Twilight meets an Eclipse

by RisuUmbra

ch 1 the beginning of an Eclipse

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Hello my name is Eclipse walker and I guess I should Start at the beginning... well not the very beginning that would be a very long story how about I start with this... I'm a god and before you go and question me on that let me say this did you think discord was the only god he only controls chaos where I control over the shadows and the magic that resides in them. I'm about the same age as luna just a little taller and... about the princesses they don't even know about me at all even though I gave them the elements but yeah it happens. Though now that I think about it I might have been shadow walking during that so they probably couldn't see me oh well it happens and no I don't have a giant castle i'm more of a wanderer and right now even though I don't want to I have to pay a visit to the new alicorn A student of ol sunny butt and yes I know it's kinda rude but hey it's funny and It seems i’m closing in on a little cottage maybe I can stay for the night or day doesn't matter oh i should probably say what i look like i'm a black alicorn with a black mane with a red streak down its sides I gave red eyes and my cutie mark is a red eclipse I have a regular horn with a dark red swirl around it i'm wearing a black cloak with a matching hood with a red rim around the edges of it ok im at the small house *knock knock knock* I look up at the sky and see it's almost dark and as much as I like the dark i'm dead tired I look back at the door as it opens to see a timid yellow pegasus hiding in her own hair “h-hello?” she softly spoke to me “hello sorry to interrupt you at this hour but may I stay here for the night I've been walking for a very long time”I said softly to her and gave her a gentle smile. She stopped shaking and looked at me with a happy smile “oh of course you can and by the looks of it you're pretty hungry too come in come in!” she grabbed my hoof and dragged me inside “o-oh thank you very much but i'm not hung-” i was cut off by my own rumbling stomach “ok maybe a little” I say while looking down and when I looked back up dinner was already done and she pulled me to her dinner table “ hurry before it gets cold then you can get to bed” I sat down and took a sip of my soup and it was the BEST soup I've ever had. “ahhhhh that was the best soup I've ever eaten but I really should get to sleep" I said after washing my plate in the sink "oh ok but I think you should take off that coat so I can wash it" she said while reaching for my coat "n-no its ok i'm fine wearing it to bed but that you for caring" and as custom I bent down grabbed her hoof and kissed "mia dispachi senora" I spoke my native tounge  for thank you my fair lady then looked at her with a grateful smile until I saw she was blushing heavily "I-if you'll excuse me I'll be heading to bed now EEP!" She quickly ran upstairs but I quickly dismissed it as sleep began to overtake me so I walked over and lay on the couch and closed my eyes.

Day-2: Aaaaahhh that was the best sleep i’ve had in awhile wait where am I oh yeah i'm almost to ponyville by now and I stayed with a very nice mare named Fluttershy well i better see what time it is and hope it's not a clear day and finally to my luck there was a eclipse how convenient (Discord's fault) i'll have to thank him later but I should most likely leave now but I promise myself I will apologize to fluttershy later.

(3rd Person  POV) Eclipse started his walk to the library while fluttershy was just waking up she sleepily glided down stairs  the first thing she saw was the couch empty and the door open after waking up fully she flew out the door and into the sky to search for her guest but gave up when all she could find was trees.

(Back to eclipse)  when i finally breached through the foliage i was filled with relief. i had finally made it after about a month of traveling i had made it to ponyville. Now it was time for the next problem finding my way to miss twilight, my best bet is to ask the locals but i better keep my wings hidden just in case.

(3rd person view) After making sure that his wings were fully hidden Eclipse started his way into town with his hood up concealing his face from prying eyes but this also made him look quite intimidating so many ponies steered themselves or their children away from him besides one pink blur.

(Back to eclipse) Every fiber of my being told me to move out the way and i did just that i jumped right out of the way of what looked to be a pony going at supersonic speeds “Hiya” I instantly jumped and whipped around to see a pink earth pony that looked to be hyped up on ten gallons of griffin coffee “WhatsyournameIhaventseenyouaroundherebeforeandiknoweveryponyandimeaneevveerypony” she suddenly gasped in a very overdamatic way “ AreyounewhereOMGIhavetothrowahugepartyseeyouthereandalsohelloauthorbye”she zipped off in the other direction leaving me there dumbfounded “you know what i’ll just ignore it” i stated to noone in particulare. After wandering for a while I finally got frustrated and walked up to a teal mare with a lare on her flanks “Excuse me madam but do you know where the residence of Twilight Sparkle is” I asked as respectfully as I could with a slight bow when I looked up the mare was staring at me with a rosy red face that contrasted greatly with her body “I-Its d-down this street and to t-the left” she stuttered while staring directly into my red eyes “Mi Dispiace Mi Amore and thank you” I turned to leave and started to trot away until I heard a thud behind me when I turned to see what it was it looked like the mare from earlier had fallen asleep “ Strange” I thought to myself as I set back on course to what looked to be a library in a giant oak tree and above the door it said Golden oaks library “well better late than never” I gave the door three solid knocks I hope she doesn’t freak out when she sees me.

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