I'll Tell You What Revenge Is

by King ShimmerOreoLover

Chapter One: I Know My Mistake

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The rainy sky was a deep blue that fateful day. That day was when things went horribly wrong. I hung my head in shame as I walked down the street, allowing for my clothes to get wet, drops falling from the tip of my no longer pointy hair. I walk along Sugar Cube Corner, silent as it if were a ghost town. What do I do now? I probably made her felt like if I didn't care about her. Sunset, I do care about you! I, I know what the pain feels like.....I" I thought as my shoes feel heavy. I already know why, but the real concern is, where am I heading? Then a faint voice catches my ear, it sounds awfully familiar. Ah, should have known.

"Hey Mid! Where are you? Don't make me go look for you! I know I will find you! We have to talk to you!" a scratchy voice comes from a few yards away. I'd recognize the athlete's rainbow hair any day.

"Rainbow don't. This is my problem, and I have to face them. Apologizing just won't be enough. Rainbow, I appreciate the help you've given me, but this time, you can't do anything. I'm sorry, Dash, so sorr-"

A tear forms in my eye after what I said, then started running away, hearing that the cyan blue girl wants to give in a race, noticing by the splashes on the puddles. I don't know why Rainbow picks to run after me,  probably one of the only good things I do Rainbow can't do. Run. I run three times as fast, and she always wants to top that. I ran, not aware of what was in front of me, the wind getting stronger, pushing against my face as the raindrops explode in my face and my body. I'm shivering, but can still run. I ran to a stop on the street, but decide not to wait, I turn to the side and continue, only to feel an agonizing pain in my head. I start to get dizzy, and my world is getting black. As I fall to the ground, I notice that I hit a street pole, not realizing I had run all the way to the other street. As I fall I see blue cyan hands, and crimson and gold hair.  She followed me. She came through all that trouble, the storm, the heavy rain, I mean she could've catch a cold. All for me. A cold hearted, mean, insensitive jerk like me. Why Sunny, why! After the cruel prank I did, you're still willing to forgive me? Maybe you're so desperate for love that you don't want me to leave? Or do you really love me! Man, what was I even thinking! Having a girl as beautiful, as kind, as shy that she sometimes is,(which in my opinion makes her even cuter than she could already be.) I didn't know what was going to happen next. All I knew a regular 'sorry' won't do. Nope. Something big. But that've be when I wake up, knowing  as my eyes closed as well as noise getting weaker and weaker. And my world got black, very black.


  "Well, Ms. Shimmer we have good news. He's awake, and is now his breathing is back to normal. If anything, click the big red button on the control that says 'nurse'."

"Okay, doctor. Thanks!" Sunset said and rushed to room 13-0 and opened the door. She had a happy feeling they would fix things: he would tell her something romantic like he always did. But something was wrong. Something was very, VERY wrong. He wasn't there! Faint glow of blue magic surrounded the top of the bed, along with a note. Sunset felt tears running through her cheeks as they fell endlessly on the floor. She sped through the hospital, only to be followed by her friends, who did not question her sudden departure. She read the note, and just like that, had an instant reaction. Magic was in this world, and he knew how to use it. Which could only mean he could he use it....Oh no, Mid, I know it was heavy, but, please, we'll fix things, as long as it doesn't happen again! I swear! The medics were confused to all of a sudden see a glimpse of a girl with amber skin, with a light teal blue blouse with a deep black leather jacket, two yellowish-orange stripes ran across the sides of the sleeves of the jacket. Skinny blue jeans and some black boots finished the touch, along with semi curly hair. The medics tried to cool her off, but with no results. They then thought something had happened to the patient with the sore head, and they all rushed to the room 13-0, not fitting all at the same time (There were four medics trying to pass to one door, lol) and after that, jaws open, eyes as wide as plates, and shrieking as one called the security, calling for emergency check that a person was lost and possibly kidnapped. The rest of the gang, running hot at Sunset's trail.

"Sunset, what in tarnation has gotten into that boy's mind? What, yall think he don't like Sunset no more?" Applejack said in a worried tone.

"Oh goodness, that'd be horrible, right Sunset?" Fluttershy recalled, only to see Sunset's face in more fear, and started to run faster.

"Sunset, darling?" asked Rarity.

Sunset wiped a tear forming in her eye, the water burning as she took a finger, running it across her left eye, then continued her search.


  I had teleported mere feet away from Canterlot High's statue. Of course, the statue is no more, since after the Friendship Games incident. Gosh, why'd that even have to happen? Man, I almost lost Sunset to Twilight after that one! Geez, weird. Anyways, the rain was as fierce as it could ever portray; wind had me shivering to death, I absolutely loathed the cold. Something about it and Sunset's crimson-gold hair that had me on point. The sudden thought of her beautiful hair sends a shiver running down my spine, making me feel an unanticipated warmth around me. I loved Sunset, yes, with all of my heart, but I felt like a total buzzard. No, not the bird. The other one. Yep. I mean, doing that mean of a prank to your beloved? Are you insane! Why! I afterwards slowly walked to the portal, and then lurched, rapidly backing away from it. What was I possibly doing! I could never, EVER, leave my Sunny! But even still, staying would mean I'd have to apologize, and I don't want to........I....made....her cry...I did, and that is horrible. Seeing Sunset cry, for me, is well, a mixture of pure sorrow and anger, with mercy and pity in it. I know, their all the same thing, all those describe one thing I feel for Sunset: mercy.

  Not just now, ever since I met her. She wanted something, realized it was wrong, and after her defeat, no one liked her, except for her friends. They all thought she'd be fine. Oh HELL no, she wasn't. She was sad, and I  just felt, pity for her. I knew she had changed, and even if she didn't, well, I'd died then and there, knowing I had the courage to face my love, my fear, taking the advice Luna gave me. But this wasn't a dream. This was real. And I knew it. Sighing, I took I picture of the portal, it's light shimmering in the dark, rainy day. After the  photo was taken, I message Sunset, telling her nothing but the photo. One tap away. I sighed again. Just one tap away. 'You'll tell her  where you are, what you're planning to do, and why you'll do it. One tap away...

  I sent it. The storm raged and water poured, drenching me once again. Good thing my smartphone was waterproof! Then, the same rainbow hair appeared in my sight. She was waving her arms with all of her atletic might, yelling to talk about it. Nope. The last thing I wanted right now was to talk. Then, at that very fateful moment, that I stepped into the portal, REGRETTING it to this day. The look on her face was the last thing I saw. It hurt, hurt so, so bad. It was a look that said, "Please, don't leave me! I love you!"

Yet that was exactly what I did.

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