My Adventure in Equestria

by King primal Michael

chapter 14 ( unedited )

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Disclaimer: All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony

Story is told from narrator's POV.

Chapter 14

In the morning I hear a loud noise I got out of the bed walk out of the room. once I got to the noise is

" what going on?" I ask

" well Spitfire and Cadence was fighting about the body swapped last night." Luna said

"Cadence and Spitfire please no fighting around Luna and Applejack they are pregnant and I do not want them to go into labor earily." I said

" fine." Spitfire said with a sigh

after that the day went as normal at 11 c'clock we got in Austin car started to drive to the park to meet up with Scribbler and Weird Alicorn after about 30 minutes of driving we finally made to the park Austin park his car we got out of his car start to walk around the park to find Scribbler and weird alicorn we found a bench so we walk to the bench sat down and wait

about hour of waiting Scribbler and Weird Alicorn finally show up

" what took you two so long?” I ask

Weird Alicorn and Scribbler look at each other

“ hum I have to finish a video for my youtube channel.” Weird Alicorn said Scribbler nodded in agreement

“ I would like you to meet princess Luna and princess Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Fluttershy , Spitfire.” Austin said

Next thing I know I was being huge by Scribbler. I do not why I huge her back after hour we let go of each other

“ I am not Spitfire it me Kelly that Spitfire over there.” I said

“ why does Spitfire is acting like Kelly and Why Kelly is acting like Spitfire when I talk with him on the phone.” Scribbler ask

“ well I found a wonderbolt pin so I call for Spitfire so she check it out once she touch the pinc there was a bright light surround Spitfire and me next thing Spitfire and I know we were in each other body .” I said

A bright light came out nowhere when the light die down a letter was on my lap also a folder

So I open the letter and began to read it

Dear Kelly , Lulu , Cadence, Sunset Shimmer , Applejack , Fluttershy and Spitfire

It come to my understanding that captain of the wonderbolt and Kelly swapped bodies by touching the golden wonderbolt pin. I inclose a golden wonderbolt pin if I had to guess if you two touch it again you two might go back in your right bodies. Reason why I did not bring you my sister , Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Fluttershy , Spitfire and chosen one because it was dark magic that sent you to chosen one world. Also there is a DNA test result because I thought that you Kelly will be my lost son and I did the samething with you Spitfire I know you might wondering how I got your DNA the answer is when you are sleep I hope that you all get back here safe and sound.

From

Princess Celestia

I open up the folder indeed there was a golden wonderbolt pin also DNA test result this nerve racking just to see if celestia is my mother and same thing goes with Spitfire.

“ that be cool if Spitfire is your sister Kelly.” Weird Alicorn said

“ that will be impossible because I know I was not adopted.” I said

“ that goes with me.” Spitfire said

“ well maybe but who knows you two are related what you know now might be a lie so read the result.” Luna said

“ fine I will read the result to get you off my back.” I said

So I open DNA result and began to read it “ Spitfire you are my sister.”

After I read that Spitfire is my sister Spitfire run up to me and huge me and said “ Good to see you brother. Now read the rest of the result to see if Celestia is out mother.” I nodded

I look at the paper my eye went wide I look at spitfire and hand her the DNA result her eyes also went wide she drop the paper went to me huge me and started to sob into my shoulder

“ there there I am here.” I said to Spitfire while I pat her head

“ I can’t believe that Celestia is our mother .” Spitfire said to me

“ I know.” I said

“ all I know is a lie.” I said

“ let’s deal with this later but right now we need to find a way back to Equestria to stop Shining Armor before he take over Crystal Empire.” Luna said

“ ok Let’s go and find the portal for us get back to Equestria” I said

“ not today because it getting late.” Weird alicorn said

“ fine first thing in the morning you two come to my place so we can talk how to get them back to Equestria.” Austin said we all nodded

( back in Equestria Celestia P.O.V. )

As I set on my throne wondering if they got my letter I wish that I could bring Spitfire , Sunset , Cadence , Fluttershy , Applejack and chosen one back but I can not because they been sent to chosen one world by a dark magic. Now they have to find a way back to Equestria. I can only sent them DNA result to chosen because I now I know he is my lost son and Spitfire. I look down “ oh I forgot to send this one one more result while Cheerilee was sleeping I took her hair because I want to see if Cheerilee is chosen one second sister. So I open it my eyes open wide this can’t be. I go up started to walk to the door in the throne room when the door open so I sit back down a guard came in

“ what wrong guard.” I ask

“ your highness we found the pony sent your sister chosen one and others to the chosen one world .” guard

“ who is this pony that sent Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Fluttershy , Spitfire , Sunset and the chosen one.” I ask

“ it sombra he is back he is staying in ponyville.” The guard said

“ well flash bring him to me.” I order the guard

The guard nodded as he walking away he had an evil smile on his face like he just got away with murdering

About hour later

Walk in a pony “hope fully that pony information how to bring my sister Lulu , Fluttershy , Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Spitfire and the chosen one.” I thought to myself

The pony bow “ your highness you want to see me?” The pony ask

“ well yes please tell me your name.” I ask the pony

“ my name is Sombra.” Sombra said

“ well Sombra I know that over a thousand ago that you try enslaved Crystal Empire I want to know that did you send Princess Luna and Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Fluttershy Spitfire and the chosen one to his world?” I ask

“ no your highness I am reinform thanks to Kelly and c.m.c I was in ponyville when they disappear you can ask mayor of ponyville I was helping her at that time.” Sombra said

“ thank your honesty I do have one question.” I said

“ what is your question I will happy to answer it.” Sombra said

“ if any pony want to use dark magic how do they get their hoof on it?” I ask

“ well your highness there is a book of dark magic in Crystal Empire library any pony can get their hoof on it.” Sombra said

“ one more question can you bring them back.” I ask

“ No your highness.” Sombra said

“ can you help me bring my sister Princess Luna and princess Cadence , Sunset , Applejack , Fluttershy brother and sister Kelly and Spitfire.” I said

“ I look at the paper on my lap if you excuse me I have personal matter to deal give me an hour meet me in the library.” I said

I got up walk out of the throne room to the infirmary to talk with nurse Redheart.

Once I got to the infirmary I was greeted by nurse

“ how may I help you highness.” Nurse Redheart said with a smile her face

“ yes do you still have chosen one and Cheerilee DNA?” I ask

“ yes your highness may I ask why?” Nurse Redheart ask

“ I want you retest those two I wanted to make sure this right.” I said

“ ok I will do retest those two then it will take about 20 minutes ok.” Redheart said

“ ok once that is done come get me I will be in the library.” I said to the nurse Redheart she nodded so I left to the library

( back to Kelly P.O.V. )

As we walk around the park there was line fare as I can see I look at Austin

“ Austin why there a line?” I ask

“ well because of the show mlp you five are celebrity.” Austin said with a smile

I pull over Spitfire and ask “ is it ok play as you?”

“ well you have to.” Spitfire said

So Spitfire and I went back to the group

“ what now.” I ask

“ well autograph their book or let them take picture with you.” Scribbler said
“ this gonna be a long day.” I thought myself

One by one they come to us and the cute thing happen one little girl went up to Luna ask

“ hum princess Luna why is you and Applejack tummy is big?”

Luna just laugh and reply “ well sweetie Applejack and I found my special someone.” With a smile

About 3 hour later

We finally got to Austin house

“ man I am tair not more autograph and picture.” I said Luna , Cadence , Applejack ,Sunset and Fluttershy nodded

“ come on you were go acting like me brother.” Spitfire said with a laugh

“ ha ha touch the gold wonderbolt pin so we can go back in our right bodies.” I said to Spitfire

“ hum sorry I give the pin to a little girl who look so sad so I thought it make her happy.” Fluttershy said with her head low to the ground

“ it ok Fluttershy.” I said

“ Hey Kelly come here.” Spitfire yell

So I do

“ What up Spitfire.” I said

“ I just found a golden wonderbolt pin.” Spitfire said

“ cool let’s get this over with I do not want to be in my sister.” I said

“ what wrong brother you do not be me for one more day.” Spitfire said with smile on her face

“ I do not mind but I want to be in my body.” I said

“ I know just one more day brother please.” Spitfire bage me

“ fine one more day.” I said with a sigh

“ are you two done so we can get back to business.” Weird alicorn said Spitfire and I nodded

“ go get in the car we are going to bronycon.” Austin said

“ bronycon shit this is bad.” I said

“ why it bad?” Scribbler said

“ well Luna, Cadence, Fluttershy, Applejack, Sunset Shimmer and I look alike on the show so if we go to bronycon everypony at bronycon will come up to us want our autograph and take picture.” I said

“ we will worry about it in the morning.” Austin said

So we went to bed because we have to get up in the morning.

( back in Equestria Celestia p.ov.v)

As Sombra and I looking at the books try to find a way to bring Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Fluttershy , Spitfire , Sunset and kelly. The slam open walking in nurse Redheart with DNA retest result that I ask.

“ Your Highness I got DNA test result for you.” Nurse Redheart

“Thank nurse Redheart.” I said

So I take result from her then then I open it I read the result my eyes went wide
“ cheerilee is your daughter” I fold the paper

“ thank you Redheart.” I said she bow left the room

“ guards.” I yell

“ yes your highness.” They said all at once

“ I want you bring me Cheerilee to me at once.” I order them

“ yes your high.” They said and left to bring Cheerilee to me

“ Celestia what wrong?” Sombra ask me

“ well Sombra Kelly , Spitfire and school teacher in ponyville are brother and sister if you excuse me I need to write to Kelly then can get to work to bring them back.” I said Sombra nodded

Dear Kelly

I did DNA test on Spitfire , Cheerilee and you. When I send you golden wonderbolt pin I sent you Spitfire and your result but not Cheerilee because I forgot to send it to so I did a retest on her it turn out she is your sister once you get back to us I will explain to you and Spitfire when you two get back also it was dark magic that sent you to back to your world. Sombra and I are working on bring you back safe and sound.

Your mother and princess of Equestria

Celestia
Ps reason that I did not give you cheerilee DNA result the first time I forgot to send it to you

After I sent the letter Sombra and I went back to work try to bring my sister Applejack Cadence Spitfire Fluttershy Sunset and Kelly reason I can not bring them back because dark magic was use on them.

( Back to Kelly P.O.V)

We got up early to go to bronycon. There was a bright light out of nowhere a letter drop on my lap so I open and began to read it

Dear Kelly

I did DNA test on Spitfire , Cheerilee and you. When I send you golden wonderbolt pin I sent you Spitfire and your result but not Cheerilee because I forgot to send it to so I did a retest on her it turn out she is your sister once you get back to us I will explain to you and Spitfire when you two get back also it was dark magic that sent you to back to your world Sombra and I are working on bring you back safe and sound.

Your mother and princess of Equestria

Celestia
Ps reason that I did not give you cheerilee DNA result the first time I forgot to send it to you

“ Kelly was that from Celestia did she find a way to bring us back to Equestria?” Cadence ask

“ no Celestia did not find away but she and Sombra are looking it was dark magic sent us here.” I said

“ oh my.” Fluttershy said

“ hey Spitfire can we touch the pin I want to be in my body now.” I said

“ just for today then we touch the pin went get in the hotel room I promise.” Spitfire said

“ fine just today only.” I said

So we got into the car started to head to bronycon Luna and I was in Scribbler car

“ Hey Kelly since I am you nicee I still want to be your wife.” Luna said

“ hey but what would Celestia think about us being merry .” I said

“ do not worry about my sister who is your mother because she will understand that you are the chosen one and you have my cutie mark and I save you a month ago.” Luna said

‘ I know my my little moon.” I said

About 10 hour of driving

“ Finally we made let’s get this over with so I can get back in my body.” I said

So we started to walk into bronycon everything stop everyone look at Luna Cadence Applejack Sunset Fluttershy and myself. Next thing I know everyone come up to us wanted to us for autograph and want to know what Equestria like? And wanted to take picture as well

“ calm down we will have question and answer tomorrow right now we just wanted to walk around.” I said

As we walk around bronycon we got stop by security guard

“ is there a problem sir.” Austin said with a smile on his face

“ well I was sent here watch over these five because they are going to speak in 30 minutes.” The security guard said

“ well sir lead the way so they can get read to speak.” Weird Alicorn

So we walk to the back so Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Fluttershy and myself ( in Spitfire body )

“ hey Spitfire do still have the golden wonderbolt pin?” I ask

“ yes I have it right here.” Spitfire said as she went into the pocket and pull out the pin

“ go I will touch it then you and I can go into our right bodies.” I said

So I touch the pin there was bright light around Spitfire and me when the light die down Spitfire and I was laying on the ground.

I can hear someone speaking to me “ hey Kelly are you ok?”

I groaned “ yeah I think so. I said

I look around see that I am in my body. I got up run over to Spitfire to see if she ok

“ Hey Spitfire are you ok?” I ask

:” yes.” Spitfire reply

“ that good.” I said

So Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Fluttershy and Spitfire got ready to speak at bronycon

Few minute later

I walk on the stage to introduce Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Sunset , Fluttershy and Spitfire

I grab the mic and started to speak “ lady and gentleman my name is Kelly Goodwin about a month ago l met this five mare my life have been never been the same. I would introduce to you first she in all three Equestria girls movies Sunset Shimmer next she is take care all animal she also element of kindness Fluttershy next she work on sweet apple acres and element of honest Applejack. Next she is a captain of the wonderbolt and one of the fastest flyer in Equestria Spitfire. Next she is princess of love and rule Crystal Empire Cadence. Next she is princess of the night guardian of the dreams princess Luna.”

As Luna , Cadence , Applejack , Spitfire , Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer there was a loud cheers out nowhere there was bright light everyone in cover there eyes.

“ I hope that Nightmare moon , Scootaloo or Celestia do not show up right now.” I thought to myself

Boy I was wrong when we all uncover our eyes we can see two pony one is Scootaloo and Nightmare moon. They both run up to me and huge

“ daddy princess Celestia and Sombra are in dungeon and Shining Armor and his army take over canterlot we need you the peace talk you wanted did not happen.” Nightmare moon said with tear in her eyes

“ oh how can go back.” I said point to Luna Cadence Applejack Fluttershy Sunset Spitfire

“ I can do that I need a day of rest and I can send all of us back to Equestria do not worry about Hannah she turn back into her right self thanks to me.” Nightmare moon said

“ ok Scootaloo why are you here not in school?” I ask

“ well dad I was in Canterlot at that time.” Scootaloo said

Everyone in the room hear nightmare moon and Scootaloo call me dad I pull Luna Cadence Applejack Fluttershy Spitfire Sunset Scootaloo and nightmare moon into the backstage avoid a lot of question. Once we got out of the room I speak up “ let’s go back to Austin place until tomorrow.” They all nodded so got three of us got in Scribbler car the rest of us get in
Austin car once we in we started to head to Austin place.”

After few hour of driving we made back to Austin house safely

“ hey Kelly please tell us why Nightmare moon and Scootaloo call you dad.” Weird Alicorn said

So I told why Scootaloo and nightmare moon call me dad and everything that happen to me.

“ wait just a minute what you are saying that you are marry to Rainbow Dash and adopted Scootaloo. You and princess of the night did funny business then princess moon butt got banished to the moon right when she return to Equestria by her sister and now princess Celestia is your mother your sister is a captain of the wonderbolt and a school teacher in ponyville.” Scribble said Weird Alicorn and Austin nodded in agreement

After Scribbler speak my phone began to ring I look at my phone to see who is calling the name sock me Pinkie Pie so I answer my phone

“ hello.” I said

“ hey Kelly how it going on?”” Pinkie Pie said

“ hum good how did you get my phone number when I did not give it to you.” I said

“ well when you write to sunny your phone was on the letter I quickly put it in my phone just in case.” Pinkie said

I let out a sigh “ right is there anything I can help you with?” I ask

“ yes Rainbow Dash has been kidnap by a pony with wings.” Pinkie said

“ shit that no go if two Rainbow Dash met that mean the end of Equestria or universe. Do not worry Sunset and I will handle this ok.” I said

“ thanks Kelly I will others know ok bye now.” Pinkie Pie said

“ by.” I said

After I hang up with Pinkie pie Sunset saw a look on my face she come up to me “ what the problem?” She ask

I breath in and out and I reply “ well I just got off the phone with Pinkie Pie and she said that Rainbow Dash has been kidnap by a pegasus.”

“ this is bad no telling what Shinning Armor can do.” Sunset said

Once Sunset done speaking there was a bright light we all cover our eyes when the light die down we all uncover our eyes standing in front of us no other than Shining Armor

I turn to Austin Scribbler and Weird Alicorn and said “ get Luna Applejack Fluttershy Cadence and Spitfire out of her let this to Sunset and me.” They nodded

So once they out I turn back to Shining Armor “ so let’s finish this once for all.” I said

“ I agree with once you two are out of the way then I can take over then I will take over this world there is nothing you or your mother can do to stop me hahahahahahahahahah.” Shining Armor said

“ stop talking let’s fight.” Sunset said I nodded

So Sunset and I run up to Shining Armor there was a bright light coming from Shining Armor he zip Sunset and me then we disappear

“ they are fool think that they can stop me.” Shining Armor thought to himself

( back in Equestria.)

As Celestia is sitting on the throne during the day crout the throne room door slam open
Running in is a human like Kelly and Hannah when he come to the throne he bow

“ greetings princess Celestia my name is Joey o I am Kelly Goodwin friend.” Joey said

“ well Joey please rase and tell me how did you get here.” Celestia said with a smile on her face

“ Celestia I hanging out with one of my friend in my world when a pegasus name Flash Sentry came got saying that you wanted to see me but it was a lie next thing I know I was in dungeon with one of kelly I think her was Hannah and a pegasus named Rainbow Dash. the guard took Hannah and kill her. So Rainbow Dash and I escape Crystal Empire Dungeon and Crystal Empire came here to see Rainbow is in infirmary the funny thing there are two Rainbow Dash in the infirmary why I do not know.” Joey said

Before Celestia reply a solar guard come in and bow to Celestia

“ your highness the chosen one and your student Sunset got into a fight with Shining Armor and Shining Armor send them to another universe.” The Guard said

“ thanks wildfire.” Celestia said

After Celestia done speaking Shining Armor walking in with a smile on his face

“ so are you ready to give up your throne now or do you want to fight over it.” Shining Armor said

“ no give me some time to think about it ok?” Celestia said

Joey did not like the way Shining Armor is talking to Celestia so he run up to Shining Armor like Kelly and Sunset Shining Armor saw the attack he lit up his horn and shot at Joey and instin Joey disappear.

Then Shining Armor turn to Celestia and said “ you have two month to hand me the throne if not then we are going to war.”

Celestia smile at Shining Armor and said “ thank you for giving me some time.”

“ no need to thank me.” Shining Armor said

With that Shining Armor left

( back to Kelly P.O.V.)

When the light die I look around next thing I felt a hoof on my shoulder I look at my right see Sunset Shimmer.

“ Are you ok Sunset Shimmer.” I ask Sunset Shimmer

“ yea I am fine where are we?” Sunset said

“ well we are in everfree forest.” I said

“ everfree forest we need to get out of here.” a voice said

Sunset and I turn around found a another human standing there

“ hey Joey how are you?” I ask

“ I am fine I broke out of Crystal Empire dungeon with two Rainbow Dash do not worry they are ok Celestia will send one of Rainbow back to her right universe what universe are we at?” Joey ask

I look around I spotted apple trees “ Let find the owner of this farm ask them where are we at.” I said

So Joey , Sunset and myself started to walk around the farm we found a onage mare with a cowboy hat so we walk up to her

“ hum excuse me ma’am do you know where we?” I ask

She turn around and reply “ you at sweet apple acres may I ask what is your name and where came from?” The orange mare ask

“ yes my friend here his name is Joey o the mare next to me is me wife her name is Sunset Shimmer my name is Kelly Goodwin but you can call me Kelly what is your name?” I ask the orange mare

Before she reply I notes a lavender pony come walk onto sweet apple acres with a baby dagen on her back with a paper in his claw I look at Joey and whisper in his ear “ hey Joey this like season 1 episode 1 of my little pony friendship is magic.” He nodded

I look at sunset and said “ let’s get out of here because we do not want to deal with the princess Celestia right now.” Sunset and Joey nodded in agreement so we left we went into everfree forest.

Ask we started to walk around in the forest I feel that someone is following us so I turn around and found a lavender pony and a orange mare with a cowboy hat on her and white pony and a pink pony and a yellow pony and lastly and a cyan pony with a rainbow mane and tail.

“ hey Kelly what happen to your shit.” Joey ask me
I look down indeed I do not my shit on “ it might come off when we enter the forest.” I said

That did not stop the cyan mare she came up to me and buck the wind out of me and said “ why do you have Applejack , Fluttershy and my cutie mark.”

The lavender pony look closer she can see I more and she said “ why do you princess Celestia sister cutie mark and my old foalsitter.”

“ well let me introduce ourself my friend his name is Joey and the mare next to me her name is Sunset Shimmer and my name is Kelly.” I said so I tell them everything I know and how I got cutie mark on me.

“ what saying that Sunset Shimmer here is your one of your wives.” Twilight said I nodded

we kept walk until we got to twin sister castle we walk in but Twilight Rarity Pinkie Pie and Joey did not enter because the door close in front of them

Applejack , Rainbow Sunset Fluttershy and myself started to walk around the castle hoping that we find someone or something that can help us.


Author's Note

what will Applejack Rainbow Fluttershy Sunset and Kelly will find in the castle of the twin sister? find out on all new next time on my adventure in Equestria.

sorry that this longer I had a lot on my mind this week I will try to have the next chapter up in 2 weeks I would like to thank my Darkmaster0224 for being my editor and I would like to thank Joey o and Jared for letting use them in my story go check them on youtube

https://youtu.be/qbxSUZJXgy4?list=PL3TG7VCuzkzqiCk7YNoORLkizbyTBwiYd

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