My Adventure in Equestria

by King primal Michael

chapter 5 unedited

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chapter 5 unedited

Disclaimed All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony. Thanks man *brohoof*

Story is told from narrator's POV.

CHAPTER 5

As Luna , Applejack , Rainbow , Sunset and me walk to the train station we see Hikari coming to us with fear in her eyes something might just happen.

“ what is the matter Hikari ?” I said to her

“ Prince BLueblood just took Fluttershy Rarity Twilight and Pinkie pie . I did not know why but he took them to canterlot.” Hikari said

“ Hikari calm down breath and start from beginning.” I said she did

“ after you guys wedding Rarity and Pinkie came to Twilight and ask was there any wedding? Twilight say yes then that no good so call of the Prince came in and ask was there any wedding in here Twilight was scared she say yes then he took Twilight Rarity Pinkie pie
and Fluttershy not me I ran away before he got me so I look for you.” Hikari said

just then the book I was carrying started to glow so I open it started to read it “ you might get three item first must get from your first love and the second item you must from a hard working pony and the last item you must get the pony think of pranking follow this in order or it will not work.”

“ so who is first.” Hikari say

“ according to there is three item what it is I do not know because the book did not say. the first item is my first love which is Sunset Shimmer second is working pony which is Applejack and the last one is the one that I was thinking of pranking which is Rainbow Dash.” I said

“ I heard about the prophecy I thought I witness this in my lifetime.” Sunset Shimmer said

“ Great let’s go get those item.” Hikari say

“ Hell not you it is too dangerous for you to with us I would not break mom and dad promise to keep you safe reason we never met because before you were born I became Princess Celestia student.” Sunset Shimmer said to Hikari

“ so we are sister that I never knew you until now.” Hikari ask Sunset just nodded

( SUNSET SHIMMER WHEN SHE LITTLE GIRL POV )

“ hey Sunset can you get in the livingroom for a minute?” my dad ask me

“ yes.” I said as I walk in the livingroom

“ we need to talk to you few thing first thing there be a day when a Human come to Equestria all pony around Equestria get there kids ready just in case he / she get their cutie mark.” he said

“ what does the prophecy say.” I ask him I knew a human because since I became Princess Celestia student I went to the human world with Princess herself to see what it like I ran off got lost that where I met Kelly he is nice and ask if I need any help I said yes we become good friends we said to each other we want to met again in the future.

“ I want you to have this hold it until he / she have your cutie mark. this guitar pick was in our family on my dad side for 20 years.” he said as he gave me his guitar pick

“ thank I will it safe until I get pick but if you have another child what will gave to him / her when they are older?” I said

“ do not worry we already have something lineup for him / her when that time come.” he said

“ second I am pregnant please promise us that you would not tell your brother or sister at you relate ok until you feel the time is right.” my mom said to me

“ Ok mom and I promise not to tell until I feel the time is right. one question though when I know the time is right?” I ask my parents

“ you know when he / she want to help the chosen one from the prophecy by can’t because he / she do not have their cutie mark on the chosen one.” my dad reply

“ ok mom and dad I will not tell until time is right but if he/she ask me then I will them the truth ok.” I said

" ok sweetie we trust your judgment on this and make us proud of you ok." my dad said to me

( BACK TO KELLY POV )

after Sunset finish her story why Hikari can not come with us I look in the book to make sure that she telling the truth oodle enough she did tell the truth.

“ sorry Hikari you can come us because I do not have your cutie mark on me so sorry Hikari can you watch over C.M.C." I said to Hikari

“ ok .” Hikari said with a sad face

“ ok let’s get other three items then we can go to save Princess Celestia and Twilight and Rarity and Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie back and take down Prince Blueblood and for those who follow him.” I said

Rainbow Dash take out something I do not know what it “ here take this.” Rainbow Dash said as she hand me a pin of what it look like a lighting with a wing on both side when I got it. it turn into a badge on the badge a word on it saying “ Equestria elite special force. I put it on my shirt.

“OK let’s go to get the last to.” I said as I go through this adventure I will find out more about this prophecy hopefully it tell me why but who will know I will get my answer so enough or later down the line. I wish they go by the book since we are still in ponyville let’s go to sweet apple acres to get the item on Applejack farm.” I said


Author's Note

here is chapter5 still unedited until my editor get a chance to edit it I would like to hear from you all what do you think on this story so far I do not care if it is good the or even the weird and thanks to Darkmaster0224 let me Hikari his oc and be my editor

this chapter 5 short on word count I am sorry I did take out something I will make it up for you guys in later on in other chapter I hope you guys still like :pinkiehappy:

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