It was a bright and beautiful day as a pink party pony bounced down the streets of Ponyville to get to her first destination. As Pinkie bounced she noticed a lone white puffy cloud drifting on the light breeze, she also noticed a rainbow coloured tail hanging off the edge, Pinkie instantly knew who the tail belonged to and called up to her, "Hey Rainbow Dash!". There was a faint sound coming from Rainbow Dash, It soon was clear that Rainbow Dash was taking one of her regular midday naps. Pinkie thought of this as an opportunity to give Rainbow her invite, so she got a massive microphone out of nowhere and called up to Rainbow once again, "RAINBOW DASH IT'S ME, PINKIE PIE". The noise was enough to wake up everypony from the Crystal Empire to Canterlot, and most obversely Rainbow Dash who was now high into the air.
"Pinkie Pie what they hay was that for, It nearly gave me a heart attack!" Yelled Rainbow Dash who's ear's were still ringing, and was annoyed that she was awoken so abruptly.
"Sorry Dashie I just wanted to give you your invite of course" Giggled Pinkie at her friends obliviousness, or so that was in her mind.
"Yeah because that was so obvious" Rainbow rolled her eyes at her friend, "Anyway what's the invite for?"
"Well silly it's for a party I'm throwing at Sugercube Corner tomorrow night for all our friends, even Spike!" Pinkie clarified, "I was just heading to Twilight's house to give to her and spike their's but since I saw you 'hanging around' I decided I could give it to you here and now.
"Well I guess I can see the logic in that, but another party? you threw one last week I didn't think you would throw one so soon".
Rainbow Dash quickly realised that this was Pinkie Pie she was talking to, the mare who takes 'soon' to literally and throws a party the next day. So she couldn't really argue with 'Pinkie logic' as she put it. She was broken out of her thoughts when she heard Pinkie speak,
"Well I couldn't help wanting to see my friends again and plus I'm actually inviting Spike this time"
"Speaking of which why don't you normally invite Spike?"
Questioned Rainbow after realising that Spike wasn't at any of the party's Pinkie has throw, the exception of the first party Pinkie threw for Twilight on her first day in Ponyville.
"Well Spike is a baby dragon and last time he was in one of my party's he collapsed due to exhaustion, but he's gotten a bit older since then so I decided to let him have another shot".
"Yeah that makes sense, anyway Pinks it's been nice talking and thanks for the invite but I've got to get ready for the storm planned for next week, so see ya later". And with that Rainbow Dash flew to get to the weather station. Pinkie waved bye and continued to bounce done the road.
Pinkie arrived at Twilight's house awhile later and knocked on the door, a couple minuets later the door opened to reveal a small dragon, "Hey Spike is Twilight home?
"Sure come in Pinkie, Twilights just upstairs finishing off an experiment and then she will be right down". As if on cue Twilight walked down the stairs to be greeted by Pinkie Pie.
"Hello Pinkie Pie how can I help you?"
"Oh hey Twilight I just came by to give you and Spike these invitations". Pinkie pulled out two invitations from her mane, Spike's eyes lite up instantly and grabbed them from Pinkie's hoof
"I get to go to another one of your party's? Thank you so much Pinkie" Spike ran up and pulled Pinkie into a bone-crushing hug.
"Your....welcome....Spike, Suffocating.... losing....oxygen....can't........Breath" Pinkie just managed to get out, Spike realised he was suffocating Pinkie and loosened his grip while grinning sheepishly.
"Sorry I was just so excited I was getting to come to one of your party's"
"It's okay Spike, that's how I feel when all my friends arrive at my party's" Pinkie smiled at Spike who returned the smile. There was a cough behind them, they turned to see Twilight standing there waiting patiently.
"Thank you Pinkie for the invitations for your party, I would love to chat some more but me and Spike have some cleaning to do"
"What do you mean the place is spotless" Spike moaned at the thought of having to do more work.
"Well i kinda made a big mess during the experiment and we need to clean it, sorry Spike" Twilight said apologetically for having to make her number one assistant do more work.
"Well I guess i should get out of your mane then, bye Twilight bye Spike" And with that Pinkie left the duo to do their business.
Pinkie walked through the Ponyville market knowing she would most likely find AppleJack here selling apples. As she was looking around for the orange farm-pony she didn't notice the pony right in front of her and collided with them, when Pinkie shook of the dizziness off she looked up to see who she collided with. Turns out that pony was Rarity who was apologising profusely, "I am so sorry Pinkie, darling I wasn't looking where i was going and I didn't see you coming this way and,and,......I do hope you are okay" Rarity said after she realised she was rambling, she gave her hoof out for Pinkie to take, who thankfully took it and pulled herself up off of the floor.
"It's alright Rarity I wasn't looking where I was going either, so it wasn't entirely your fault".
"Well I'm glad your okay darling, who were you looking for?"
"How did you know I was looking for somepony?"
"Well why else would you be in the market looking around"
"I could of been looking for a specific food" Pinkie replied, pointing out a reason for looking around other then to look for somepony.
"Good point, but still who were you looking for, I'm sure I could help"
"I was looking for AppleJack, oh and here Rarity I was coming to see you next anyway" Pinkie pulled out another invite from her mane and handed it over to Rarity who took it thankfully.
" 'You are invited to a Super-ultra-spectacular party being held at Sugarcube Corner tomorrow afternoon around 5pm, all of our closes friends will be their including fun party games, snacks, cider and lots of other stuff I hope you will be their ~Pinkie Pie' " Rarity red aloud, "Well that certainly seems like fun I will make sure to wear my best party attending outfit, just for you Pinkie".
"Thanks Rarity well I have to give AppleJack her invitation, could you point out where her stall is please?"
"sure thing darling she's just over there" Rarity pointed out AppleJack within the crowd.
"Thanks again bye Rarity"
"Bye Pinkie" And with that Pinkie Pie bounced over to AppleJack.
Pinkie arrived to AppleJack's stand and walked over to her, "Hey AppleJack how are you"
"Well howdy Pinkie I'm doing great what 'bout you" AppleJack tipped her hat to Pinkie.
"I'm good, I was just going around giving the girls and Spike invitations to the party tomorrow afternoon, I've just got Fluttershy left after you speaking of which here you are" Pinkie gave AppleJack her invite.
"Thanks a bunch Pinkie, I know ya just arrived but I've got to make my sell today so I'll see ya tomorrow".
"That's fine I need to go to Fluttershy anyway bye"
"Bye"
Pinkie quickly arrived at Fluttershy's Cottage and knocked on the door, awhile later a white rabbit answered the door, "Hey Angle is Fluttershy home?" Pinkie asked the rabbit who's name was rather ironic considering what a devil he was, Angle just stared at Pinkie with the same look he always has on him and hopped away from the door. Fluttershy arrived a few seconds later and smiled warmly at Pinkie.
"Hello Pinkie Pie, it's nice to see you"
"You too Fluttershy, I was just stopping by to give you this" Pinkie pulled out her final invite and gave it to Fluttershy, who took it and red it quietly.
"Thank you Pinkie, umm would you like to come in........um that's if you want to, you don't have to if you don't what to" Fluttershy said getting quieter closer to the end.
"I would love to have tea with you and your animals Fluttershy but I have to get home and setup for tomorrow afternoon"
"But you have a whole day tomorrow to setup, Pinkie" Fluttershy pointed out.
"Yeah but it's better to start sooner than later, so goodbye Fluttershy".
"Bye Pinkie, I'll see you tomorrow" With that all said and done Pinkie bounced off, while Fluttershy went back into her cozy home.
Author's Note
Well that concludes the first chapter of Shed.MOV rewritten (as I call it). I hope you enjoyed it I spent my whole night writing this and I am really tired, but yeah once again I appreciate criticism to help me get better so i'll see you in the next chapter.
Pinkie Pie had just finished getting Sugarcube Corner ready for the party with her friends when there was a knock at the door. Pinkie bounced over and opened the door to revile Rarity, Twilight with Spike, AppleJack, and Rainbow Dash. But what was odd was that Fluttershy was nowhere to be seen, Pinkie decided that she'll question her friends about it, "Hey has anyone seen Fluttershy?" Everyone looked around confused except Rainbow Dash,
"Oh yeah Fluttershy told me that she might be late because of a last minuet patient, but as soon as she was done she would come over" Pinkie took that as a good reason and let it go.
"Okay then well lets not hold up this party any longer and lets party all night long!" Pinkie started the music and went to join Twilight on the dance floor. Rainbow and AppleJack were seeing who could get the most apples in apple-bobbing, AppleJack was ahead by two apples, Rainbow not wanting to lose so easily started nudging AppleJack to drop the apples she had in her mouth,
"Hey RD quit cheating you ain't playing fair!"
"I don't know what your on about AJ I'm play fair your just mad that you keep dropping apples" Rainbow stuck her tongue out at AppleJack, that when AppleJack had enough and tackled Rainbow, the fell into the barrel looked at each other and bursted out laughing.
Over at the punch table Rarity was drinking Pinkies homemade punch. She finished her drink, Pinkie noticed this and rushed over to refill it.
"Thank you darling, this punch is absolutely delightful what do you put in it, I do hope that it doesn't have alligator in it this time".
"Oh not this time Rarity, Gummy is with mrs. Cake helping out on a big order".
"Oh how wonderful darling, Im glad he's being of use.... n-not that he isn't useful to you of course"
"I know right, hey where's Spike I would of thought that he would be here with you?" Pinkie stated looking for the purple drake.
"He's over there under the table eating the gems he brought, I still don't get why dragons eat such beautiful crystals they could be used to make fabulous dresses!" Rarity pointed over to a table to which had a spiky tail hanging out of it.
The party went on on for a few more hours to which Fluttershy still hadn't arrived and Rainbow Dash was getting worried,
"Hey where's Flutters surely it doesn't take that long to tend to an animal?"
"Don't worry Rainbow Im sure she'll come along soon enough" Reassured Twilight, but Rainbow wasn't having any of it.
"Well Im gonna see what's keeping her!"
"Im coming too, I can't let one of my best friends miss out on a party, it goes against everything I stand for!" A very determined Pinkie stated.
"Can I go too Twilight? it's getting stuffy in here and I need some fresh air" begged Spike.
"Okay Spike just return when you get Fluttershy"
"Will do you can count on us!" With that said Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Spike started to walk to Fluttershy's cottage at the edge of the Everfree Forest. They arrive just as the sun started to set which cast a warm glow upon the cottage making it look welcoming, Rainbow Dash went up and knocked on the door, "Hey Flutters you in there? The party's a blast and we don't want you to miss out". There was no sound of hoof steps coming to the door, and even weirder there was no sound of any of the animals that occupy the cottage, "Thats weird I thought she was looking after a patient so she should be home".
"Maybe Flutters had to get some medicine for the critter" Pinkie suggested.
"Hey guys whats that over there" Spike pointed over to a small building, well more of a shed, lay.
"I never noticed that before, Properly belongs to shy and is where she keeps all the animal stuff" Rainbow answered
"Maybe thats where she is, lets go over there and look". So thats what they did they walked over to the wooden shed that no one ever noticed before. When they arrived there was a sign on the door that said 'Please stay out of my shed, thank you'
"What should we do then should we go or.... should we go in?" Spike questioned gulping in the process.
"Well it would be rude to go in without Flutters permission but she might be in there".
"I agree with Pinkie i'll knock on the door if theres no answer then we'll leave okay?" Rainbow got her hoof ready to knock, and looked back at Spike and Pinkie, ready for the answer.
"Okay". They said simultaneously, Rainbow nodded and knocked on the door. They heard the knock echo through the shed, but there was no answer, Rainbow shrugged and turned to leave when they heard the door creak open. There was no one at the door but there was something worse and what they saw mortified them so much that they nearly lost their lunch. In front of them was the remains of a multitude of different animals strung up on the blood soaked walls in different abstracted ways, in the corner was a load of brains above which said 'bunny brain corner', at the far wall was a wooden table which was covered with the hide of a pony who was recognised as Derpy hooves, and there were two windows one at each side wall.
"Derpy!" Spike ran up to the hide of the now dead pony, "What did she do to you!" Spike began to cry over the loss of one of the ponies that he would see around Ponyville, she was such a nice pony as well.
"I can't believe how much of a monster our supposedly sweet friend is" Pinkie sobbed.
"No not our friend, that monster is not our friend!" Yelled Rainbow who was furious as to what her ex friend did. But it was cut short when they heard the hoof steps of the new arrival. They were terrified to look at who arrived, but out of curiosity Rainbow turned around to face the owner of the shed,
"Don't you know how to read, the sign said not to enter my SHED!" Fluttershy was holding up a red chainsaw, which was stained with animal and pony blood. Rainbow snapped out of her frozen state and yelled to Pinkie and Spike,
"Get away from here and get twilight I'll hold this monster off just long enough for you, now HURRY!" when Rainbow finished Pinkie and Spike without second thought burst through the windows closest to them and made a dash for Sugarcube Corner. Rainbow turned around just in time to see Fluttershy running at her with the chainsaw held high ready to strike down, thinking quickly Rainbow dodged the swings that came her way and with Fluttershy unguarded for the moment Rainbow went in with a head but square on Fluttershy's snout, she stumbled back in pain from the hit and held a hoof to her nose, to pull it away to revile blood pouring profusely from the wound.
Spike hopped onto Pinkies back and Pinkie galloped as hard as she could to Sugarcube Corner, nearly tripping twice, her muscles screaming at her to slow down and take a break but she couldn't for she knew if she did then Rainbow Dash would pay dearly for her incompetence to get to Twilight and the others. In the distance they could make out the outline of Sugarcube Corner and as soon as they saw it they were there, Spike hopped off of Pinkie and they both rushed in to be greeted by Twilight's concerned face, "Are you two okay, where's Rainbow Dash and Flu-?" she cut herself off when a frantic Spike started yelling nonsense,
"Dash-Danger-Chainsaw-Fluttershy-Monster!" At this point the others came over to see what the commotion was and shared worried glances with each other,
"Can somepony please tell me what the hay Spike is goin' on about?" AppleJack asked the others who just shrugged, as they didn't know neither.
"What Spike is trying to say is trying to say is that we don't have a lot of time before Fluttershy killed Dashie with a chainsaw!" Pinkie explained frantically to the others who had shocked faces Twilight was the first to speak,
"Then there's no time to lose, Spike hop on!" With that they ran to the shed with Pinkie leading the way. when they arrived they hard the battle that was raging on inside. The sound of a chainsaw being revved was enough for Twilight to burst down the door in time to see the chainsaw come down onto Rainbow Dash's skull, it was half ay down her body when Twilight sent an immobilising spell toward Fluttershy, which sent her hurtling towards the back wall and away from Rainbow Dash, Twilight and AppleJack went over to Fluttershy to keep her down while Pinkie, Rarity, and Spike went over to Rainbow's limp body,
"Dashie! No, not Dashie, Why!" Pinkie started to wail while holding Rainbow Dash.
"Rainbow Dash, saved us and we couldn't even help her what kind of friends our we!" Rarity held Spike to comfort the little drake.
"There, there Spike she... she knew you tried your hardest to help her"
"AppleJack hold down Fluttershy I'll contact the Princess, she'll pay dearly for what she did to Rainbow Dash!"
"You got it Twi" Twilight sent a message to Princess Celestia stating what she saw and what she was told by Pinkie and Spike, as soon as it was sent the Princess arrived as soon as she could, and took Fluttershy away to be put in a mental hospital under constant surveillance, the others well they were getting preparations ready for Dashes funeral which would be a very sad day.
Author's Note
Well they didn't exactly live happily ever after considering one of them is now dead but thats the end of this tail of sadistic ponies and death. I hope you enjoyed this bumpy tale, Im thinking of making a sequel so keep an eye out for that and I'll see you in the future
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