Dark Crystal Prince

by OriginEclipse99

Chapter 1

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Well I have some ideas bouncing around in my cranium so I decided to put it on here enjoy.

"Ryan Origin you get your ass down here right now amd take this trash out" shouted the voice of my oh so lovely foster mother. Sighing I hoped out of bed and grabbed my wallet, cellular device and headphones planning on ditching the house for a bit after taking the trash out.

"You were supposed to take the trash out hours ago" she said sitting at the kitchen table for me.

"I'm going calm down ok" I said grabbing the bag and heading for the door

"I'm heading out for a bit be back soon" I said fast as I rushed out the door before she could respond.

Heading into town I started to listen to music while just strolling along. I eventually made it to the park where I sat down at a bench enjoying the peace and quiet.

"Somebody help me" like I said peace and quiet. Standing up and running over a man and women were fighting over her purse. I ran and tackled the man making him let go I got to hits in before he threw me off and ran.

"Thank you young man that was very brave of you" said an elderly lady as I dusted myself off.

"No problem just your friendly neighborhood thug tackler here" I told her making my way back home as she walked on. I kept getting the feeling I was being watched but ignored it and took the long way home.

About half way there I started to notice a green beat up buick following me. Walking faster I heard the car speed up and took off running. I turned down a back alley to find it was a dead end. I tried to hide in a dumpster but it was locked so I picked up a lead pipe to defend myself. The car stopped in front of the alley and four men got out all shady looking. They made there way towards me and I tensed up a little.

"Sorry white boy but you just had do help the little old lady" said the one I'm assuming I stopped earlier as he held a crowbar his friends had similar blunt objects. The first one swung I ducked and hit him in the back of the head. Leaning back a bit I narrowly avoided the next swing and lashed out again.

"Enough playing around" said the one in the back as he got out a pistol. Before I could react he shot me in the knee making me go down. They swarmed me beating me with blunt objects it was terrible so much pain and in couldnt do anything.

"I think were done here boys" said the leader laughing making the group laugh along with him. They sped off into the night leaving me there to die. I knew I wasnt going to make it the blunt force and gunshot I would be dead in the next few moments. At least I would final be rid of this pain.

"Oh if it isnt the boy who helped me" said the voice of the old lady I helped.

"Do you want the pain to stop" she asked I only nodded which made it hurt worse.

"Its ok I'm gonna make it all better you will go to a better place child" she said grabbing me and holding onto me. Her touch brought no pain which I was glad about. Nothing could save me but at least someone nice would be with me before I passed on.

My eyes got heavy as they started to close and my breath got slower. Then the old lady spoke one last time to me

"You should enjoy your new life"

Crystal Empire

Ughh...heaven is shinier then I thought it would be" I said opening my eyes which hurt I thought thing dont hurt in heaven. Also what the hell why are my hand now marshmallows no wait those are hooves-what the fuck. Panicking I tried to stand up but kept falling down not use to the new body. Eventually I made it up and started to walk but fell after three steps.

"Excuse me mister are you ok" asked a young voice behind me. Turning around quick luckily not falling down I saw a horse wait no hes pretty small it a pony wait so I'm a pony. I now wish I was drunk it might help me cope with the situation.

"You must not be from around here huh" asked the grey little unicorn was it, his horn was oddly shaped it was curved and smooth plus red tipped. His body was a dark charcoal grey and his eyes the irises are an amazing crimson red. He smiled up at me showing fanged teeth.

"Oh...um no I'm ok thank for asking though and what makes you say I'm not from here" I said sitting down on my flank I think it is.

"Well all the other ponies except me have Crystal coats your is plain fur like mine and we dont have night ponies in the crystal kingdom." He saying it like I knew what he meant.

"Well I am new and a little lost I may have bumped my head and can't remember a few things can you help me out kid" I asked bedding the truth a bit.

"Sure follow me mister..um what's your name anyway mister" he asked tilting his head. Shit I can't say ryan that doesnt sound like a night name.

"Oh its um Origin Eclipse" I said thinking fast he just nodded and we moved on. He lead me further into town as I started to get the hang of walking lime this or is it trotting now.

"This here is the crystal park where I hang out...its also where I live" he said whispering the last part to where I couldnt hear it.

"What was that?" I asked

"Its um also where I live" he said hanging his head. I felt a bit of guilt for asking now.

"So your an orphan" I asked he only nodded. Walking over I sat next to him and wrapped a youve around him he looked up at me with tears in his eyes from the subject poor kid.

"Hey how about this I'm am orphan to I'm only 16 so how about I adopt you as my brother or something" I said and he instantly cheered up.

"Really like we would be brothers" he asked to make sure.

"Sure first off what your name bro" I asked him

"Oh its Sombra" he told me puffing his chest proudly I chuckled a his enthusiasm and ruffled his mane he giggled from the playful noggie I gave him.

"Look guys the freak found himself a freak friend" said a little pony with a group behind him.

"Leave me alone quarts shot" Sombra said looking sad again.

"Or what are you gonna do about it" he said stepping closer. I got in the way ready to put this bully in his place.

"Hey quarts shit was it, why dont you take you and your herd of coltfriends and leave before this gets ugly" I said hoping I got the wording right or else my insult won't work. He got really red in the face and started to run off his little gang didnt know what to do and just left. I felt two hooves wrap around my neck looking down it was Sombra.

"Thank you thank you thank you" he said hugging me I just hugged back.

"What are brothers for" I said putting him down.

"He would never leave me alone even when I told him to but you told him off and it worked it was hilarious the look on his face" he said laughing at the end.

We spent the day at the park playing me getting use to my new body as we did. I felt that maybe this won't be so bad I always wanted a little brother. As we played I found out also Sombra was only ten so that makes me six years older. It took me till now to also relize I had the wing of a bat wonder what my face looks like I should find a mirror tomorrow or just look at a crystal wall.

Night fell and I noticed the moon looked bigger them I remember then again its a completely different world now. Sombra led me to a big tree near the middle of the park. When we got there he pushed a piece if bark revealing a small little spot like a built in tree house.

"Wow this is pretty cool how long have you been here" I asked looking around it was big enough for two but that was it though.

"About since I was seven that was when I left the orphanage no one liked me there" he said sadly.

"I understand I didnt lime the orphanage they kept forcing me into home I didnt like and they also didnt like me" I said laying on the makeshift bed, ruffling his hair again making it a common thing I guess he seems to like it.

"I'm happy you came along I always wanted a brother" he said cuddling up to my side and laying his head down against me.

"Me to bro, me to" I said also laying my head down heading to sleep wondering what the next day had in store.

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