The Story To Evening (friends OC)

Made by: Dizzy Paws
Edited by: Pooch56

Chapter1: The Start Of Evening

"Pooch! Come down here! Your going to be late!" Monica yells up to Evening. "Hold up mom!" Evening yelled back to Monica. "Where did I put my sunglasses..." Evening ask's himself as he looks though his room as he rushes though his room. "Yes!" Evening says as he pulls his sunglasses out from under his bed. "Pooch! Get your Flank down here and lets go!" Monica yells louder. Evening throws his sunglasses into his back pack and he fly's as fast as he can to the front door.

Evening just getting to the first floor, he stops as hard as he can so he doesn't run into his mother. Just being an inch before he runs into a light blue mare, "Pooch!" Monica yells as he is almost about to run into her, "Lets go before you get late." she adds as they make their way through Cloudsdale to the school. "Okay Pooch, you better not get in trouble when I pick you up." she walks back home. When she get far away Evening say in a mimicking voice, "Don't get in trouble, na a na a na." then he enters the school.

Evening fly's to the class room and makes his way to the chair. The class goes by as he sits listing to the teacher talk. The bell rings for playtime and like everyday, Evening is the first one out of the room and on the playground. He makes his way to the fly track he fly's though everyday trying to get faster and faster. He takes steps to the starting line, clip, clop, clip, clop. His front hooves at the starting line. 'Three... Two... One...' Evening tells himself in his mind as he push his back hooves forward.

Wings flapping, heart beating and the wind flows though the multicolored mane and tail. To Evening, this is the best thing in his life. The adrenalin rush from the feel of the speed he is going passing the cloud pillars that he passes, his coat just gently kissing agents the pillars one by one. Forgetting where the finishing line is, he lands his face in a cloud wall. A loud POOF sound happens when he hits the wall. "Who put that wall there." Evening says as he rubs his head with his hoof. Feeling the adrenalin fade away he gets up, as he search's for somepony that may have put that wall there.

"Hahahaha." a green colt laughs as Evening rubs her head, "Tony! Did you do that!" Evening yelled. Tony walks out from behind a cloud wall laughing, "Ya I put it up just to see if you would really run into it or not." Tony adds as he walks to Evening ,"Your always like you are everyday. Just flying where you want to but to in the moment to look up." Tony adds as he walks past him, "It's so childish." he smiles as walking to his friends. Evening and Tony has had a long rival when they have a big race and tied.

Evening walks to Tony and his friends and tells Tony, "Tony! I dare you to race me right here right now!" Evening said as he looks at him. "Dude he just called you out..." said by the colt next to Tony, "Well, are you a chicken?" said by Evening. Looking back between his friend and Evening ,"Lets do it. Three times around the school and back. Deal Evening?" said by Tony smiling. Evening looks back at Tony and gave him a bad look. "Lets do this." Evening replied.

Evening and Tony stand side by side on the side of the school. They stand at a line where they start and finish. A purple colt stands in front of the two colts. "Ready! Set!" the purple colt looks at Tony and Evening, "GO!" he yells out as he gets out of the way. Evening starts of with a stronger start then Tony, but he keeps just right behind him. Faster and faster they flap their wings, taking a fast sharp turn with each turn on the sides of the school. Tony starts to get side by side with Evening. They make their way to the last lap but all of a sudden, Evening runs into a pink mare.

Tony keeps flying to the finish, but Evening ran into the teacher. "Ouch..." Evening said as he rubs his head with his hoof again. "Pooch!? What are you doing!?" ask by the mare. Evening looks at the mare and thinks fast, "Well... I was racing with Tony and..." Evening gets cut off by the mare, "You don't need to be racing in the first place. I guess your mom and I are going to have another chat." the mare walks back to the class room. Evening fly's to Tony, "Tony!" he yelled, "That race doesn't count!" he added as he stomps to him. "You Just mad that I beat you." Tony said as he looks at his friends.

"I ran into the teacher!" Evening said, "Then you should watch where your going." Tony said to stop Evening, "So I win." he added. Evening gets mad so he fly's off to the other side of the playground. He sits down with his wings folded and looking up with his light gray eyes, he thinks to herself. 'Why am I always the one who gets in trouble... I bet if dad was here everything would be better...' Evening says in her mind, 'Where are you dad... Why are you not back...' he adds as he thinks. "Hey Pooch..." he hears behind him as the voice brakes his though.

Evening looks over his shoulder seeing a light brown filly with white eyes, mane and tail. "Hey Lindsey... What are you doing over here..." he ask as he looks back up into the sky. Lindsey walks over to Evening and sits next to him. "I saw what happen in the race. You would have won if the teacher wasn't there." she says as looking up in the sky with him. "Thinking about your dad again?" she ask as she looks at Evening. He holds back a tear as he waits to reply to Lindsey, "... No..." he said after a few moments.

"You know its okay if you miss your dad... Heck I miss my mom and dad..." Lindsey said to help him out, "I live with my grandparents. They are nice, but it's hard to replace your mother and father." she adds as she looks at him. "Just remember, be lucky that you have what you have..." she stops right when the bell rings, "Well, cya around." she heads back into the school as Evening makes his way back to the class. At the end of the day Evening gather his things when the teacher tells him, "Make sure you stay so we can chat with your mother." Evening just replies with a simple, "Yes M'am.".

Evening heard his mom walk into the room, "Hello." Monica said to the teacher, "What did Pooch do today?" she ask as she looks at the teacher, "Well." said by the teacher, "he ran into me. he claim's that she was racing with Tony, but I didn't see him. I know he is a vary nice kid but hes getting in a lot of trouble." the teacher ends with looking at him, "I'm sorry for what he does. I'll talk with him when we get home." said by Monica. Evening and Monica fly home. When they get home Evening fly's up to his bedroom and closes the door.

Evening sits in his bed looking out to the sky. "Dad... Please come home... I miss you..." he says out loud in a genital voice. He hears his mom walk into the room, "Hey Pooch... You okay..." she ask as she sits next to Evening, "Ya mom... I'm okay..." Evening replies as he looks at her. "I know its hard to live without daddy..." Moncia replies as she shows Evening a picture, "I had to live without a dad to..." she said showing Evening a picture of her and her mother. "It's rough but you can make it though it..." she gets up, gives Evening a kiss on the cheek and start to walk out, "Well i'm going to go to sleep... Night Pooch..." said by Monica, "Good night mommy..." Evening replies.

Evening sits in his bed for about an hour as he decides to go to bed. Slowly he climes under his cloudy covers, watching the moon sit in the sky and dimly shine a light into his room. 'Daddy... I want you be be safe... Please come home soon... I miss you vary much... I'm trying to be the best I can... But I want you to be here to tell me how much better I've gotten...' Evening tells himself in his mind as it slowly drifts off to a dream land. Hopping when he wakes that his dad will be here to wake him up to show that he is okay...