My Adventure in Equestria

by King primal Michael

chapter 6 (unedited)

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Disclaimed All character from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Equestria Girls belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust, and big thank to the fimfiction writer, Darkmaster0224, for letting me use one of his original characters, Hikari the Earth Pony. Thanks man *brohoof*

Story is told from narrator's POV.

CHAPTER 6

As we head to Sweet Apple Acres there was black smoke came out of the ground then it turn into a black unicorn it had evil smile it face with purple smoke come out from it eyes when it speak it sound like darth vader from the star wars movie I use to watch.

“ so this the one who the prophecy say ha that is lame he is weak he look will not hurt a fly hahahahahahahahahahahaha.”

I look at the girls behind me and said “ who this ass I will fight if I have to.” I knew who his is I want to be sure.

“ his name is king sombra he use to rule the Crystal Empire over 1,000 year ago” Luna said .

“ how you still around I thought me and my friends take you down for good.” Rainbow Dash said to Sombra

“ ha thanks to Prince Blueblood I am back rule along aside of him.” King Sombra said with an evil laugh “ so if this weakly can stop us you another thing coming.” I took out my sword ready to cut his head off when I hear " wait can I say something before you cut my head off." Sombra said

“ ok you one minute to say what you want.” I say with anger in my voice as I put my sword away

“ I want to say I am sorry what I have done over thousand years and what happen last hour it was that no good Prince Blueblood when he learn you chosen one he want to take anyone that you meet down he does not care if it his own aunts or Elements or their family or anyone come in contact with you he just take out sweet apple acres a big red stallion and old mare was swept clean of the face of equestria he then said if anyone come in contact with the chosen one he/she must tell me right away I sorry for your lose apple farm pony I really am sorry.” he said with that I punch him in the face and went to my gloves

" Luna , Hikari and Sunset stay her and watch over Sombra while Rainbow and I go and see if Applejack is ok." I said they nodded

Applejack ran fast as she could to her home to see if King Sombra is telling the truth

Rainbow and I cough up to Applejack we enter sweet apple acres everything was disory we walk around to see if applejack family is still alive we walk up to a big red barn still up intact and the door was open so we walk in see a big red stallion on the floor next to an old mare. I point at the big red stallion and ask “ who is he and who is old mare next to him.”

" the big red stallion is my brother his name big Mac and the old mare her name is granny Smith." Applejack said with a tear in her eyes

I check the old mare to see if she still alive but she have weak plose it was week I said " I got a plose but it is weak she might have last wish"

the old mare look at me her voice was weak when speak to me "take care of my granddaughters."

“ I will you can trust me.” I said granny Smith nodded weakly with that she pass away I check Applejack big brother he had no plose

" I am sorry for your lose Applejack" I said to Applejack as Rainbow Dash Sunset and I huge her

"thanks guys here you go I want you have this." Applejack she hand me her lasto it turn into golden lasto I put it around me

" let’s get the last item then we can stop Prince Blueblood and take the throne away from him " I said they nodded

( IN CANTERLOT DUNGEON)

" the horror the horror make it stop oh make it stop." Rarity said

"oh you don’t like cotton candy and chocolate milk that all you get for a meal that what Prince Blueblood said to give you I like to see you have none thing at all but that what he want that what he get." Discord said with an evil laugh

you get away with this the chosen one will come and set us free and kick you ugly but you mother bucker." Rarity said oh my “ Fluttershy say with that Discord left

“ Princess Celestia I marry Kelly Princess Luna Applejack Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer according to the prophecy after they left Rarity came to my house with Pinkie Pie and ask me if I marry them I said yes that when that no good of Prince Blueblood came in when he hear what I have done he odor the guards to us away Hikari escape before the guards got her let’s hope she found them I can not take this anymore cotton candy and chocolate milk every day of my life.” Twilight said Princess Celestia nodded

“ I agree my little pony when I hear from my Sister that she take him away from his world when the rainstorm I did not think about the prophecy now I did. I was not sure at the time that Kelly was the chosen one until now I know that he is the chosen one I have to talk to him when I see him he might help us in the future but I do not know if he accept it he might want rest for a long time until equestria need him again since he marry to my sister he have to marry me too to keep everything the same if that does not happen then my sister will become queen and him the king of equestria let’s just hope that he agree to it the chosen one also go by the law of the land.” Princess Celestia said

“ oh he will agree he would not break any laws he said he want to know law of the land so that he does not go to jail.” Pinkie Pie said with a smile on her face even when she in dungeon.

( to Kelly POV )

as we make our way back to the train station we hear cry for help so I ran to the cry for help once I got there I saw that the teacher got grab by two guards trying to take her away so I walk up to them and said " is there problem here.” the guards look at me as the girls came up to my side

one of the guard said “ she need go to the dungeon odor of Prince Blueblood anyone come into contact with the chosen one must go to the dungeon.”

“ is that so released her right now for I the chosen one odor you release her right now or you will face princess Luna ” I said to the guards they did what I say and left.

“ thank you Kelly if you did not come when you dungeon right about now.” Miss Cheerilee said " so you are the chosen one." I nodded

“ I did not know please forgive me for calling you a monster chosen one.” Miss Cheerilee said

“ it is ok I did not myself until after that party and I write a letter to my marefriend after send it and I went for a walk in the everfree forest I hear timber wolf so I run into castle I look around the castle I found a book that call the book of prophecy so I read and found at that time I got Princess Luna , Applejack and Sunset Shimmer cutie mark as Princess Luna, Applejack, Sunset Shimmer and I walk around ponyville I thought to prank Rainbow Dash then I got her cutie mark as well then we got marry then as Princess Luna , Rainbow , Applejack , Sunset Shimmer and I walk to the train station Hikari came up to us say Princess Blueblood did after we talk I had to get item from Applejack , Rainbow . Hikari want to help she can’t because I did not have her cutie mark Rainbow give me her wonderbolt pin turn into a badge Applejack Give me her lasso golden lasto we were heading to the train station to get the last item to help us to stop the threat when I hear cry for help I ran over here to see if I can help any way I can.” I said

“ Kelly we need to go to canterlot to get the last item to take Blueblood out.” Applejack said I nodded

“ we need to go to get the three fill out of the dungeon and Princess Celestia and the rest of the Elements.” I said Applejack and Rainbow Dash nodded with that we left to the train station.


Author's Note

It look like Kelly and the girl are with him are on their way to canterlot to stop Prince Blueblood

will they get to canterlot castle in time to save their friends or will be to late turn in next time of all new of my adventure of Equestria

I hope you all like it please let me what you all think all feedback is welcome

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