story cancelled and being rewritten

I was just a regular 16 year old kid my parents died when I was younger so I bounced around homes. One day I went out and helped someone but everything has an outcome mine was I got beat to death for it. I woke up in what was heaven but it was to shiny and ponies are not my version of it. I latter came to realise I was a night pony now in a kingdom of crystal ponies with a now adopted younger brother I must survive my new world and maybe find love.