Teen In Equestria: Voice in my Head

by Ottotune

The End

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Sweet we Hit the 100+ Dislike MileStone. Yes, and with that I bring to you 'The End'

Chapter 16

'The End'

I flew back towards the castle landing right in front of the palace. I looked up, watching as the fire demon destroyed in its path. I could barely hear Discord's maniacal laughter in the distance from the monster and burning castle. I walked into the burning palace to defeat Discord once and for all. "So Kendall do you have a plan."

"Yeah, I go in. Kick Discords ass, and walk out."

"Do you really think it'll be that easy?"

"Fuck no, but I know damn well he aint making it out there alive."

"So that's your plan?"

"Yep."

"Seems legit."

"Seems simple."

"Well fuck it, we're here to help whenever you need man."

"Thanks guy, but I want to do this myself for once. You can help me only if I ask for it."

"You sure boss?"

"Yeah...I'm sure."

"Okay then Kendall get in there and kick that pendejos ass."

"With pleasure." I walked threw the main hall of the castle watching as a few Pegasus guards trying to fend off the Fire monster. I continued to walk down the hall until I heard a loud crashing noise, that knocked me to the ground. I got up and seen through the debris a soldier crushed under rubble I ran over to him and dug him out, he looked at me and dug into his suit grabbing a small locket and handed it over to me. I opened it and seen a picture of his wife and kids, as I looked back at him he raised his hand in salute and passed away in front of me. I closed the Locket and clinched on it tight as I saluted him back. A two guards flew in and grabbed their comrade as I went on to find Discord.

I started to notice something along my walk. The closer I got, the more things felt more out of place. The picture on the walls were moving as if they were actually in that time set. Then floor became soap which I immediately slipped on, I got up and cracked my back then proceeded to skate my way towards the throne room. I saw the door, but every time I got close to it, the door seemed to fly back farther and farther the closer I got to it.

I decided it would be best if I just flew towards it, when I got close to the door it let out a loud shriek, I covered my ears. The loud shrill stunning me for a few second. When I recovered I noticed the door sprouted wings and was flying away from me. I flew as fast as I could towards the door dodging debris that was flying along the corridor. I saw a weapons rack and grabbed the nearest weapon which was a spear. I chucked it at the door and it hit it on the mark making it fly slower.

I grabbed the door and flung it open and crashed into the room as the door slammed close. I got off the floor and stood back on my feet. I saw Discord sitting down on the throne laughing as he saw me, I stood there a angry look on my face as I stared the god of Chaos down. He looked at me and clapped his hands as he arose from the throne. “I can’t thank you enough. You released me from my stone imprisonment and help me take over this lovely palace. I should be thanking you, but I don’t I should.”

“We end this now Discord.” He let out a slight chuckle as he looked me over. I was in nothing but jeans and tennie shoes, with my wings splay out to the sides and cuts and bruises all over my body. This made him  laugh hard for a minute before he came down. “You honestly think you can take me, Don’t make me laugh. What makes you think, you of all these pony, can take on a god like me by yourself.”

“Studying underneath you.” I raised my fist in the air, looked at me and fell to the ground laughing walked over to him and he swept my feet, making me fall, hitting my head on the hard marble ground. I grabbed the back of my head getting up to one knee, Discord swung his hoofed leg and kicked right in the rib cage shattering one of my already bruised ribs.

“To think you won’t be able to watch the downfall of Equestria, and to think I was going to allow you to rule with me.” He let out a loud sigh as he tail whipped me into three heavy suits of armor. “But seeing how you are just too ignorant to know when you’re way out of your league you go after it.” He told me as he walked over to me.

I made my way out the armor and my breath was quickly cut off as Discord claw wrapped around my throat as he lifted me off the floor. I wrapped my hands around his claw trying to pry it from my throat, but the lack of oxygen made it hard. I went limp in the hand before he flung me across the room crashing through the wall. My body ragdolled on the floor as I hit the ground on other side of the throne room, rolling like a ball on a bumpy road.

He teleported in front of my body and laughed. “Come on you must have some fight in you if you were so confident on coming back to face me.” I couldn’t move, the only thing I could do is breath hard as blood rushed down my face from the hard impact with the wall and floor. “Pathetic and to think I really saw potential in you.” He said mockingly as he dragged my body back to the wall before throwing me back through into the throne room.

Discord played with me like a dog playing with a chew toy or ball, why is he doing this. Does he want to see me suffer or he just taking his time before he actually finishes this. I got onto my hands and knees coughing up blood as I gripped my side. My hand was shaky, I couldn’t even support my own weight as I fell to my side, rolling over to my back. My vision started to get hazy as I saw Discord walk over to me.


“Okay guys I could really use your help right now.” I concentrated and focused as hard as I could. Thinking of bring my personalities out to the physical plane. Discord laughed as I tried my best, my body finally gave out me, I was breathing harder than I was before. What was the point of that like it could ever really happen.

“Need some help bruh?” I opened my eyes and seen a hand in front of my face, I looked at it then the owner of it. My eyes widen as I saw that it was Ace standing in front of me the rest of them standing behind him. I took his hand and he pulled me up to my feet, I stood up on spaghetti legs for a bit before regaining my balance. “Ready to Kick this fucker’s ass.”

I held the side of my head that was bleeding wincing and gritting my teeth as I looked at all of them. Each of them just as ready and eager to defeat Discord as I was. Marvin held out a long length of cloth that I quickly wrapped around my head. I looked at all of them lightly shaking my head. “Yeah lets do it.” I clasped my hand in Ace’s and gave him a quick chest bump before we all looked back at him. Discord had a look if disbelief as he saw Nine of me all dress in different outfits.

He slowly clapped his hands together, “Nice trick boy, now let me show you what real magic can do.” he said holding his eagle clawed hand up as a green flame engulfed it. He started to multiply first two, than five, until there was eighteen of him. “You really think you’re the only one who could do something like this. Look at you, you’re already out of breath just from them alone. So why don’t you just get out of here while you can.” They all said in unison.

“You got a plan Kendall?” Tyre asked, looking at all the Discords surrounding us.

“Yeah we split up. I got Hector and Bubba, Tyre take Ace and Brian, and Raphael take Richard and Marvin. GO NOW!” We all split up, my team stayed in the throne room, Tyre’s squad went to the balcony, and Raphael’s group went to the hallway.

“That’s your plan? Splitting up? You have to be the worst leader that ever existed. Go get the rest of the trash while some of you stay here with me and clear out these fools.” Discord ordered, Twelve of his clones flew past us going to get the rest of what makes me. Me, Hector and Bubba stood there looking at six Discords. “Shall we get started.” They all said as they closed the distance.


A hour later.

Everypony waited outside wondering if Kendall will ever return. There was a loud explosion that startled everypony as parts of the castle started to collapse. Everypony was concerned as the castle started to collapse, they all stared as the once beautiful castle started to become rubble. A shadow came from a far getting the attention of some ponies as they pointed it out to everyone else.

The shadow grew larger as a Lighting storm took over raining down on everypony, they all looked up at then back at the shadow. It disappeared then reappeared as face that laughed evilly. Discord flew from the shadow stomping in front of them. “To think he was ever a real challenge.” Everypony couldn’t believe it, They all thought Kendall would've at least wounded him but Discord was perfectly fine, not as so a single scratch upon his body.

“Are you all surprised to see me? Because I’m just so happy to see you all.” He said mockingly as he laughed feeling Triumphant over his victory. “I’ll admit he did give me some kind of challenge, but his effort to save you all just wasn’t enough.” The crowd couldn’t even imagine what Discord had done to Kendall in the castle. Celestia looked at Twilight and her friends and nodded her head. They all looked at eachother then walked in front of the crowd about to use the elements of Harmony, ”Wait a minute...Who’s that?!” some pony in the crowd asked.

The Elements stopped and looked past Discord, whom even turned to see who the pony was talking about. They all looked at the burning castle as another shadow popped into view, but they all just didn’t see one shadow, but eight. As the figures got closer every pony could see who they were. It was Kendall, well...at least him eight different times. They all looked badly beaten and bruised trails of blood behind them, as one carried and dragged the rest of himself to them with his remaining strength and will. He dropped all of them to the floor before collapsing himself.

Everypony looked over the bodies. The one who collapsed wore a tracksuit, there was one in Overalls, one in  Dress Clothes, one with broken glasses, another in baggy clothing, another in a strait jacket, one more in casual clothing, and the last was in nothing but boxer briefs.

“We tried our best but he was just too strong.” Ace said before his hand fell to the ground, Chrysalis ran over to him and picked him up crying asking where her beloved king was. Ace slowly lifted his hand up and pointed her gaze towards the castle, she looked back at Ace tears rolling down her eyes as she stared at him. “You know...you were pretty cool to hang out with.” He said letting out his signature smirk, before it disappeared as his head went backwards then falling to the left, making Chrysalis let him go.

As everypony watched as the castle collapsed, tears welled up in every ponies eyes, as the eight bodies laid in front of them. No pony said a word as Discord laughed, the once brave boy that came to Equestria was no longer with them. "Tia...is...he..." Luna asked as tears started to form from the corners of her eyes, Celestia said nothing to her little sister but only held her in a tight embrace. "I'm sorry Luna." Celestia finally said, holding her sister tighter than she ever did, as tears even welled down her eyes.

Chrystin stood there crying before resting her face into Fluttershy’s shoulder, who just held her tight. Chrysalis screamed Kendall’s name as loud as she could, hoping it would do something. She tried to run towards the castle but was only held back by the soldiers that weren’t severely injured. Discord laughed as hard as he could. “To believe that boy thought he could take on me, a god amongst mere mortals. He got what he wanted, he wanted to finish it, so I did him the honors, and FINISHED IT!

“This is all my fault Tia.” Luna said softly in her sister's shoulder. Celestia pushed her sister back a bit looking into her sister’s eyes. “No Luna it’s not your fault.”

“YES IT IS!”  “IF I JUST WOULD'VE LISTEN TO HIM ON WHY HE COULDN’T TELL ME NONE OF THIS WOULD EVEN BE HAPPENING RIGHT NOW, SO YES IT IS ALL MY FAULT!” Celestia could only look at her sister and sigh, bringing her back into a hug.

“No...i-it’s my fault” said a small feminine voice. Princess Luna looked up and seen the crowd spread apart revealing  Lemon Cake, shuffling her hooves on the ground. “But how can this be your fault?” Luna asked quizzically. “You’re so young and innocent.”

“I’m not as innocent as you’d think princess...I’m the reason why Kendall couldn’t tell you who he slept with.”

“You’re the mare that tried to steal my stallion from me.” Luna said in the Canterlot scaring the Lemon Cake, Celestia put her hand on her sister’s shoulder calming her down from her rage. “Please continue miss.” Celestia asked.

“Lemon Cake.” She said in complete fear, Celestia nodded while Luna stared daggers at her, making her feel uncomfortable. “Well...He saved me from my very abusive boyfriend and showed me what a true gentle colt should act like in public. I couldn’t give him anything, so I asked if he would like to go to dinner with me as a thank you. But the more time I spent with him, the more I felt both physically and emotionally attracted to him.”

Lemon Cake started to blush as she told her story, which only made Luna burn with envy. “Then I asked if he would like to taste my homemade Lemon squares which he happily agreed. We both got to my house and we both ate some of my special Lemon square and well...I laced the powder sugar with Ecstasy, and we....had sex. I was so scared on what you may have done that he decided not to tell you for my own safety and the last thing I told him was that he was worse than my boyfriend. So this is all my fault Princess Luna I’m so sorry.”

“And now you both don’t have to worry.” Discords said with a smile as he floated toward Lemon Cake Pulling her closer to Luna, as he put his head in between them both. “Because he no longer exist thanks to yours truly.”

“You’re a monster Discord!” Celestia yelled as tears streamed down her face. “And you’ll pay for this and everything else you’ve done!”

“Now come on my dearest Celestia.” Discord said as he floated over to her lifting her chin up to face him. “You honestly think that turning me back into stone will really solve anything. If you haven’t notice I’ve been set free twice, chaos will always be around no matter how hard you try to get rid of it. So your best option is to just submit to me and we’ll rule Equestria together like we planned when we were younger.”

“I’ll never rule with you, nor will I submit. I’ve encased you in stone once and I’ll make sure that it happens again, and to think for once that I used to love you.”

“Come on Tia I can still see the way you look at me that burning desire to be loved by someone just as powerful as yourself. Just join with me, and maybe, just maybe. I might not destroy Equestria along with you.” Discord said with a sternness in his voice.

“Looks like you’ll have to take me along with Equestria because I’ll never join a monster like you. I’d rather die than even think of ruling with you.”

“Wish granted.” Discord said as he flew back from her, gaining as much strength as he could for one of his most powerful spells ever. “Say goodbye patrons of Equestria.” He said as the a storm started to turn more violante.

Everypony that was there started to hold each other for their last moment here on Terra, all closing their eyes as their fate came closer. The Elements of Harmony held their ground as each of the necklaces ripped off their necks into the storm circling Discords body. Twilight tried to use her magic to levitate the Element of Harmony back to she couldn’t not with the sheer power Discord had on everything.

Twilight looked at her friends, Applejack held out her hand towards Twilight. She looked at her hand then back to her friends who all held their friend close, Twilight took Applejack’s hand and joined her friends in one last hug. Princess Luna and Celestia were holding each other, while Chrystin comforted her mother Chrysalis. Shining Armor and Cadence held each other close as they could ever be. “Say so long to the pony next to you for it will be the last thing you do-” Discord was cut off making everypony open their eyes.

Discord looked down as he could see bloody blade sticking out of his stomach, he turned around to see who would do such a thing to him. His eye widen as Kendall stood behind him. “I thought you died in the castle?”

“You can’t kill a dead man Discord.” I said as I drew the sword back, Discord turned his head back to the front as he dropped to his knees. I took the opportunity and stepped on his back making him hit the ground face first, I took the sword and cut off both his wings which made him scream in agony. I stepped on his head to make sure he stayed quiet for this. I grabbed both of his horns and turned around pulling as hard as I could screaming until I heard the satisfying snapping noise, and let go of his horns sending him back to the ground.

I looked at the body breathing heavy as I did one thing that I thought was only possible in God of war. I a mere mortal have taken out a god. Chrysalis ran up to me and gave me a bear hug around my waist. “I thought I may of lost you my King.” I looked down and hugged her back, after a while I pushed her back.

“I’m glad to hear that but I’m not Kendall. The one in the Straitjacket is Kendall, I’m the side he wishes no one will ever see. I am his Insane, psychopathic side Hector.”

“But how di-”

“While we were fighting Discord, Kendall figured a way to bring us all out into the physical realm. We all fought valiantly but Discord was just too powerful for even us nine. We all might be separate but I could remember everything that happened to all of them. With the physical damage that Kendall endured be setting us free gave us all a  disadvantage against Discord and his seventeen clones. They all made sure each and every one of us suffered, slowly dragging out the battles each of them took.

All I could do was sit there and watch as I witnessed a brutal beat down that Bubba and Kendall took at the hand of three Discords. One of they took on Bubba while two took on kendall, and as for why he’s in the straitjacket. The Discords knocked Kendall over towards me and turned around to beat down Bubba. Kendall used the rest of his strength to unlocked me and told me to lock him in the jacket.

All I could do was sit there and watch as I witnessed a brutal beat down that Bubba and Kendall took at the hand of three Discords. One of they took on Bubba while two took on kendall, and as for why he’s in the straitjacket. The Discords knocked Kendall over towards me and turned around to beat down Bubba. Kendall used the rest of his strength to unlocked me and told me to lock him in the jacket.

I did just that and took his place in the fight as the rest of the Discords returned with the rest of my colleagues. They threw them all in a pile then looked at me before converging back into one. He looked at me and told me I was going to have the same fate as my friends. I looked at them and could see Ace was still conscious, I stepped towards Discord before hearing a rattling sound. I looked up and saw that the chandler was coming down towards me. I held my hands out and hoped for the worst.

But it never came, I watched as Discord exited the castle knowing that he won. I stayed there for a few thankfully there was a large hole in the wall that keep each and everyone of us from suffocating. I just out of the chandler and walked down the halls trying to find somethings to kill that Son of a Bitch, and seen Ace carrying all of them out the castle. I found this sword and ended it right here, which is exactly why I’m standing here right now, also Protrokalos you may need this.” Hector said as he walked over to him, handing him a Barret 50 cal.

“I found it when looking for a way out of the castle.” He then proceeded to grab each of his fallen comrades and place them next to Kendall. Hector picked up each one and laid them on Kendall’s body hoping what he thought would work, and they sunk into him vanishing like they weren't there, and did the rest. As he was about to enter Kendall’s body he was stopped by Twilight. “Do you think you defeated Discord?”

Hector looked back at Discords body before laughing. “Yeah I’m sure of it and if I didn’t I’m sure we won’t mind taking him down again.” He said before taking the straitjacket off Kendall’s body and putting it back on himself. “Do you mind?” Twilight put the restraints back onto the jacket and he laid on top of Kendall’s body vanishing into him. I started to stir on the floor as I slowly opened my eyes to see Chrysalis, Chrystin, Princess Luna, Celestia, and The element of Harmony hovering over me.

“What happened? Did I win?” I asked as I was jumped on by Chrysalis who held me tight, I could feel tears starting to drip down my shoulder. I held her Tightly against my bare chest, before letting her go and stood up shakingly. “So where’s Discord.”

“He’s right...Where did he go?” Hector said as he and everypony looked where Discord once was, and he was gone. They all looked around trying to find where he was until they heard him laugh, I looked out the corner of my eyes looking everywhere until I was grabbed from behind. I struggled for a bit before head butting the person behind me. I turned around and seen Discord hold his nose, I ran behind him and under hooked both of his arms and interlock them with my own, kneeing him in the kidneys.

“Take the Shot!” I shouted at ProtroKalos, who looked at me stunned. “TAKE THE FUCKING SHOT!” I shouted louder he shook his head.

“No! Not with you behind him!”

“JUST FUCKING DO IT!”  He took aim lining the crosshairs right to Discords head. “DO IT!” Protro was about to pull the trigger until Chrysalis and Chrystin threw him off sight by screaming wait, and bumping into his back.

POW!!!

I stood there blinking for a few seconds before looking down to see a big four inch hole in the middle of stomach. I could hear Chrysalis scream as I fell to the ground my eyes staying open the whole time. It seemed as if time itself started to slow down. Chrysalis moved her way towards me, holding me up to her chest, screaming for some pony to help. A few field medics and Protrokalos made their way to me seeing what they could do. I could see Chrysalis’ face as I raised my hand to touch her cheek.

“Please don’t die on me Kendall, please.” She said crying, I only smiled as I mouthed the words ‘I love you’ before everything went black.


Chrysalis held Kendall tightly as she could never wanting to let him go, some guards tried to pry her off, but some guards just told them not to do it. Just then a loud crack of thunder was heard and a bright cone of light shined down upon Kendall’s dead body. He started to levitate off the floor into the air, he was thirty feet in the air before Two Alicorn ponies flew down from the hole in the clouds.

A Pitch black Stallion with the stars glowing in his body and his mane an assortment of colors like the aurora lights, and a Mare her skin brown like the earths soil, her hair like vines as green as the earth itself and her eyes a blue as the ocean. “Mother...Father?” Celestia and Luna said in unison as the two Alicorns started to circle Kendall’s lifeless body, they circled faster and faster as Kendall’s body started to heal. The hole in his body starting to reform his organs materializing then the muscle, then last the skin. The two Alicorns shot I directly into his body making him glow brighter than the itself blinding everyone on the floor.

His wings growing two times their regular size and being fully engulfed in white flames as, he started to descend to the ground. Everypony that was there bowed or kneeled as he touched the ground, walking up to Celestia and Luna “Arise my Children.” To the Alicorns said along with Kendall’s voice.

“Is...is it really you?” Celestia and Luna asked only getting a little laugh from him.

“Have we been gone that long? That you two don’t remember what we look like?”

“So it is you!?” Luna asked in surprise.

“Yes our dear Wonna it is us.” He said as he walked over and gave the two a long loving hug. “But we can not stay for long. Without us in the Ionosphere Terra is bound to fall apart.”

“But-” The sisters said before there parents hushed them both with a finger to their lips.

“At ah ah. There will be No buts about you two.” They said as they both existed Kendall’s body. He landed back to the ground on one knee, he slowly rose to his feet before shaking his head.

“Holy shit! Did I just die?” I said not really knowing what hell just happened.

“Yes, you did young hero.” Said two voices. I turned around to find out who was talking, but I couldn’t find anyone. “Up here, young one.” I looked up in the Sky and seen two faces in the sky.

“WHO THE FUCK IS THAT!” I shouted. Only making the two laugh.

“We are what made the planet Terra. I Astral, god of Space and the Universe and my wife Vale, goddess of the Life and Earth herself. We came down after we saw your selfless act and sacrificed yourself to save our beloved planet. We only found it fit that your life be spared to fend off the threat that is the Nightmare. We made you more powerful and more in control when using your.....Allies?”

“Allies?.....Oh you mean Ace and them?”

“Yes, you’ll find it more easy to control them well in whatever you may call it when one of them take over. But be careful young one for whatever god you slay in this world you’ll become. We’ll overlook you slaying Discord for you not knowing, by reanimating him but sealing him in more stronger than stone.”

They used their magic as Discord’s body healed and he was encased in stainless Steel. “That should do, now we must go.” They said as I watched their faces disappear into the skylight.

I looked over to Chrysalis and she stood there looking at me before a smile grew on her face, not one of evil, but Joy and Happiness. I walked over to her and gave her a hug, bringing her closer to my body. She buried her face into my neck crying while sinking into my embrace, I pulled away from the hug and held her at arms length. “Come on lets go home.”

As I walked away I was suddenly stopped by a bunch of guards holding swords and spears towards me. “Freeze!” They all said, they parted the circle and NightWing walked towards me. “If the next few words that are going to come out of your mouth is ‘Thank you’ we’re going to have a serious fucking problem.”

“He’s right, NightWing.” Luna said as she walked into the circle with her sister and the Elements of harmony. “We should be thanking him, he nobly sacrificed himself to save Equestria.”

“But princess what about all the things he did during all of this. Setting Discord free, Killing a guard, ruining the Gala-” Luna pulled NightWing close to her by the collar of his clothes, and whispered in his ear, “Everypony here just witness his sacrifice, then he was resurrected by my parents, who the *Fuck** do you think everypony is going to believe.*” she told him before letting him go and walking off.

I started to walk away from him but he grabbed me by the arm. “Next time you’re mine.”

“I love you to NightWing.” I told him before going home with my family. “What do we do now my king?” Chrysalis asked me I just smiled and told her ‘I said we’d have a Kingdom and dammit we’re going to get one. Even if it’ll take us a few years to build, I’ll make sure that the Changelings actually have somewhere to live instead of being in some cave. We’ll have to find a an empty piece of land and build a village from there, and progress getting better and better throughout time.

Just incase you were trying to Imagine what she looked like

Shout out to angelthecatgirl for this drawing it's exactly what I imagined her to look like.

Okay Everypony that’s the end of this book, but I'm thinking on putting the rest of them (4-5 more book Ideas) on this............story, or should I make a whole new Story for each....probably best to go with the second option.

So the Teen In Equestria series goes like this:

Maybe if we’re all lucky, I might have a fifth book for y'all to read. but until then Have a good read and day everypony. I already have ‘An Ancient Evil’ mapped out already, and the beginning of ‘The God Within’. I just need to do the same for ‘The Rise of a Fallen King’

(Coco, Kendall, Protrokalos, and Mariah)

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