My Adventure in Equestria
chapter 13 ( unedited )
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Disclaimer: All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony
Story is told from narrator's POV.
Chapter 13
as Hannah and I make our way to the throne room we got stop by Nightmare Moon she look like she looking for someone.
“ Hey nighty what going on what are you looking for maybe Hannah and I can help you.” I said
“ dad please do not call me that. I am looking for Blueblood he as break out of the dungeon he is dangerous so be careful dad and Hannah and dad say Hi to mom for me ok.” Nighty said Hannah and I nodded
we wave goodbye to Nightmare Moon I look at Hannah she look down with some tear she was thinking about something I do not know so I talk with her
“ hey Hannah why are you look so down are you still miss your husband Lee Mohr?” I ask Hannah
“ yes and all of our family and friends I know they are ok but I still miss them.” Hannah said
“ I know what you mean I miss my family and friends I made both in Okeechobee FL and Grants Pass Oregon.” I said
as we continue to walk to the throne I was tackle to the ground by Fluttershy , Hikari and Scootaloo they look of fear they all hug me for some reason I do not know
“ hey girl what going on why you three tackle me to the ground?” I said as I groaned on the ground
“ oh Kelly when Blueblood break out of the dungeon he kidnap Apple bloom and Sweet belle and take them to Crystal Empire we do know why.” Scootaloo said with a sad look on her face
I kneel down I look Scootaloo in eyes “ do not worry Scootaloo Hannah , Luna , Cadence . Sunset , Fluttershy, Rainbow and I will save your friends.” I said
after I done speaking I notice Fluttershy started getting scared about something
“ hey Fluttershy are you?” I ask
“ oh I am sorry it I just that I worry about safety for Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle.” Fluttershy said in small voice
“ do not worry Fluttershy we will get them back.” Hannah said
“ Hannah I would like you meet my friends went I first got here Hikari she was the first pony that I met when I got her next I want you met Fluttershy she let me stay at her house for a while and last I like you met one of cutie mark crusaders her name is Scootaloo you will meet other later ok.” I said
“ ok for now let’s go to the throne room the princesses are waiting for us Kelly.” Hannah said
“ ok.” I said
Hannah , Fluttershy , Scootaloo and me walk to the throne room not Hikari because she want to kept her eye on Sombra. Once we got up to the door to the throne room we got stop the night guards
“ halt state your business with the princesses or get out.” the guard on my left said
after the guard done speaking they look up look at me and Hannah they step aside
“ the princess is waiting for you two.” the guards together
as we enter the throne room we can hear “ it take you along time for you to get her.” Celestia said
“While Hannah and I was walking to throne we run into Nightmare Moon at that time Hannah and I did not know what she was looking for but once I talk with her to find out that Blueblood as escape dungeon after Hannah and I done talking with Nightmare Moon we started to walk again to the throne room Hannah and I run into Fluttershy , Hikari and Scootaloo they said that Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle kidnap by some pony.” I said
there was a large gasp in the room when they hear that Blueblood as escape from the dungeon and Apple bloom and Sweetie Belle kidnap. Hannah look around the throne room she find a hat
“ hey Kelly look what I just found.” Hannah said as she show us the hat
“ Hannah do not put that on you do not know what it does.” Luna said
Hannah did not listen to Luna she put the hat on she immediately turn into a earth pony her coat was light yellow her mane and tail was dark brown for her cutie mark is two hoof together.
“ what happen to me I am a pony.” Hannah said with sad look on her face
“ I thought told you not to put that hat on it was a trap for Kelly we do not know who sent the hat we will try to turn you back into a human Hannah .” Luna said
I look at the hat “ this hat is from Shining Armor.” I said
Everyone looking at me with wide eyes
“ how can you tell that this hat is from Shining Armor?” Cadence said looking over the hat
Cadence look over the hat and thought to herself “this hat indeed the hat is from Shining Armor”
“ Cadence do not put that hat if that hat turn Hannah into a pony who know what you will be turn into.” I said
Cadence did not listen to me she put the hat on her head she turn into a humana. Cadance wear a long pink dress on her head still her crown.
“ well Hannah I want you stay here so we help turn back you too Cadence.” Celestia said
“ I am going I wanted be with Kelly when he go to Crystal Empire face my ex husband.” Cadence
“ me too I know Kelly he will need me for something. “ Hannah said
“ fine just be careful.” Celestia said
( back to the present)
As Princesses Luna , Applejack , Cadence Sunset , Hannah Fluttershy and myself sit on the train to Crystal Empire for a peace talk with Shining Armor to bring peace to hole
Equestria we were lucky to sit next to the wonderbolt I set next to the captain of the wonderbolt we started to talk
" Hi my name is Kelly Goodwin what is your name?" I ask the captain of the team
" it nice to meet you chosen one my name is spitfire." Spitfire said as we both shake hand and hoof
just then my phone began to ring I look at my phone and I saw who is calling me it was one of my friends back in Hannah and my world the name on my phone
is was scribber
I look at Spitfire and said " if you excuse me I need to take this."
"ok what that thing that you holding?" Spitfire ask
" I will explain later ok." I said
I answer the phone
" hey Scribber what up how are you why did you take this long to call me?" I ask
" well I did take a look on your phone I even message you on fimfict.net what happen to you that you drop off the face of the world." Scribber
" well I was walking around my town when a big rain storm come out not I could not see something save my life and send me to Equestria and I was in Everfree forest I met the
main 6 and princesses Celestia and Luna and Cadence , Sunset Shimmer , miss Cheerilee and the C.M.C. and the Captain of the wonderbolt." I said
" wait what are you saying Kelly that you are in Equestria right now." Scribber said
" yes." I said
" what are you doing right now?" Scribbler ask
" I am on my way to Crystal Empire to see Shining Armor for peace talk because he want be like king Sombra over thousand year ago." I said
" wait Shining Armor is trying to take over Crystal Empire." I said
"yes well I hope that everything goes well I have to go now let me know how the peace went ok." Scribbler said
" I will bye for now." I said
" bye." Scribbler said
Right after I hang with Scribbler door to our cart open walking in is Blueblood with a smile on his face
“ well well look what we got here chosen one and his little herd this make my job a lot easier.” Blueblood said
Blueblood lit up his horn aim it at us
“ Rainbow take Cadence , Luna , Hannah and Applejack and get out of here do not worry about us we will be fine.” I said
“Rainbow and Hannah been push out the cart “ damit Luna Cadence and Applejack get out of here.” I said
“ we can’t because something is holding onto us so we can not move.” Applejack said
“ shit let’s just hope that whatever he going to do to us will not hurt us and our children.” I said
Blueblood let go of the energy from his horn it gulf us in a bright light when the light die down only left standing there is Blueblood
“ well that will take care of the chosen one and his little friends now Shining Armor can take over Equestria.” Blueblood said
( Rainbow pov)
I look in the cart that Hannah and I was in I saw that Princess Luna and Cadence , Kelly , Applejack , my long time friend Fluttershy , Spitfire and Sunset Shimmer Celestia student they all disappear
“ hey Rainbow what just happen?” Hannah ask me
“ Blueblood make Luna , Cadence , Sunset Shimmer , Applejack , Fluttershy and Kelly where I do not know.”
“ I might know since Kelly and I can not go back to our world because thought that make them disappear to Kelly and my world.” Hannah said
“ of course it make sense get rid of us Equestria will be easier to take over that what Blueblood said.” I said
“ what can we do we are the only one left do we still go to Crystal Empire or go back to Canterlot." Hannah said
" well since you are other chosen one we can still go to Crystal Empire to do peace talk with Shining Armor." I said
" ok." Hannah said
with that Hannah and I are on our way to Crystal Empire.
( back to Kelly P.O.V.)
as the light die down we can see where we at. I look around. I know where we at.
I loot at Sunset Shimmer and ask " hey Sunset do you remember this place?"
" yes this where we first met where I got lost and you pull in your car and see if I was ok." Sunset said
" that right this road is name after of one school I use go." I said
" so where we." Applejack said
" we in Grants Pass Oregon the road we are on this name New Hope rd." I said
my phone ring I pull out my phone it Austin Lanham so I answer my phone
" what up Austin Lanham how are you?" I ask
" I am doing good where were you I was hoping to hang out with you a month ago." Austin said
" I will tell you later right now we need a ride." I said
" we who this we are we talking about." Austin said
" well me and five of my friend you will meet them." I said
" ok I will be there in 30 minutes." Austin said
after I hang up with Austin Lanham we set on the curb and wait for Austin my phone ring again I look at my phone unknown number I still answer my phone
" hello?" I said
" is this Kelly?" a voice ask
" yes this is Kelly who are you?" I ask
" my name Jared I am friend with joey." Jared
" ok how may I help you Jared?" I ask
" it about joey." Jared said
" what joey?" I ask
" well we were making a new video for our youtube channel then out nowhere a bright light walking out of the light was a Pegasus I think he name was Flash and he took Joey to Equestria Flash said that Celestia need Joey for something." Jared said
" what." I said
" yea Flash Sentry said Joey need go Equestria." Jared said
" Flash Sentry is a guard for the Crystal Empire that where I going before I sent back here." I said
" so you were in Equestria?" Jared said
" yes it different from what we see on tv." I said
" what do you mean?" Jared
" well first off Twilight is not princess Celestia student Sunset Shimmer is second there a prophecy that I am part of because princess Luna take me to Equestria to save my life
." I said
" what are we going to do if Joey in Crystal Empire with princess Cadence and Shining Armor. King Sombra can attack at any time." Jared said
" well King Sombra chance now it Shining Armor wanted to take over Crystal Empire." I said
" so Joey is in danger?" Jared said
" only if Shining Armor take over his mind well I have to go I need to find a way back to Equestria alone with princesses Luna and Cadence , Applejack , Spitfire , Fluttershy ." I said
" oh ok just be safe and bring Joey back this world safe and sound." Jared said
" I will try but no promise." I said
" ok bye." Jared said
" bye." I said
after I hang up with Jared a car pull to us a window roll down it Austin
" hey thank pick us up." I said
" no problem." Austin
we got in his car started to drive to his place
" so Kelly where were you?" Austin
" well I was in Equestria." I said
" so Equestria same like what we see on T.V.?" Austin ask
" yes one thing is different Sunset Shimmer is princess Celestia student." I said
" what Sunset is Celestia student I guess you were in alternate universe can I ask you one more question?" Austin said
" sure what is it?" I ask
" is Twilight still Shining Armor sister?" Austin
when Austin mention Shining Armor the girl in the back flinch.
I turn my head I look at the girls and said " Shining Armor will not hurt you here I will not let happen ok?" I said
they all nodded in agreement. I turn my head back to the front
" to your question about is Twilight still Shining Armor sister? yes." Luna said with sad face
after about an hour of driving we pull up to Austin we got out of his car and walk up to his door " you five girl will take the master bedroom and you Kelly you will take the guest room." Austin said
" well that out of way let me introduce myself my name is Austin Lanham I am one of Kelly friend for long time. what is your name?" Austin said
" well my name is princess Luna she pointed to herself and this princess Cadence and this Applejack and this Fluttershy and this the captain of the wonderbolt Spitfire." Luna said
I look down at the ground I found a golden wonderbolt pin
" Hey Spitfire is your wonderbolt pin here in my world?" I ask
Spitfire walk up to me and she took the pin try to take the pin from my hand there was a bright light around Spitfire and me we both pass out we hit the ground hard. about hour of Spitfire and me pass out Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Fluttershy and Austin stand around Spitfire and me look us with corner look on their face. Luna and Fluttershy went to Spitfire to see if she ok. Cadence and Applejack went to me to see if I was ok.
" Spitfire are you ok?" Luna ask
I groan and ask " why are you calling me Spitfire." in Spitfire voice
I look down indeed. Luna and Fluttershy look at each other
" Hum Kelly why are you in Spitfire body if you do mind of me asking ?" Fluttershy ask
on other side of the room we hear another groan we look at the sound were come from
" hey Kelly are you ok " Applejack ask
" I am not Kelly it me Spitfire." Spitfire in my voice
" what happen for you two swapped body?" Luna ask
" well I found a wonderbolt golden pin and I show it to Spitfire when she touch it I was about let go out nowhere there was a bright light then we hit the ground." I said
" well touch the pin again see if you can go back in your right body." Cadence said
" there one problem the pin disappear after the light die down." Spitfire said
" mother of Celestia." Luna said
there was another bright light a women walking out of the and grab my arm start to pull me into the light I stop her in track
" what going on here?" I ask
" what are you talking about Spitfire?" the women ask me
" what is your name?" I ask
" what did you forgot about me?" the women said
" no ma'am I do not know you are?" I said
" FLeetfoot I am over here." Spitfire said
this women now know as Fleetfoot look over her shoulder she see me wave at her.
" what is your name do I know you?" Fleetfoot ask
" you should know my name." Spitfire said
" what going on here Spitfire is claiming to be Kelly and Kelly claiming to be Spitfire ." Fleetfoot said
" to answer you I found a wonderbolt pin I sow it to Spitfire out of nowhere a bright light surrounded Spitfire and me next thing both of us know we were in each other bodies." I said
" how can you two can get back in your right bodies." Fleetfoot said
" well do you have a golden wonderbolt pin on you?" I ask
" no." Fleetfoot said with a sad look on her face
Spitfire grab a pin off of Fleetfoot shirt and said " hey Kelly let's try this one it is a silver it might will."
" ok." I said
once I touch the pin nothing happen I let go of the pin Fleetfoot disappear
" well once we get back to Equestria Celestia can help us but as for right now you need to be me and I have to be you." I said
" but how." Spitfire said
" well go in your pocket and pull out your phone and go into the contact look for Scribbler and call her once she answer her phone tell her to meet us at the park then call Weird Alicorn and tell him the same thing." I said to Spitfire
" ok." Spitfire said
she did what I say
" they will be at the park at noon." Spitfire said
I look at the clock it's 11 o'clock pm " well let's go to bed we will deal about this more once we meet up with Scribbler and Weird Alicorn at the park." I said
with that we all went to bed hope that everything goes back to normal.
Author's Note
will Kelly , Luan , Cadence , Fluttershy , Applejack and Spitfire can get back to Equestria? can Spitfire and Kelly be able go back in their right bodies or they stuck in each other body find out in all new episode my adventure in Equestria
I would like to think Scribbler for letting me use her in my story go check her and weird alicorn and Austin Lanham go check them out on youtube and my Editor Darkmaster0224 for being my editor
remember all the chapter in my story are unedited
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