Special Promises (An OC Book)
Abyssal Shield (Shadow Hero's OC)
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3rd Person P.O.V.
~A while ago...~
A female unicorn was fighting off the changelings from some innocent Canterlot couple as they cowered in fear, but was soon overpowered. She was put into slime and thrown to the side. Her head knocked against the building, but she couldn't just let the citizens down because of a headache! She took off the magical bangle from her hoof and transformed it into her sword, shocking the Changeling and getting the 3 second chance to kill it.
~Two Years After~
He couldn't do anything. Chocolate rain was constantly drenching him as he floated around the castle, unable to do anything but hope that Discord would be stopped. Then suddenly, he dried off and he fell from the top of the throne room to the ground. He opened his wings and flapped, making the room smell of death. He thought of how lucky he was to escape England and get to this magical land, where he wouldn't be pulling carriages.
The Grand Galloping Gala
They both were intrigued in their platter when they crashed into each other, ruining their formal outfits. They looked at each other and felt the spark of love. They began to chat about their guard life until a pink pony started singing about random stuff. They laughed and walked out to the gardens where they found a crazed yellow pegasus yelling about animals loving her. They shook their heads and started walking around the castle.
1 year later
She was crying as she stared at the ring he had presented to her at their favorite garden. They had been watching Celestia around the garden when he had pulled out the gemstone. Celestia turned around to see what had her favorite guard crying, and gasped when she saw the threstral holding the ring out for her. She smiled.
30 years later
He sighed. Another day of just... wandering. Then he smelled it. Death was coming upon someone. He rushed to the scent where he found a cowering changeling filly about to be killed by a guard. He looked around and saw the dead bodies of what looked to be the filly's kin. His heart softened and he charged forward to meet the guard at sword point.
The guard was astonished to see a unicorn attack him with a sword. What shocked him was the cutie mark the stallion had, a shield with a sword. He shook off his shock and continued to fight until he realized he had already been knocked down and held by sword point by the neck. He gulped and readied himself for death.
The grey stallion however got off him and demanded the guard's armour. Too shocked to fight back, the guard took off his armour and left.
"Why... why would you help me?" The little changeling filly spoke, shy. The stallion's eyes softened and kneeled, where he was at eye level with the changeling.
"Because no one deserves to be killed, unless with good reason." The changeling looked at him with the bright green orbs and hugged him.
"Can I come with you, mister? I want to be just like you!" The pony, though wanting to allow the child, shook his head and looked away, not wanting to see the filly's disappointment.
"Don't call me 'mister'. My name is Abyssal Shield. My travels are too dangerous for a filly." And with that, he dropped some bits by the filly's side and walked off to what he believed was the nearest village.
Two days had passed since he met the filly and ate anything. He had given the filly the last of his bits and was still walking on the road, chewing some grass. Then he saw something else, that wasn't a village. It was a town, with a giant castle. A giant... Crystal castle. Abyss wondered if there was even some merchandise at the local store. He hoped the town would pay well for armour.
"HI! WELCOME TO PONYVILLE! ARE YOU HERE FOREVER?!" A pink pony hopped out of a barrel and started singing. What she sang... He had no idea.Just... keep walking. He thought to himself. The pink pony didn't bother him afterwards, the only times he saw her was when she was hiding, trying to spot out his secrets.
"Hello. I'm Abyssal Shield. I'm here to buy and sell." The store pony, Amethyst nodded.
"What do you have to offer?" He held up the armour, making her widen her eyes. She nodded and walked to the back. Two seconds later, 6 colorful ponies, including the pink one had burst into the shop, 'surrounding' him. He rolled his eyes.
"What did I do now? This is the 4th Princess that has confronted me!" They looked shocked at his tone but still stood strong, as the alicorn walked up.
"You have been spotted with guard armour that looks beat up. You are covered in mud and sweating, with a sword next to you. What do you expect, a welcome party?" Abyss only rolled his eyes and sighed.
"I was attacking the guard because he was slaughtering changelings." The rainbow pony gasped in shock.
"And did you? Changelings are EVIL!" He grumbled, and the girls heard snippets of 'arrogant' and 'evil pricks'. He took a breath and spoke.
"Because those changelings were fillies. I dislike changelings, but they are children and they don't deserve to be killed like that. There was only one child left, all the others were lying on the side, some decapitated and some with their chests ripped open. Those were only. Foals." He continued to raise his voice. "FOALS! THEY WERE CHILDREN THAT WERE MURDERED IN COLD BLOOD! THE PARENTS WERE LYING ON THE SIDE OF THE HOME, DEAD! THEY WERE DEAD, DEFENDING THEIR CHILDREN!" At this moment, the girls were shocked at how passionate at his loyalty for the defeated enemies.
He panted, drained of air after the rant. Sighing, he shook his head and left. The 6 ponies were awestruck. Ever since they allowed OC's to enter Equestria, they had been astonished by how they acted. They acted more violent, and were not as forgiving to others.
What really shocked Twilight was the grey stallion's blood line when she scanned him. It composed of unicorns, and a pegasus that had to do with death. Off to the library... And with that, she walked to her home, intent of finding the other bloodline's source.
What she found was what shocked her most, it was a... threstral...? Apparently it came from a place called... England. She didn't know anything besides the fact that only people who had seen death could see the winged beasts. That was probably why everyone except the new foals could see him.
She sighed. Abyssal Shield was an odd pony. But then again, most of the OCs were. She grinned. The OC ponies were incredible.
She didn't regret making that promise one bit.
Author's Note
Another one done! Woohoo! This is for you, Shadow Hero!
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