Special Promises (An OC Book)

by Gold121221

BlazeFire (BronyBlazeFire's OC)

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3rd Person P.O.V.

She sighed as the chime struck 1 AM and hung up her cap. BlazeFire started to walk out of the building from her job and flew off to her home, a midnight black house above the Everfree Forest. While flying, she pondered over her past jobs. There was the baker, where she had presumed that her black and white flame cutie mark was for the fire that bakes the bread. But she had managed to burn every loaf. She then had turned to being a bouncer, which had payed well. Her bulky frame was perfect for keeping out the people that kept sneaking in. She then wondered why she gave up that job as a night guard. Probably because the job felt much more comfortable.

Her wings fluttered in the wind, making a whooshing sound which her ears, enhanced with the bat pony heritage picked up. But then again, her wings were like bats too. BlazeFire landed in front of her home and entered.

"Hello..." A soft whisper spoke in her home, causing her to scratch the floor with her griffin claws.

"Oh. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to frighten you. I just crashed into your home... And wanted to explore."

Blazefire rolled her eyes and grumbled. "And that gives you permission to walk into my house?" The peach colored pony blushed and poked her head out of the shadow to see the blue and green Griffin-Bat hybrid. Her eyes widened and rolled to the back of her head. Blazefire shook her head, lifted the yellow pony which she recognized as Fluttershy, and flew towards Twilight's castle. The bright and shiny crystal castle was hard to miss.

Knocking on the door, she laid Fluttershy on her back and waited. The well known purple alicorn answered the door, only looking surprised for a millisecond. Then she say Fluttershy on the griffin's back and stepped back, her horn aglow, ready for a fight.

BlazeFire only rolled her eyes again. "I've come to return Fluttershy, who decided to walk into my house to explore. Then she saw me and fainted." The purple pony relaxed and levitated the pegasus off the griffin's back and nodded her head in thanks. The door closed and BlazeFire flew off again.

Yawning, she went into her home and fell asleep on her fluffy cloud bed, at 2:49 AM.

She opened her eyes to look at the clock, which read 9 AM. Then she took in her surroundings. A rainbow maned pegasus and Fluttershy were staring at her, making BlazeFire hop up from the bed and extend her bat wings. Rainbow Dash only looked shocked while Fluttershy looked with interest.

"Nice crib, ya got here, bud!" Rainbow Dash spoke in a raspy voice. Blaze already knew about the pegasus's ego, and getting a compliment from her? Pretty hard. Blaze nodded her head in thanks then went onto the obvious question.

"WHY DO YOU KEEP COMING TO MY HOUSE UNINVITED?!" Rainbow looked shocked and spoke with a 'duh' tone.

"Cause we're the Mane Six?" Blaze faceclawed, but stayed silent.

"Um... I asked Rainbow to come with me to see the Griffon-bat hybrid. I'm sorry for coming into your home uninvited." Blaze snarled a bit, upset. It made Fluttershy shake and hide behind Dash, who glared at the griffin.

"So what. I'm a display now? I'm just trying to get a good rest-" And Dash cut her off.

"A good rest at 9 AM? It's basically the afternoon." Glaring at the pegasus, she continued.

"A good rest because my job is a night guard and I got back at 2 AM." The rainbow pegasus remained silent after that. Then Fluttershy pulled out some apples from her bag.

"Are you hungry? You can have some..." Blaze rolled her eyes but took an apple anyway and ate it. It tasted of freshness and was very sweet and juicy. Blaze nodded her thanks and showed them to the door.

After a bit of morning prep, she flew out to the town and bought a lock and keys, making sure she also bought a new bag, as the old one had broken. Blaze walked into the house again to be greeted with streamers and a giant poster that said, "WELCOME TO PONYVILLE!"

"ARGH! WILL YOU STOP COMING INTO MY HOUSE?!"


Author's Note

That was fun to write at 10 PM... I'm serious. It's much more entertaining then watching a dog trying to enter a room with a cat in it. Well, BronyBlazeFire, here's your story. Please tell me how you like it, and PM me if you want me to include or remove something~

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