Equestria chosen one you before fight nephew of Princess celestia you found tha Nancy is your daughter with Princess Luna you fight this no good naphew while you two fight you back up into a mirror throught and you Nancy went through too now you two are here and can’t get back at you universe until you or Sunset find away back to Equestria for you and Nancy.” Rarity said

“ yes do one of you have her book that would get me in contact wit her.” I said

“ I got right here sugar cube she give it to me she said that we contact with her if we need her for anything this emergency so here you go.” Applejack said as me hand me the book that Sunset give he. I took the book from her and began to write

Dear Sunset Shimmer

What is going on over there when Nightmare Moon and I went up to the portal we can not go back do we have to wait a month or is there more to it than I know

your husband

Kelly Goodwin

( SUNSET SHIMMER P.O.V.)

as I get ready for bed I hear a knock on the door I look at the clock it said 8:00 pm ( who can that be at this time) I thought to myself

So I went to the door and I open it there was two guards ( can I help you sirs ) I said to them

( we just bring this letter to you it is from the chosen one.) one of the guards said as he hoof me the letter

( thank you sirs is there anything else for me or that is it ?” I ask

(no ma’am.’ one of the guard said and with that the guards left

I open the letter and began to read it

Dear Sunset Shimmer

What is going on over there when Nightmare Moon and I went up to the portal we can not go back do we have to wait a month or is there more to it than I know

your husband

Kelly Goodwin

after I read the letter that Kelly sent me I write him back

after I finish my letter I sent it back to him

Dear Kelly and Nightmare Moon

when you two went through the mirror that no good of the prince BlueBlood destroyed the mirror we take him down. Tomorrow we will find out if we can fix the mirror or find a way to get you two back it might take us month

your wife
Sunset Shimmer

( BACK TO KELLY P.O.V. )

as I was sitting in Rainbow Dash home the book that Applejack give started to glow so I open it I can see the letter Sunset write to me and Nightmare Moon

Dear Kelly and Nightmare Moon

when you two went through the mirror that no good of the prince BlueBlood destroyed the mirror we take him down. Tomorrow we will find out if we can fix the mirror or find a way to get you two back it might take us month

your wife
Sunset Shimmer

“ oh that suck Nightmare Moon and I are stuck here for a month fine a long as they can get us back.” I thought to myself

“ hey dad what are you reading?” Nancy ask me

“ oh I just got a letter from Sunset Shimmer she said that mirror we went thought was destroyed by Blueblood they took him down they will look at mirror they might fix but they do not know yet but they might have to find another way we might here more than a month if you ask me I hope it be a month.” I said to Nancy she nodded

“ well it time for bed we will deal with it tomorrow ok .” I said Nancy nodded

with my peace have been said we got ready for bed Nancy sleep on the couch but as for me I sleep on the floor I started to close my eyes for only to awake to Rainbow in my face

“ won’t you sleep with me because the floor hard as rocks and it would hurt your back in the morning.” Rainbow Dash said to me

“ yes but no funny business.” I said to Rainbow

“ ok.” Rainbow said

With that we had to Rainbow Dash bedroom and fall asleep.


Author's Note

I know did Equestria girls universe in chapter 4 and this chapter and next chapter I want only use Equestria for a little hopeful you all like

I would like to thank to Darkmaster0224 for letting use Hikari his oc and being my editor go and follow him and let me know what do you think about this chapter :pinkiesmile: :yay:

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