Chapters Transformation II (First Draft)
When I was engulfed in that light, I felt a hand touching me and I thought it was my friends. Then I was about five to six feet above the ground and landed on my back on the ground. I lost my breath and coughed out some gunk from my mouth. That tasted nasty, ash mixed with water equals sickness.
I collected myself and I scanned my body. I was fine, no broken bones or scrapes. The crystal was right next to me, and it was lifeless it was not glowing. I looked around my area. There was a marked area with a circle, now covered in vines and grass, but the circle was visible.
I asked myself, “Where am I?”
I focused and glanced around my surroundings… ‘A jungle? Forest? Woods? Where the hell am I?’ I thought.
I still had my pack and I grabbed my flashlight. It was almost pitch black and I shouted to find my friends.
“Hatchi?! Gaitou?! Naki?! Are you here?” I shouted.
I heard a rustle of leaves to the left and I stared at it. I heard a groan and in the bush was Hatchi.
“Thank god. Hatchi!” I walked to him and continued, “What happen to you and our friends?” I asked.
He coughed, “The ash cloud was getting rid of our air and when I heard you splash into the lake; I shouted to Gaitou and Naki, but they did not hear me. I think some of the ash is in my fucking lungs.”
He continued to cough and then we heard another rustle and it was Naki. She was covered in ash and was crying.
“Naki what is wrong?” I asked.
“Gaitou is dead…” she said.
“How is he dead?!” I shouted. I could not believe this…
Naki explained, “When the ash cloud came down, he ran, but feel into a lava pocket and exploded in the lava!”
She was trying to wipe away the tears, but they kept on streaming down her tears. I had to be strong, Hatchi was coughing out more and more ash out of his lungs. Naki was now coughing up ash like goop.
“You guys stay here and I will gather fire wood. We are in a totally different environment, and I do not think we are in Japan anymore.” I said.
They agreed and they sat next to the circle. Which made me very curious about it. ‘Maybe it is a camp spot and that is for camp fires? Yeah that maybe it.’ I thought.
I collected basic firewood and put it on the circle. I grabbed my fire starter and had another source light. I looked at Hatchi, he needed medical attention and maybe Naki. I was fine, I was not coughing because I did not breathed in any ash.
Then Naki spoke, “I do not recognize these trees, they are not from any forests I know.”
Naki used to be going on different trips to many jungles in the amazon, and many others I cannot think to the top of my head. You can say that she is a Amazonian women, because she can be one with the forest when she wanted to.
“I cannot get satellite connection on my tablet and I do not have any chargers. I can only theorize several things where we are. One we when to the past, two the future with no humans and three, which is unlikely, in another world.” Hatchi ended.
“Alright, if Naki could not recognize any of the trees here in this forest and you cannot get any form of internet, then yes we could be on another world.” I said.
“That is just a bunch of bullshit, Zoey. There is no fucking way we are in another world.” Naki said.
“Well how else can you explain this Naki? There is no ash, there is fresh air, there are different constellations in space and you of all people do not think you saw these trees in any forest, woods, or jungle areas? That is fucking suspicious!” Hatchi shouted.
He that was coughing more and more. I got out some medicine for the throat so he can clear out some of the ash he was getting out. I gave him it and he flicked a piece into his mouth.
I grabbed the huge thermal blanket and laid there in-between them. I was still wet, and cold, but not alone. Naki and Hatchi hugged me so I can get warm it was great. Friends supporting me even with our parents and one friend that was gone.
We slept for a while, Hatchi and Naki were coughing in their sleeps and I was awakened. I looked at the stars and there was not a single star I recognized. ‘Maybe… Nah! It’s probably my imagination.’ I thought.
Next morning, the fire was out and I was now dried out from my shirt and shorts, but my underwear was a different story. I had to go to the bathroom really bad, and I sneaked out of the covers and let them cuddle in their sleep. ‘They are so cute together.’ I thought.
I did not want to lose my way to the bathroom that we have never established. I went through some trees and saw a fresh water lake. ‘I can take a spit bath to at least refresh myself.’ I thought.
I looked around for anybody and stripped out of my clothing. My breasts were erect from the cold, and my vagina was cold, but I had to dry my underwear to be comfortable. I got my shirt and wrapped around my vagina, just if Hatchi wakes up and wants water.
I was proud of my body; the last I measured my body was bust: 41, waist: 35 and hips: 42. I stared at my reflection and my breasts were at least grope-able. I know I should not be talking about how my breasts can be groped, but I never had the experience. The sad thing was I never had masturbated in my life, and yes I do get horny once in a while, but I let them pass.
Anyway, I set my underwear on a rock against the sun and washed myself. Armpits, vagina area, butt, and hair. Since this was fresh water, I cannot risk getting a disease. After about a hour or so; my underwear finished drying and I started to get dressed.
Then I heard a rustle and it was Naki, “Can I have a turn taking a spit bath? Hatchi is sleeping like a rock, but I decided to give him a kiss.”
“That is very cute of you, Naki.” I said, Strapping my bra on and then slipping my underwear in place.
“Mm... You looking more and more sexy and those breasts of yours are bigger than mine.” Naki said.
“Really you want to talk about this now? What if Hatchi hears this?” I asked.
“I do not really mind if he will be walking in on me like in the Anime’s he watches. Though you might mind if you were caught in your underwear.” Naki said.
“Ugh! I do not believe you. You do not have any shame!” I said.
Naki giggled and then we were laughing. We were trying to get happy in this situation. I was done dressing and walked towards the supposed campsite we were in.
“How was the morning bath?” Hatchi asked.
“It was fine, cold, but fine overall.” I said.
“We better hike out of these woods and try to find some civilization. Once Naki gets done at least.” Hatchi said.
“All done!” Naki shouted and walked into the campsite dressed, but she only had her shirt covering her breasts.
“N-Naki?! What are you doing?” Hatchi shouted.
“Aww… C’mon you do not want to feel these? Or would you rather grope Zoey’s?” She asked
“YOU ARE STILL ON ABOUT THAT?!” I shouted.
She laughed and showed that she was wearing one of those bras without a strap and looked like a bikini. She put her shirt back on and I could not help it, but laugh because Hatchi’s face was priceless. A bright red face for a nerd is very funny.
“You girls are very mean to me you know that?!” Hatchi shouted.
Anyway we packed up what we could and head out were the sun was rising and that was our north for now. The forest was not as thick as we thought, it was like all bush was spread out so people could walk through them. Then we ran into a dirt path leading to a town that was in the distance.
“Well that was not so far.” Hatchi said.
“Yeah it was like we never heard the town being busy. It might be a small town if we did not hear anybody, plus it was the middle of the night.” Naki said.
“Hey I see a sign, it says…. ‘Ponyville’ Really? That is the name of the town? Strange, it’s like I can sense the presentence of a Brony.” I said.
“Ah come on Zoey, if we run into Bronies, I will convert to a Brony right? Wrong. It is not a disease Zoey. It was just change.” Naki said.
I ignored her comment and we continued to walk toward the town.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 3: Pony's... Pony's Everywhere
Chapter 3: Pony's... Pony's Everywhere
Like fucking magic, I was horrified by the sight of different colored ponies around the area. I looked to my friend Naki who had her jaw dropped in amazement. We were not sure what to make of it. Were we in heaven or hell?
“Guys we are in Equestria.” Hatchi said.
“What do you mean Equestria?” I said.
“I mean we are in the world of my little pony.” Hatchi said clearly.
My little pony? Equestria? My stomach felt sick. I went down to my knees and kept on saying “this is not real.”
I looked at Hatchi and he was gone, “Where did he go?”
Naki pointed to the direction he was. I looked towards the town and Hatchi was fucking skipping in town and what was surprising that the ponies cheered when he entered the town… What?
“I think we should follow despite what you are feeling.” Naki said.
She picked me up and I uttered, “Traitor…”
“Huh? What was that?” Naki said smashing her foot on mine, and I shouted.
Then ponies looked in our direction and shouted in glee. I heard them talking in our language which made me lose my color of my face.
Naki decided to speak, “We need medical attention, we have been through an ash cloud, and do you have a doctor?”
“I am a nurse and I can treat them!” shouted a pony with a red cross on the hat.
She walked up to us and escorted us to the hospital. She introduced herself, “My name is Nurse Redheart, and I will be taking care of you.”
“Were you the nurse who took care of Mr. and Ms. Cakes' baby and kept Pinkie Pie out?” Hatchi asked.
She was shocked, “Why yes, no one else knows that other than another human I know.”
I got up in relief, “There is another Human in this place?”
She giggled, “No not in this town, in Canterlot up on that mountain. Now since you are another human, I will have to inform him about your arrival.”
She got us three beds and there were more nurses that came into the room. They were unicorns…. What?! I looked at Hatchi and he was happy as a fucking child. Naki was somewhat the same way and I was feeling uncomfortable.
“We are just going to do an analysis of your anatomy so we can see what is wrong. These unicorns will use their magic to do so.” Redheart said.
“You do not have the technology to use or even a x-ray?" I asked.
They looked at one another strangely, but shrugged it off. Their horns glowed and we were up in the air floating surrounded by different color auras. ‘Get me down, get me down; get me down!’ I screamed in my head.
This was not natural at all. Talking ponies, magic, next thing I would think that there will be a flying Pegasus… Right? Well I was right, a pony with Rainbow hair just came in without even knocking.
“Alright how are the new humans doing?” she asked.
“Rainbow Dash! We are trying to get them analyzing to see what is wrong with them.” Redheart said.
“Ah how are you doing with your races Rainbow Dash?” Hatchi asked.
“How do you- Ah never mind I had the same experience with Trey.” She said.
“Who is Trey?” Naki asked.
“He is the human who showed up in Equestria out of nowhere. Oh my gosh! I need to go to the race! Thanks for reminding me… What is your name?” she asked
“My name is Hatchi or Chi for short. That is Naki and that is Zoey.” Hatchi said.
“Alright Chi catch you later!” Rainbow said sprinting out.
Then the nurses dropped us to our beds and it felt nice being able to feel the bed after all this time. I was trying to get use to this, and I looked at Hatchi he was staring at me.
“Don’t worry we will be fine, just relax.” Hatchi said.
“Nurse Redheart...” said the one nurse.
“Yes? What is the problem.” She asked.
“All of them have the ash in their lungs, we need to extract it out.” The nurse said.
“I have the perfect solution.” She lifted he bag with her mouth and mixed some herbs. The herbs mixed into a purple like substance then to a blue color. Then she puts the substance in three little vials.
“This should eliminate the ash in their lungs and any gunk in there as well.” She said handing it to the nurses.
“Open wide!” the nurse said to me, and I was compliant, but I had no idea what to expect.
“GAH! It tastes horrible!” I said.
Then my I got on my side and my chest felt hot. I threw up about a half of a bucket of ash like goop and other mucus. The others weren't so lucky they kept on throwing up more and more ash goop that was three buckets full. That was each so seven buckets altogether.
I breathed in and it was like my lungs were like new ones and I can smell all sorts of smells. I think that they got rid of the bad substances in my lungs. It sure did work.
But it begs me the question, “Where did you learn that from?”
Hatchi and Redheart answered, “By Zecora silly.”
They look at one another and laughed.
“Alright it looks like you are fine and are ready to see Trey.” Redheart said.
“What is he like?” Naki asked.
“I cannot tell you the details because it would ruin the surprise. He told me that he had been informed by Princess Luna that there were other humans here in Equestria. So they informed us to no tell what he looks like.” Redheart explained.
“That is fast that you got word really fast.” Hatchi said.
“Well that is because Trey has helped improving the steam technology in Equestria. You can get on a train and you can get to Canterlot in about 15 hours. Before you had to get up in the morning and it would take you at least more than half of your day on the train. It is a really amazing feat." Redheart continued.
Naki finally spoke, “That is amazing, he must be a fantastic inventor to do that.”
“Yeah it sounds to be too good to be true.” I said.
“How do you know he lives in Canterlot?” Hatchi asked.
“Everypony knows where he lives. No more questions it is time to get you out of here to Canterlot immediately.” Redheart said.
Naki, and I got up, but Hatchi was disappointed. We got him up and he groaned in sadness. We were wondering what was wrong with him.
“Already? But I want to see Twilight and the others.” Hatchi said.
‘Really you want to meet ponies instead of another human being?’ I thought. Well that is being a Brony for you, but I can understand about it. I looked at Naki and she was smiling. ‘You really like him do not you? Good luck Naki.’ I thought.
“Don’t you worry Twilight and the others will be waiting at the train station.” Redheart explained.
Next thing we knew we were walking in good health towards the train station. While being cheered for from other ponies in the town and I was looking across the sky and there was a castle on the side of the cliff. Pegasus were flying passed and I wondered. What will this Trey be like?
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 4: New Innovation
The night before…..
Living in Equestria for three years really does not get old. Meaning I am still having fun and enjoying myself with my beloved wife Luna. What really got me excited was about a year ago when I died I transformed into an Alicorn. It took me about three months to be able to walk on all fours. To learn how to fly was like a human who grew wings the first time and that took me about a year. Thanks to my teacher Luna who was able to teach me all the basics on how to walk and fly.
Speaking of Luna she had been assisting me to find a new innovation for the steam engines. Before the train were slow so we did some fixing and improving around with the old engine. Now after that was done, the big time difference is an amazing feat. What the old steam engine did before, was that when you wanted to go to Canterlot to Ponyville it would take about 20 hours. So the new engine took 15 hours to get to destinations.
Now was the issue with the railing, which got me thinking about what kind of metal we have in Equestria. I asked Luna when we were at our room, but was interrupted by our fillies and colt.
“Dad when can I get to go to Ponyville?” asked Noah.
“When your dad gets done sweetie, he is working really hard to improve the system.” Luna said.
“How come Noah gets to go? It is not fair!” shouted Grace.
“What she said!” shouted Lily.
That is right I have children and they have been the greatest thing I have ever had. Luna and I have been married for about two years and our relationship is solid. The first thing when we got married which was strange was to check my sperm if it was horse or pony sperm. When it was confirmed I made love with Luna for the first time. You might say I lost my virginity to my lover I loved in a kids show, but I digress.
“Listen Noah, Lily, Grace, when I find a new metal for the railing I will take you to Ponyville to see Twilight and the others.” I said.
They loved to see the main six because they want to find their cutie mark. I would ask them to join the CMC, but I have to make the transportation system so my children have more freedom and Luna agrees with me.
“Why can’t you have the metal bend when the train is making a turn?” Noah asked.
“Noah, you cannot have metal bend to the turn-” Luna was interrupted by me.
“I GOT IT!” I shouted.
This made my family have a jump scare, I went through my papers and found that there is indeed a metal that bends to the touch, but it is fragile. I needed to do some tests on this metal to make it stronger so we can make the engine more efficient.
“Noah you are a genius. I think we can go to Ponyville tomorrow, I promise.” I said.
“Hey how come Noah’s the genus and not us?” Grace said pouting.
Noah stick out his tongue and Luna spoke to him, “Noah, don’t make face to your sister and that goes with you Grace.”
They sighed and Lily spoke, “So… Could we got to with you to Ponyville?”
I sighed, “You know this Lily; I can only take one of you to Ponyville until I get this metal to the rails. Then once we get this going, you kids can go to Ponyville whenever you like.”
All three of them said, “OK.”
“Daddy needs to talk to mommy so you kids have fun with your Aunt Celestia.” Luna said.
“YAY!” they shouted running towards Celestia’s room.
“I know you are going to regret that.” I said.
“So what it gives me time to talk to you.” She said.
“What do you mean?” I asked.
“You know when you first came into this world?”
“Yeah.”
Luna explained, “When you first came to this world you had a strange aura and I sensed it. Now I sense about three more auras. Meaning that humans might have just got to this world.”
I smiled, “That’s amazing! We need to inform Ponyville so if they wonder into the city, the ponies will not cause panic.”
“I have already did that. I sent a message to Twilight and the others. They will inform everypony about their arrival.” She said.
I leaned in towards Luna and kissed her, “I love when you plan ahead.”
She kissed back, “I learned from the best out of you.”
“Ew! Mom and dad are kissing again!” Grace shouted.
Luna and I laughed and Grace sprinted to her siblings. I grabbed the paper and told her I need to go to the black smith and ask about this metal. Then she got worried.
“What’s wrong?” I asked.
“It’s just that I don’t trust that black smith. The last time she tried to make that gauntlet it made Yert.” She said.
“Have a little faith Luna, I’m just going to research this metal and see if this can be used if mixed with any other materials.” I said.
I kissed her cheek and walked towards the basement of the palace. This was where all the equipment was being made for the guards. About ten years ago the blacksmith made the rail system for better transportation and when I came along they were just happy to think about faster transportation.
I entered a hot room where all the metal was being smelted into beautiful ingots for currency. The ingots get smashed into bits and then the rest of the materials get reused. Inside was a pony with brown fur with black hair and her cutie mark was an anvil. Her name is Petra.
“What would you like to ask me Trey; I am kind of busy at the moment.” She said.
She was a tomboy and the hint came from her attitude and perseverance to get her job done. She have been working ever since her grandfather died and passed on the family business to her.
“Ahem, I would like your opinion about this metal. Will it be feasible to use for the new railway such as the curves?” I asked.
“Oh I don’t mean to be rude, but you are married.” She said smiling.
“You know I don’t like you doing that. Can the metal be mixed with any metal to become stronger and to bend whenever the TRAIN can turns on the curve?” I said.
She always do this to me whenever I ask her a question she always tried to sexualize it. It is starting to annoy the hell out of me. Now I kind of understand what Luna was saying about her. I levitated the piece of paper to her and she scanned it through.
She sighed, “Yes it can be mixed with other metals, and yes it will work on the rail, but ONLY the curves! Reason why I say that is because when we tested on straight rails, it failed to hold up. We tried curves and they worked well.”
“Alright what did you mix it with?” I asked.
She continued, “We mixed it with only iron.”
“How about Titanium?” I asked.
“Never tired it. Want me to do a sample for you train set?” she asked.
What she means by train set it is a small version of the rail way and it has its own gravity. The items weigh the same thing as the full sized version, just shrunken into sized. We tested the new engine on that and now we might have a new metal.
“Yeah that will be fine.” I said.
“I’ll get you a sample tonight Trey.” She said.
“Thank you Petra, I have to get to Luna now.” I said turning around.
Then I got a smack on my ass, “OUCH!”
I rubbed my butt with my hoof and I glared at Petra. She was smiling and was licking her hammer. ‘God does that remind me that I’m glad does not exist.’ I thought. I was glad because she acts like a certain person with a wrecking ball. (Miley Cyrus)
“What’s wrong? Want more punishment?” she asked.
I sprinted out of the room and I heard laughing from her room. Walked up the stairs and ran into Luna.
“Uff!” I grunted.
“Well it seems that she was trying her thing again?” she asked.
“Yeah, though she is making the metal I want to sample for the train set.” I said.
She sighed, “You know you have to talk to your new human friends about how you are now an Alicorn.”
“I know just send a message to them that I am still human and I will surprise them.” I said smiling.
“You know as well as I do, I have already did this so we cannot cause them any panic.” Luna said.
“Mom,” It was Lily, “Noah is messing with the train set again.”
“Oh dear Celestia!” I shouted running to the model room.
“Noah do not touch my train set!” I yelled as I entered the room.
Noah fell down and hit his head on the floor. Then he stood up and froze in place and I saw tears streaming out of his eyes.
I sighed, “I’m sorry I yelled at you, but this train set is not for colts,” I looked at the corner and it was Grace hiding in the curtain, I continued, “Or fillies because this is a high Alicorn spell that basically makes everything shrink into a small object, but it still weighs the same thing. Do you understand?”
Noah wiped away his tears and calmed down a little, “I understand.” He said covering his sadness.
“Now did your sister make you do this? Tell the truth. If you tell the truth you will only have five minutes at the corner and not ten.” I said.
Noah sighed and gave in, “Yes, Grace ask me to hover over the train set, but I said no. Then she offered me to leave me alone for a week.”
“Thank you Noah; could you make your way to the corner?” I asked.
He was compliant and gave me a hug. Then walked to the corner. I discipline my children so they have a better life when they grow up.
I called Grace, “Grace you can get out of the curtain.”
Grace hung her head down in defeat and walked towards me and sat down.
“Now I only have two questions: one, why did you enter this room without my permission? Two, why did you try to frame your own brother?” I asked.
She was looking at other places in the room instead of me.
“Look at me when I am talking to you Grace.” I said with a tone.
She gave in, “It is because Noah was going to Ponyville without us and I… I got jealous. So I got the spare key from Petra and I brought Noah with me. Then I wanted him to get in trouble so maybe I or Lily can go with you instead.”
I sighed, “I am disappointed Grace, you broke the rule I have established to this room, framed your brother and got a key from Petra which I told you to watch out for her. Your punishment will be the corner with your brother for fifteen minutes.”
“But dad!” she shouted.
“No buts, you are the oldest out of your siblings. You have to show an example to your siblings.” I said.
She sighed and walked to the corner where Noah was at. I walked to the train set and everything was normal, ‘Good.’ I thought.
“Everything it in order and I’ll get that piece after I scold Petra for what she did.” I said aloud.
I locked the room and enchanted a spell so my kids will not enter this room ever again.
Later that night Grace and Noah learned their lessons and went to bed after dinner. I told them because of their actions there will be no pony going to Ponyville. They were at first sad, but I said we will have visitors coming to cheer them up. Then all three of them got excited. The quickly got their baths done, brushed their teeth and went to bed to think what the visitors will be like.
I got back inside Luna’s room to get ready for another great sleep. The kids slept in my room while I slept in Luna’s room.
“Luna could we look for a house to live in? It is not that I hate Canterlot, it is just that I need my kids to have their own rooms soon.” I said.
“I have thought about that too, but where will we get the money?” she said getting in the covers of her bed.
“Once the test run rail with the new metal shows results and we can go into a real life test run, then the money will be pouring in. Just you wait.” I said getting into the covers with Luna.
Luna nodded and gave me a kiss and we made out for a while. Then she got her hoof and touched my erect penis.
She was jacking me off while we made out and I did the same with her pussy. It was swollen and was wet.
“I see you are horny again, Princes Luna.” I said.
“I see you have not changed as well Trey.” She said.
We masturbated one another until we had an orgasm. She tried to yell out in pleasure, but was muffled by my mouth French kissing her. I got up through the covers and was over her beautiful body. She was signaling me to do her and spread her pussy apart. Before I accepted I cast a sound cancelling on the walls and locked the door with the same spell. Then I rammed into her pussy and she shouted out in pure pleasure.
“OH BUCK!” she shouted.
I did not move just leaned in and gave her a peck on the cheek and whispered in her ear, “Let me do all the moving today Luna.”
She quivered, she loved how I talked in that tone and just nodded. I kissed her cheek and nibbled on her ear. She moaned, she was sensitive on her ears. I moved slowly back and forth.
“Oh, I love you Trey.” Luna said moaning through her mouth.
“I love you too, Luna.” I whispered in her ear.
We were having slow sex and then I decided to turn it up a notch.
“Let’s try this!” I shouted.
I teleported a dildo for ponies and inserted it into her ass. She shouted as she came while I did this. I started to move faster through her tighten pussy and I used my magic to move the dildo back and forth fast.
“Uh! Tre- Muffin!” she was shouting out gibberish.
I had fucked her silly and I did it harder and accelerated the magic on the dildo. Her face was getting more and more silly. It was more expressionless and was breathing heavily.
Then her pussy was tighten again, she was about to cum again. I was on my climax too. I turned it up again to my full strength and my muscles were in pain and my magic was at my limit, but got it to the highest speed which made Luna stick out her tongue. She was enjoying this and she screamed to the top of her lungs as huge gushes of cum were spewing out of her pussy. I came inside of Luna and shout “I love you Luna!”
I collapsed on top of her and gave me a deep throat French kiss and I kissed back. We broke out of our lips to breathe in fresh air and saliva streamed out of our mouths.
“That was the best sex that we have ever had.” I said.
“You were amazing, honey.” She said.
I wrapped her with my wings, then she hugged me with her hooves and we fell asleep in each other’s arms for the rest of the night.
Transformation II (First Draft)
What will happen if I just try to stay here? I do not want to go back to my world, but I just do not want to be here. I am in a sticky situation where I want to stay with my friends, but my mind is slowly going away. God please help me!
The train station was like a regular train station, but the difference is ponies. Fucking ponies. I got nothing against animals, but I just hate this show! Wait a show? Maybe I will tell them the sad truth about them being an actual show. That will be my plan.
I smirked while we were waiting for our escorts, “So who is Twilight and the others Hatchi?”
He smiled, “Twilight Sparkle is a princess of friendship, so she spreads the magic of friendship across the land. The others are Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Spike.”
“It seems you know this a lot for being a Brony.” Naki said giving Hatchi a hug.
“Yeah you sure know a lot.” I said sarcastically.
I looked to my left and there was nothing but pink and I screamed. Then the pink one screamed as well.
“Hi! My name is Pinkie Pie! Do you like cake? I love cake! How about you get a smile on that face? I am sorry I scared you, but I was more scared that you if it you happy! What is your name?” said Pinkie Pie.
I was backing away and bumped into Hatchi, “Um...”
“Sorry she is not use to this. My name is Hatchi or Chi for short, and her name is Zoey and her name is Naki.” Hatchi said pointing at us while say our names.
“I suppose you know who we are then?” said a voice.
I looked to my left and there was a purple unicorn with wings and she was almost my height (5’6”is my height and she is about 4-5’1”). There was an orange pony with a cowboy hat (or cowgirl hat I do not care.), a white unicorn with a dazzling white dress complimenting it with a light grey hat, and there was a yellow Pegasus holding a white bunny who did not look happy.
“I suppose you are Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy and Rarity?” I asked.
Hatchi got his arm around me, “You see? You are learning.”
I forced a smile because I did not give a shit about what or who they are. I just remember their names because I saw all the fucking posters in Japan repeating all the names of the main six. They got to my head and I knew their names that was all. I have no idea what the story was nor did I care.
“I see you are just like Trey. Having knowledge about us and telling us what our pasts were in a TV show, I guess.” Twilight said.
‘FUCK!’ I shouted in my head. Trey told them that they are in a show! Fuck me! There goes my plan. Back to the drawing board.
“Darling,” Rarity said pointing at Hatchi’s device, “What is that contraption. When Trey brought his techy things, he showed us what each thing did.”
“It is called a I-Pad. It is a touch screen device and you can do whatever you want on this device. Trey showed you the devices what are they exactly?” Hatchi asked.
“I am curious too.” Naki said.
Applejack spoke, “Trey showed us a camera which took pictures, but was small than what we currently have. A laptop which held all sorts of fan made videos that were a fan of us. A I-phone which calls people, but useless in this world. A 2ds? Yeah that was it, it played games. Then he showed us a solar charger which charged all the devices.”
“Ah… So he brought his electronics with him… Great.” I said laying back on the bench.
“I need to charge my I-pad and the solar charger is all I need to charge this guy.” Hatchi said waving his I-pad in the air.
I notice Naki went towards Fluttershy and was talking to her, which I could not make what they were saying. Then I heard the train coming in from the distance, but the train looked like it was from our world.
“What was wrong with the other stream engine?” asked Hatchi.
Naki came towards him, “Do you not listen to Nurse Redheart? She told us that Trey replaced the steam engine to get to places faster.”
“Oh…” he said.
“Let’s get going…” I said.
“I agree with Zoey, let’s make haste.” Said Rarity.
Twilight showed the ticket master our tickets which were purchased before hand and now we were in the biggest room I have ever seen. Because most rooms were small in my world, but this was huge like in the hunger games book.
There was sweets, food and drinks on the table. I dashed towards the food and grabbed a plate. I filled my plate until it was dripping its sugary goodness on the ground. Hatchi and Naki had the same idea and filled their plates.
We ate like animals, no pun intended. The food was delicious and the drinks were exploding with flavor. I looked at the ponies they were shocked about how hungry we were.
I cleared my throat, “Sorry for my manners, but our world was dying and we barely had any food to eat. We were practically starving.”
Naki and Hatchi nodded in agreement which calmed the ponies down.
“I understand that your world was dying, but I heard from Trey said that your world should of recovered after more than three years.” Twilight said.
I almost choked on my food, “*cough* what? Three years?”
“Yes when Trey got teleported here, he said a tsunami was about to get him, but then got here.” Rarity said.
"Did he said what day?” Hatchi asked.
“Um… He said, August 3rd 2014.” Applejack said.
We stopped eating our food and just stared at them. They were confused and looked at each other.
“What’s wrong?” Twilight asked.
I spoke, “We got teleported on August 6th 2014.”
The ponies gasped at this discovery and I looked at Hatchi and Naki. They were surprised as well, but we had to finish our dinner/everything that we missed. They were asking questions about us, and we answered them to the best of our knowledge and I noticed Hatchi was getting embarrassed about something and Naki was the same.
Applejack noticed something was wrong, “What’s wrong Chi and Naki?”
Hatchi spoke, “Do you have a toilet or bathroom?”
“Hatchi there is no way that ponies would have a bathroom!” I said to him.
“But I got to go!” said Naki
“There is a bathroom facility at the next cart and yes Trey made that for all pones. He said it looked like from your world.” Twilight said.
Hatchi and Naki sprinted out of their seats to the next cart and Twilight said, “Your other right!”
They were spotted going to the right direction this time and they got out of the door leaving me with these pastel ponies. ‘Great’ I thought.
Twilight grabbed a chair with her magic and sat next to me, “I suppose you do not like it here?”
I almost spat out my drink when I heard this, “No, I would not say that.”
She gave me a look that said, ‘Really? You are going to do that act?”
I gave in and frowned, “You are good pastel pony, but I believe that this is all a dream and I shall wake up soon enough.”
Twilight said, “Look if you have a grudge against us then tell me and the others. No one should be keeping secrets from friends.”
I snorted, “They know that I do not like Bronies or the show my little pony. I just want to get out of here.”
Applejack sighed, “Trey thought about the same thing, but there is no magic out there that could get him back.”
I hung my head down and realized the crystal I had in my pack. I looked around for it and grabbed it out of the pack.
“Why that is the most beautiful crystal I have ever seen! Where did you get it?” Rarity asked.
“I grabbed this crystal underwater while it was still glowing and then poof, here we are in this hell hole.” I said.
“Darling, you should give it time to get use to Equestria and looking at this crystal you are holding stores magic. Here, I shall show you an example.” Rarity said with her horn glowing and touching the crystal with it.
The crystal started to glow, and it was beating like a heart. It felt life was in this crystal, I was feeling that I was calling me. I put it down to let Twilight look at it, and I got up and headed to the bathroom cart.
The next thing I heard was moaning inside the bathroom stall. I got closer and the sign said ‘Unisex.’ ‘Huh. So male and female ponies get along in the bathroom, it definitely wrong for our world.’ I thought.
The moaning was getting louder and it was more like pleasure than depositing your load of dung. I got inside and I saw Hatchi naked with Naki having sex near the bathroom stalls. Oh my god! They were finally doing it in this fucking world? Hatchi whispered, “Naki… I am about to…”
Naki shouted and moaned, “Fill my pussy up with your semen!”
Hatchi shouted as he had an orgasm, but he would not stop thrusting into Naki. I was holding my pussy, it was getting damp. I had to get out of the room, but I could not stop looking. I got my hand and bit it. The pain got me moving out of the cart and back into the other cart I was in.
“What’s wrong sugar cube?” Applejack asked.
“I think that it was great that the bathrooms were made by Trey, and I was relieved by that.” I said.
“Where is Chi and Naki?” Twilight asked.
“They are just talking about their pasts and do not want to be interrupted.” I said.
Transformation II (First Draft)
(Early (about 5-6 am) morning where the group is still in the Everfree forest for the first morning. [The morning where Zoey and the others are still in the Everfree Forest])
I awaken to Luna sleeping next to me, letting out a small cute snore which never bothered me. I got out of my covers and tucked in Luna so she can stay warm. I grab my utility belt and strap it on my waist. I get to the door, but it was locked by my spell. I disabled the spell so I can get through.
Then Luna shouted and mumbled, “Trey! Harder… I love you.”
I smiled, ‘She was having a pleasant dream.’ I thought.
I closed the door behind me and headed to the bathing area. Took off my utility belt and put it on the shelf. Grabbed the given out towel and went inside the misty bathroom. I went to the bathing area to take bath.
“Ouch!” I shouted in pain.
I heard a giggle, it was Petra again…
“So how is Sir Trey?” she asked.
“Before I scold you for what you did; is the sample complete?” I asked.
Petra puffed her cheeks and pouted, “You are always working, having fun with your wife and children, but will not have any fun with little young me.”
I sighed, “I am not always working. I have days off you know this. Anyway do you have it ready or not?”
Petra sighed, “Yes Sir Trey, I have the metal ready. It is in my forge room.”
“Good now there is one more thing I need to ask.” I said.
“What’s up, honey?” she asked.
“First off, will you stop, that act you are doing? Second, why did you give my oldest the spare key to the model room?” I asked.
She got up to me, and she was really close to my ear. ‘For dear Celestia! Please do not let Luna misunderstand!’ I shouted in my head.
She whispered, “First off there is no act Trey. I want you inside me; I am so horny for your cock. Second, I gave her the key because she asked for it.”
I stepped back from her so we were about five feet apart, I calmed myself from her sexual desires and took a deep breath.
“Alright, I do not care if Grace or any of my children ask for things that are not related to keys. Also I do not love you in that way I am sorry.” I said walking out levitating my utility belt.
Then something caught my attention, “You know Polygamy is legal and practiced in Equestria?”
“What’s Polygamy?” I asked.
She giggled, “It’s where the male can have up to three wife’s to keep the herd going strong.”
While she was saying this she was rubbing her pussy, I was going crazy. I took a deep breath and left the changing room while Petra was moaning.
‘Please lower your voice the children are in the room next door.’ I thought.
I then walked to the room where my children were and I casted a muffling spell so that they will not hear her moaning. I went downstairs to get the sample and grabbed it and sprinted towards my train set room. I heard Petra was moaning my name in the distance, I just kept on working. I felt trapped, but I had to tell Luna about it after she wakes up.
I used the same sound canceling spell so I would not hear her at all. I looked at the metal that was mixed with the titanium. It looked like a gold ingot, but it was a light brown. I levitated it to the air and bent it. It felt like butter when I bent it, but it did not break.
I used a spell to transform this piece into small curve tracks and replaced it with the old curve tracks. Then I tested the train for the first set of tests.
Fourteen hours later…
“Finally!” I shouted.
The train was starting to show results after 200 crashes, because I was not placing the tracks in the right places. Now it is time to time test it. I put levitated the new stream engine (it was a new test steam engine that was smaller version that I made) and it got started in Canterlot. Then after five minutes it got to Ponyville.
“Five hours?” I asked myself.
“Trey are you in there? You have been working all day and it is almost time for the guests to arrive.” Luna said.
I opened the doors to let in Luna in so we can talk.
“You do not usually let me in your office. What is the occasion?” she asked.
I closed the door behind me and locked the door, “Luna I need to talk to you about what happen this morning and what I just made today with the new metal.”
She nodded and sat next to me when I showed her the train set, “This new metal is bendable and cannot break under intense weight. With the same and different weather conditions, the train that we currently have can get there in eight hours. Now with the new stream engine, it can get there within five hours.”
“Does that mean that our children can get to Ponyville and have the freedom they deserved?” she asked.
I nodded, “Yes, but before we celebrate. I need to address the issue at hand.”
There was a knock on the door it was a royal guard, I dispelled the sound canceling spell to hear what he has to say, “Sir Trey the guests have arrived at the Canterlot Station and are heading towards the Canterlot Palace.”
“Thank you, I shall get ready, when they arrive lead them to the Royal Room with the glass plains.” I said.
“As you wish Sir Trey.” He said trotting away.
“Ahem,” Luna said looking at me, “You wanted to address something to me?”
I casted the spell once again and started to talk, “Petra told me something that I was curious about.”
Luna looked at me unimpressed, but waved her hoof that said, ‘Go on.’
“She told me that Polygamy is legal in Equestria and all males are allowed to have up to three wives… Is that true?” I asked.
Without an answer she just kissed me and I kiss back, but let go.
“I need to know the truth.” I said.
Luna sighed, “Yes all it is true and I have to be the one to approve for you to have another wife. Did you have this kind of problem when you were at your world?”
“No, it was abolished where I lived. It was only practiced in other countries.” I said.
“If you feel comfortable having another wife… Then I cannot stop you. You earned my love and you returned it.” She said.
“It sounds like you are leaving me and I do not feel comfortable about this… I just need some time.” I said and I decided not to tell that Petra masturbated to me in the bathroom.
“It is your decision if you want this or not, but I do not care who you choose because I will still love you.” She said.
I blushed and leaned in for a kiss and she allowed it. We made out for a while and she tried to move her hoof towards my shaft, but I blocked it.
“That can wait until we take care of our guests.” I said.
“Aw… You are not any fun.” She teased.
I kissed her again and we headed out of the room. I closed the door again and casted the lock spell again. ‘I wonder how our guests will be.’ I thought.
Luna got dressed in her royal dress and I got dressed with a suit and tie. We wanted to look well for our guests. We walked out of the room and I see that Luna dress our children in fancy outfits.
“Dad, why do we have to wear our fancy outfits for the guest?” Grace asked.
“It is kind of itchy.” Lily said.
“I kind of feel older with this tux.” Noah said.
“Kids I want you to wait until I say ‘Come in’, so we can surprise them even more.” I said to them.
“Alright” they said.
“Ready?” Luna asked.
“More than ready.” I said opening the door.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Hiking with Zoey, Hatchi and Naki was amazing. Why was it amazing? All four of us were able to survive the ash cloud that killed everybody in our town. Then the earthquake happened and I fell into a pit where lava was, but I did not die. Let me repeat that… I Gaitou have not died.
There was not even any lava at the pit, it was an illusion. I still hit the ground which was lava rocks on the impact. I just laid there and I called out to my friends when the ash cloud was passing through the entrance of the pit. I felt my head was bleeding; I felt it with my hand that was all scraped up. These lava rocks are really sharp.
The ash cloud was still going through, I did not hear any of my friends… ‘They are dead. They have become statues.’ I thought.
I made my hand into a fist; this cannot be happening! My friends turned into dust?! I am here all alone, no support, nothing. I looked around trying to see how big this pit was and it was bigger in the inside than the small entrance.
Then I saw something glowing. It was crystal, but something was off about it. It was all dark and it was pulsing with it. I reached for it and the crystal itself jumped into my hand. That fucking scared the living shit out of me. As I calmed down, I was consumed by darkness.
I soon saw light, but it was grey and my surroundings were different. I realized that I am five feet in the air and shouted. I landed on some tall grass, but it did not help me in my fall. My back got the impact and I was rolling down a hill. I could not stop myself, then hill was long and my memories were pouring out.
These memories are when my friends and I were rolling down a hill for fun, but I snapped back to reality and the rolling stopped. How you may ask? My stomach hit a pair of barefoot legs.
“UGH!” I shouted in pain.
Then the crystal was rolling down the hill behind me and hit my head knocking me out. Before I blacked out I recognized the structures in the distance. I was in New York and I glanced at the person. He had ginger dark hair, but his face was unrecognizable.
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I awoke in a comfy bed and I glanced around to see where I was. I was in a room and beside me was the same man who I ran into. He was wearing a cloak around himself. He revealed his face and it was human. I was worried if he was a mutant… ‘Got to get off the comics’ I thought. He was barefoot, is wearing pants and a shirt. At least I did not ran into a nude insane person.
“Who are you?” I asked.
“That question has been going through my head for a long time now.” He said.
“What do you mean?”
“I do not know who I am.”
“Do you have amnesia?”
He nodded, “Yes for some time now, but your crystal you have sparked my memories a bit.”
I looked to my side, and the crystal was still glowing, “You mean this?”
“Yes, all I got was my name which is quite strange.” He said.
“Well let’s introduce ourselves. My name is Gaitou. I am from Japan.”
“That is strange that you are from another country coming out of nowhere… Anyway, my name is… Yert.”
‘Well that is a strange name.’ I thought.
“Did the crystal help you get here?” Yert asked.
I picked up the crystal, “Yeah I was fortunate to survive the onslaught of the ash clouds.”
Yert held out his hand, “May I see the crystal? It can probably get my memories back.”
I looked at the crystal then at him… He does not look like the person you would trust and that is saying a lot. Meaning I love all sorts of people before the disaster, but I am a changed person.
“Why should I give it to you? So you can restore your memories? That is a bunch of bull.” I said.
Yert sighed, “I guess, I will show you.”
He got up from his seat a grabbed something from a dusty table. I got to a sitting position and I stared at the crystal… It is telling me I need to give it to its rightful owner? What lord of the rings bullshit is this? I put down the crystal on the bed and Yert came back with his piece.
“I was looking all around for that piece of that crystal for a reason. This I am holding is the last piece of the puzzle. Do not tell me it is bullshit. You experienced it teleporting you to another country.” He said.
‘He does have a point.’ I thought. I picked up the crystal again and handed to Yert.
“Sorry about what I said.” I said.
“No problem.” He said grabbing the crystal.
He got the piece of the crystal and combined it with the other one. There was a light and the two crystals melded together. Yert was staring at the crystal and then the room started to shake. Is this an earthquake? I got up, but Yert was now floating in the air. I grabbed his cloak, then we were surrounded by light.
There I was floating five feet in the air again and I landed on my butt.
“Ouch! I am sick of this teleportation!” I shouted.
I looked to my right and Yert was unconscious. I picked him up and looked at me surroundings. I was now in a forest and the floor showed a circle… Camp fire spot maybe? I digress and carried Yert to a dirt path. There was a town in the distance, but Yert grunted when he awoke.
“What’s wrong Yert?” I asked.
I laid him down next to a tree and he stood up without any pain. I looked at his appearance, it was changing. His legs, arms, face were being consumed by darkness. Then his eyes turned white.
Then Yert opened his eyes and smiled, “I remember everything...”
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 10: An Explanation
Chapter 10: An Explanation
In the world of my little pony… I really do hate this world, but at the same time I do not hate it that much. Reason for that is because I do not want to go back to Japan in that state of decay. I felt I wanted to stay, but it just felt wrong. Trey marrying a pony… A fucking pony! Did he have a choice when he was human? What will become of me?
My answers would come to me soon because I was on a bed hearing people talking about stuff. I could wake up and move to hear this, but I am just too lazy. So I kept my eyes closed and did not move and breathed normally.
“Alright, let me tell you what happened to me when I came to Equestria.” Trey said.
“I really want to know what happened to get you into this predicament. You marrying Princess Luna is a really hard factor for me to process.” Hatchi said.
“What are you envious Hatchi?” Naki said.
“No I am just worried about how he can make children when he is an Alicorn.” Hatchi wondered.
“I’ll get to that, but first I got to tell you what happened. The day that Krakatoa erupted a tsunami was headed my way. It was about 20 feet high and was engulfed in seawater. Then a circle surrounded me and poof! I was in Equestria. I was sad that my family passed, but I had to live on without them. I realized I was the first human in Equestria and did not want to cause any panic to the other ponies. So what I did is that I snuck into Canterlot royal palace. I made it to the room you were in and I met my first encounter with the Princesses. I met Celestia, Luna, Discord, the main six and so many others that got my life to brighten up. Then Chrysalis decided to make her combat.” Trey stopped to take a breather.
“You alright?” Naki said.
“Honey you do not have to tell them everything.” Luna said.
“No Luna, they deserved an explanation.” Trey said.
I did not know that he had a family that passed on the day of the disaster. Also how he was so considerate to other ponies not to cause panic. He is certainly smart.
Trey cleared his throat, “Ahem. I decided to stop Chrysalis with my powers. These powers will be coming to you as well because they are automatic. When a human enters Equestria he or she absorbs magic, which is bad. the is what I could gather when I first came to Equestria.”
“What are they?” Hatchi asked.
“They are similar to season four Tirek we absorb any kind of magic to our own being and grow in strength and you grow taller and bigger.” Trey explained.
“Oh, is that bad?” Naki asked.
“Yes it is, but do not worry about it. I shall get you customized Gauntlets to conceal your absorption powers. Ahem. Anyway, I stopped Chrysalis by absorbing her dark magic. I had the two gauntlets, one that was adjustable to any size I would got to. The other one was to get destroyed when I absorbed her magic. I grew ten time bigger and I grabbed Chrysalis and made her into filly sized. The adjustable Gauntlet got me to my normal size. We locked up Chrysalis in Twilight's castle dungeon. Then it happened.” Trey paused.
“What happened?” Hatchi said.
I could hear Trey breathing heavily. Was this too emotional for him? Or was it even something bigger.
Trey calmed himself, “The gauntlet that absorbed the dark magic was infecting me and I was going to die, when Twilight and the other princesses extracted the gauntlet and the dark magic away from me. Then the dark magic took a piece of my memory that when I was a child. An evil villain named Yert.”
“Yert? Like Trey spelled backwards?” Naki said.
Trey continued, “Exactly. He absorbed all innocent Griffins and ponies I did not knew, but he stopped when he was trying to absorb anypony I knew. He devastated the Griffin Kingdom and I had to stop him. So Luna trained me in three days to become the best I can to defeat him. While I was Training, he gathered more villains. He created the Smooze, but called it Gak. Created Grogar, almost reviving Sombra, released Chrysalis, and got negative versions of the main six. I was able to defeat him for a price. I used a spell to teleport him to earth, stripped his magic and no memory. At the same time Grogar stabbed me four times, through the chest and stomach. I said good bye to Luna and told her I loved her. Then everything went white then black and then to white again. I was in this room and I saw Laruen Faust as her official OC. She saw what I did and transformed me into an Alicorn as I wished. After that I married Luna and we have been together for two years and growing strong. We now have three children that brighten up our lives."
“That was beautiful.” Naki said.
“I never knew you sacrificed yourself for Equestria and you did! I am grateful for what you did. But what about Celestia and Discord?” Hatchi said.
Trey continued, "Celestia is resting, she is pregnant with Discords child and Discord is rising and setting the sun everyday. So Celestia's child will be coming this month. It is what the nurses told me and Luna."
I opened my eyes and I felt different; was is because I was able to see how Trey felt. No I can see in a better light, but I was still pissed about something that he did not mention
I sat up, “You still committed Beastality and I think that is disgusting.”
Trey sighed, “I see you finally was able to talk, I sensed you were awake, but I decided to not to speak about that until you were up. Yes I committed Beastality, but as an Alicorn. I had memories when I was a human, I learned how to walk on all fours, became part of their culture and in return I improved their rail way system.”
I crossed my arms in disapproval, “I still thinks it is disgusting. Was Luna alright with this?”
“Actually Zoey, I was the one who was attracted to him when he was a human, but we did not have intercourse of course. Once he became an Alicorn, we did… Just as Trey said.” Luna said blushing.
“Why do you hate this place so much Zoey?!” Naki shouted.
“Is it because you hate Bronies and Ponies?” Hatchi asked.
I could not hide anything from my friends… Was I going to tell them the truth? Am I going to tell? My mouth was about to tell them when Trey collapsed.
“AH!” He shouted in pain.
“Trey! What is- AH?!” Luna shouted in pain of her head.
“What is wrong now?” I asked.
“Memories are coming back…” Trey paused and got up, “Yert… Has returned…”
Transformation II (First Draft)
“Trey…” Luna said wondering what I was going to do.
I had no idea what I was going to do, last time I was dead versing Yert and I have to think about my children, my wife, and my new human friends. Could I protect them all? I looked at my cutie mark and I nodded; of course I can do it again! I just need to know how he was able to get back to Equestria.
“Luna is going to analyze you guys to see what kind of powers you would have when you train with her.” I said.
“What do you mean train?” Zoey said crossing her arms.
“Yeah, how are we be going to train exactly?” Hatchi said.
Naki crossed her arms, “You cannot expect us to train for nothing, what will we get in return?”
I smirked, “If you are willing to train with Luna, follow me.”
Zoey was curious and the others including Luna followed me to the Canterlot basement. ‘First we need to stop by Petra’s blacksmith area for their gauntlets.’ I thought.
We made it to Petra’s door and I knocked on it. The door glowed and it opened. I decided to let Luna walk in and she shouted.
“Oh for Celestia’s sake! Get your head straight!” Luna shouted
“Ah!” Petra yelped.
I am so glad that I did not go in first otherwise Luna would have misunderstood the situation. I let the others in when Luna said it’s decent. I went in last to introduce Petra to the others.
“Ahem, Petra this is Zoey, Hatchi and Naki. They need adjustable gauntlets so they can control their soon to be powers.” I said.
“Hm…” Petra said looking at Hatchi and Naki then continued, “Not to be rude but I can sense that Naki and Hatchi had some intercourse.”
I face hoofed, “Why would you mention that?”
Hatchi and Naki were blushing and Luna giggled a bit.
Petra continued, “Aw. It’s nothing to be ashamed of it is natural… Anyway I will get the cast that I used for Trey and he will enchant it.”
Petra got the fire going and was getting the proper metal to cast the gauntlet. We waited outside for about ten minutes and she was finally done. The gauntlets were all gold and shiny and they were admiring it.
“Well what are you waiting for? They are finished and you Trey do you Alicorn mombo jumbo!” Petra shouted.
I sighed and levitated the gauntlets breaking their gaze of amazement's. Then I casted a spell of adjustment, and another spell that would prevent any breaking or shattering of the gauntlet.
“Finished.” I said.
I levitated the gauntlets towards them, and they slid them on and it adjusted to their size.
“That is amazing, Trey.” Hatchi said.
“Cool.” Naki said hugging Hatchi’s arm.
“Meh.” Zoey grunted under her breath.
“Alright for the main event. Follow me once more.” I said bowing to Petra for her service.
Then we were at a room that was several floors down and inside was the same orb that Luna and I trained in.
“What is this?” Hatchi asked.
“This is an orb that has a huge time difference. Three days are about a year in a half long, this should get you trained soon.” I said.
“Wait I am supposed to be in here for a year which is three days here? That is insane.” Naki said.
“I do not want to go.” Zoey turned around and sat on the ground.
I looked around and Luna finally followed in and I wondered if she got Petra to talk. Maybe she sorted this whole Polygamy issue and maybe Petra can think twice to mess with me.
Luna and I looked at each other and I stepped back. Then Luna teleported herself, Zoey, Hatchi and Naki into the orb.
“I will miss you Luna… Train your pupils well. I got to talk to my kids.” I said aloud.
“Mm…. I feel so horny right now… Fuck me Trey…” Petra said startling me.
“Petra… You know I have to get an approval with my wife.” I said.
Then she levitated a piece of paper into my face, I grabbed it with my hoof and started to read it. This is the official Polygamy signing paper and there was a statement:
I Luna do solemnly swear to have my husband Trey to expand the pack by having intercourse with Petra.
Then there was a signature of her name and I sighed, “This is her signature, but why did she agree with this?”
She threw another piece of paper in my face and it was Luna’s magic writing. It said:
Trey,
You have been royal to me for some time and I will be going to train your human friends to become as strong as you. So I have decided for you to have the Polygamy with Petra, but there is one condition. DO NOT I REPEAT, DO NOT GET PETRA PREGNANT! IF YOU DO IT BANISHMENT TO THE MOON TO YOU!
I gulped when I read the caps, because I knew her shouting which got me shivers. I levitated the note, the Polygamy paper and teleported it to the Modeling room on the desk (Yes I can do that I am an Alicorn).
I looked at my cock and it was twitching and I casted a spell which prevents me to pre-cum and ejaculate when I am inside Petra’s pussy. She touched my chin and led me to her room. There was a bed that was a huge bed and a medium size cabinet and make up area.
I stopped and thought, ‘What am I doing? Yert is on the loose and Luna is training Zoey and the others, there is no way she would approve this.'
I ran out of the room and Petra shouted, “What about the Polygamy agreement?!”
‘I do not know if she really approved it or not, but I had to wait until she comes back.’ I thought.
I stopped to Celestia’s room where she was taking care of Grace, Noah and Lily. I walked inside and she looked at me.
“Why look who is here children, it is your father.” She said.
“Dad!” They shouted and ran to me.
I gave them hugs and levitated them and the shouted with glee. They loved floating in the air. I walked to Celestia.
“I suppose you heard the news?” I asked.
She nodded, “You do not have to say anything. Just go. If anything happens I call Discord and he will get us to safety.”
“Thank you.” I said lowering down the kids.
“What is wrong dad?” Lily asked.
“Why did you stop?” Grace said.
“Ha! I will just fly around.” Noah said.
“Hold it Noah.” I said and he got to his hooves and I continued, “Kids, Luna is in the orb training with Zoey, Hatchi and Naki. I have to go on a business trip to Ponyville and no you are not to come this is one of those meetings where it is strict.”
“Alright.” They said in disappointment.
“Do not worry I will bring Twilight and her friends over, when I come back!” I said.
They shouted, “YAY!”
“I am going to show Twilight my collection of shell!” Grace said.
“I am going to show Fluttershy my stuff toy collection!” Lily whispered and shouted.
“I will show Rainbow Dash my new moves I developed.”
“Most of all we are going to have a great time with them!” The shouted together.
I looked at Celestia and she said, “Where do they get their energy?”
“I guess I was a hyper kid when I was in my world. I need to go now. I will see you soon!” I said.
“Bye Dad!” They shouted and Celestia waved goodbye and I closed the door.
I then sprinted towards Luna’s room and there was Petra laying on her bed masturbating. I looked away and opened the balcony doors. I spread my wings out and jumped into the air and was flying towards Ponyville.
“Trey! You bastard! Fuck ME!!!!” I heard Petra shouting.
‘Jesus.’ I thought.
I shook my head and said, “I’m coming for you Yert. I am going to finish you.”
Transformation II (First Draft)
After everybody left the blacksmith room, Petra pulled me to the side so we could talk. It was not a chit chat talk it was a serious talk. Petra leaned on her anvil and was checking me out. It was not uncomfortable.
The she spoke, “PFFT!”
“What is wrong?” I asked.
“How can Trey love such a mare that can raise and sets the moon?” She asked.
I got irritated, “Petra just get to the point.”
She sighed and grabbed a piece of paper, “Take a look at this, and I will explain more.”
I levitated the paper so I can read it, “It is a blank Polygamy statement.”
“Precisely, I believe you know what I want?” she said putting her plot against the wall and was rubbing against it.
“You want to expand the herd with Trey? Is it just because you just want sex?” I asked.
“Oh, I want more than just sex. I want his babies, I have been horny ever since he transformed into an Alicorn. He has been attracting a lot of mares including myself.” She said.
“Trey would never cheat on me! Not unless he gets the approval!” I shouted.
“Whoa! Whoa! I never said he cheated on you, I just want your fuc- Ahem I just want your approval so we can expand the herd. If you approve; I can do so many things to him that he will never forget… SWEET CELESTIA!!! I NEED TO BE FUCKED RIGHT IN THE PUSSY!!!”
I was not shocked about how Petra was being. It is true that when she makes her decision about a stallion, she will stop at nothing to get what she wants. She has been horny for some time and I needed to relieve her.
I sighed, ‘I know I am going to regret this.’ I thought.
“I will sign this polygamy contract, but only one condition.” I said.
Petra was still continuously rubbing against the wall with her plot, “What *moans* is that?”
“You do not I repeat do not get pregnant by Trey, because he has to take care of our children.” I stated.
She stopped rubbing and walked towards me, “So do we have a deal?”
I looked over her shoulder and the wall she was on was completely wet with her juices. ‘She is really in heat and has been holding it in… It was just like when I was first in heat for the first time.’ I thought.
“We have a deal, but I still do not like it.” I said.
“I believe you have to go soon, just sign the paper and a side note so he can believe me.” She said.
I looked at the paper and Petra gave me the quill and ink. I sighed and signed the paper and then wrote a note.
“I will be going now.” I said.
“Thank you very much Princess Luna.” Petra said bowing down.
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When I teleported Zoey, Hatchi and Naki into the orb they were amazed how big it was and Zoey was still sitting down pouting about being here.
Hatchi and I were talking and Naki decided to talk to Zoey, but she got up and headed to the cabin.
“It seems she is trying to negate us from existence.” I said.
“Did you have the same problem with Trey?” Hatchi asked.
“Well no, but maybe once twice because he had been working on the train engine and railing system. So he makes it up by taking me out to dinner.” I said.
Naki was walking back, “I just cannot get her to talk.”
Hatchi is scratching his head, “I just do not know how to get through to her.”
“Maybe I will give it a shot, I will give you the first step of how to get your premature powers out of your bodies.” I said.
“How do we start?” Hatchi asked.
I nodded, “I trained with Trey, and it was hard to get his powers out, but now I know how to train humans. You have to get your hands to your chest and concentrate. It will take several days to get some reply of what your power is holding. You can sit and meditate while concentrating for what you have.”
“What will you be doing?” Naki asked.
“Like I said, I am going to cheer up Zoey.” I said.
“Good luck.” Hatchi said sitting on the hill doing as I instructed.
Then Naki followed and I walked to the cabin. When I got to the door, I cast a noise canceling spell so Naki and Hatchi cannot hear our conversation. I got inside and closed the door and ducted to dodge a glass plate.
It shattered and Zoey was shouting in anger, “GOD FUCKING DAMN IT!”
“Zoey you need to calm down!” I shouted.
“NO! I WILL NEVER TALK TO YOU OR ANY OF YOUR FUCKING PONY FRIENDS!” she shouted.
She was now tearing up, I guess she was going to fess up sooner or later.
“Is it because you hate this world? Or you hate ponies in general?” I asked.
“What does it matter to you? You do not know my life! What I have been though!” she shouted.
She was calming down, I am trying to be comforting for her. She is slowly starting to confess. I needed to be careful about what I say.
“It ‘was’ your life, but it has been destroyed. This is telling me that you have not let your past go.” I said.
She looked at me and grabbed another plate, “I have already let go of my past. I do not have anything to share!”
She threw her plate and I used my magic to levitate it in the air, “Your face is telling me otherwise.”
I walked up to her, and she got down to her knees, “It’s not fair…”
“Life is not fair when you bottle up your emotions.” I said.
She hugged me and released her emotions. She was crying on my shoulder and I hugged in return.
After about an hour she calmed down and decided to tell me why she was being this way.
“It happened when I was in high school. I went to a convention, but there was a section about my little pony and I decided to check it out and the people who were there were guys. I thought it would be full of girls, but I got trapped in that section, because they were talking about season two on the panel. I tried to get out, but was dragged like a rag doll. Then I blacked out, I hit my head on the floor making me not remembering anything, but hate towards Bronies.” She said.
“Who got your to the hospital or nurses office?” I asked.
“I was with my friends, but I could not remember who got me to the nurses bed.” She said.
“It might be a long shot, but I believe it was Trey who saved you… A fellow Brony.” I said.
“That is not funny. Trey is an American. He was at America when my little pony got popular at America.” She said.
“My beloved Trey told me a story, when he went to Japan for a convention. He went by himself and got there and back safely. When he was at the panel, he saw a girl with brown hair trying to get out of the panel, but no one would let her out. When he stood up she was on the floor knocked out cold. He took her to the first aid area and put her on a bed. He told the nurse not to tell her about him, but tell her that her friends got her here.” I stated.
Zoey covered her mouth to cover her emotions, “I-I had brown hair at the convention, then I dyed it black after the convention incident. I do not know what to say.”
“Maybe you should apologize to your friends and tell them what happened.” I said.
She wiped her tears away and nodded, “Alright I will do that.”
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 13: What Happened?
“Ah, so you remember everything?” I asked.
Yert and I were at the edge of the forest and it was night time. The moon was full and Yert turned black all a sudden. It was really strange and I had to point it out.
“Why are you surrounded by black stuff? Why are your eyes white? Are you the villain?” I asked.
“You really do catch on, Gaitou. Thanks to you I can defeat my foe Trey.” He said.
“Trey? Your enemy is your name spelled backwards?” I said laughing.
“I suppose you do not realize what kind of world you are in.”
“Well, I can guess that we are in another world, but have no clue where I am.”
Yert snapped his fingers and a screen appeared. On the screen was ponies from my little pony.
“You have to be joking.” I said.
Yert snapped his fingers again and got a magnifying glass and focused on a pony in the town.
“Still do not believe you.”
Yert face palmed, “When will this information get through your thick head.”
Then I heard this loud noise like a fighter jet, but it felt like it was a small fighter jet. Then it landed at the front of the entrance of the forest.
“Who is that?” I asked.
“It has been a long time Yert.” It said.
“Ah, the human-” he stopped when he saw a pony with a horn, wings and a Yin Yang tattoo on its butt.
“Are you surprised Yert?” he stopped and when I blinked her was right in front of Yert, “Or are you awestricken?”
“How did you? I knew you survived, but you in that state?” he paused and started to laugh.
“Why is he laughing?” I asked.
“You and I will talk later. Let me take care of him first.” Trey said pointing at me with his hoof.
Trey and Yert were staring at each other then I blinked and I was blown away by a strong gust of wind. It was so strong, the back of my head hit on the tree and I blacked out.
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“Ouch.” I said waking up to a devastated forest.
I got to my feet, but I was all wobbly and I glanced around the area. Everything in this forest was gone and I looked to where the village was and it was still standing. It was about the middle of the day and I rubbed my head and the bump was not as serious. Then I heard noises in the distance.
“TAKE THIS!” I heard Yert yelling.
Then a laser came out of nowhere and I saw Trey blocking his move. ‘What Dragon Ball Z bullshit is this?’ I thought.
Yert’s laser subsided and Trey said, “I am firing my laser! BOOOM!”
I smiled, “Now that is cool.”
The laser was bigger than Yerts and he shouted in pain and agony. I sat down on a burnt trunk, but it was cooled down for a while and watched the fight. ‘Now all I need is popcorn.’ I thought.
“What are you doing here?” I heard from behind.
It was a purple pony with a horn and wings. This made me jump and to hide behind the stump.
“Who are you?” she asked.
I sat down on the ground and said, “The name is Gaitou.”
She looked surprised, “Are you not friends with Zoey, Hatchi and Naki?”
I got surprised too, “You mean; they are alive?!”
“YES!” she shouted.
I got my hands to my face to cover my emotions. My tears were going down my cheek and kept repeating the same words in my head, ‘They are alive and well… They are alive and well…’
“My name is Twilight and I need you to go to Ponyville so you can be safe.” Twilight said.
I wiped away my tears and cheered up a bit. I was about to comply with her saying, but was interrupted by the crystal which was still glowing. ‘It is telling me something.’ I thought.
I picked up the crystal and for some reason there is two pieces missing. Combined it would look like a diamond shape. I tried to let go, but my hands would not get off of the crystal. I removed my fingers, but it stuck to my palms. I started to panic and the crystal glowed and I flew up into the air and Twilight shouted, but I could not hear what she said.
The wind was blowing against my ears and I had to squint to see where I was going. The crystal was flying towards two beams light and dark. They were going to collide with me. The beams hit against the crystal and I felt something surging through my veins. Light was going through my right side and darkness to my left.
The light was freshening, it felt like I was one with the world. The darkness, was heavy, depressing, and I was feeling sorrow for the world. I shouted to stop and it did.
I was falling towards the ground and I did not hit the floor. I got my eyes to adjust and I could not move. I felt paralyzed. Twilight ran next to me and she was saying something, but I could not hear anything.
I closed my eyes and I was in a hospital. There were pony nurses and I started to get my hearing back. There was a ringing noise and I tried to move my head, but I felt like stone.
Then the first line I hear is, “The patient is completely made out of crystal!”
‘What? My body is crystal? What happened to me?’ I thought.
I felt my head was able to move and I moved it to look around. I heard and felt my neck was hard and rocky. Such as two stone bricks rubbing off of one another.
I looked at my body and it was a blue crystal. I was now breathing heavily, I was panicking. I looked around the nurses and they hung their heads in disappointment.
“We cannot do anything Princess Twilight. His body is infused with the crystal.” One of the nurses said.
I turned my head to face Twilight. I licked my lips and they tasted like smooth marble or crystal. I then moved my mouth around and I said, “What am I?”
Twilight frowned and said, “I do not know Gaitou… This is something I have never encountered.”
I pointed to the mirror, “I need to see myself.”
Twilight’s horn was glowing and it surrounded the mirror and it levitated. The mirror headed for my face and I closed my eyes. I opened my eyes and my face was made of crystal. I was able to move my fingers and arm and lifted up to my face. I felt my face and it still felt like skin, but it was not skin.
I started to cry and dark blue tears came down my cheek, “I am a monster…”
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 14: My Ultimate Power.... Wasted?
Chapter 14: My Ultimate Power.... Wasted?
“Shit!” I shouted in pain when one of Trey’s laser’s hits my body.
I see now that even though he is an Alicorn, he is still as powerful as when I fought against him. My body was slowly recovering and it was not enough to hold back all of his attacks. If I did not do something soon, I would be shattered into a million pieces… ‘Wait.’ I thought.
If I can focus enough then I can scatter into a million pieces and infect Equestria into a plague of negativity. ‘Yes that will work!’ I thought.
“Let me at least go out with a bang!” I said to Trey firing another laser.
“It is useless Yert!” he said firing another bigger beam of magic which was humongous than the other one. ‘This will do.’ I thought.
The beam covered me into light and like I said I focused my energy and shattered into… five pieces? A little hole in the plan, but no matter. I sent my pieces to whom Trey knows and take over their bodies. I landed on Trey’s head and went inside undetected. The others I sensed when to Twilight, a unicorn named Petra, a filly named Grace, and into Gaitou.
Immediately when the piece went inside Gaitou I sensed it got eliminated so did the other piece with Twilight. More holes into my plan this is starting to get annoying. I need to control Trey’s movements and speaking so I can take over as him being a tyrant.
Inside his brain I hacked into his flying and lowered him down. I felt him getting confused. ‘Just a little longer…’ I thought.
I picked his brain a little more to his spinal cord, then his legs. Like a TV I watched his point of view from afar. “Alright the first thing of business is to go to Canterlot, but let’s take a visit to Gaitou and see what the fuss is about.” I commanded into Trey’s head.
Like a robot he walked to the hospital and everyone bowed down to him. ‘Man he is really popular already that he looks like a royalty figure.’ I thought.
I sensed that Twilight and Gaitou were in this room and walked in. To my amazement, he was completely made out of crystal and he was not stiff or solid he was moving like a golem. He looked at me and frowned.
“What is it Gaitou?” Twilight asked.
“Yeah what is wrong?” I asked through Trey’s vocal cords.
“He has been infected too.” He said
‘Shit. He knows.’ I thought.
“What do you mean infected Gaitou?” I asked.
“See? He knows my name but I never introduced myself to him.” He said walking towards me.
He touched Trey’s forehead and I was being extracted, “Wha-? NO!” I shouted.
I was inside Gaitou crystal body and I could not move. I was then reunited with my two other pieces and I used all of my strength to make a crack against the crystal skin. I saw Trey collapsing on to the floor and I laughed. I then pushed again and the crack was big enough for our combined pieces to leak out of his body.
I started to laugh, “I will be back!”
I went out the open window and sprinted towards the volcano which held my source of power: the dark magic crystal. I was fast enough to go through Equestria into the Griffin Kingdom to the volcano. I did not want to get though the mine shaft I instead broke through the volcano cap strait down into the room I called home.
I saw the crystal and surrounded it with my being then transformed into back into human form. “Ah that is much better.” I said.
I had no time, I sensed Gaitou and Trey were heading towards me. “How the fucking hell are they getting so fast? Well can you help me out one last time?” I said touching the crystal with my hand.
It responded with a pulse, “Good.”
All the walls were collapsing and were turning into magma, but it was purple. I felts the magma and it was pure dark magic. ‘I see. You want me to become a destructive power.’ I thought.
Without speaking I let the purple magma consume me and I became one with the dark crystal. Once the crystal melted into the magma we shot off like a bullet coming out of the barrel.
The purple magma started to form into my being and I became a monster, and I laughed a heavy sloppy laugh.
“Trey! COME AT ME BRO!” I shouted.
Not even a second Trey fired a laser which was not even affecting the magma, it made it stronger. I looked at the distance Twilight was carrying Gaitou with her magic and Trey was coming towards me.
“YERT! STOP THIS!” he shouted.
I laughed, “Nope, I enjoy this!”
I threw a punch and it landed on Trey’s body making multiple burns into his being. He must be protected by magic to not be consumed by dark magma. He shouted in pain. Half of his body was burnt, but the impact made him fly crash into another mountain.
“TREY!!!” Twilight shouted.
“LET ME TAKE CARE OF HIM!” Gaitou shouted.
Twilight landed and released him from her magic. They had a quick chit chat, but she flew towards Trey.
“Oh no you will not recover TREY!” I shouted, but was interrupted by Gaitou.
He touched the purple magma and was becoming me… ‘Wait… Is he an Elemental?’ I thought.
At the same time I was being sucked in by his mystical powers and became one with Gaitou… All the purple magma disappeared and the volcano was empty.
‘You think you can control me?’ I shouted through his head.
“No, but I can make something negative into a positive thing.” He said.
‘That is impossible! How can you make me positive?’ I shouted again.
“Easy.” He said sprinting towards the beach of the border of the Griffin Kingdom.
The beach was beautiful, but at the same time I was struggling to break free. It was not like last time when I was dust he really had control of me. He pointed out his index finger to the ocean. Like a faucet he was releasing all the purple magma into the water. It turned into volcanic rock on contact. He made three lines which was ten feet wide. He did several more layers and he started to walk on the rock. Then he repeated.
‘Wait a minute… You are making a bridge out of me?!’ I yelled in his head.
He did not respond, he continued to repeat the same thing to a volcanic rock. We were about half way into the sea between Equestria and the griffin Kingdom. He stopped and got his hands and focused his entire magma and fired it to complete the bridge. Next thing I knew I was being held on Gaitou’s hand I felt powerless.
‘Am I going to die?’ I thought.
“Now I am going to finish what I brought to this world. It was only a few hours I was here, but I was able to see what kind of power I have. It is to take care of scum like you. Any last words?” He said.
“Go… Fuck… Yourself…” I said weakly.
The last thing I remember was being dropped into the ocean being hardened into a rock and sunk into the bottom of the ocean.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 15: A Voice Inside My Head
“Now I attack you with my monster called exodia and you lose the duel!” I said to Noah.
“No!” he said pretending to fall to the ground as he is losing life points.
Lily was making the life point noises and said, “Zero!”
“That was a great duel you really fought well.” I said holding out a hoof to him.
“Yeah, how did you get all the pieces?” he asked.
“With my shuffling skills and card effects.”
“Is that cheating?” Lily asked.
“No it is not.” I said.
We were in our room that we shared together and we have been going through our dads stuff and about a month ago we found these Yu-Gi-Oh! Cards and we were stunned by the monsters in the cards, spells and traps. When we showed them to dad he taught us and even wrote a rule book in case one of us makes a mistake. The cards in his pack held about seven decks, each one with its own style.
Now we are playing as pros and Celestia was watching us laying on our bed. I glanced at her looking at her belly. I wonder what kind of cousin we will be getting.
“Alright Lily you get a different deck and verse Noah alright?” I asked her.
“Yay! It’s my turn! If I win you will go to the shadow realm!” she shouted.
“You are on!” Noah said.
I walked to Celestia and jumped on the bed with her, “Feeling tired Aunt Celestia?”
“Yes, baring a child takes a lot of energy from you.” She said.
“Was mom the same way when we were inside her?” I asked.
She yawned, “Oh, yes. At times she had to drink about three cups of coffee to stay up to rise and set the moon then your uncle discord took over until she was done.”
“Now Discord is rising and setting the moon and sun?” I asked.
“You sure are asking a lot of questions today. Are you missing your parents?” she asked.
“A little, but I know they will return.” I said.
“That is good and yes Discord is taking care of our jobs and he likes it, but sometimes he wants to do his own things.”
“You might say he is a troublemaker?”
“Oh, he is still a troublemaker. Sometimes when he raises the sun she doodles a face on the sun and moon, but returns it the next day.”
I lied my head on her belly. It was soft, warm and fuzzy. I could hear another heartbeat inside and me lying next to another living being really makes me wonder what children I am going to have… ‘C’mon Grace you have a full life to live for.’ Someone said in my head.
“Who was that?” I asked.
“I won!” Noah said.
“Oh, well to the shadow realm for me!” said Lily falling to the ground and making playful grunts.
Aunt Celestia looked at me, “Who was what, Grace?”
‘Maybe it was my imagination.’ I thought then I got a reply for what I thought, ‘It is not you imagination.’
“Uh… Nothing Aunt Celestia. I need to go to the bathroom.” I said sprinting towards the toilet.
Yes I said toilet Dad made the toilets and mom taught us how to use them. So we were “Potty trained”. Nothing to be embarrassed about and nothing to be ashamed of. I was inside my stall and was breathing heavily. I calmed down and was now breathing regularly.
‘Who are you?’ I asked in my head.
‘I am a friend. If you want me too.’ He said.
It was a male who was in my head. Did I eat too many cookies? Or candy? If so I got to lay off.
‘It is not the cookies or candy you ate.’ He said.
‘What is your name? Mine is Grace.’
‘My name is-’ then he shouted in pain and he seemed to grow smaller.
‘Is everything alright?’
‘I do not remember who I am or how I got here?’
‘You mean you are not part of my head.’
There was a silence then he answered, ‘Yes.’
‘Are you my conscious?’
‘I believe so.’
‘Could I give you a name?’
‘Of course you can.’
Alright I have a conscious! I can even name it. What was that little guys name in Pinocchio? Was it Jim?
“I will call you Jim.” I said a loud.
‘Thank you grace.’
‘No problem. Now can you go…? I need to do business.’
‘Whatever you command miss.’ He said disappearing.
After relieving myself, I made my way to the room, but there was a shout in the distance. It sounded like Twilight.
“We need medical Attention here!” she shouted.
Is Daddy back from his trip? Twilight would not be here if he came back. I started to trot towards Twilight, but was stopped by a pony was covered over with a sheet. I heard a groaning noise and I walked towards Twilight.
“Is everything alright Twilight?” I asked.
She looked at me with sorrow eyes wanting to cry. I wonder what could be going through her head.
Then she finally spoke, “I do not want to say anything that would hurt you. I want to ask you, where is your mother?”
“I believe she is training the humans in the orb, but we are not allowed to go down there unless we have permission.” I said.
“Would you show me the way? As Princess of Friendship, you have my permission.” She said.
I was compliant to her because Lily, Noah and I respect her for who she is and our friendship is between us siblings is stronger. I took her to the orb room and she was looking at several miniature humans and Luna going fast inside the orb and I was amazed by that.
“When do they get out?” she asked.
“I think the next day will be the third day. Then they will be out.” I said.
“Who told you this?” she asked.
“Uh… Dad told me. Duh!” I said.
Twilight hung her head and I said, “Are you alright?”
“I am alright, I need to ask if you have been experiencing anything weird lately?” she asked.
I thought about telling about the voice in my head, but decided not to and shook my head in answer.
“Are you sure.” She said double checking.
“Yes, Twilight I am sure that I have not experienced anything weird.” I said.
“Good.” She said.
She led me out of the orb room to the hospital area of the castle. We were about to go in, but she stopped me.
“Before you go in, I need to go in first. Can you sit right there?” she asked.
“Alright.” I said.
I have no idea what she is going to do, but I guess I had to wait until she comes back. Who was that pony surrounded by the sheet? It felt familiar, the scent smelled like dad… Wait.
“Dad?!” I shouted running into the door.
“Grace!” Twilight shouted.
“Dad?! Why are you-?” I stopped in my tracks.
There lies a green pony who was barely breathing. He was being analyzed by the nurses. Half of his body was severely burnt. Half of his face was recognizable, but the other side was unrecognizable.
I started to tear up, “D-Daddy?”
I walked backwards in fear. By body was shaking, my head was spinning. Then one question came out of Jim that made me faint, ‘Is your father going to die?’
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 16: Healing And Dealing
Letting Grace see me in this condition broke my heart. I was thinking about her coming to see me, but covered. Now she saw my injured self. The pain pulsing with each and every breath. This is the most excruciating pain that I have experienced, even with Grogar stabbing me four times.
Twilight walked to Grace who was lying on the floor, “I will take Grace to her room.”
All I could do was nod in agreement. My mouth would not let me speak in this condition, but I am glad to say I will not be like this forever. Before Grace barged in, Twilight told me that all Alicorns rejuvenate their skin and fur. Since it was a burn it would take about a day to heal up.
Twilight left the room while levitating Grace carefully towards her room. As she left the crystal Golem that is Gaitou walked in and took a seat right next to me.
“Can you speak?” he asked.
I shook my head.
“Can you write on paper and pen to answer my questions?” he asked again.
I still have not used my magic yet after the accident. I think I can. I focused my energy on my horn which was still fine and got a clip board and pen which were on the night stand. I levitated them over to my face and nodded to be asked.
“Do you know who I am?” he asked.
I shook my head in reply.
“My name is Gaitou, but we have already met at the hospital when I transformed. Do you know where my friends are?” he asked.
I wrote down this, ‘Your friends, Zoey, Hatchi and Saki are training with Princess Luna in an orb that has a huge time difference. They will be back tomorrow.’
“Alright that is good to know. Were you a human or are you a pony when you were born.” He asked.
I rolled my eyes and wrote on the paper, ‘Yes I was once human. The person you met was Yert my opposite that his minions killed me and I died, but I was able to become an Alicorn thanks to Lauren Faust who is a god of this world.’
He scratched his crystal chin, “That is very interesting… Any reason why I became a crystal Golem?”
I shook my head and wrote again, ‘No I have no idea why you became a crystal golem. It is a new thing for me to realize this.’
“You have to know something about me?” he said.
I thought through the pain I was experiencing then some information popped into my head, ‘I read some books about guardians of Equestria, but when they were wiped out protecting and reviving this world the only info about them was that they were different color crystal golems.’
“So I am the reincarnation of the protectors of Equestria? That is impossible! I could not protect anything.” He said.
I looked down on my paper and wrote, ‘It might be a possibility, but if your friends are crystal golems too, then it may come true. I just do not know right now. The pain on my body is too great.’
“Alright, but when you heal up to full health, I want more answers to my questions. If that is not too much for you. Also where can I find this book?” he asked.
I felt my mouth with my tongue and it felt normal again and I spoke, “It is in the library in this castle. I also want to help you find these answers.”
He got up from the chair and walked out saying, “Thank you.”
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The next day I was all healed up. Alicorn magic really is a mysterious magic that co-exists with us. Even though I was a human I really did not have any injuries instead of being murdered and burnt to a crisp by Yert.
I when into the bathroom and looked at the mirror. I looked kind of weird, because I had half of my fur on one side and the other I was all skin that was pink. Am I part Pinkie Pie? ‘Nah! Do not be silly.’ I thought.
I wanted to see the kids and they were not in their room. So I checked Celestia’s room and there was a note on the door.
Dear Trey,
Grace got really shook up about what happened when she saw you at the hospital in that condition. Discord and I decided to go on a trip today to the water park. We will be back tomorrow so do not worry. Discord is taking care of the children and I am talking to Grace about her issue.
From, Princess Celestia
P.S. Discord: Have fun dealing with the Chaos my boy! ;)
I wondered what that meant, but I needed to get some rest because my head really felt woozy. I opened my doors and there was Petra on my bed with the kinkiest outfit that made my dick have a budge. She was wearing a silk gown and a lingerie for ponies. I saw how wet she was and it soaked the sheets.
“Trey, there is no escape. The letter you picked up prevents you to do any magic.” She said closing the door behind me and locking it with her magic.
“Uh… Um… Petra let’s not get to hasty here.” I said walking to a corner.
“Hasty? HASTY?! Do you know how long I had to wait until you have to heal up? Forever?! I want to fuck you. You want to fuck me right in the pussy. I want it… I want your monster cock…” she said slurping her mouth.
I could not stop looking at her the more I looked away the more my penis grew. My mind did not like the polygamy treaty… I was not ready to accept it.
“Fine. You win Petra. I-If you want me so badly… Open up your pussy for a punishment.” I said.
I did not know what I was saying, the thing is I have a problem. The problem is when I am sexually attracted to a women in this case a mare I hide it away. If I do not hide it away then my sexual instincts take over.
She was convinced, “Anything for you my lovable fuck-able Sir Trey.”
She got off the bed and showed her plot in the air. It looked beautiful. Her pussy was soaked in her juices ready to be fucked. I sighed as she twerked her plot waiting for me to finish her.
“What about Luna’s note?” I asked.
“Let me take care of that.” She said casting a spell on my penis.
She was doing this while showing her pussy.
“It is done… NOW FUCK ME AND LOVE ME!!” she shouted.
I shouted, “You asked for it!”
I ran towards her plot and my shaft penetrated her pussy so hard that she shouted with pleasure.
“AHHHHH!” she shouted.
Then she had an orgasm. I stayed inside her for a few minutes for her to recover and then when she was about to say something I thrust though her and continued to fuck her faster and faster.
“THAT IS *moans* IT TREY! *moans* HARDER!!! HARDER!!!” she shouted.
That is exactly what I did, and she was loving it. I felt something in my heart is was that I and an affection for Petra all along. This made me smirk and I pulled out my dick.
I turned her around so she was on her back and I fucked her hard. She shouted out in pleasure. I leaned in for a kiss and she got out her tongue and it reached down into my throat. Deep French kissing was weird, but this made me even hornier. I went into overdrive and my instincts took over and I was fucking her until her face was made into a sweating mess and was confused on what she was saying.
I have fucked her silly, she loved it. I continued and I did not have enough energy to do anything. I pulled out and her spell broke and I cum all over her body it was a huge massive amounts which was amazing how much the spell was holding back.
She leaned down and sucked on my cock until it was dry. I collapsed on the bed right next to her and she cuddled up next to me.
“You are an amazing stallion Trey. You fucked me silly.” She said breathing heavily.
I could not say anything because I fell asleep after that and hoped to Celestia that Luna would not see me in this condition. It was alright with her, but I get anxious about these things especially where one can have two or more wives.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 17: Crystal Madness
Training Hatchi, Naki and Zoey are the best students ever since my past pupil Trey. Every day they improve their techniques and their magic. Though the next day is the last day and I sensed something was coming.
“Morning everyone.” I said.
“Morning Luna, what’s for breakfast?” Zoey asked.
“You already know Zoey; it is always eggs, bread and apples. There is no cannibalism, in other words no bacon.” Naki said.
“Who said bacon?!” Hatchi saying getting out of bed.
“Sorry Hatchi no bacon. Just as Naki said, eggs, bread, and apples for breakfast.” I said.
They got out of bed, ate breakfast and got ready for the next fight with me. Yes, like Trey his last test was to verse me to get out of the orb. They do not know yet, but I have yet to announce their opponent. I also have a new technique to use so they have to be ready for me. We got out to the field and everybody was stretching for their battle.
I finally got to tell them, “Alright you all have been my grateful students and now your final task is to fight me to get out of this orb.”
“Heh, I hope it will not last all day.” Naki said.
“Aw c’mon Naki give her time for us to go all out.” Hatchi said.
“Jeez, why are you to so cocky? You know that she is the wife of Trey and maybe had some training.” Zoey said.
“You really catch on Zoey and yes I have trained with Trey. Over all I will not go easy on you all.” I said.
I spread out my wings and flew up to the artificial sun and was covering it with my body. My students were looking up as they were stretching, but they stopped and got into their battle positions.
“Let the battle begin!” I said turning pure day into night.
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Poof! We were out of the orb and into the same room we came from. Now looking at Hatchi h grew a beard and had long hair. Zoey had grew out her hair to her waist and Naki having short hair grew it out to her shoulders.
“So let’s all have a bath and some grooming shall we?” I asked.
“That would sound great.” Hatchi said.
“You mean us girl’s right?” Zoey asked.
“You girls know this already all bathrooms and toilets are unisex. So if you feel embarrassed about your body then I suggest you wear your underwear for bathing.”
“I can go last if you do not mind.” Hatchi said.
Naki put her arm around Hatchi and said, “You can bathe with me and we will let Luna and Zoey bathe.”
Zoey sighed, “Fine. Luna and I have to talk anyway.”
Zoey pushed me towards the upper floors and I was compliant about it. We made it to the changing rooms and we got changed or she got undressed and I got to see a fully nude human female for the first time.
“I have never seen a human female before and you are very different from Trey.” I said.
“Well, duh! I am a girl and he is a male. We are alike you have breasts, I have breasts, you have a vagina and I have a vagina.” She stated.
“Are you feeling better from what happened in the orb?” I asked.
“You mean me finally accepting this world as it is?” Zoey said.
“Yes that is what I meant.” I said.
“Yeah, it’s alright.”
I raised my eye brow.
“What?”
“You know I sense you like this world a whole lot.”
“Alright fine. Even with Gaitou gone, I can finally accept this world and I am happy.”
“That’s better!” I said.
“Who said who about me?” a voice said.
This made Zoey get her towel and covered herself and screamed.
“Wow. You really do not want to let anyone see you naked. Whereas I am nude and I do not mind.” I said.
There in front of us was a crystal Golem who looked like a human.
“Zoey? Is that really you?” he said.
“Gaitou?” Zoey asked.
Gaitou smiled and Zoey ran into his crystal arms. Then there was a light and I was blinded for a second. After the light faded away Zoey was a purple color crystal Golem.
“AH!!!” she screamed.
“What happened to you?!” he said.
“What happen to me? What happen to you?!” Zoey demanded.
Naki and Hatchi came in running and ran into Gaitou and there was another bright light. When it ended Naki and Hatchi were also crystal Golems. Naki was a pink crystal Golem and Hatchi was a greenish crystal Golem.
“Is there anything else you want to do Faust?” I said looking up at the ceiling.
Then I saw Trey and I sprinted past Gaitou and the others and ran into him, “You are not turning Trey into a Golem!”
“Ugh!” he grunted.
We landed on the ground and I kissed the living hell out of him, “I missed you.”
He smiled, “Can I have that every morning?”
Everyone in a tense mood was broken by his sense of humor and we all laughed. After we have all had our baths Trey explained what happened and everyone understood their situations. Only Zoey was the one who was asking the questions.
“There is only one thing though, what are we supposed to be? Some sort of protectors of this world?” Zoey asked.
Trey got up and levitated a book from the shelf and opened it to the beginning page.
“A least he did not open it at the middle of the book.” Hatchi said.
Zoey face palmed and so did I. Trey told me what the show was like and finding the answers in the book we always carelessly open the book to the middle page. I did not realize this until he told me.
Trey cleared his throat, “When I looked at this book, I felt interested about it, but it is just a short story. Meaning it was just a myth, but looking at your four as crystal Golems of some sorts, this is the only book that can explain who you are. The book reads that there was once four colored guardians who protected this planet from darkness. The darkness was named Nemesis, he was the one who created all the evil villains and inspired them to do evil deeds. Nemesis was so power he overwhelmed the guardians and they sacrificed themselves to lock Nemesis into a cage of crystal to never be released. Soon the villains forgot about Nemesis and never heard of him. The book says that the pieces of the Guardians shards scattered across world and it restored the land to a peaceful one after sealing the darkness away from it. The book it tells me that the Guardians will be reincarnated from another world, but I thought it was just mombo jumbo. Then I saw the author of this book which surprised me and I barely know what who he is. The author was Star Swirl the Bearded.”
“Well that answers my questions.” Naki said.
“Same here.” Hatchi said.
Zoey sighed, “What do we do now?”
I spoke, “I suppose we wait until something happens. For now anyway we need to set your rooms.”
I picked up a bell, rung it and a guard came in, “What will I be serving you my lady?”
“Take these three humans to their guest room and feed them lunch.” I said.
“What about yourself my lady?” he asked.
“I have to talk to my husband. No more questions chop, chop!” I answered.
“As you wish.” He signaled Zoey, Gaitou, Hatchi and Naki to get up and they complied.
Zoey closed the door and winked at me as she closed it. I looked at Trey and he was blushing.
“What is wrong my beloved Trey?”
“I am sort of embarrassed by you and I feel like I need a punishment.” He said.
“Why is that?” I asked.
“I saw the Polygamy treaty and I did not have sex with Petra until I came back and healed from battle.” He said.
“Did she like it?”
“She was practically begging for sex.”
“Did you enjoy it? Be honest.”
“Yes I did and I feel ashamed of it.”
“Is it because you are not accustomed to Polygamy?”
“Yes and no. Yes because it is wrong of me to choose up to three wife and yes because my sexual desire got in the way to where I enjoyed it… So what I am saying is that I am confused.”
I got up and walked towards him. He hung down his head and I lifted it up with my hoof, “It does not matter if you have three wives including me, all that matters it that if you love me, that is worth something. I love you Trey and nothing is going to change it.”
Trey smiled and gave me a kiss and I kissed back, then the door opened and the kids came in wanting to see us.
“Mom! Dad! Welcome back!” they shouted.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 18: Vacation To What?!
Training with my friends and Luna was the greatest experience I have ever had. Even though I transformed into a purple crystal Golem which represents my power that amplifies an attack by ten times. I suppose that it represents my anger in a nut shell.
Hatchi controls nature (this includes water) and the air that is around him to his own ability. Such as he can get a tree to grow in seconds towards him and the air he can take away for a few seconds making the enemy not breath for a few moments to freeze him or her and making them go away from him. This is his personality that he would like to protect himself and others.
Naki can control fire and the heat of the sun even when the moon is out. Meaning she can bend fire like Zuko from Avatar the last air bender and can get heat from anything and everywhere. This is part of her fire personality and it totally fits into her.
Gaitou told us about his power he can absorb anything and make it his own power. Which is pretty good and fits his personality as a jock/nerd. What I mean is that whatever sport it is even if it is foreign he can play it in an instant. This also includes computers and electronics. So his power really does fit his personality.
So all of our powers are all about our personality. So we can immediately pull out our powers when we want to if we are in danger.
Enough about the discussion of powers and what not. Us four decided to have a catch-up day just to talk about what we did in the orb and what Gaitou accidentally bringing back Yert into Equestria.
“So I guess you had no idea he was evil?” Hatchi asked.
“For the first and last time, yes I had no idea he was evil. I thought he was a helpless man who bumped his head and had amnesia.” He said.
“I can understand that and we forgive you because you took care of him.” I said.
“Well he is not done yet. I can still sense him somewhere, but it is not in the castle. It is sickening.” He said.
“At least he is not in the castle otherwise we guardians would have to take care of him.” Naki said.
We have been talking about how we became the reincarnation of the guardians and what we supposed to do until ‘judgment day’ and we decided to chill and that was the best action we could do.
“Yeah we might be guardians for a reason and I just do not like the term guardians. I would like to be called my name thank you.” I said.
“I really do not mind it at all it makes me important right?” Hatchi asked.
“Hell yeah it does!” Naki answered.
“So what do we do now?” Gaitou asked.
Just when I was about to answer Trey comes inside the room and he was wearing a tie and a suit that reached to his cutie mark.
“Dude if you want a full suit then gets some pants on.” I joked.
“Very funny Zoey. Ahem. I need you guys help with a railroad I am constructing.” Trey said.
“What are we doing at the rail road?” Hatchi asked.
Trey continued, “I have a new metal that bends and it will be at the curves of the railroad. This will make the new steam engine I constructed to get from here to Ponyville in less than five hours.”
“Five hours?!” Hatchi shouted.
“So a fifteen hour train ride will be a five hour ride… That is an amazing feat.” Gaitou said.
“What would you like for us to do?” I asked.
“I need your help to carry the railing to the curves I need so it can be complete in about a day. Do not worry about the pay. I have a vacation for the four of you if you accept.” Trey said.
“Where will we be going? Crystal Empire? Rainbow Falls? Clouds dale?” Hatchi asked.
“It will be worth your while and after you guys get done, I will reveal it to you.” Trey said.
Trey lead us to the blacksmith room and he had to stop us in our tracks. Like Luna she had to go first to get Petra straighten up. This time Trey went in first and we heard a yelp and a yell. Then he let us inside the room where Petra was decent.
Petra cleared her throat, “Well now that you are here, I have the locations the Trey gave me so there are a total of fifteen curves that are about twenty feet long that are going to be replaced. I have worked on the railing after Trey left to battle Yert and no all the curves have been complete. They just need to be placed.”
“It is simple really, all the tracks connect like Lego blocks then they are welded by my magic.” Trey said.
“So we are going to transport to the railing to the curves then we replace them?” Gaitou asked.
“That is about it.” Petra said.
“That is going to be easy. Let’s get it done for the vacation!” Hatchi shouted and the four of us cheered.
“Alright let’s get this orgy-” Petra’s mouth got interrupted by Trey’s hoof covering it and he shook his head.
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“Man, I am beat!” Hatchi yelled as he lie there on the couch breathing heavily.
“I never knew the rails were made of Titanium and another metal to make it even heavier.” Gaitou said wiping his sweat.
“I never knew that crystal Golems sweat like regular humans. Look even my sweat is purple…” I said holding out a cloth that had my purple sweat on it.
“Meh, it was a successful day anyway.” Naki said taking a drink of apple cider.
“Thank you for helping me to install the railing curves for the track. Thanks to your effort the new steam engine will make a lot of ponies to have jobs here in Canterlot while living in Ponyville. Also I can reveal where you will be going on your vacation.”
“Where will we be going?” Hatchi said with his breathing turning to normal.
“Yeah I have no idea where we could be going.” Naki said.
“You all are coming with me to the Chrysalis Empire.” Trey said.
We all paused for a full minute in silence. What is the Chrysalis Empire? I have never heard of it and when we stopped for the last curve the railing led to the Everfree forest. I asked him is there any more curves in there and he answered no. The rails lead to another town and it is all straight.
Hatchi broke the silence, “WHAT?! The enemy’s base of all places is where we are going?”
Trey cleared his throat, “Queen Chrysalis is not our enemy. She is our ally. Ever since we captured her, we convinced her to have a treaty for peace between us. Then there was the issue of changelings being pushed back because of racism. There was a law passed on for everypony and changeling to co-exist. Also yes, you have been living with a changeling who works here as a maid to clean up the messes we make. She is an equal of us and we pay her fairly well.”
“But I still have an issue.” Hatchi said.
“What is that Hatchi? Trey told us everything that is to know about the Chrysalis Empire.” Naki said.
“I still do not want to trust her after what she did at the Canterlot wedding.” He said.
“A assure you Hatchi, Queen Chrysalis is a changed mare. She saw the ways of friendship and love that she opened her Empire to Equestria. I want you to trust her as you would trust me. Besides if anything happens that would violate our treaty all the supplies that we give her would disappear, but the law will still stand.” Trey said.
“Alright I am in. As long as the Empire is beautiful and has scenery I am fine with it.” Gaitou said.
“I am with him on that one. I already saw the Crystal Empire from afar and I can’t wait to experience more of this world.” Zoey said.
“C’mon Chi, for us please?!” Naki asked.
“Alright. Anything for my friends.” Hatchi said.
“Then it is settled. You have all will have a ticket in your rooms tomorrow and you will be transported to the train station. There will be some surprising guests when you arrive at the stations. I also want to give you this whistle.” He said.
“What does it do?” Hatchi asked.
“It makes a noise when you blow into it!” I joked.
“It is a whistle that when blown it will signal me that you are in trouble. So do not blow it because it only works once.” Trey said.
“Alright thank you.” I said.
Gaitou was stretching, “I think it’s time to hit the hay.”
“I agree, I am tired and I want to sleep next to my special someone.” Naki said touching Hatchi on the face.
Hatchi giggled and I sighed, “Oh bother.”
Gaitou smiled, “You can be right next to me when I sleep to get some jealous out.”
This made me blush, “Baka (Means idiot in Japanese).”
We walked to our rooms Naki and Hatchi walked into Naki’s room hand in hand and closed the door behind them.
“I was surprised that they are finally a couple.” Gaitou said.
“You have no idea.” I said.
We laughed about it and out of nowhere I kissed his cheek, “I really missed you, Gaitou.”
He was stunned and was blushing. It was cute seeing red blush coming out of a light blue crystal Golem.
Before he said anything I said ‘Good night.’ And shut the door to my room. ‘What did I just do?’ I thought. I ran to my bed and covered up and tried to get to sleep, but then I heard Naki and Hatchi making love next door. The noised was crystal hitting another crystal. The noise of her yelling and Hatchi moaning, it was going to be a long night.
Then the noise stopped and I heard a knock on the door, “I used a spell to cancel out the noise. I want my children to sleep as well. So good night Zoey.”
It was Trey who said that and I still did not talk to him about the convention… Man, I need a vacation… Oh yeah that’s right… It’s tomorrow.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 19: What's Going On With Yert?
I am not dead yet, at least not yet. It was a surprise to me that I am still surviving inside two pieces at the same time. The pieces used to have my memories, but when Gaitou killed me off they got their own personality. I am inside looking at a filly’s point of view and it was talking to Trey? Wait he became an Alicorn and had children? It was official when she said ‘Daddy.’
I never knew that Trey had children in the first place and if I had known, I would have taken hostage of them to get Trey to do my bidding. Oh well, I guess I will add it later. I cannot really control this piece in Grace’s head because it is becoming more and more innocent. I really hate that; I will become soft because of a mere child.
When I connected to another piece I was in what was like a blacksmith area. I think I came in at the wrong time because this mare was masturbating. I guess I cannot control this piece because it is all about sex and it is amplifying it to a whole new level. When I look through her memories she had been masturbating for a little bit, but when this piece came in, she has been masturbating non-stop. Also it is surprising to me that they have a Polygamy law that a male can have three wives.
All I think the goal of this piece is to have Trey’s child and I like the plan. I can take over the child’s body while it is developing and I can escape through that. I saw that the humans became crystals and are going to the Chrysalis Empire. I never knew that Chrysalis became good and made a treaty with Celestia and the royal guard.
Petra decided to walk to Trey’s room and I was just watching for the fun. She encountered Trey and Luna who were in the middle of intercourse. I decided to hear this hot sticky situation.
“Can I make it a threesome?” Petra asked.
“We are kind of busy here, Petra.” Luna said.
Trey sighed, “Close the door and I’ll cast a noise cancelling and lock spell.”
Trey stopped doing Luna and pulled out to cast the spell. Luna looked pissed at Petra for interrupting the sexual tension between them. I shouted, but Petra did not hear me, ‘Fight, fight! Kiss, kiss!’
“What would like to talk about Petra?” Trey asked.
“We have talked about it before and I want Luna’s permission. I want to have Trey’s sperm to go inside my womb.” Petra said.
‘Oh that is nasty… This piece is really disgusting, but it is the only way to take over a child so be it!’ I thought.
Luna got up and I could see her juices were going down her leg and I could feel Petra getting hot at the vagina.
Luna walked up and cleared her throat, “We do not want you to get pregnant, you are the blacksmith and we have our own kids to take care of.”
Petra puffed her cheeks, “But I want to have sex with Trey…”
Luna sighed, “We can make it a threesome if Trey is to make an agreement to cum in me instead of you.”
“You bitch.” Petra said under her breath.
“I cannot believe we are talking about this…” Trey said.
‘Well you brought this upon yourself and it is time to finish the job.’ I thought.
Luna got on the bed and she patted down on the blanket signaling Petra to get on and get started. I had to leave because even though I am a human, I rather not see three ponies go at it. I want to see how Grace is doing.
Grace was confusing, she was having a nightmare and it was about her father dying. It was really entertaining and I was there to comfort her. Not me, but the one that Grace called Jim.
“What is wrong?” Jim asked a terrified Grace.
“I am just scared of my Daddy dying.” She said.
“He is not dead, he is fine.”
“I know, but what if he has to verse another evil person… I just cannot bare the tension of him dying.”
“Why do you think your mother is not worried about him?”
“Huh?”
“Your mother thought he was dead and done for when Trey as a human died, but no Lauren Faust decided to give your father a second chance and he is the Daddy you see today.”
Jim walked up to Grace and wiped her tears away.
Grace was confused, “Why are you helping me?”
Jim slowly transformed into a colt and was about Grace’s size, “I understand how you feel.”
“What do you mean?”
“What I mean it I know how it feels to be alone, with no family. You are lucky to have a family. Whereas I do not.”
When Jim gave a peck on the forehead I lost connection. It was my own piece, but it decided to choose its own path of good and love. That is unacceptable. When I am reborn I am going to extract that piece and eliminate it.
The next thing I knew I was back to Petra who was awake while Luna and Trey were asleep. I saw how Trey came all over Petra and she got her magic and levitated Trey’s cum out of her fur. She looked at it with an evilest grin. She slipped out of the room and I wondered about the lock and I looked at her memories. When Trey was at the climax the lock spell got cancelled out.
She levitated his cum and carried it to her room. The next few glances will start the question whether this piece became a sex maniac. She got a liquid inject dildo which she filled I up with Trey’s cum. She licked the tip and started to deep throat it. After that she got the dildo and penetrated her pussy and got it in deeper and deeper inside her womb.
Her face was giving out by the overwhelming pleasure and then she pushed the button to inject his cum inside her womb. She let out a moan and pulled out the empty dildo. ‘Oh my god. She has done it without Luna’s permission… Perfect…’ I thought.
“Now I feel you inside Trey. I feel you. Fuck you Luna, even though you made me cum, but how dare you prevent me to have Trey’s children. Well I guess that I can get a vacation to develop this baby.” She said aloud.
She filled out a request form and teleported it to Celestia’s room. Then she went to bed and I went to work in Petra’s womb. ‘Let’s the rebirth of Yert begin…’
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Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 20: Bathing Situation and Fast Train
I really could not sleep. Why you may ask? Several reasons: One, I accidentally brought a sealed evil to this land, but got rid of him. Two, being a crystal Golem is that hardest thing to be while you are trying to sleep on a bed. Three, I am so confused of why Zoey kissed my cheek.
Since I cannot sleep, I just closed my eyes and pretend to sleep. It is like when you are not tired and you really need the sleep. All you do is close your eyes and pretend to sleep and you will have more or less the energy to get up.
Now back to the issues. Zoey has been my friend ever since… uh… Middle school? Right middle school. I got thin strange attraction to Zoey that I needed some time to think. ‘Do I like her? Will she like me? What will she think of me?’
Those questions haunted me during middle school, but then Hatchi walked up to me and introduced me to her. Now the questions withered away and I became friends with Zoey. Over the years we have been friends I got an affection towards her. Even after the disaster, I wanted to comfort her, but I had to give her distance to let her grief about her parents. Then all this happened and we been separated for several days maybe even years thanks to the orb they have been in.
Morning came peeking through my eyes and I got up. It was still early, but I really needed to kill some time before we go to the Chrysalis Empire. Even though I am a crystal I still smell like hell and I needed a bath or shower. I got out of my room and saw a sign saying that there was a bathing room. ‘Good at least I can get my hygiene taken care of.’ I thought.
When I saw the bathroom sign was ‘Unisex’ I fucking gulped. I just hoped that Zoey or Naki was not inside. Maybe Zoey will be in there and call me a pervert? I slapped myself for think that. ‘IDIOT! It is a Unisex bathroom! Get your motives straight.’ I thought.
I took a deep breath and walked inside. I went into a changing room and took my clothing off and I saw Zoey’s clothing on the basket. What got me blushing was that her underwear was on top. ‘Do not touch or else I am dead.’ I thought.
I could look all I want, but I needed to take care of my bath. I grabbed the provided towel and opened the door leading to my doom or paradise.
“Who is there?” Zoey asked.
“I-It’s me Zoey.” I said.
“G-G-Gaitou! What are you doing here?” she stuttered.
“Well it is a Unisex bathing room.” I said.
“I know, but this is wrong.” She said.
“I understand that you want me to leave.” I said about to step out.
“Wait!”
“Shhh! What?”
“Sorry. Please stay with me. At least go on the other side and no looking!”
I really could not see her anyway because of the mist was really think. They really want the humidity here. Now I kind of see why it is called Unisex because no pony does no judge one another, I guess.
I went to my side and starting to do my business and I realized something. I have not felt my dick for a while now, because I have been a crystal and I have not been going to the toilet. I looked at where my dick was and it was not gone. I grabbed it and it was all gooey. ‘At least my dick will not be all hard crystal.’ I joked in my head.
“My body really does feel weird.” Zoey said.
“How so?” I asked.
“My breasts are all gooey and my um… private part is the same.”
“Well I am the same too, I guess.”
“Really?”
“Yeah”
It was a really awkward silence. For some reason I kind of felt that Zoey was blushing.
“Um Zoey.”
“Yeah?”
“I have a question. Why did you kiss me?” I asked.
All I could hear was nothing from her and then I felt arms going around me for a hug. They were coming from the back and then I felt paradise. Her breasts touched my back and I felt everything. The nipples, the size and my gooey dick created a crystal boner.
“The reason I did that was because I am… I am in love with you Gaitou. For the longest time since I met you at middle school I got feelings for you.” She said.
She let got and I turned around. My heart was beating and I saw Zoey in the nude all dark purple for being embarrassed. I gulped and I could not help it, but my fucking dick is pulsing.
“Zoey. I grew feelings for you as well, even before I became friends with you. I did not know how to approach you, then your friend help me out to introduce me to you. I too, love you Zoey.” I said.
She walked up to me and I leaned in for the kiss. Then it happened. The warm moist kiss touching my lip got me to get my tongue in there. She let it in and we were making out for a whole minute without air and we let go to breathe in.
“I want to do so many thing to you.” She said.
I got my arm around her ass, “Oh my, what things do you want to do to me?”
She got her hand and touched my shaft and I shuddered, “I am just going to quote what Petra said and I believe you can agree with me.”
“What is that?” I asked.
She leaned in towards my ears and whispered, “I want your dick in my pussy.”
My sexual instincts took over, I grabbed my towel and she grabbed hers and we ran to the changing rooms. We just grabbed our clothing and headed towards her room. We did not even care about getting dressed.
I closed the door and Zoey was there showing her beautiful body to me and I jump right next to her. I reached my hand to touch her breasts and she moaned. I kissed her and we were making out again. Then she got her hand and was jacking me off. I wanted some of this so I got my hand and started to finger her.
We were moaning through our mouths while we were kissing and we were enjoying this. Then we got to position 69 and I was eating her gooey pussy and she was jacking off my dick with her breast and it felt like heaven.
There I was with Zoey the love of my life and I was doing some dirty things to her. I used my fingers to penetrate her with my tongue and she moaned louder. Then she got her mouth and deep throat me and I was shuddering like hell. The pleasure was going through my body and without warning I came in her mouth.
“Mm.” she said licking and swallowing it whole.
She got up and lie down and opened up her legs. I got up and my dick was hard again.
“Are you sure Zoey?” I asked.
She grabbed my hands and dragged me to her face, “I want you, I want you to be my first. Give me a great fucking. I have been a naughty girl.”
“Oh you have been a naughty girl have you? Well here is your punishment you always wanted.” I said penetrating her.
Her hymen broke and she yelled, I stopped, but she got her arms, grabbed my ass and pulled me. My penis got deeper inside her and she was moaning louder. Then my full dick was inside her. I leaned in and nibbled on her crystal hard nipples and she moaned in pleasure. I decided to start moving back and forth. Then I was humping her and there were tears in her eyes.
“That’s it punish me!” Zoey shouted.
I yelled and I pushed faster.
“Oh! Fuck!!!” she moaned.
“Zoey, I am about too.” I said.
“Cum in my pussy!” she shouted.
Her orders were bold and I came inside her and she yelled. At the same time I came she came as well, purple cum came out of her and sprayed all over.
I collapsed on the side, out of breath and she was out a breath too. She looked beautiful and she leaned in for a kiss and it felt moist.
“I love you Gaitou.” She said.
“I love you too, Zoey.” I said.
About two hours of cuddling, I got dressed and so did Zoey. It was time for vacation to the Chrysalis Empire. We walked out of the room hand in hand because we did not care of what people or ponies thought. Then we saw Hatchi and Naki snickering.
“I suppose you heard us?” Zoey asked.
“What if we did?” Naki said.
“We you guys are no better.” I said.
We all laughed and we got to the carriage that would take us to the Train station. When we saw the stream engine we were in awe.
The stream engine looked like the bullet train from Japan, but it looked like it was from steam punk. There was Trey and his family right next to it. The children were tired, probably because it was still early.
“Ah, glad you all came here.” Trey said.
“Morning to you too. Can you tell us why this looks like the bullet train?” I asked.
Trey smiled, “I love Japan so much I decided to make this for the model. It can take you to your destination in about 5 hours each stop. So five hours to Ponyville and 4 hours to get to the Crystal Empire and 3 hours to get to your destination.”
“I suppose you are ready for your trip?” Luna asked.
“Yeah, but why are you here?” Hatchi asked.
Grace, Lily, and Noah shouted, “We are going to see Twilight and the others!”
“Let me tell you that this train needs to recharge after each stops for about an hour. So you guys can go where ever you want to go within that time.” Trey said.
“Alright that at least lightens up the mood for the vacation.” Hatchi said.
“It will not be that bad.” Naki said.
“Yeah lighten up, Chi!” I said patting his back.
“Alright let’s getting going.” Luna said.
We all went to our rooms and the seats have seat belts. All four of us put the seat belts on and so did Trey’s family.
“Why do we have to put on straps?” Lily asked.
“Is it going to be a roller coaster?” Grace asked.
“Yeah it is going to be like that.” Trey said.
“You tested this right?” Zoey said.
“Trey tests everything for all of his achievements.” Luna said.
Trey nodded, “Yes all of it has been tested and this is going to be fast.”
“As fast as the bullet train in Japan?” I asked.
Trey held out his hands and showed a small gap, “A little fast than that.”
‘Good morning Everypony! My name is Jack and I will be your conductor for the day. This lovely Train you see upon you was create by non-other than Trey. Now the tracks have been replaced for this train so hold on tight. This is supposed to take us five hours to get to Ponyville. So I will believe it when I feel and see it. Hold on to your heads mares and Gentle colts. Strap on the seat belts because I am going to be counting down to get this train started.’
“Oh! A count down!” Noah said.
All of us decided to join in the count down and Jack started. ‘Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one!’ The train started to move and then boom! I felt being pushed down from the shear speed this was not a 'little' this was a whole lot fast than the bullet train! The children were screaming in enjoyment and I could hear Jack shouting, ‘YEE HAW!!!’
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 21: CMC Initiation
“AHHH!!” I screamed for being scared for my life on this train.
My brother was not the same he was shouting, “Woo Hoo!”
Lily was scared as well and was burying her face into mom’s chest. I was trying to be brave, but the speed was too much for me. I have to close my eyes and focus on being calm. As I took a deep breath and Jim who was still a colt appeared in my mind.
“I can sense you are scared for going this fast?” he asked.
“Yes… Can I be comforted by you?” I asked.
Jim was the same age as me, but was a human at first. He lie down and signaled me to lie down next to him. I did and he felt warm, fuzzy and so much more. I think I was falling for my conscience. ‘Do not be silly he is just here to comfort you because you are scared… I hope.’ I thought.
Jim was still pitch black, but when I touched him he was showing his fur which was orange and it revealed that he was a Unicorn. He had brown hair as his main and hazel eyes to complement his mane. I looked at his butt to see his cutie mark, but it was blank. I was the same; I do not have my cutie mark, just like Noah and Lily.
Jim smiled, “What are you staring at?”
I blushed, “I-Um… Nothing. I just wanted to see what cutie mark you have.”
“Well I do not have a cutie mark at all, but I am here with you. It makes me happy.”
“Why does it make you happy?”
“I looked at your memories and it sounds great to be a child of the father who saved Equestria.”
“Why does it sound great? I think it sort of annoying being the center of attention. I almost got the fear of being in big groups ever since I was a small foal.”
“What happened? There is nothing in your memories… Your parents told you, did they not?”
“When I was born into this world there was a bunch of paparazzi and they crowded me. My dad took me to the Canterlot Castle to get the paparazzi away from my mom and me. I was crying a whole lot, but stopped when I was in the Canterlot Palace.”
“So you do not remember it, but your parents told you anyway?”
“They want to protect me from me having the fear of other ponies, so I understood their predicament.”
I could hear my dad calling out to me, “I need to go. I will see you tonight when I dream.”
“I will be here.” Jim said kissing my forehead.
I awoke back into the train station and the speed was over. I looked around and my dad was tapping my shoulder.
“You OK?” he asked.
I yawned, “Yeah, just had a great nap.”
I undid my seat belt and stretched, “Aw. That feels so better.”
“I take it you like my train?” he asked.
I smiled, “Yeah, if it was not so fast.”
“It is supposed to be fast, Grace.”
We headed out of the room into the Ponyville train station and there was my mom trying to comfort a crying Lily.
“C’mon Lily it was not so bad. You see the train was so fast I was able to sleep through it all.” I said.
She tried to stop crying and Noah gave her a hug and she took those deep breaths to calm down. She walked up to me and gave a light smile.
“Can I sit next to you next time so we can sleep together?” she asked.
“Of course.” I said.
“I can sleep next time too.” Noah said patting Lily’s back.
I looked over Noah’s shoulder and walked towards the crystal humans to see what they thought about dad’s train. Hatchi was on his knees and Naki had her hand on his shoulder.
“So what did you think of Daddy’s train?” I asked.
Hatchi got up, “It was a long roller coaster ride that would not stop after five hours.”
“What he means it that it was a great train that has enough speed to compete against Rainbow Dash.” Naki said.
“Yeah I highly doubt that.” A voice said behind me.
I knew who that was and I sprinted towards her for a surprise attack hug. I jumped and hugged her. We both fell to the ground, I looked up and there was Rainbow Dash in my arms.
“Hey, you guys are getting bigger and no offense heavier.” She said.
“Well excuse me for having some royal cake once in a while.” I said.
We laughed and Lily ran towards Fluttershy when she saw her. Fluttershy to her was like another mother who understood her shyness. Lily gave her a warm hug and Fluttershy did the same.
“Hey there Lily. *Gasp* you have cry marks on your cheeks?! Why would you make her cry?” Fluttershy said to Trey.
“Whoa! Whoa! The train did that she was overwhelmed by the shear speed.” He said.
“What’s all the commotion?” another voice said.
Then my brother decided to do the surprise attack and jumped hug Twilight. Twilight knew our jump hug attacks and she caught him. She levitated him to the ground and she smiled.
“Nice Try kiddo.” She said.
“Yep, you should know better than to sneak on Twilight.” Apple Jack said.
‘Oh really?’ I thought.
I got off of Rainbow Dash and winked at her. She understood and flew towards Applejack and talked. While I jump hug attacked her. She fell for it and we all laughed. I saw Spike was riding on Rarity heading towards us.
“Sorry we are so late, but… Oh my! Trey this Train is stunning!” Rarity said getting off topic.
“What she means is that she did not know that the train lasted for five hours at each destinations.” Spike said getting off a stunned Rarity.
I got off of Apple Jack and Pinkie Pie was right behind me which got me to jump.
“I see you are improving on your hug sneak attacks. Noah needs improving and you keep up the good work.” She said.
“Thank you Sensei.” I said bowing.
Rarity finally snapped out of it, “Ah. My younger sister want you to join the Cutie Mark Crusaders. Or the C.M.C. for short.”
“That sounds like a great idea” dad said winking at Luna and she giggled.
“So you go with Rarity to see Sweetie Belle and the others and have fun.” Mom said.
Lily, Noah and I said good bye to dad, mom, Zoey, Hatchi (who really wanted to go with us), Gaitou (who was grabbing Hatchi’s shirt to prevent him to go anywhere), and Naki (who just waved.).
We walked with Rarity to meet up with another filly and another brown colt who was wearing a spinning cap.
“Ah! You must be Sir Trey’s children! It must be so cool being a daughter or son of a hero!” he said.
“Button! Please, they are on vacation.” She said.
She cleared her throat, “My name is Sweetie Bell and this is Button Mash.”
“Nice to meet you!” Noah said high hoofing Button.
“So my name is Grace, this is Lily and this is Noah.” I said.
“Hello.” Lily said.
“Nice to meet you Noah.” Button said.
“Grace, come with us so we can initiate you to the Cutie Mark Crusaders.” Sweetie Belle said.
We waved good bye to Rarity who had another dress due tomorrow and need to be finished. Spike wanted to come, but was dragged in by Rarity because she needed all the help she needed.
Button knocked on a door to the tree house where they are located and they let us in.
“I suppose this is the other male that is going to join the CMC?” said the one with the red ribbon.
“Yeah it is supposed to even up all of the members” said the Pegasus.
“Guys they are listening.” Sweetie Belle said to them.
They both cleared their throats and introduced themselves to us.
“My name is Apple Bloom younger sister of Apple Jack.” Apple Bloom said
“My name is Scootaloo. Nice to meet you.” Scootaloo said.
“Now let’s get started shall we?” Sweetie Belle asked.
Scootaloo got to a pair of bongos and Apple Bloom next to the podium and Sweetie Belle got out a paper and cleared her throat.
“We the Cutie Mark Crusaders elect Grace, Lily, Button, and Noah as a sister, brother, friend and fellow Cutie Mark Crusader. You are solemnly sworn in her this day in witness of your fellow sisters, friends and fellow Crusaders. Congratulations!” stated Sweetie Belle.
‘Well that was easy.’ I thought.
“Let’s have a party at the barn. Pinkie Pie set up the cakes, drinks, sweets and what not!” Apple Bloom said.
Now we headed toward Apple Jack’s farm and all of a sudden I get this strange head ache. ‘Jim are you alright?’ I asked through my mind.
‘Something is coming. I do not know what, but it is becoming stronger by the day.’ Said Jim.
What did he mean? Is there something dangerous coming to hurt my dad? Or is something coming our way into the future? ‘I am on vacation. I need to relax for today and worry about tomorrow.’ I thought.
Then I proceeded to catch up with my new fellow Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 22: What About Earth and Surprise
After Rarity took the kids to see the CMC, I was very happy to see them have an adventure like we did and happy because we were finally alone together. I waited for us to be alone, even though we get alone every time, but after the incident with Petra. We can finally have some peace.
We sat at the hill when we were still friends and watched Discord setting the sun to the afternoon and I had several hours before I was to rise the moon. We sat down and I leaned on Trey’s shoulder; he realized what I was doing and put his hoof around my shoulder and I hummed the children of the night.
“Alright Luna, stay here so I can talk to the Zoey and the others and to see them off.” Trey said.
I puffed my cheeks, “But I was having fun…”
He put his hoof on my lips, “Shhh, do not worry. You stay here and we will… Get dirty.”
I licked his hoof in response, “Oh, I love the way you are talking. Alright I can wait.”
I took a deep breath and lie on the grass on my back and closed my eyes for a light nap. I heard hoof steps and it was Trey looking down at me smiling.
“I suppose you said have fun at the Chrysalis Empire?” I asked.
“Yes, Hatchi was not looking forward to it, but I encouraged him. The others were ready and I said good bye. I saw my creation go as fast as it could and I am so proud of it.” He said.
“So, Sir Trey what would you like to do to me?” I giggled.
“I would like to take you somewhere.”
“Oh! Is this going to be a surprise?”
He winked at me and gave me a kiss, “Trust me.”
I could not stop giggling, I have not this fun ever since we had sex for the first time. Trey was leading me to the Everfree Forest and took me inside. The forest was dense and barely anypony would be back here because the beasts would be dangerous, but two Alicorns would be a force to stop those kind of beasts, so we were not worried.
We stopped at what I think is a fire pit of some sorts. Trey stopped at the circle and turned around to face me.
“Before we do anything kinky. I would like to try something.” He said.
“What would you like to try?” I asked.
“I would like to combine our magic to see how the condition is in my world.” I said.
“Why would you want to see your world? Have you not let it go?” I asked.
Trey looked down, “I just have to see if what Zoey and the others said is true.”
I sighed, “Do not worry. We will look at it, but you know we cannot do anything to help it because it is impossible to get things to here. I mean it is a miracle that four humans got to Equestria from your world. You said yourself it would be impossible, but you beat it.”
Trey grinned, “So I can stop the impossible?”
I leaned in and our horns touched, “Well in a way, yes. Now let’s see what the damage is shall we?”
Trey closed his eyes and I did too. I focused my magic and I felt his magic combining with mine. It took a good five minutes before we could see what images were coming through our heads. Like the wind we were going across the ocean, but leading to a devastated city. The skies were all grayish Black and it was all gloomy. The images were showing dead bodies, rotted to the bone. We saw several glances of survivors trying to get by through the day. It was like that for several major cities and some small towns have the most survivors, but they are running out of food and fresh water. We hit the ocean and saw some of the animals were dying as well, algae that produced oxygen were dying in an alarming rate. Then we saw the volcanoes that were still pumping all that ash into the air and dumping a tons and tons of lava into the ocean.
The other countries that were by the beach were not so lucky I could sense they died drowning. What I saw next was a baby girl screaming for her mom and where she was. I could not take it and I pulled away.
I opened my eyes and I was now feeling the tears streaming down my cheeks. I look at Trey and he was crying too.
“M-My god… It has not changed at all. P-People a-are suffering…” Trey said covering his face with his hoof.
“Trey…” I said wiping away the tears.
“I-I want to help… But how? I cannot and leave them there… You understand right Luna?” he asked.
I walked up to him and hugged him, “We will find a way to do something. For now this is the only place that we can get images of your world into our heads. I think it is going to take every ounce of magic we have to help.”
Trey wiped his tears and sniffed, “You really think so?”
“Hey, if you were able to stop the impossible, then I think we have a chance.” I said.
“Alright. Sorry I brought you here to get sad and gloomy, but now I am at your service!” he said standing up tall.
I looked at his body and I wondered what I could do to him, “Hmmm…”
Trey leaned into my ear and whispered, “You know it is our first time having it in the outdoors?”
I smiled, “Of course Trey and were going to fuck like the wild animals we are.”
Trey lick his lips, “Oh I know you would love that.”
I walked around and knelt down behind him started to lick his dick. Then something rustling in the bushes interrupting our time alone. I stopped in fear and stood straight up, sprinted to stand right next to Trey and calmed down.
It was a good thing I stopped too because we saw Twilight coming out of the bushes. Why was she here? Was she spying on us? Did she just show up? I looked at her pack and it had a pair of binoculars in it.
“Were you spying on us again?” I asked.
“W-What do you mean s-spying on you?” she asked.
Trey cleared his throat, “Twilight just give us the news.”
“R-Right. A letter just came in from Chrysalis and she just unearth something deep underground her own castle. Lately she had been getting surges of dark magic and she is trying to keep that away. She hired some miners and unearthed something with a colorful cage.” She reported.
“Oh my sweet Celestia!” Trey shouted.
“You mean that could be the past guardians who made that cage that is still holding Nemesis?” Luna asked.
“It could be!” Trey said.
“What do you mean guardians? You talking about Star swirled the bearded short story? Hmm… That would be a possibility and if it is true then you need to tell her to stop the mining.” She said.
“Luna, I know I said we were going to be alone, but Equestria might be in danger again.” Trey said holding my hoof.
I took a deep breath, “You better make it up, or else you will regret it you hear me?”
He nodded, “Thank you!” He then kissed me on the cheek and spread his wings and flew off to the direction towards the Chrysalis Empire.
It was now Twilight and I now and she had a little smirk on her face.
“So. What were you guys going to do in the Everfree?” she asked.
“Um. Seeing how Trey’s world is doing. It looks like it have not recovered at all and he feels sad about it.” I said.
“Uh huh. After you did that, you said something like bucking like wild animals? I never knew you became so kinky.” She said.
“Oh just shut it Twilight Sparkle!” I said.
“Maybe I can have a piece of-”
“You are too young for a Polygamy and you have your Flash for your needs.”
“Flash is not my boyfriend or my partner.”
“Oh I would not say that the Flash you know here in Equestria, but I was told by Trey that you like the ‘human’ Flash.” I said.
Twilight was speechless, “H-How?”
I smiled, but then I got a weird surge in my body and I puked on the ground.
The puke was clear, “Oh know…”
“Luna are you alright?” Twilight asked.
‘Maybe I should not have Trey cum in me that last time.’ I thought.
“Twilight?”
“Yes, Luna?”
“I need to go to the hospital.”
Transformation II (First Draft)
“Hah, hah.” I said trying to catch my breath.
The train was so insane that we could not go to the bathroom at all. We stopped at the Crystal Empire and I decided to walk by myself to get some air. Sometimes a girl needs her privacy time and this was a great hour to do this before we go back to hell’s train.
Seriously you would think that Trey would invent more comfortable seats because my back still hurts from rubbing against the metal in the seat. The spot it rubbed at was almost the bottom of my backbone. I did not care because it was covered with my shirt. Besides the ponies would not mind… Wait…
I saw a lot of ponies were crystal, like they were all glazed. I saw some small crystal ponies playing and going past me like I was one of them. I looked around and saw a crystal heart spinning in the bottom center of the tall tower letting out an aura of light around it.
I decided to walk there due to my curiosity. It looked so beautiful and I heard someone clearing her throat making me jump. I turned around and it was a pink Alicorn looking at me like I was intruding on something.
“Who are you?” she asked.
“Um… I am the human Zoey which was turned into a crystal Guardian. My friends and I are going to the Chrysalis Empire for our vacation.” I said.
She smiled, “I know silly. Trey informed me about your visit on the new steam train. Which we are all grateful for.”
‘You call ‘that’ grateful?’ I thought.
“Anyway where are your friends?” she asked.
“Probably puking out their crystal bit.” I said under my breath.
“What was that?”
I cleared my throat, “I mean they are wait for the train to recharge. They are really anxious about going to the Chrysalis Empire.”
She giggled, “Well, let me introduce myself. My name is Princess Cadance rightful ruler and peacemaker of the Crystal Empire.”
“Nice to meet you Cadance.” I said.
“I believe I can see your friends are coming this way.”
“What do you mean-” I was ambushed by Gaitou, Hatchi and Naki by our tickle sneak attack we used to do in middle school.
I could not stop laughing. Even though we were made out of Crystal’s we can still feel ticklish feelings. Finally they stopped and Gaitou lifted me up with his hand to my feet.
“This is what you get for leaving us.” Naki said putting her hands on her hips.
“Why would you leave us and talk to Princess Cadance? Having love issues already?” Hatchi joked.
“Oh god. I hope not!” Gaitou said.
We all laughed it was a good thing that we are just enjoying ourselves to the fullest.
Then Cadance cleared her throat to get our attention, “Well it seems everyone is here. I would like to tell you to have a great time at the Chrysalis Empire.”
“Before we go… I have a question.” Hatchi asked.
“Yes what was it?” she asked.
“Why are there barely any changelings at Ponyville, Crystal Empire or at Canterlot?” he asked.
I wondered about that too. Were they being treated alright with the new law installed? I was curious to find out what the Princess of the Crystal Empire would like to say about this.
Cadance sighed, “We have not seen them ever since the law was passed. I mean we see some here and there, but not around the Empire or the small towns like Ponyville. So it is a mystery.”
“So you have no idea?” I asked.
She shook her head, “I even tried to welcome the changelings to the Empire with a banner which is still being hung up at the train station.”
“Perhaps they are in disguise. They are called Changelings for a reason.” Gaitou said.
“Yes that maybe true, but there would be duplicates of the same pony roaming around and they do not was to cause mischief.” She said.
We were silent for about several minutes and when Naki decided to open her mouth. I mean I love as a friend, but when she ask about personal questions. I tend to get annoyed by her attitude.
“I have a question to ease the atmosphere of the conversation.” She said.
“Ask away.” She said.
I braced for impact. ‘Please do not be inappropriate about this.” I thought.
“Your husband is the leader of the Royal Guards right?” she asked.
“Yes that is true and he is a lovable husband.” Cadance said.
“So is he good in bed?” Naki said
Oh my fucking god… I knew it. I knew she was going to say something like that. Now she is going to consider her as a weirdo.
“Why that is odd for you to ask, but I would have to say…” she stopped and levitated Naki’s ear and my ear to her mouth. Then she continued, “He is actually very good in bed. If you want the details I can give this piece of paper and we can mail each other.”
She let us go and Gaitou and Hatchi were confused, but were talking like best of buds and then I heard the announcement: ‘The Train is leaving in fifteen minutes! I repeat the Train is leaving in fifteen minutes.’
“Alright guys lets go. Next stop the Chrysalis Empire.” I said.
“Do we have to go?” Hatchi groaned.
I put my hands on my hips, “Now come on it is only about two hours away.”
Naki put her arm around Hatchi’s shoulder, “Besides it is a straight shot. No more curves!”
Gaitou dragged Hatchi towards the Train station while Cadance gave us the slip of paper that had her address on it and she winked.
“Good bye Cadance. Have fun with Shining Armor!” Naki waved at Cadance.
She waved back and giggled, “I will!”
Before I turned my back, I saw a white Unicorn with a shield as his cutie mark walk right beside her and gave her a kiss. That made me smile and I ran up to Gaitou and did the same. I kissed his warm lips and at first he was surprised, but he kissed back.
“What’s gotten into you?” he asked.
“I think this place would be great for a vacation just the two of us.” I said.
I heard something like a jet coming towards me and it was Trey. By the time I turned around he was coming at me full speed and I blacked out.
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I was dreaming about the convention on where I got knocked out. Some more memories were coming in and they made me change the way I think of Bronies now. I was knocked out because I knocked myself out. When everybody was leaving out of the panel I tripped on the chair which was not moved by anybody and I hit my head on the top metal piece of the chair. It was my own mistake. I saw several glimpse of Trey picking me up and taking me to the first aid area. Then it faded.
I awoke at a dark place, but when my eyes adjust it was a train station. I looked up at the sky and it was covered in dark vines. I saw the floor was pure black wood and I saw Trey looking at me which made me jump out of my seat.
“What is everybody and pony making me want to jump?!” I shouted.
“Glad to see you are awake and well.” Trey said.
I got into a sitting position and sighed, “Where are we?”
“We are the Chrysalis Empire and yes I know everything is all dark and that is how the changelings like it.”
“Why are you here anyway?” I asked.
“Queen Chrysalis found something and I am here to check it out.”
I need to tell him about that convention, “Trey. Do you remember about going to a Convention at Japan?”
“Why yes. I told Luna about this. Why you asked?”
“You helped a girl who was knocked out and took her to the first aid area.”
“Did Luna tell you this?”
“Yes she did and I happen to be the girl that you were carrying.”
He paused and was zoned out thinking about what I just said, “So you are the girl who was knocked out and I carried you to the first aid center?”
I nodded, “It made me change my mind about Bronies.”
“So I finally get to meet the girl who I saved. How does it feel find out?” he asked.
“It makes me happy and makes me want to do this.”
I leaned in and pecked his cheek and I jumped out of my seat.
I leaned in smiling, “Thank you, Trey for what you did.”
He was stunned and was overwhelmed by the peck on the cheek.
I winked and giggled. Then I made my way towards my friends and was waving goodbye to a stunned Trey.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 24: Human Part One
Well that certainly surprised the hell out of me. Zoey telling me that she was the one I rescued during that convention? Telling me thank you for everything and changed her point of view of Bronies. I now feel happy about myself. I just guided, with a little help, a person out of the darkness and into the light. That kiss on the cheek was a payment of my guidance.
I trotted around the area of the Chrysalis Empire and it was beautiful. In a weird kind of way. You know the nightmare before Christmas? The town was like that and the changelings were prospering with other ponies, unicorns and Pegasus. I made my way to the castle which was getting a remodel because it scared the living shit out of her subjects. She is really trying to go for change.
I made it to the castle doors and one of the changeling guards walked up to me.
“It is nice to see you Sir Trey. Queen Chrysalis will be waiting for you at the garden.” He said.
Garden? Wow. She is really trying get serious about change. Before she did not even have a garden. All she had was a fountain pumping black water and dying plants. When I entered the garden everything was all green and there were all kinds of flowers and the fountain is now pumping out fresh purified and clear water.
“Like what you see?” I heard a voice behind me and it was Chrysalis is a Royal Armor dress.
“I do like the changes and you have certainly improved the last time I met you.” I said.
“Yes, but it was all in the past. Now would you like to have tea with me?” she asked.
I complied with the idea. I was still exhausted trying to catch the next train before coming here. So having a drink would sooth my taste buds to feel energized. I sat down and she levitated her tea pot to pour the cup of tea and I saw her aura color was a very light green. Before she had very dark green when she was evil and enraged and now with it changed I can sense that there is peace in her body.
“I have to address something before we talk about the ‘basement’” I said.
She gave me the cup of tea and I levitated it so I can take a drink. The taste of the tea was amazing, a little bit of herbs, honey then some sugar was all the right balance. ‘Note to self: get tea recipe from Chrysalis.’ I thought.
“What is it you would like to talk about?” she asked.
“Why are your subjects not going outside your Empire? I got this information from myself, Twilight, Celestia and Cadance. So I was just wondering why?” I asked.
She finished her tea in her cup, set it aside and got up.
She sighed, “The truth is that they are scared to go outside.”
“Come again?”
“Ever since you passed that law that all Changelings and ponies alike are equal they are somehow attached to this place and not wanting to leave. Which I found peculiar. So I found the source of what was controlling my subjects and found that Rainbow Gate made out of Crystal.” She said.
“It must be the guardians seal becoming weak then.” I said.
“What do you mean?”
I explained to her what I told Zoey and the others and she was shocked.
“You mean I could become evil again? I really do not mind the power, but I do not want to become evil.” She said shyly.
I raised an eyebrow, “Did Nemesis get in contact with you?”
“Yes he did and he was menacing and growing in power. He might become more powerful than you Trey. I also did not listen to him at all and he went away saying, ‘I was not worthy.’”
“It is a good thing that you did not listen to him and followed him and I do not care about who is stronger here. I want you to show me what the state of the seal is.”
“Very well come this way.”
I followed her to the basement of the castle leading to a construction of a mine leading deeper and deeper though centuries of ground and dirt compacted into stone to bury this evil than might be coming back.
She stopped at a door with an enchanted spell on it and turned to face me.
“I can let you through for a little while, this spell is supposed to keep out the dark mist that is covering the area. It consumed some of the changelings and caused some accidents. They raged without event thinking.” She said.
“This is the embodiment of pure evil itself and I cannot blame for innocent lives being manipulated to do evil. Please I need to see this for myself.” I said.
She sighed and opened the door, “You have thirty minutes, not for any longer.”
I bowed and entered the door; then she closed it behind me.
It was pitch black and I held my breath. I continued and activated my light spell and I could see about 5 feet, but it was really thick. Then I hit my head on a crystal bar.
“Ouch.” I said.
My horn touched the gate and it lit up the room which got rid of the dark mist. Then I heard some rumbling from the other side.
Then I heard it speak, “Hmmm…”
“Hello Nemesis.” I said.
“Funny. I did not expect a male Alicorn to approach me like this. You have some big balls little one. The Changelings energy is quite delicious and helpful for getting me stronger” He said.
Then I saw his dark red eyes open and it was the color of blood red. He showed his teeth when he smiled and they were not white they were dark grey. Making this guy really bad news. This also explains why the Changelings have been staying here becaue their energy is being slowly sapped away.
He continued, “Well this gate is almost broken. I can make this world mine again with the guardians all gone.”
‘He must not know about the reincarnation of the guardians so I better be quiet about that.’ I thought.
“Let me tell you something. I want to hear your story about how you were born into this world.” I asked.
He laughed at what I said, “You come in here to find out about the damage about the gate and now you want some chit chat? This is going to be fun.”
I sat down and waited for him to speak, “It started around fifteen centuries ago, and I was born to take this world after I defeated my sister. My sister was my total opposite and we loved to fight. We competed in wrestling to see who the ultimate one was. Was it light or was it dark. Soon I was able to kill my sister and took over this land. Then she created those fucking guardians who could defeat me and soon sealed me away into this gate. Before they finished me off I sent several seeds of evil into the ground so innocent bystanders can become evil with a purpose. I sensed some of the seeds went to another world into, I believe a lot of volcanoes.”
I dropped my mouth, “Y-you were the one who destroyed my Planet?”
“Hmm?”
“You said that your seeds went into some volcanoes and where was this world?”
“I believe it was called earth. When the gate started to crack it created some disasters over the centuries, but when the gate lost this bar of crystal to your left it probably ended it.” He said smiling.
“You son of a bitch.”
He was laughing, “What are you upset for? Why do you care about this planet anyway?”
I gritted my teeth, “Because I used to be at that Planet! I was saved and teleported to this world. You are a terrible monster!”
He grinned, “I try. Let me turn that anger and amplify that shall we?”
Some darkness leaked out of the fence and I absorbed it and turned into my Yin Yang form.
“Well you certainly have huge surprises up your sleeves. I have never seen a pony or any other creature take on this darkness and convert it to magic, but you see this is not dark magic. This is pure evil darkness.”
I felt my energy getting stronger with rage and I was crouching down from this pain of this darkness. I tried to walk towards the door, but fell right next to the bar that had fallen to the ground. I saw my reflection of my face and I felt my heart beating slower, slower then I blinked and saw my eyes were blood red.
“Now become one with the darkness.” Nemesis said.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 25: Human Part Two
I black out for what seems like forever. I was thinking in light thoughts. ‘Stupid.’ I thought. I should have never absorbed the darkness, then again I have never thought that he was giving out darkness. ‘One stupid mistake.’ I thought.
Then there was a light and it took off the darkness that submerged me. It felt like I was able to breath. The light formed into a room and it looked familiar. I got up and I saw Lauren Faust as the Alicorn again, but she was in a mad mood.
I hung my head, “I used my magic for something evil and devious right?”
She sighed, “That’s the reason I am here.”
It was the agreement that we had when I first met her. I sacrificed my life to transform into an Alicorn and now I wasted it. She told me that male Alicorns can be prone to doing evil deeds. I believe that is what she trying to say. She held out the canvas and it started to glow.
“Wait.” I said.
The glowing stopped and she put it down to the side.
“I am listening.” She said.
“How can I become an Alicorn again? I really do not want to be human forever.” I asked tearing up.
She sighed again, but it was more a calm one, “I can change you back, but you have to prove yourself worth being a part of Equestria. There is nothing I can do.”
“Can you just change the rules?” I asked.
“If I did that then enemies can be able to break the rules as well and I have to follow them in order to keep balance.”
“What balance?!” I shouted.
“What?”
“You said to keep the balance and yet you are going to release Nemesis into the world you created?”
She was silent and said, “There is always a good tragedy in a story, but can be changed if it was directed to something else. That is all I am going to say to you.”
She raised her canvas again and it glowed. I fell to the ground and saw my picture of my Alicorn on the canvas. I felt my fingers, legs, head, mouth, nose, and body after three in a half years and I felt disoriented.
“Good bye Trey. Good luck on your Trek.” She said.
I closed my eyes and everything went black.
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I opened my eyes and the first thing I felt was pain in my back. The bed I was on, had rusty springs that were exposed. They were stabbing my back. I rolled off of the bed and landed on my hands and knees.
Wait. Hands and knees? I landed on my butt and looked at myself. It took me less than thirty seconds to figure out that I was human again.
I looked at my hands and feet, they were all scratched up and I was wearing my clothes that of when I die-
*COUGH* I got on my hands and knees again and started to cough violently and out came darkness puke and blood.
Wait, blood? I looked at my shirt and I still had the stab wounds of when I died.
“SHIT!!” I shouted in pain.
My brain prevented me from feeling this pain, because I was trying to get feeling in my legs and arms again. I crawled towards the gate which kept me inside the cell.
“Hello?! Anyone here?” I shouted.
There was a Changeling guard who came up to me, “So you finally woke up murderer.”
“Wait. My name is Trey and I was taken over by Nemesis and I blacked out. I do not remember anything I did and how I got here.” I said.
The changeling did not listen to what I said, but levitated a piece of paper that said: Report.
“On Tuesday around 3:00 pm, an Alicorn in full rage came out of the castle. It went into the city and cause many damages around the city. He then ran into a changeling child and beat it to death. It was only five months old said the parents. Then a beam of light from the sky came down and his the male Alicorn. It then transformed to a human, like the first human to come into Equestria Trey.” He said.
I was in horror. I killed a child? I made a violation in the law. Now the treaty has been violated and now here come the consequences! I hung my head and tears were streaming out of my eyes to the hard floor.
The guard continued, “Trey is now to be sentence to death due to his own treaty. The law is: He who should kill another pony or changelings will be sentenced to death. The murderer cannot heal his or her wounds because they are going to be put to death in any case. Trey your death was postpone because you were in a coma and now your sentence is today.”
I looked up at him, “What day is it?”
“It has been three months since that day and the crowd cannot wait.” He said.
“I can barely walk.” I said.
“Who said you would be walking?” he asked.
I felt myself being levitated into the air and was sat on a wheelchair which had straps to prevent me to move. When they strapped me they opened the double door and I heard rants, shouting, yelling of negativity towards me and for some reason I heard a voice.
‘That’s it feed me just a little more.’ said Nemesis.
‘You son of a bitch.’ I thought.
The changelings stopped the wheel chair and connected it to the ground to keep it from not moving. They put a board behind me and put on a metal helmet on my head with a sponge that was already wet inside. Great now I am in pain and getting wet from a sponge.
They continued to hook me up to wired and I recognized the wires. They were from my invention. It created electricity and it was being produced at the nearby river. The wires were connected the switch and it was off preventing my early death. I was going to die in the ponified electric chair.
“Today is going to be an unfortunate one.” It was Chrysalis, “I am reformed and follow the rules of the treaty that Trey made. There is nothing I can do to stop this. Celestia had the approval and I complied with her sayings.”
I looked to my right and there was Chrysalis, but she had red eyes… ‘Shit. If Chrysalis was being controlled she would have cleared my name, but I killed the child.’ I thought.
Before I started to cry I saw the kid right next to Chrysalis with red glowing eyes.
‘What the fuck?!’ I shouted in my head.
There was more shouting from the crowd and it was more furious. Most of it was about me and about Equestria itself.
“Now without a further ado. Flip the switch!” she shouted.
I closed my eyes and felt nothing, and I cleared my mind for what was about to happen.
‘Death to all. I am now free.’ Said Nemesis.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 26: Human Part Three
……….Ba-dump!
My first and maybe my last breath after Chrysalis flipped the switch.
………Ba-dump!
I heard my heart going slower, you know that moment when a person is about to die or when you are about to go into a car crash, everything goes in slow motions.
……..Ba-dump!
I think about Luna, Grace, Noah, Lily, Zoey, Gaitou, Hatchi, Celestia, every pony, Griffin and Equestria. I just could not say good-bye to them.
…….Ba-Dump!
I am about to go to heaven, mom, dad, and sister. I will see you soon.
……Ba-Dump!
‘You need to live!’ said a voice in my head.
I thought through my mind and saw my sister in plain sight. She was wearing the same clothes on the day I left her to go to the university.
‘What are you doing here?’ I asked
She just giggled, ‘You are not supposed to die.’
‘Did god send you?’ I asked.
She put her finger to her mouth, ‘Shhh! In a way yes!’
…..Ba-Dump!
‘I am about to die anyway. Why should I care?’ I asked
Then my own sister slapped me silly and I landed on the pitch black floor.
‘YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO DIE!!’ She shouted.
‘WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO?! I am not an Alicorn, I am human and I cannot fight Nemesis! He is clearly too strong for me to defeat!’
‘You idiot! Why did you think I made all of those art pieces?’
‘Art pieces?’
Then memories of her creating items started to flood in. The items started to make sense. What she made them, how she made them. All of them were supposed to activate to magic?
‘That is impossible! None of your art pieces were supposed to be part of this world! If you knew that your items held magic in them then why did you no-‘
I stopped yelling and the pendant that she gave me… The one that had all the princesses on it. I got on my knees.
….Ba-Dump!
‘No way… I did not teleport to Equestria by chance… It was through your pendant… I would of really had died if you did not give me…’ I was lost for words. Clover was the reason why I was able to be in Equestria in the first place.
She walked up to me and started to grow to my current age. I was not shocked, but what shocked me was she was hugging me. The tears would not stop streaming down my cheeks. She was real in my head hugging me and I felt my emotions go everywhere.
…Ba-Dump!
‘Time is running out. What was it that your wife Luna said to you?’ she asked.
I open my eyes and everything was still slow motion. I felt my tears on my cheeks and remembered what Luna said.
..Ba-Dump!
Clover and I said, “To stop the impossible!”
Before the electricity touched my helmet Celestia swooped down and fired a magic beam to the cable which broke the wiring. Some of the electricity touched my head and I got knocked out.
‘Thank you sister… I now know what to do.’ I said.
I did not hear a reply, but all I heard was her giggling in the distance and I could just make that my answer.
.Ba-Dump!
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I awaken on a soft bed this time and I heard ranting going on outside the door. I looked around and I was in my room, but it was my children’s room. I am back in Canterlot? I tried to lean forward and I saw that I was naked, but I was bandaged all up. I guess this was Luna’s doing.
I got out of my bed and saw a robe and put it on. I walked to the closet that had my items and searched through my backpack. I found my sister’s pendant and put it around my neck.
I smiled and hobbled towards the door.
“You are not allowed to get in!” Celestia shouted.
“But he is my husband! I demand to see him!” Luna shouted.
“I treated him and you should not see him in this state! This is final!” she said.
I opened the door and Luna sprinted towards the door and pushed me down to the ground.
“Ow!” I shouted in pain.
There right in front of me was Luna lying on top of me in tears.
“You… turned into a human?” she said choking up.
I nodded, “It was a false killing. Chrysalis said that I killed a child, but there was a mistake. The child did not die however, so I got my Alicorn transformation taken away by Faust because I used it for a dark purpose.”
She leaned her head down on my chest, “I heard your old wounds returned from my sister.”
“Yes, I was given the body which still had the stab wounds and your sister saved me from a death sentence that was fake. the reason why it was fake was because Nemesis was controlling all the Changelings in the Empire.” I said.
Then I felt something different from Luna. She was heavier than normal for some reason and she was smiling when I noticed.
“Trey we need to talk.” She said.
We both got up from the floor, I was still feeling wobbly from being a human once again and I just leaned on a wall to show that I really do not have balance yet.
I looked at Luna when she got up the only thing that was different was that her belly was…
“Luna… You are pregnant?” I asked.
She nodded and walked up to me, “Yes and it has been three months now and I have five to six months left until he or she is born.”
I gave her a hug, “You know you will not be able to fight with me.”
I felt tears coming down to my shirt, “It breaks my heart that I will not join you to fight Nemesis and-”
I stopped her there by giving her a kiss on the lips and she kissed back.
I let go of our lip lock, “Just trust me. I know a way to save this world and my world at the same time.”
Celestia cleared her throat to get our attention, “How are you supposed to do that exactly?”
Before I gave my answer I gave her a question, “How is your child? Was is a pony or something else?”
She shook her head, “If you must know it was a Unicorn filly and she is in the hospital. What is the answer of the question I gave you?”
I smiled, “I am just going to call it a theory.”
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I finally met up with Zoey and the others. We met at the Canterlot library and talked about where they have been. Zoey said that they were forced out of the town because of the Changelings holiday. The last thing that Zoey said disturbed me.
“When we were in the train I looked back and I thought I saw one of the Changelings had dark red eyes.” She said.
That put shivers into my spine, “I suppose that you did not believe her?”
I turned to face her friends and they shrugged at the statement.
“We thought that you were done with your business and we had to leave to they can celebrate their ‘Holiday’, but we never thought that Nemesis was taking over the Empire slowly. I could not even detect any dark magic.” Gaitou said.
“It’s not slowly it is now entirely. Nemesis is not letting out dark magic, but pure darkness. Something that we cannot absorb. I think we need to have more training in the orb in order to fight Nemesis. Celestia what is the report on Nemesis’s movements?”
Celestia levitated her letter from Twilight, “She says that it is taking over Hayseed Swamps and the Macintosh Hills (Look up Equestria maps it actually exists). It is taking over slowly, but it grows quickly when night time comes. I can keep the sun up to prevent Nemesis movements from continuing, but it will drain my magic. She also reports that Rainbow power is not, I repeat, is not working, but it is keeping Nemesis at bay.”
“Well we are so screwed!” Hatchi said putting his hands over his face.
“No, were not! We have to come up with something, right?” Naki said looking at me.
I sighed, “I met my dead sister while I was about to die. She told me that this pendant that I am wearing took me to Equestria. If she had not reminded me to keep it, I would have not been able to get here. I would be dead in the ocean somewhere.”
“Trey…” Luna said putting her hoof on my shoulder.
I continued, “Celestia, can you analysis this?”
I took off the pendant and Celestia took it and analyzed it, then she was shocked to what she found.
“You said that we are from a TV show correct?” she asked.
“Yes.” I answered.
“Then why… Why of all things is this pendant holding a magic that Alicorns cannot use?” she said.
“What do you mean sister?” Luna said analyzing the pendant.
“What makes it so powerful?” Zoey asked.
Luna dropped her mouth, “This has the power of over a million Alicorn magic maybe even greater also I can sense a bit of darkness… Why does it have that?”
I took the pendant away from her, “I never knew that this would have so much power and I am going to use this in my training so Nemesis and I can go head to head. Zoey, Hatchi, Gaitou, and Naki, you all need to fight Nemesis as the Crystal Guardians. Hold Nemesis for two days and I will come to fight.”
I heard Gaitou’s crystal knuckles crack and he also popped his neck, “Well, why did you not tell me this sooner? Let’s get started.”
The Guardians got up and followed Gaitou out of the room and Luna looked concerned.
“The Guardians… Are not going to make it… Are they?” Luna asked.
I sighed, “It is something we cannot predict. If they die in battle, then they can seal Nemesis again. If the story is fully true then we can use the shards from the battle that they lost and send them to my world… Thus restoring my world as well as yours.”
“I am not so sure of this.” Celestia said.
I looked at Celestia and Luna, “I will not let them die... I promise that. I will become… dare I say it… Stronger”
‘Yeah rip off and anime why don’t you Trey?’ I thought.
Celestia, Luna and I walked into the orb room and before I touched the orb I need to say a few things.
“Luna, take care of Grace, Noah and Lily. Tell them that Daddy is off training in the mountains. You can tell them the situation of Nemesis if they ask. Celestia, do not let your sister do anything reckless, you hear me?” I asked.
Celestia nodded and Luna did the same.
Then before I touched the orb, I hear a familiar voice.
“TREY!!! YOU GET OVER HERE!!!” said Yert
‘Wait?! YERT!?’ I shouted in my head.
He rammed into me as a Unicorn and stabbed through my stomach. My back and his horn touched the orb. He and I were being teleported into the orb. I knew that Luna and Celestia were going to follow, but the pendent started to glow and it teleported them out of the room.
‘Damn it all! I cannot catch a fucking break!’ I thought.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 28: Grace's Moment
Jim being extracted out of my conscience was the most painful experience I have ever had. After Yert left and Jim disconnected from my brain, I blacked out. Next thing I knew I was in bed with Lily, and Noah in the covers at home. I was the first one out of bed trying not to wake my siblings to see what happened to Jim.
I walked close to the door and hear my mother and Jim talking.
“Sorry I misjudged you. You have the same energy as Yert did, but once I hurt you, you did not fight back. I now sensed that you made yourself a conscience and now have a heart.” Mom said.
“Thank you, Princess Luna. I was about to be sealed into Yert, but thanks to your daughter, Grace, she was able to give me enough magic to be my own being.” He said.
I really cannot believe it! My conscience became a real life pony! It is just like the Ponyocchio (Pinocchio ponified version) story! Only it kind of reversed, which is very confusing, but who cares! He is here! He is real! I can love him!
‘Wait… I was in love with my conscience… Now with Jim who is now a boy? Tell me this is a dream because I do not want to get out!’ I thought.
What? I am a confused child and the oldest who wants a boyfriend. I am still confused about falling in love or having a crush rather, but I feel that I have a crush on Jim and I mostly in love with him... I am so confused, but that is how I felt towards Jim.
I heard my mom getting close to the door and I stepped aside to let her in.
She was surprise I was up first, “Are you feeling alright Grace?”
“I am fine… I was going to ask you what happen to the C.M.C.” I asked
She sighed, “I sent a message to Granny smith and she replied, ‘Just try to get better Grace.’ Apple Bloom and the other understood that you were in a ‘sick’ situation.”
“You mean you lied?”
“Yes.”
“It was about Jim right?”
“Yes.”
“Can I speak to him?”
“No you may not until you answer some of my questions.”
“What would that be?”
She was hesitant to asked, but gulped it down, “Are you and Jim a couple?”
I blushed to be honest, “I-uh. I really do not know… I do like him; he and I would cuddle when he was in my conscience when I was scared.”
She raised an eyebrow and I sighed, “Ok and maybe a whole lot when I wanted to. Only because he was warm and sweet.”
“You are perfectly aware that he used to be part of Yert that went his separate ways. I do not know if he will change into Yert, but it really confirmed my suspicions about him because I-” she paused in mid-sentence when I interrupt.
“I overheard; I know you were trying to protect us and I understand.”
I leaned in to a hug and I hugged her back.
She whispered, “Just don’t expect too much from Jim. He just got out of your head and is new to this world. What he and you do is none of my business and I will try to convince your dad about this situation.”
‘Wait. Did I just have my mother’s approval?’ I asked in my mind.
She winked at me and walked towards the siblings. I was dumbfounded and I walked into the kitchen to have some cake. When I was confused, happy, sad or any other emotion that would come out of nowhere, I have a slice of cake.
“Could I have a slice? I am starving.” Jim said behind me.
“WAH!” I shouted and jumped almost dropping my cake.
“Whoa! Did I scare you?” he asked.
I turned around and while I was levitating my plate of cake, both of our noses touched. I blushed uncontrollably.
“Are you alright, I can sense you having a slight fever.” He said.
I shook my head, “No. No. You just surprised me that is all and what kind of cake do you want?”
“What do you have?”
I rolled my eyes, “Anything you can think of. Pinkie Pie spoiled us with cake that can last for a life time and made a cake freezer room for us three. So go ahead think of a flavor of your desire.”
I took him to the freezer and opened it up. Inside is what I described and Jims face started to glow like he saw heaven for the first time.
“It is beautiful.” He said.
“Ahem… I do not want to rush, but dad said not to have the freezer open for too long.”
“Why is that?”
“It is one of the flaws of his stream tech. Once the room is open the cold generator gets this room and maybe the whole palace in ice. You might say we had an ice age in here.”
He laughed, “I understand and I want chocolate chip with white Icing.”
I pointed, “Fifth row second one on your left and the second cake will be the one you are looking for. (For those who do not know how much cake is in that room, there is thirty cakes with 6 rows of five and yes, Pinkie Pie went over board)”
Jim gabbed his slice and walked out of the cold. I closed the freezer and we levitated our plates on to the table and sat down next to each other.
He started to eat his cake slowly then eats it in a few bites, “It was delicious.”
“Wow! You are hungry aren't you?”
“Well I was born out of your conscience not too long ago and this cake should hold me over until dinner.”
I could not help, but stare at Jim’s face and his body. He looked so much better out of my conscience and I looked down to his flank and his cutie mark was like my dad’s, but it was the White side of the Yin Yang.
“Grace… You are doing it again.” He said.
I shot up my face and continued to eat my cake quickly.
“So, what with the cutie mark being the same as my dad?” I said gulping down the cake.
“I rather not-” he stopped.
He stopped for two reasons; one out of nowhere I kissed him on the cheek and two, I was holding his hoof.
“Grace… Why did you?” he asked being confused.
I sighed, “Was it too soon?”
“I liked it, but why? Do you like me?”
I rolled my eyes, “I would not be kissing you if I did not, silly.”
“I am so confused, first you cuddle with me, which was fine. Then once I am into this world you like me… I am not accustomed to ‘love’. So what I am asking of you is, can we take it slow?” he asked.
I was glad he said that. I also confused why I liked him as well, even though I was the one who kissed him.
I sighed and put my hoof on his shoulder, “Of course we can Jim.”
Transformation II (First Draft)
I will admit, that Jim scared the life out of me. I think I have grey hairs growing in my flowing blue mane. The reason for this is because Jim showed up levitating my children in the air and I sense that he was Yert. When he placed down the children I shot a laser down at him and he took it full on.
When I stopped he was crouching down holding his stomach shivering. I was hesitant at first, but fired two more times. When I realized he was not fighting back and was holding back his tears, I stopped myself and levitated him towards my room, on top of my bed so I can have a talk with him.
“WHO ARE YOU THOU BEAST!!!” I shouted.
He shivered, “I am not Yert… My… Name is Jim.”
I realized that he was very hurt and decided to heal him to a point so he can speak.
“Thank you.” He said.
“Now who are you and why are you similar to Yert and why did your bring my children here?”
He cleared his throat and stayed on the bed still crouched, “My name is Jim. I was once a piece of Yert inside of Grace. Grace kept on talking to me and I became separate from him. When he attack he knocked out Lily and Noah. He tried to extract me, but your daughter used her own magic mixed with Yerts and I was born. If you look at my cutie mark it is a Yin Yang, but the white side.”
I looked at his cutie mark and he was not lying. I sat on the ground and sighed. ‘If he is telling the truth then I should not fear of him. He is not attacking back so I guess he is a good pony or unicorn.’ I thought.
I sighed again and levitated him to the floor and healed him up to full health.
“I am sorry for attacking you like that.” I said.
He uncurled from his crouching position and stood up tall, “I know I understand. You would attack me anyway if I was Yert or was part of him.”
We were talking as we headed towards Grace, Lily and Noah’s room. Then I mention the living accommodations and he mentioned he needed a bath to get rid of his smell and again I said I was sorry that I misjudged him. He told me thank you and he was formal about it and he walked off. Then I opened the door and saw Grace standing right next to the door hearing our conversation.
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After the talk we just had I check on Lily and Noah. They were still sleeping soundly and I kissed their foreheads and went towards the kitchen.
I saw Grace and Jim sitting next to one another and she kissed him on the cheek. I overheard that Jim would like to take things slow and I decided not to interrupt their talk. Even though I was hungry to feed the unborn baby inside me; I decided to head to the bath and relax at the hot tub.
I undressed my armor, which was enlarged for my belly (It was made for me when I was first pregnant with Grace), then I soaked myself in soothing warm water letting my nerves relax from worrying about Nemesis.
Even though Trey is fighting Yert inside the Orb, I cannot help it, but to worry. He was stabbed through all the way by Yerts Unicorn horn… Wait… How did he become a pony? Jim was on about Yert being spread into pieces and now I worry who would be the Unicorn the Yert took over?
This made me get irritated and I put my muzzle in the water making bubbles to cheer me up. It wasn’t working at all. It just made me think even more. Twilight and the others have been fighting Nemesis with the everlasting Rainbow Power, but it is not destroying him at all.
She mention how her friends have been coping with it and it is very impressive. Fluttershy got her ‘big’ animal friends to fight the mind controlled Changelings. Rainbow Dash kicking clouds and manipulating the weather into Nemesis to put him off course. Rarity using her Rainbow infused powered fabrics to wrap around Nemesis to create a Perimeter to detect if Nemesis is getting out of the circle. Apple Jack using zap apples (It is a pain to see them go after the harvest) to throw as bombs (Don’t ask me, the zap apples with Rainbow Power are really complicated) to dissipate Nemesis. Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie, she got Cheese Sandwiches help and are using the gigantic cannon used in Rainbow Dashes party, but has been modified to shoot Rainbow Powered cannon balls. Twilight being Twilight, she is researching all she can at the castle and going to help her friends at the same time to find out how to stop Nemesis.
It was all a big mess really. Now Gaitou, Zoey, Hatchi and Naki have joined in the fight. The last letter I received after they showed up, Nemesis was pissed and had grown bigger. Now they are working harder and faster to prevent him to grow more. Gaitou absorbed some rainbow power and he was literally punching Nemesis, but was almost slashed in half. Hatchi used the elements to prevent Nemesis to grow anymore, but it was all in vain. Nemesis injured him and he is currently healing at Twilight’s Castle. Naki was furious and used Zoey to amplify (with Rainbow Power) to fire a huge laser almost depleting the darkness, but again it started to grow again, but it got the fabric perimeter smaller though. It was improvement.
I sighed and decided to get out because I felt tired after soaking for about an hour. I used my magic to dry myself and got dressed in my night gown which was switched by my personal guards. I decided to stop by the orb room to check on Trey.
Then I heard sobbing in Petra’s room. She got back from her vacation from Ponyville and I wondered why she was back early. I decided to walk in there and Petra was on her bed crying and I wondered what happened.
“Why are you crying Petra?” I asked.
“IT’S ALL MY FAULT!!!” she shouted.
I walked up and sat down right next to her.
“What do you mean it’s all your fault?”
“I was being manipulated to have sex with Trey!!!”
“What do you me-” I stopped and saw the dildo.
“I’m sorry…” she said streaming tears.
“What did you do?” I said.
She tried to calm herself, but was still crying, “I got Trey’s sperm and inserted it inside me… I don’t know why. It felt like I was being manipulated by some sort of dark entity.
“It must have been Yert’s piece.” Jim said coming in the room.
“Where is Grace?” I asked, I did not want her to get involved with this.
“She is asleep with her sister and brother. Anyway I was going to say that Yert had two pieces. He must have used Petra to control a child. Did your child come out of a hospital early?”
Petra was confused by Jim’s appearance, but nodded nevertheless.
“I thought so. Yert took control of Your child which was a Unicorn and tried to take me out so he can have full power. I sensed he was near this place, but he is not anymore.”
“Wait, so you got pregnant by Trey’s ‘used’ sperm?!” I said.
“Please… I did not want this to happen.” She said burying her face in a pillow.
I sighed, “Well Trey is going to have to talk to you two when he is back.”
“They do not have to.” Said a voice.
I shot my glance at the door and it was Trey in full health, but still was a human.
“T-Trey… Y-You’re a human… Again?” said a shaking Petra.
Trey looked at Jim and patted his head, “All I have to say is thank you for getting to Grace’s side. I will talk to her later.” He cleared his throat, “Upon defeating Yert, I got some memories that Petra was in fact manipulated to get herself pregnant because of Yert’s piece. She never intended it… Did you?”
I looked at Petra and she whimpered, “All I wanted was sex and your love Trey. That is why we have a Polygamy?”
I nodded my head, “She is telling the truth.”
“Alright. Hate to cut this short, but I need to introduce someone who was in the orb with me.” He said opening the door wide open.
There was a baby colt Unicorn walking inside the room. Once he saw Petra he started to tear up.
“Mommy?” he asked.
“Chris…” Petra covering her mouth.
Chris ran towards Petra and hugged her while he was crying. Petra was crying as well.
“I was so scared!!!” he whimpered.
This made me water up and I decide to leave the room with Trey and Jim to let those two have a mother and son bonding.
“It was beautiful that you saved the child Trey.” I said.
He sighed, “Yert controlled him so he could defeat me. He is a sick bastard, but he is now sealed up in my mind forever.”
“How can you be so sure?” Jim asked.
“It was like last time I sent him into my world, but that did not work. So I decided to seal him up in my head for good measure.” He said.
“Trey before you go...” I said, but I was giving a kiss and was kissed back.
“You waited for that didn’t you?” he asked.
I nodded, “Yes. Now I am better.”
He looked at Jim, “Don’t get any ideas.”
Jim blushed and ran away towards his room.
Trey and I giggled and kissed again.
“I have to go now. I will be back. I promise.” He said.
“You will get an award for this after the package has been delivered.” I said.
“I will look forward to that.” He said.
Trey kissed my cheek and walked off towards Twilight and the others who were waiting for him to fight off Nemesis.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 30: Trey's Theory
‘Fuck.’ I thought.
Hatchi is healing his injuries from Nemesis, Gaitou is fighting Nemesis out of his ability. Naki has been using me to fire amplified beams from the sun. All I have been doing is helping out when people wanted to and Nemesis is not letting up.
“STUPID GUARDIANS!!!” Nemesis shouted.
Twilight showed up to supply more information about Nemesis and I joined in the conversation. Twilight was sweating, Rarity hoofs had scratches from sewing, Applejack was running out of Zap apples and was tired of throwing them, Pinkie Pie and Cheese were out of ammo, Fluttershy’s animals were injured and some of them chickened out, and Rainbow Dash was getting tired and was lying on the ground breathing heavily.
“What did you get?” I asked Twilight.
She shook her head, “I cannot get anymore Rainbow Power to help us out. I am now going to pray to Celestia that Trey will come and help. I found no information about Nemesis nor how to defeat him except the story the Trey found.”
“So that is a no…” I asked.
“Yes and I am sorry. We tried our best, but the only thing we can do now is to use our remaining strength.” Twilight said.
“You have my support Twilight.” Apple Jack said.
“I agree with Apple Jack.” Said Rarity.
“What about ammo?” Pinkie Pie asked.
“Pinkie we can convert it into a Naki cannon.” I said.
“Alright! I am in!” she shouted.
“I will try to get the animals that are willing to fight.” Fluttershy said.
“You… got… me into this… I might as well finish it!” Rainbow Dash said on her second wind.
They all let in their hoofs to the middle and I got my hand in there as well while my friends were fighting.
“Let’s do this!” Twilight said.
“Want me to join the fight?” said a voice.
I looked behind me and there was Trey standing there with a green crystal armor covering from his left hand to his shoulder.
“What happened to you?” I asked
“Well, it is about time you showed up. Have any idea how to stop Nemesis?” Twilight interrupted.
Trey smiled, “I have an idea, just give it a theory and I met up with Hatchi that is why I look like partial green crystal human..”
“I love your theories!” Pinkie Pie shouted.
“Indeed, they are mostly correct.” Rarity said.
“Mostly? Like all the time!” Apple Jack said.
Trey walked up to me and said, “Give me your hand and trust me.”
At first I thought it was weird, but I touched him and the crystal armor changed from green to my color of purple.
“Well that answers my question.” I said.
“What happened to you?” Fluttershy asked.
“I used this power to have a semi-adaptation to the Guardians. Where is Naki and Gaitou?” he asked.
“We are right here.” Gaitou said touching his back.
Then Trey absorbed the crystal and turned it into crystal armor for the chest and head.
“Whoa! That was cool!” Gaitou said.
“What happening?” Naki asked touching Trey on the shoulder.
Then he absorbed Naki’s pink crystal and finished off the crystal full set Armor.
Trey smiled, “Wait until you have seen this.”
He started to float into the air and like a rocket he flew towards the Nemesis Cloud.
Rainbow Dash's mouth dropped, “I think I found my competition.”
Even though it was a great joke, but everyone and everypony just giggled slightly, because we were waiting to see what Trey was going to do.
Something amazing happened, when Trey entered the Nemesis Perimeter, the darkness was dissipating and was not coming back. The next thing I knew is that I saw Trey at the distance without his armor. The Nemesis darkness was disappearing, but for what reason?
I looked closer to see what he was doing and I saw the Crystal armor absorbing Nemesis and the next thing I heard was Nemesis screaming which made our ears sting a whole lot.
I closed my eyes and when opened I saw nothing but clear skies and the sun hanging for the mid-afternoon of the 5th day without a night? I lost count.
The darkness was being absorbed into the crystal armor and when it was all inside nothing happened. The others and I were concerned and we walked towards Trey and he held out his arm signaling that something was about to happen.
“WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?!” Nemesis shouted.
Trey smiled, “Theory confirmed.”
“What do you mean Trey?” I asked.
“Do tell.” Twilight said.
Trey laughed, “I just made Nemesis into a human and once he breaks the crystal armor he will stay in a human form. This pendant told me this information and I had to practice to control this power to get it right.”
“That is impressive.” Gaitou said.
“Though I do not like the fashion of the armor.” Rarity said.
The group looked at Rarity and she whimpered, “Well if it’s to stop the evil then I guess it can pass for now.”
Trey sighed and I heard Nemesis breaking out of the armor.
“YOU… WILL… PAY FOR THIS!!!” he shouted.
Trey basically degraded him into a human state, but he would still be powerful to take on all of us. As the armor was cracking, there was no darkness seeping out and that was a relief. The cracking was spreading from the head down into the chest then all the way down to his feet.
Trey held out his hand and made a gun with his fingers.
“What are you doing now?” I asked.
“One last part to get some weakness into Nemesis.” He said.
His hand was getting darker and darker like he was severely burnt and then he said, “Bang!”
He moved his finger and fired a black beam from his index finger. Then I hear the beam said, “TREY!! YOU BASTARD!!!”
The black beam hit the crystal armor making it all distorted. What was happening?
“Was that Yert?” Gaitou asked.
“Why yes it is and you know what? We just made Nemesis a human and that uses dark magic and not so much darkness. So tell me it was a good idea?” Trey said hold out a fist.
Gaitou pound it and said, “Well it is a great punishment for him.”
"What will happen now?" I asked.
"Yert's dark magic will merge with the darkness. The darkness will turn into dark magic, meaning, we do not have to worry about being consumed by darkness from Nemesis's touch. Yert may die, but this is what was coming to him for trying to destroy others to get to me." he said.
Naki said, “Well it serves him right for what he did to you.”
Twilight interrupted us, “Well I hate to cut the conversation short, but the armor is about to shatter and we need to be ready.”
“You're right. Trey you ready?” I asked.
Trey tightens his fists, “Yeah. I am ready…. I am not going to lose.”
Then his body started to glow and it stopped. I looked at him and he was all golden on one side and the other side was silver.
“Again… Awesome.” Gaitou said.
“You’re telling me!” Rainbow Dash said.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 31: Trey vs. Nemesis
When the crystal armor broke, I was ready for the fight. I know sending Yert into Nemesis was a risk, but it was all worth it. I could sense Yert trying to gain control of Nemesis, but was being pushed back. Anyway Nemesis cannot use darkness anymore thanks to Yert.
I did one step and took a deep breath. I released and I was right in from of Nemesis’s body and threw my first punch right into his face.
“GAH!” he grunted as he flew into the air.
I jumped and I was right in front of him again, this time in the air and threw two more punches. One at the gut, one at the face to make him go backward in the air. I took a breath and I teleported behind him and combined my fists and punched him into the ground creating a crater. When the dust settled, I realized that I was about ten feet in the air.
I landed on my two feet like Goku would do in Dragon Ball Z and waited for my opponent to recover.
Nemesis was panting, trying to recover from the pain, “Out of all the years of fighting, I have never seen a human transform me into one; just so he could take advantage of me.”
I saw his eyes were turning from white into red and his body grew into pitch black. I ready myself and as he got out his hands to fire out a beam; in a blink of an eye, I was right in front of him.
“Wha-” said Nemesis as I punched him twenty feet into the air.
I smiled, “Your holding back aren't you?”
I then felt a punch stabbing through my right shoulder. I felt the excruciating pain going through my body.
I saw Zoey and the others coming, but I said, “NO! This is my fight! I am fine!”
The pendant was working and it healed up the hole and I was breathing a little funny, but overall I was fine.
Nemesis was right in front of me when I stood back up,
“You recovered. Interesting…” he said.
I smiled, “This is going to get interesting.”
I grabbed my pendant and it started to glow. A yellow (Celestia), purple (Twilight), pink (Cadance), and blue (Luna) aura surrounded me. Before Nemesis punched me with his speed, I heard a voice in my head.
‘You can use your magic to your own desire.’ It said.
I opened my eyes and I noticed I was using my hand to block Nemesis’s fist. I jumped back and thought, ‘I guess I can access my past to use this?’
The only thing I could get is, ‘Yes.’
I smiled, “Let’s get this show on the road!”
“Don’t underestimate me!” Nemesis shouted sprinting towards me with a punch heading towards my face.
It lands, but before impact I was five feet away from him and he was punching a log of wood.
“What?!” he shouted.
I smirked, “You know everything about Equestria, but you have no idea what is coming to you.”
I spread out my legs and put my hands on my knees, “Alright. Let’s see if I can do this move.”
Focusing my legs I got my skin of my shin to swell out and it went down then up again. Then I repeated twice and I was feeling very hot and steamy. I felt my cheeks getting six scars, three on each sides, then I felt a red aura surrounding me and I was getting enough power to get through this, but I decided one more.
With the red aura it combined with a yellow aura while making my hair slightly golden. For those who do not know I am a combination of my three favorite anime that I love and miss. One piece, Dragon Ball Z, and Naruto.
I looked at Nemesis and my blood started to boil. I only twitch and I was in front of Nemesis; punched him in the stomach. The impact caused a crater that was about ten feet and the punch got some buckets full of his own dark blood to come out. Then, like a gun, he was shot thirty feet away and I only flinched and I was right in front of him and his eyes were wide. I held out my hand and a ball of wind formed in my hand.
I got that ball of wind and hit Nemesis on the head saying, “Rasengan!”
The impact cause him to spin and he hit the ground on his back causing another crater that was deeper than the other one. I did not hear Nemesis’s shouts of pain, because there was a price to use this power. I landed on the ground and threw up thick and slimy blood.
I spit out the remains and said, “Disgusting.”
That was the side effect if I could use this power and I can use it again, but I am getting rid of my life force.
“Had enough?” I shouted
Nemesis was laughing uncontrollably, “This is probably the most exciting fight I have ever been through. Yert informed me what you just did and it very funny. To spend your life force to save this pathetic world. Now watch as I beat you until you are dead!”
I could not sense it coming, but he stabbed right through my stomach and I saw dark magic going inside my belly. I was then grabbed at the neck and was thrown across to the mountain and I landed on my back crouching in pain.
Even though I can absorb dark magic, but when it came to absorbing it in the inside, I was no match. It will spread like a virus until it will consume me. I opened my eyes and I saw Nemesis coming and I got my hand and bit my thumb and blew into it.
My forearm grew ten times its length and I deflected Nemesis’s punch and sent him flying. Though the only effects were to shrink into a small kid for a few seconds, but it is better not to cough out blood. Which I still did because I have a fucking hole in my stomach that will not heal.
I touched the pendant and my belly healed enough for me to fight. I jumped off the mountain and saw Nemesis coming at me again. I used the magic to bend the air, earth, water, and fire and threw it at him. He got hit several times and was at the Everfree forest. I looked at my surroundings and he was about to touch the circle when I first came into this world. When he touched the ground on his feet I bend the earth so his feet were in the ground.
I then use the earth and made it into lava and surrounded it around Nemesis. Creating a lava rock ball. I was imagining Minecraft and actually made obsidian for the ball. It was actually working and Nemesis was struggling to get out.
The ball was not budging and I knelt down and started to make my circle of blood from my stomach around the ball. Zoey and the other finally caught up and they were wondering what I was doing. Then I saw Hatchi at the distance and made it to the group.
“What are you- Trey!!? You are hurt!” Zoey shouted.
“Hatchi what are you doing here?” Naki asked.
“I saw the epic battle, I just could not sit here and wait.” Hatchi said.
“Well you missed the anime surprised that Trey did.” Gaitou said.
I walked up to Hatchi, Naki, Zoey and Gaitou and placed them on an individual blood circle.
“I need your power to help me seal Nemesis!” I shouted.
I knelt down on my blood circle and so did they. I grabbed my pendant and placed it on the blood. It made the blood lines glow with different colors, mine was white, mixed with Zoey’s purple, Hatchi’s green, Naki’s pink, and Gaitou’s slightly clear blue.
The blood was being replaced with crystal and was making a cage, similar to the one back at the mine, but this time it is going to be different. I used up all of my magic I had inside of myself and reverted back to my human form. I still had the hole in my stomach, but I was focusing on the sealing and conversion of Nemesis.
Yes, you heard me right. I am attempting to make Nemesis turn into light. I was now breathing heavily and Twilight and the others, still in their Rainbow Power form, got behind us and powered us with the Rainbow Power to help us.
“NO!!! I WILL NOT BE SEALED AGAIN!” Nemesis shouted.
He was breaking through the obsidian and I used what was left of my own magic to make the ball stronger than before. The ball was now bedrock, the only block you cannot break in Minecraft and I know it was a bad move, but it was the only thing I could think of.
My body could not take any more of this kind of magic and was giving out on me, but I kept on going because Rainbow Power was keeping me steady. The crystal cage surrounded the ball and the bars created a colorful crystal dome and the next thing we saw was a bright light and I heard Nemesis shouting in pain because of pure light. Then we were all consumed by light and I lost consciousness.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 32: Gaitou Fights Nemesis/Yert
Everyone was at a Cul-de-sac when the light finished consuming us. We were back on Earth meaning we are back in our world and I saw Trey collapse on the ground. Twilight turned him over and tried to heal him up.
“The dark Magic is consuming him! I need more Alicorn magic!” she shouted.
The cage started to break and Nemesis shouted in pain as he was breaking out.
“STUPID GUARDIANS!” he shouted.
As he rose up he was no longer pitch black, but a light grey. I looked at Zoey and she was amazed for what he did and I realized that Trey was trying to convert Nemesis into light. It was an amazing feat, but Nemesis is not done yet.
I got up to my feet and jump towards him and touched his arm. I absorbed his power and it was over whelming. The power was coursing through my crystal veins and I felt powerful enough to defeat him once and for all. As I was about to punch him; Hatchi punched him quicker than I did.
“That’s for injuring me you bastard!” he shouted.
“Nice one Hatchi!” I shouted.
“Thanks!” he said.
Nemesis went into the air and Naki shouted, “Zoey stand up! Don’t worry about Trey, he will be fine. Now stand up!”
Zoey stood up and Naki fired a fire beam towards her and it deflected off of her, but the beam was twice as powerful and it hit Nemesis in the air.
“GAH!” he grunted in pain.
He landed on the ground and we waited for the dust to settle. Why you may ask? That always get the hero killed if he or she goes into the dust and will get killed from behind.
Out of nowhere, Zoey punched Nemesis out of the dust and Hatchi cleared away the screen of dust that was blocking my field of vision. I sprinted towards Nemesis and I noticed something had changed in Nemesis.
His eyes were pitched black and his mouth was dark grey. It laughed as I came forward towards him.
He smirked, “Nemesis is no more!”
He stomped on his foot which set out a waves of energy which threw us off guard. I noticed Twilight and Trey heading into one of the houses and I landed on the floor because I was watching them.
‘Just focus on taking down Yert.’ I thought.
That is right, Yert took over Nemesis’s weak body and took it for his own. Trey did a good job on get rid of Nemesis, but what about Yert?
“I guess we will find out.” I said.
I got back up and sprinted towards Yert. I landed a punch, but when it touched him I felt another punch hitting my chest. Maybe it was imagination, but I did a second hit and I felt another punch on my stomach.
Yert glared at me, “You are not touching me again and if you do you receive the same pain.”
It was probably because I was using Yert's power, so I backed off while Naki, Hatchi and Zoey were giving their all towards Yert. I wanted to get rid of this power, but it would be a waste.
I saw Twilight, Apple Jack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie carrying art sculptures and lie them on the ground. Trey was being levitated by Twilight and he took of his pendant and gave it to me.
“You got to us this power if you want to take care off Nemesis and Yert.” He said.
I looked at the pendant, “What good will it do to me?”
He smiled, “Let’s just say that it will finish up Nemesis and Yert. When that happens all the natural disasters caused by Nemesis will be gone. Then this world, which is a deserted waste land will recover.”
I nodded and heard Zoey screaming. I turned my glance and Yert was holding her by the hair.
“That hurts!!” Zoey shouted.
“You are a pain when it comes to beams! I need to take care of yo-” Yert paused, because his air was being taken away by Hatchi and he could not breathe.
Yert broke through Hatchi’s power and said, “YOU BASTARD!”
I did not see this coming, but it happened. Yert extended his arm and stabbed through Hatchi’s crystal chest. Everything was slow motion now and I saw Naki sprinting towards him, but she got her left arm cut off thanks to Yert. He then continued to cut until he cut through her body. It was terrible, horrifying, and I felt like puking, but I couldn't the fear was taking over.
Zoey… My love, my passion; she was about to get stabbed in the heart by him. The pendant glowed and in an instant, I teleported where he would of stabbed her and I got stabbed instead. There was pain coursing through my body, as he stabbed me the pendant shattered into pieces.
“Gaitou NO!!!” Zoey shouted.
I felt like I was free. The way I felt free is that I was going to die. I can see my family again in heaven. I saw the light coming, but I hit the ground being conscious again in pain.
Zoey was trying to hold back my blood, Twilight and the others were trying to help, but their tears were getting in the way. I looked at Zoey who was tearing up with purple tears.
“All I have to say to you is… I love you and there is nothing in the world that will change that.” I said.
“Don’t you dare leave me Gaitou…? Please…” she said.
I saw Trey fighting Yert and he was punching the hell out of him.
“You bastard!” he shouted.
I looked at Twilight and the others trying to help Hatchi and Naki who were already dead. I tear up and now I am going to see them in heaven.
“Gaitou please stay with me.” she said
It was fuzzy when she asked that. I was getting blurred vision now and my ears were ringing from the pain. Before my last breath, I leaned in to kiss Zoey and it felt amazing, even though I was about to die. It was all worth it.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 33: Zoey's Final Stand!
After Gaitou kissed me, I was tearing up. I watched as he slipped away into heaven. The next thing that happened is that he shattered into pieces and so did my friends. Now I was alone, my friends that were with me since childhood are now gone. Tears were streaming down my cheeks and I looked up and Trey was still fighting Yert.
I had to get up and get away from the fight. It will soon get intense. I tried to move, but my legs were locked in place. I continued to look and I saw Twilight and the others just sitting there mourning for their friends.
I forced my legs to get up and it worked, but then I had to walk. ‘Shit. I am so in denial that I cannot move to save my life…. Please… Help me…’ I thought.
‘Look at the art pile…’ said a voice.
I turned my head and glanced around to see who said that. It was not Twilight nor the others, but it was inside my head? I looked at the art pile and I saw a clay made crystal glowing. Curiosity took over my denial and I walked there to pick it up.
When I touched it all sorts of colors were going inside my body. It was warm and fuzzy as it went inside my body. I saw a girl when I closed my eyes surrounded by a bright light and she was smiling. She had a strange resemblance of Trey.
‘Let the colors of your friends guide you to victory.’ she said.
I felt my friends touching my shoulder and they were giving me strength. I heard their voice through my head.
“Go and win Zoey!” Hatchi said.
“You don’t need any encouragement from me!” Naki said.
“Go on, Zoey.” Gaitou said.
I opened my eyes and said, “HEY YOU FREAK!! LET’S FIGHT JAPANESE STYLE!”
I bit out a piece of my own crystal and it formed into a Katana. I sprinted towards Yert and the Katana glowed with rainbow colors. I sliced his arm off and he shouted in pain. Trey continued to punch him into a raging pulp.
I realized something about Trey… His eye were starting to turn red. He must be losing control to Nemesis. I had to help him, but how?
‘Leave that to me.’ Said a voice.
“What is with all the voices today?” I asked.
I looked at my Katana and focused on Yert and Trey. I needed to end this now. I raised my Katana and the ash cloud that made everything all gloomy showed the sun and it was gaining more power.
“TREY!! GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!” I shouted.
I swing the light sword and it pierced Yert and it converted him into light.
“NOOOOOOOO!!!!” he shouted at he fired his last shot of darkness/dark magic.
That last shot… was heading towards me. I saw it coming towards me… I tried to move, but the feelings of being dead with my friends got the better of me. I saw Trey right in front of me and there were tears coming down like a waterfall.
“I do not want to hurt my friends!” he shouted.
The darkness/dark magic hit his back and was shot down. He landed right in front of my feet and I landed on my knees. I was about to cry, but then I was punched by something else.
I landed on my back. I looked in horror and it was Nemesis.
“Yert was holding me back. I tried to take over Trey, but he broke out and got himself killed by his enemy.” He said.
“You bastard…” I said.
Nemesis punched me and I did not move at all. I glared at him and I raised my Katana. I cut off his arm and he shouted in pain.
“No matter if you destroy me, you will never get back to Equestria.” He shouted.
I didn’t know if he was correct or not, but having him out here will bring a lot of pain. I did not want that for this world, Equestria or any other place that he will cause misery. I had to finish it!
I jumped towards him and stabbed him right in his heart. He couldn't breathe and he smirked as he was being turned into light.
“In the future, you will be reincarnated and I will be reincarnated to just fight as enemies again.” He said.
“Go to heaven instead of hell and get burned to light you son of a bitch.” I said.
He laughed as he was burnt away from the light.
“Ah yes. You know the legend of the Guardians sacrificing themselves to save the world? Well there is one more guardian to give her life.”
I Nemesis forced his final blow, but Trey intervene and he got stabbed through the chest glaring at the burning Nemesis. Blood splattered all over my crystal body, it touched my lips and I screamed in horror.
“No one else is dying except for me. Nemesis you turn to light and never come back.” Trey said.
I didn’t hear what Nemesis said, but he disappeared before he could say it.
“Trey…?” I asked.
“Damn it.” He said falling down to the ground.
Twilight and the others came towards us. I held Trey up and shouted, “Can you save him?”
Twilight glowed her horn and Rarity used her fabrics as a bandage to wrap around Trey’s gaping wounds.
“Trey, stay with me… For the love of god… LET HIM LIVE!” I shouted.
‘Do not worry, he will not die. He will live and I will use your power to take us back.’ Said a different voice.
All of a sudden my energy got so drained I fainted and I saw a bright light consume all of us and the art pieces with it.
I awakened from the light and I was in a white room. I saw Twilight and the others were looking around the room and I wondered what the hell is happening.
Trey injuries were healed and he was breathing. He opened his eyes and looked around. Then an Alicorn with two different Canvas’s that she was levitated came to us.
“Who are you?” I asked.
She smiled, “I am Lauren Faust.”
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 34: Trey's Return
Being stabbed through the chest really gets you thinking about life doesn't it? My breaths are out of sync, there is a gaping hole in my chest, flashes of light goes through my mind. Then your dead sister who has been guiding you through all this mess is smiling at you.
She is smiling at you saying, ‘Everything is going to be alright now.’
I couldn't tell whether I was being consumed by light, but I felt warm in the inside and when I woke up, my wounds were all healed. When I saw Lauren Faust holding two canvases, I was happy that I would become a pony again. I was sick of being a human and I wondered what Zoey thought about her becoming a pony as well.
“So are you a god?” Zoey asked her.
“In a way yes. I continue to make and improve Equestria as my own image. I got you here to make you into ponies so you can be happy in Equestria.” She said.
“What about my friends?” she asked.
“Zoey…” I said.
Lauren sighed, “Your friends have passed. There is nothing I can do, there is certain things that magic cannot do.”
I got up and ran towards the art pieces, “What about these? These hold enough magic to get them back?”
I showed the pieces to her and she looked at me, “With these combined, I can only bring one from above. So it will be your choice who you would want to bring back.”
“Zoey… What will you decide on?” I asked.
Zoey stood back and sat on the bench with her hands over her face. It is very unfortunate to only bring back one of your friends from the afterlife and this decision would affect her life.
“I need some time… to think.” She said.
Without saying a word I walked with Faust towards Twilight and the others who were snooping around the white room that kept in their god.
Twilight spoke first, “This is a very interesting place you have here Miss Faust.”
She smiled, “Thank you, I try my best trying to keep Equestria in check.”
“It’s not my cup of tea having everything white, but I guess we're only here once.” Rarity said.
Apple Jack nudged her, “What she is trying to say is we are honored to meet our god that created us.”
“That is alright, I don’t mind other ponies criticizing on my room. I will some days change some things.” Lauren said.
Rarity tried to hide her embarrassment, but Apple Jack got her in a head lock keeping her to no to hide.
“This place is not opened up, but I am not complaining.” Said Rainbow Dash.
“What kind of animals will you bring out? If you don’t mind me asking.” Fluttershy asked.
“I will bring more animals your way soon. So get ready because they are some animals from Trey’s world.” She said.
Fluttershy smiled and she hugged Rainbow Dash out of happiness.
“What about me? How about a new type of sugar? Maybe it will be ten times better than regular sugar which will cause everybody to have a sugar rush!” Pinkie Pie shouted.
Lauren sighed, “You almost gave me a heart attack Pinkie.”
That got her to be sad and almost lost her puffy hair.
But Lauren smiled, “Gotcha.”
Pinkie Smiled and started to bounce around everybody which got us to laugh.
“Speaking of my world, how is it doing?” I asked.
Lauren used her magic to make a screen showing my world which was in ruins. It was recovering fast and the skies had cleared for sunlight for the plants. The oceans were getting purified, so the ocean life can thrive again. Trash, gas, and anything that burned into the atmosphere were destroyed and the atmosphere started to recover.
“Well that is a good thing. Was it because of the guardians sacrificing themselves?” I asked.
“Yes. With their help they have restarted your world. So you don’t have to worry about it anymore.” She said.
“Well that is good.” Zoey said coming from behind.
“Have you made your decision?” I asked.
“I decided that I want Gaitou back with me.” She said.
“Is that your final decision?” Lauren asked.
I could see that she was crying, she dried them off, but there was still evidence that this was a very hard decision for her.
She nodded, “I am not going to say it again.”
Lauren sighed and levitated three canvases, “Trey you want to become an Alicorn again?”
I nodded, “More than anything.”
She smiled then looked at Zoey, “Would you like to become a Unicorn, Pegasus, or an Earth pony?”
“These decisions are getting the better of me aren't they?” Zoey asked.
“They weren't easy, but Lauren accepted I would become the only male Alicorn in Equestria.” I said trying to comfort her.
Zoey wiped her eyes away, “I am interested in magic and Gaitou loves the sky so. I will become a Unicorn and Gaitou will become a Pegasus.”
“Alright. Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Apple Jack and Rarity. When Trey and Zoey transform you will be teleported to your houses. Is that understood?” Lauren asked.
“That will be fine with us!” they said.
Lauren levitated the first canvas towards me and like before. It spun around me and I felt my body turning to what I was most comfortable with, my Alicorn body.
“Make you color choices correct!” I shouted to Zoey.
I was then shown the same bright light that I was used to it. When I awoke I was lying next to a sleeping Luna. Who was having her own little nightmare about me?
“Mm. Trey… Don’t die…” she mumbled.
I got my hoofs and hugged her. I slept with her until Celestia rose the sun. I kissed her forehead and her tensed sleeping face relaxed. She snuggled into my warm chest and I felt happy. With my eyes I looked around the room and things were rearranged which was weird, but who cared I was with my wife as the right species.
Luna awoke and looked up with a confused face, “Trey… Is that you?”
I started to tear up, “Yes, Luna… It’s me. I am back from another hardship.”
She started to tear up as well and leaned in for the kiss I was waiting for. It was warm and moist. It felt like the first time I kissed her as a pony which felt wonderful.
It was early in the morning and the door burst open and I saw my children which have grown since I last saw them. I stared at Luna who was wiping her tears away.
“How long has it been since I left?” I asked.
“I will tell you that, but I will tell you this. I never gave up on you. I knew you would come back and I just had to wait patiently.” Luna said.
“It has been three years dad.” Grace said.
I looked at Grace she had grown to a size of a young mare and had glasses on.
“Dad. Welcome back.” Lily said.
Lily was the size of Grace when she was young and Noah was the same size as well which made me warm inside.
Then I saw a colt flying inside the room and landed on Luna’s belly. That is when I realized that Luna was not pregnant anymore and the colt in her arms had wings and a horn.
“Oh my Celestia…” I said.
“Yes honey. Our first Alicorn child. His name is James.” Luna said.
I was about to faint, but Grace levitated me out of the bed and let me go so I could stand. That was a bad move, because I just became a pony again. I tried to stand on all fours and I was not moving. Grace, Noah and Lily gave me a hug.
“I am so glad to see you kids.” I sad tearing up.
They started to cry as well and Luna was trying to not cry in front of James who was confused about the situation.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 35: Gaitou's Rebirth
I was floating in mid-space wondering through it. Was I in Heaven? No. Was I in Hell? No. I am sort of stuck between my world and Equestria. I closed my eyes and tried to think about anything. The only thing that came up was my death and the final kiss from Zoey.
I awoke with the pain still in my chest and the painful memory of my friends dying from the evil enemy called Nemesis. I took a breath out of the dense air to wait here forever or to be picked up by god or Satan.
As if on cue, a girl who was a teenager or older, walked up to me and grabbed my hand. She then takes me though several doors that are going past me very fast and it was speeding up. I wasn’t scared, but I wanted to know where I was going.
“Who are you?” I asked.
She looked back and smiled. She had a strange resemblance to Trey which made me wonder. ‘Did Trey have something to do with this?’ I thought.
“You are going to be back with your loved one soon. Just make sure you take a deep breath.” She said.
I did what she said because a wall of ocean was heading towards us. I saw all sorts of sea life inside and then I saw nothing, but light.
I coughed out some water when I knew I could breathe in air. I almost drowned, but I wondered what that ocean was. Then I remembered. It was the ocean that I used to take care of Yert as his dark magic lava form.
Looking around me I was surrounded by people who were colorful, but everything was white around me. My vision was blurred and my hearing was muffled. I heard a ringing sounds in my left and right ears then I started to hear what sounded like my name.
“Gaitou!” she said, which sounded familiar.
“Gaitou!” said another girl which I could not recognize.
I closed my eyes to let them adjust then I heard a women’s voice.
“Gaitou it’s time to get up.” She said.
I awoke and found myself surrounded by ponies who were from that show that I particularly liked and I saw Zoey. She landed on her knees and leaned down to kiss me. I didn’t said anything, I just waited for those lips to touch mine. It felt warm and I felt my heart beat going faster and faster.
When she released my lips I was able to speak, “Can I have some water?”
A pink pony grabbed a glass of water out of her mane and handed it to me. I looked at her whether the glass was full of hair, but I drank it anyway. Nope. No hair at all, just clean and refreshing water.
When I finished I had so many questions, “What happened to me? What happened to Naki and Hatchi? Why am I alive? Who is this Alicorn?”
The answers came to me one at a time as I sat up straight and I took it all in. The deaths of my friends were very devastating and I could feel tears streaming down my cheek to my neck. Zoey had to choose whether I had to stay dead or alive. I don’t know if it was the right decision. It might take me a while to figure out things. I even asked Faust about if they could bring Naki and Hatchi, but she couldn’t do anything about it.
“What can I do now?” I asked Zoey and Faust.
“First we must send these mares back to their home.” Faust said, while her horn was glowing.
The main six said their good-byes and they disappeared without a trace. I got up from the ground with Zoey and she was hanging on to me as if I would disappear.
Faust cleared her throat, “Since you are the last two guardians, I have to say this. I will turn you into crystal ponies and you will live where ever you like. You don't have to live at the Crystal Empire, you are free to live anywhere in Equestria. Zoey has already decided what kind of ponies you will be.”
I looked at her and she smiled, “It’s a surprise.”
“It better be a good one!” I joked.
“Without further ado, Zoey and Gaitou, you will be part of Equestria as crystal ponies. I will first take you to Canterlot Palace where Trey is.” She said while her horn was glowing.
A canvas came towards me and it turned into a ball. Then it spun around me until I was blinded by the light. I said good bye then
Zoey disappeared and Lauren said something that would concern me and probably the others.
“An event is going to happen and this will be a neutral situation. I hope you like it.” She said smiling.
The light covered my face and I heard the girl’s voice again and she was giggling.
“Good bye.” She said.
The light disappeared and I was right in front of Zoey (I noticed a horn from the covers) in the same bed that we made our love to each other. We were in the covers and I felt weird in my new body. I was glowing because of my crystal body; I had hoofs, a tail, wings… Wait… WINGS!! I was over joyed by this. I loved flying as a child. Now I can fly with these bad boys!
Zoey was still covered and when I moved the sheet, she was a unicorn. A beautiful Unicorn that was the color of light purple, I thought to myself, ‘Thank God she was a different color otherwise I couldn't tell the difference between her and Twilight.’
She had dark purple hair as her mane and tail. I decided to touch her and she felt so soft and squishy, kind of like a marshmallow. I looked at my hoof and my fur was turquoise and my tail was the color of dark blue. These were my favorite color and I loved the way I looked. I leaned down to give Zoey a kiss on her forehead and I decided to cuddle right next to her.
We slept together and I held on tight to her. She cooed as I held on to her with my warm arms. I whispered to her ears, “I love you.” She didn’t respond, but she smiled while she was sleeping. That was the cutest thing of all time. I loved Zoey and she loved me.
The next day Trey came into the room with his kids, and wife. The main six showed up as well with Celestia and her child who had come to greet us in our return. This woke us up from our beauty sleep, but it was worth it. When she woke up, I woke up and joined the group of people that has gathered in the room to rejoice our return and to mourn for the death of our friends.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 36: Grace Being Bold
It has been three years since I have seen dad and what he could tell me is that when he was at his world he did not see the days go past because the ash cloud covered the sky making it into eternal night. I asked why that happened and he said the volcanoes in his world erupted because of Nemesis’s power. I wondered what he meant by that, but Jim was able to explain that to me as much as he could so I got the gist of it.
After we reunited with Zoey and Gaitou my siblings were wondering where Naki and Hatchi were at. I kind of wonder that myself and asked Zoey but they changed the subject after what I said. What that told me was that either they have passed or they have stayed at their world. I decided to pull dad away from the group to talk to him. I took him to his room and closed the door behind me.
“What’s wrong Grace?” Dad asked.
“Where are Hatchi and Naki?”
He showed a small smile that told me that something was wrong, “They are in my world.”
I raised an eyebrow, “Really? You know dad, after three years, I can still tell when you are lying to me.”
My dad hung his head in defeat and took a deep breath, “Naki and Hatchi have passed and now they are at a better place. Don’t tell your sister and brother about this, it will break their heart.”
A small tear came down my cheek and I wiped it off with my hoof, “Alright, just don’t lie to me again you hear?”
“Grace are you alright sweet heart?” he asked.
I wanted to be alright. I wanted to be dandy, but with two friend’s lives who have passed on it was too much for me. I was about to break down and cry on the floor right in front of my dad. I was about to crouch down, but out of nowhere my dad gave me a hug.
“What?!” I shouted at dad’s ear.
“If you feel you want to let go, then let go your feelings. I will cast a sound muffling spell to prevent others from hearing you mourning over your friends.” He said.
I cried, yelled, shouted, and sobbed over my dad shoulder. He told me everything was going to be alright and he was there for me. After all these years he is still a great father and I loved him as a family member.
After a little while, dad let go of the hug and dried the tears off of my face and on his shoulder. Dad went back to talk to mom and I walked to the hot tub at the bathroom to relax for a bit. My glasses were starting to fog up in the temperature change and I decided to take them off and put them in the basket (I am short sighted just to let you know). I grabbed the available towel and went inside the bathing area.
Jim was already inside in the hot tub and we were used to see each other in the bathing area, but the first time we saw each other, we were embarrassed about seeing ourselves taking a bath. Time passed and we got used to it. So I decided I wanted to do something a little different today.
I got into the hot tub with him and instead of sitting across from him, I decide I will sit right next to him and cuddle. When I got close he didn’t move, but his pace of breath was accelerating. Jim was born into this world from my mind thanks to Yert, but he turned good. Anyway when he was born he was born a colt with the same intelligence as me, but was still confused about Equestria itself.
In short he didn’t know how to handle different situations. Such as the kiss I gave him on the second day when he got my siblings and I to the palace away from Yert. He wanted to process any information about situations in books. You might say he is an enigma of Princess Twilight, but the male version.
“What are you doing Grace?” he asked.
I leaned towards his ear and whispered, “I am here for some fun.”
I moved my body against his and I cooed and he was blushing.
I smiled, “You don’t know how to deal this situation do you?”
“I-I didn’t read this up at any book.” He said.
“Sometimes emotions cannot be written in books.”
I inched closer to his lips and he closed his eyes waiting for me to take his worries away. The hot tub that was making me feel very hot and when I touch his lips with mine, I felt like I was in heaven. I decided to spice things up and let my tongue inside of his mouth. He moaned through my mouth because it was good for him.
We have been technically dating when dad left Equestria. We were careful about what we did and we barely had any arguments. For some reason he would blush up when I would kiss him or he would attempt to kiss me. That was the cutest thing I have ever seen and it made my heart pound. I really loved him, not just for the blushing thing, but for his personality and his silly confusing moments about situations.
I let go of the kiss and I looked at him, he was the same age as me and he was a little bit bigger than me in size. He was breathing heavily and I kissed his cheek. He got his hoof and touched my clit. I moaned and came a little bit. It was probably because of the hot tub.
I smiled, “Oh, you want to play that way?”
I held my breath and dipped my head into the pool. I put out my tongue and licked his staff. I heard a moan from the bottom and continued. Thanks to the hot tub he quickly was about to cum and I covered his staff with my mouth and I gulped down his cum.
I raised my head out of the water to be greeted with a French kiss from Jim. We made out in the hot tub until someone entered the bathing area. Mom showed up and we stopped immediately and I was blush like hell and Jim was the same way. It was embarrassing for my family members to catch us when we were doing this sort of stuff.
“Is everything alright you two?” she asked.
“Y-Yeah, mom we were just talking about what we are going to do with Zoey and Gaitou.” I said.
“Oh? Did you know? Gaitou and Zoey went to the Crystal Empire for a lovely vacation.” She said and somehow I could sense a wink through the mist.
“What are we going to do then?” Jim asked.
Mom came out of the mist and sat herself on the edge of the hot tub. She looked at us and seemed to be suspicious about something or I am just too paranoid.
She cleared her throat, “Your father and I have decided we are going to find a new house near Los Pegasus. We are going to either build a house to where Jim can live in with us or we find an old house to restore then we build a separate house for Jim.
“I like the first option.” I said.
Mom giggled, “I know you want to stay with your boyfriend, but he needs to have a proper education. Even though Celestia was able to teach him about books, he needs to figure out what his cutie mark means.”
That’s right, when Jim was born his cutie mark was a half a Yin Yang, but the light was only half showing. Jim did so much research about that when he learned how to read properly. That was fine him going to a school because that would mean that he would go to school with me.
I sighed and got out of the hot tub, my skin was soothed and my signs of crying were gone. It really helps to relax and have fun with your boyfriend if you’re in a slightly depressed mood.
“Grace you go to your room because your brother needs you for some reason.” Mom said.
I was compliant and got dried when I got back to the changing room. I put on my glasses and headed to my room. Just to let you know we have separate beds now and we are still great siblings. Sometimes we would get into arguments, but we forgave each other in the end.
I opened the door, “So what does my brother want from me today?”
“Can I have a duel with you, Grace?” Noah asked.
Lily nodded to Noah's Question, but there was a sudden rumble. It shook the ground and Lily was looking out to the balcony, "What's that?"
I looked to the sky and my eyes widened as I screamed out for my father, "DAD!!!"
The sky rumbled and it lit up at the distance. I ran towards the balcony and saw the light turning into a hole. It was some sort of large tear that's probably covering all of Equestria. I closed my eyes to wait for an explosion to happen, but instead, when I opened my eyes, I saw a picture of a planet in space.
I heard dad and mom were heading towards the room.
“What is going on?” dad asked.
“Look outside.” I said in awestruck.
The whole family were here to watch this strange event that was happening. Who knows what was going to happen.
Transformation II (First Draft)
I have decided to take on this situation under the influence of Princess Celestia and announced that what they were seeing was Earth through a ripped dimension hole. Besides Gaitou told me what Faust told him and I was surprised myself. Some asteroids that were on Earth's side usually come through to our side, but it was harmless because Celestia has a protective barrier the prevent such major disasters.
For the next nine months, the ponies got accustomed to the cards and did tournaments that had spread like wildfire around Canterlot and other cities around Equestria. The fillies and colts were taking interest into the card game and they made it their hobby. The hobby part was fine, but the packets were everywhere and they had to be cleaned up. Thanks to the Pegasi’s help the majority of the packets were cleaned up. The rip in the sky which everypony called it had disappeared when it dumped millions upon millions of packets.
While everypony was getting adjusted to their new view, I decided to visit Queen Chrysalis who has recovered from the Nemesis incident. Luna decided for herself to go with me and we talked to Chrysalis about business of the Empire. Everything was going great, the renovations of the castle were done, the streets and areas didn’t look menacing as much. The Empire was now a prosperous place to live in Ponies and Changelings alike.
Celestia’s child has grown into a fine young mare who is still going to school with my kids and Jim. Her name is Nova and I kind of chuckled at that name. For one it is kind of true, Celestia (Sun dying) giving birth to a Nova (Super Nova), but she didn’t die giving birth so yeah space science getting into my head was a joke (Sun dies and creates a super nova creating a black hole. Thought it was funny).
Luna and I found a home in Los Pegasus and it was perfect for all of us including Jim. Grace, Lily, Noah and Jim accepted the house when we first moved in. On occasions Celestia and her family would show up to visit us (Mostly Discord teleporting with the family out of nowhere mostly).
Anyway Jim, Grace, Lily and Noah are enjoying their new school and are loving their new friends, and teachers. Luna took care of James with basic magic and flying so he could take care of himself when he goes to his first day of Elementary school (Which for some reason the higher school starts then the Elementary school starts). James learned the basic reading, speaking and writing which got him to get perfect grades in school, I do not know why, but he is acting like Twilight Sparkle (I have no idea why).
Jim and Grace have been getting closer and closer as a couple. Being a Dad, I had to keep an eye on occasions and I had to watch their actions once in a while. Luna didn’t care, it was natural for them to get together and help them in case of a ‘heat’ emergency. She told me she was the same way, but didn’t have a stallion to help her.
While that was going on, I heard that Twilight and the others got their gifts from Faust when they came back from ‘Faust’s Heaven’ so to speak. Twilight got a book about Humans and their technology from my world, Apple Jack got some new different seeds to plant for the farm, Pinkie Pie got what she wanted some super concentrated sugar cubes and she went wild on them, Rarity got a lot of silk from my world as well and is trying to replicate that fabric, Fluttershy got a kangaroo rat and other animals I cannot name which go her very happy about it, Rainbow Dash was given an Indiana Jones book to her so she can wait on the next Daring Do books.
Gaitou and Zoey got into ‘business’ and had a filly of their own. They named her Sakura. Which I found to be adorable and so did Luna. They decided to live out in the mountains away from everypony to get adjusted to Equestria, which is fine because they do not want that much attention being the last Crystal Guardians of Equestria.
I was just worried about something. What will happen in the future? My mind wondered about that. I tried not to jinx myself so I do not want to fight any enemies. I lie there right next to Luna who was sleeping and kissed her on the forehead. I covered myself up and thought about what happen to me.
Teleported to Equestria, defeated Yert, turned into a pony, having a loving family, Nemesis turns me evil, turned into a human, defeats Nemesis and Yert, saved the last two Crystal Guardians, turned back into a pony, the new view of Earth from a dimension rip (Rest in Peace, Naki and Hatchi). It has been a great journey for me and I hoped what will happen in the future will be promising.
Author's Note
The Original ending for this story was really terrible. So I republished all the unedited chapters in one go while the ending had changed drastically. Transformation and Transformation II will be re-written and combined into one story. If you want to know what the old ending looked liked then here's the link.
Transformation II Alternate Ending.
Transformation II (First Draft)
My name is Zoey; I am 17 1/2 years old born in America moved to Japan when I was 6. I am an only child in my family. My dad is a nuclear worker at the plant, and my mother is a teacher teaching English to Japanese students. I have attended an elementary school in Japan and it was very different. Kindergarten in America was fun you could do anything you want, but when I transferred to the Japanese system in Japan it was totally different.
What was different is that I was limited of what I could play with. Meaning my teachers were assholes. I got to the first grade and learned Japanese. I had some Japanese friends and they stick with me ever since and now were together in high school as freshmen. It was the most wonderful time I had ever had. Then life had to interrupt our school life with decisions. You see when you are 16 in Japan you need to work to get into a college to get on with life. At least that is what I got from my parents and they told me they can transfer me to a United State Air Base School. I decided not to go, and make the experience my own.
I made a lot of friends in Japan and only three friends just stick to me like glue. Naki my BBF has been with me for a long time and has helped me when I was in situations. Hatchi who is a boy that basically is a huge nerd to anime and some shows in America, when I see a show I want to see I want his total opinion. Reason why is because he watches every single show that has come out. He reads summaries of each show and watches them and re-evaluate the summery to its full truth. You might say Naki has a crush on him therefore; she loved nerds. Finally is my crush named Gaitou; he is into sports, go figure, and he hangs out with us. The reason is unknown, but he gets along with my friends. When Gaitou wants a TV show about sports Hatchi would give him the current or older show that he would like in particular.
Next thing is what happened in 2012. Oh boy did Hatchi explode with happiness. When I heard about it I was shocked. Japan was dubbing my little pony that was released in America. Why was it so popular to America and now Japan? I just do not get it. When I asked Hatchi about this he told me that most adults liked the show. I was like excuse me? Adults? A show for little girls attracted to adults? That is bullshit! When he showed me the forum on this website, again I was shocked. What is society turning into? I still did not want to believe in this none sense. Then my little pony hit YouTube like a truck. Nothing, but countless pony videos, pony songs made by dedicated people who love the show. I was outraged, I almost threw my laptop out the window because it made me mad. I thought it was a fad maybe it will disappear. ‘Yeah that is it.’ I thought.
Four fucking years and nothing has changed. My little pony is going into season 5! What the fuck?! The fandom grew bigger and Hatchi has converted into a premature Brony. I am against Bronies, but my friend is the exception. He respects my opinion and does not force me to watch anything. Japan was peaceful until my little pony everywhere. How did a reboot of a 80's show gets so fucking popular? I had so many other things to do other than to see this hell hole become bigger. I wish the world would just end…
The exact words ‘I wish the world would just end.’ Came true. Krakatoa erupted causing Mount Fuji to erupt. My parents put me in a fridge because it was a custom fridge. What it had made it a survival tool. What it had was an air supply, a titanium casing surrounding the frame, a food supply and other items. Three fucking days I had to wait until the locking mechanism could sense that the ash cloud dissipate. My parents died in the ash cloud making them turn into lifeless sculptures such as the dead people in Pompeii.
I was in deep depression because of my parent’s death. I collected my survival items uncovered a bag and pack my things. I just walked to my friends' house; luckily they were lucky as me. Hatchi, Gaitou and Naki survived in the same kind of fridge.
We had to get out of our town, but the thing is it is going to be hard as hell. Sure the town buildings are still standing and we found each other, but the road is flushed with the ground. Besides if we needed to find survivors we needed to hike Mount Fuji to get to the other side. This is so we can find help. Ha! What help…? There was nobody except for us four. We check other houses and the survival fridge were empty. No other children survived and we continued to hike around Mount Fuji to find more survivors and to find help.
While we were hiking, we never spoke to one another, but I spoke to Hatchi he was filling out statistics on his tablet about the volcanoes around the world. He was getting news from satellite internet. Usually when something important came about Japan he would turn up the volume.
Then a news report came in that colder temperatures would come down to zero degrees due to the ash cloud. Sunset will be around ten degrees. ‘In the summer? Now I know were going to get into trouble. We are going to freeze to death.’ I thought.
An earthquake happening and next thing I knew my friends were running for our lives. I managed to escape under the ash mixed water and dodged death itself. Luckily I had a scuba mouth piece with a mini air tank. So I put that on to stay underwater for a while.
‘How did this happen?’ I thought.
What was I supposed to do? Lead a crowd to survival; that I cannot even do that. The people who stick with me were my friends. Now they are statues on top of what was Mount Fuji. The ash cloud from above was not clearing and this mini air tank was going to die out. I cannot see what was in the water and I could not see my friends. I had not to believe that they are statues on Mount Fuji.
Well its either death by ash cloud or drown in ash mixed water. Then something was sparkling down at the bottom. I decided to go down to the glowing crystal and I grabbed it out of the ash covered goop. I looked at my gauge and it was empty. Shit. At least I will die with this beautiful crystal and being rich for a short 30 seconds.
The next thing I knew, the crystal glowed even more like the sun, but no as hot. I was then engulfed in light.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Chapter 8: What The Hell?!
“Gee they are sure taking their time.” Applejack said looking out the window.
“I wonder what they are talking about in there.” Twilight said.
“Do you want me to investigate?” Pinkie Pie said pulling a detective hat out of nowhere.
“Ah. No, Pinkie. We just got away from death, and I bet it is traumatizing for them.” I said.
It had been three hours since Hatchi and Naki went to the bathroom together. I knew what they were really doing in there. They are having sex in one stall and I have to wonder when they have been together. Why do I need to know? Keeping a secret from other friend is not ok, but this is an exception and I had to know how long they have been together.
“Zoey, I was wondering about if I could have your crystal?” Rarity asked.
I thought about it, “I really want to keep it because well it is beautiful.”
Rarity said, “That is the same reason I want it as well. If you want to keep it then that is alright.”
Then Hatchi and Naki finally came back from their ‘adventure’ and sat next to each other holding hands. All I did was I crossed my arms and stared at them.
“What’s wrong?” Hatchi asked.
Twilight spoke, “Well you were at the bathroom for three hours.”
“Has it been that long?” Naki asked.
“Yeah I want to know what you were talking about!” Pinkie Pie said.
“We were not-” Hatchi interrupted by be kicking his shin.
Naki looked at me like I caught them and I returned a face saying ‘we need to talk.’
Naki caught on and made an excuse, “We were talking about how our world is gone and I hope we can have the same food as we did in Japan, and so much that I cannot remember.”
“We are arriving at the Canterlot station in about ten minutes.” The conductor announced.
“Ugh! Finally!” I said sprinting towards the bathroom.
I did not hear what Twilight and the others said because I have been holding it for three fucking hours so I can go use the toilet. I got to the stalls and yes it looked like the toilets form Japan and I was relieved finally. Then there was toilet paper on the rack. ‘Thank god Trey had the idea to have a bathroom in the first place.’ I thought.
I was finally done and got back inside our cart. Twilight and the others were talking to one another and did not notice me because I had to drink a lot of water to sprint out to the bathroom like that.
“So anyway darlings, I became Trey’s designer for his suits and costumes. It was a really great business for me and I got my reputation really high.” Rarity said.
“I guess doing a human for your dresses was not as hard as you thought?” Hatchi asked.
“Why yes it was not as hard because I had to do measurement on him to do everything correctly.” Rarity said.
“How did you get his measurement?” Naki asked. I crossed my arms wanting to know as well.
Rarity blushed a little, “Well he had to strip down to his undergarments and I did the measurements. This would have to be the same with you if you want me to design your clothes.”
“Well that is sure embarrassing for you. It was not like you were doing a stallion.” Applejack joked.
Twilight sighed, “After Rarity made his suits, I was able to talk about where he lived and such.”
I wondered where he lived too, “Where did he live in?”
“Well he lived in the place called the United States of America.” Pinkie Pie said.
“Ah. So Trey is a American." Hatchi said.
"Did he taught you anything about America’s history and what not?” Naki asked.
“Yes he told me so much, I had to dedicate about five books worth and my magic was being depleted because of it. He also mentioned Japan’s history, and England’s history. He is really an amazing person that has a lot of knowledge.” Twilight said.
“We have arrived at Canterlot station, please collect your items for we are not responsible for your loss.” Said the conductor.
I grabbed my pack and put my crystal, which was still glowing, into my pack. Naki and Hatchi pack their things as well. We all headed out of the train into the train station, it was night time. No one or now pony was in sight it was empty. Then a carriage pulled in right in front of us, and it had enough room for us three and I looked at Twilight.
“Trey is waiting for you and do not worry about us we will follow you.” Twilight said pointing at another carriage right next to them.
“Go ahead partner, get inside so you can meet Trey.” Applejack said.
“I agree with Applejack, you will have so much fun with Trey.” Rarity said.
“Get GOING!!” Pinkie Pie said.
That made us jump inside the carriage and signaled the royal guard ponies to get going. We were now getting closer and closer to where Trey is. The ride was not that long and we showed up to the front doors of the palace.
“Oh! This is exciting!” Hatchi said.
“Yes and it will be a great experience for us.” Naki said.
“I am not happy for what you did at the bathroom and decided to keep it quiet.” I said.
This made Naki and Hatchi blush a whole lot.
I stared at them, “I was surprised that you were not caught by any other pony. I just need to know how long have you been together?”
Naki spoke, “We have been dating two months before the disaster and we had our first time in my room then we had our second in the bathroom.”
“When were you going to tell me about this information?” I asked.
“We were going to tell you, but the disaster got in the way.” Hatchi said.
“I can understand that, but why did you not tell me before hand?” I asked.
“It would probably end our friendship!” Hatchi blurted out.
“It would not change our friendship, because we can understand one another right?” Naki asked.
“Right.” I said.
The second carriage showed up and the doors opened. The guards showed us to the royal room where Hatchi told me that all their achievements in history are on the glass plains.
The doors closed and Twilight and the others were showing me and Naki what each glass plain was, while Hatchi was ahead looking at each one with all knowledge in here.
A royal guard came out of the doors and levitated his piece of paper.
“Guy’s I think it is time.” I said.
The guard spoke, “Presenting Princess Luna the mare of the night.”
There was a dark blue pony with blue flowing mane and was wearing the most dazzling dress. She looked like the night with the dress and I glanced at Rarity which winked at me. ‘So she designed this dress for her? It looks pretty amazing.’ I thought.
The guard cleared his throat, “Now for what you have been waiting for… Presenting Sir Trey!”
The doors opened and there was a green pony with red hair as his mane. My jaw drops, ‘this is a joke right? This has to be a joke! It has to be!” I thought
“This is a joke right?” Hatchi asked.
“He is coming this way smile.” Naki whispered.
All three of us did an awkward smile and the supposed Trey walk and stopped in front of us. He was about three feet away from us, and he was fucking tall when he sat on his bottom. The Luna walked and sat beside him.
“I suppose that was the reaction I was going to get.” He said.
“Do not worry I believe they are nervous.” Luna said.
“Hello Twilight, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Rarity, good job on the dresses and suit.” Trey said winking at Rarity.
Rarity blushed, “Thank you sir.”
“Hello Trey.” Applejack said.
“Hi Trey and Luna and Twilight and Applejack and Zoey and Hatchi and Naki and Rarity and Pinkie Pie!” Pinkie Pie said.
Trey laughed, “I see that all things went smoothly with the train?”
“Yes sir there were no problems at all.” Twilight said.
“How…” I mumbled.
“What was that miss?” Trey asked.
“How ARE YOU A FUCKING PONY!!!?” I shouted.
That shout echoed through the room and Trey flopped down his ears, “Now that was the negative reaction I was going to get.”
“I am with her! How did you become an Alicorn?! I want to become a pony myself!” Hatchi said.
“It must be cool to become a pony is you were once human right?” Naki said.
“I DO NOT THINK WE ARE AT THE SAME PAGE!!” I shouted again storming out of the room angry.
I am so angry! When I opened the doors I saw three small children, but ignored them. I saw the exit, but when I blinked, I was right next to Trey and was floating in the air with his levitation.
“WHAT THE FUCK?!” I shouted.
Trey sighed, “I am going to guess you are an Anti-Brony. I have met those kinds before and I got use to them, and they got use to us. You really did not get the memo.”
Trey then lowered me down from his levitation.
“Yeah I think this is going too far Zoey!” Hatchi shouted.
“Zoey try to give this world a chance! There is only two Bronies here and the ponies do not know what the fandom was like.” Naki said.
“I… I just… What about our world?!” I asked.
“It should be recovering right? It has been three years since I was there.” Trey said.
“About that,” Twilight said, “Three years equals three days in the human world.”
“Oh my, that is a big time difference.” Luna said.
Trey sighed, “Alright that theory was out and I have to tell them about what happened to me in these three years.”
“I agree lets tell them.” Luna said.
“Come in!” Trey shouted.
Then the three children I saw at the door came in. Two fillies and a colt… Wait…. ‘Do not tell me.’ I thought staring at him. He was smiling.
“Meet our three kids, Grace, Lily and Noah. As you can see Luna and I are married.” Trey said.
They were his children? This is… This is beastality! Why did he had sex with a mare and had perfect little children? I felt sick… I fell on my knees and looked at Hatchi and Naki. They were staring at me.
“Are you OK?” Lily asked.
Next thing I knew I blacked out from my sick stomach. Was this how I was going to live? Be a mare and have children of my own? Or be a human for the rest of my life and not get married to another human… This is certainly… Hell.
Transformation II (First Draft)
Petra gave birth to me in less than two months and 29 days and it kept the doctors very confused about a Unicorn being born way too early. They kept me in incubators which was fine, I was still trying to grow. What I did to Petra’s child, which was a Unicorn, is that I merged with the sexual personality that amplified Petra's sexual desires to get pregnant with Trey's child. When I merged with the piece, I threw the sexual desire away. Now I am Yert in a Unicorns body.
My power started to grow even more and more. Then I started to grow into a colt. I broke out of my incubator and absorbed any doctor who tried to contact to Canterlot about Petra’s presence. After the deed was done, I sprinted out of the hospital not even saying good bye to my new mother.
‘Wait new mother?’ I thought.
Maybe it was because there was still a child inside not fighting, but just sending out messages into my head I was currently controlling. So the messages was overall, ‘Good bye mother, I will miss you.’
I now realized that Petra was at the Ponyville hospital and I could sense the Jim character in the distance. I decided to side track to generate more dark energy to grow more powerful.
I saw a tree house in the distance and decided to use my new powers and jumped into the trees and hopped over to the tree house. I recognized the voices, it was the CMC talking to some ponies. Jim’s character was inside there. I decided to listen to their conversation.
“So I guess your mother Luna decided for you three to stay with me and Granny Smith. While Twilight and the others do business.” Apple Bloom said.
“What did she mean by business?” Scootaloo asked.
“You know when my sister says business it means that they are going to Manhattan again to get her friends to help her make dresses. I guess.” Said Sweetie Belle
“Yeah our mother decided not to tell us anything, but she said we were allowed to visit Ponyville whenever we like because the train is more efficient.” Said Grace.
‘Grace is in there and so is Jim. Let me call out to him.’ I thought.
I then held out my hoof and sent an invisible dark wave of magic towards Grace and then she fell to the floor.
“Grace!” shouted Noah.
“What’s going on?” Scootaloo asked.
“She has a high fever all of a sudden.” Said Lily putting their forehead together.
“I will get big brother to help her, Scootaloo you go to the hospital for medicine, Sweetie belle we need cold washcloths and I will go and see if there is any soup in my house.” Apple Bloom said.
The CMC left the tree house and I hid myself so I would not be seen. I waited until they were off a certain distance, then I dropped in for the surprise.
“Who are-” I stopped Noah and Lily by knocking them out quietly and lie them down on the floor.
“Now I need Jim to be complete.” I said to myself putting my hoof on Grace’s temple.
I was trying to pull Jim out of Grace’s conscience, but it was not possible. I decided to increase the dark magic and pulled even more.
Grace groaned in pain when I was doing this. When I continued to pull Jim out awoke.
“STOP IT!” she shouted.
This made me jump and I was still connected to Jim at the time. When I jumped my hoof let go of her temple and extracted a string dark magic on her forehead leading to my hoof. She stood up and her horn was trying to glow, but since I was in her mind, she could not focus.
“Do not get rid of Jim!” she said to me.
‘Has she taken a liking to Jim?’ I asked to myself.
I shook my head and pulled even more. She moaned and was crouching down in agonizing pain. Then some sort of message was sent to my head.
‘If you want power. I can grant it.’ Said a gruff voice.
I shook my head even more to pull Jim out, the thread connected to my hoof was forming into something. The long dark magic of a thread decided to form into a ball and started to form into a Yin Yang?
‘What?!’ I thought
“Impossible!” I shouted out loud.
Jim was starting to form into its own being. I saw an orange Unicorn with brown hair curled up in a ball. He had no cutie mark, but it started to glow.
I was shocked and was trying to disconnect the thread, but it would not break. Then Jim’s eyes opened and looked at me.
“I will disconnect from you if you will leave us alone.” He said.
“Do not be silly! You are my final part to take over this land.” I said.
Grace was confused by the statement I just said, “What do you mean final part?”
Jim then was making my thread pure light and it was burning the hell out of me.
“What do you think you are doing?” I shouted.
“Jim is no longer part of you Yert. I have chosen my own path and decided to stay with Trey’s side.” He said.
“Wait you use to be part of Yert?!” Grace shouted.
The pure light was burning me and I had to give in other wise this rebirth would have been for nothing. I decided to pull out of this light and the thread broke and I fled away by teleporting to the Canterlot station.
I was exhausted and decided to walk to the bathroom stalls. ‘Trey invented these bathroom stalls for ponies to use in the bathroom? Interesting, but getting off topic. What was that voice?’ I thought.
‘Were you talking about me?’ said the voice.
‘Yes. Who are you? What do you mean by granting me power?’ I asked.
‘I am Nemesis. The power that I am talking about is pure darkness, not dark magic that you have been using.’ He said.
‘What is the difference?’
‘Dark magic is still magic, but use for evil. Darkness is not magic, it creates anything and everything pure evil.’
‘Interesting… Why me though?’ I asked.
‘I have watch you fail time and time again, but you kept on coming back seeking revenge against Yert. He has escaped my clutches, and is near your current location.’
‘I am willing to accept it. Go ahead hit me!’
There was silence, then he spoke, ‘Excellent!’
It did not even take seconds to find out that I was being surrounded by pure darkness and I felt much stronger than I have ever felt before. My body turned from a colt to a stallion, it was an amazing experience.
The power was coursing through my veins, my vision was twice as better than a human’s vision. My smell was twice as better than a dogs sense of smell, my ears could hear like a bunny would. It felt amazing. My Unicorn horn grew just as tall as an Alicorns horn.
I took a breath and focused to teleport inside Canterlot castle. I opened my eyes and I felt amazing. I was not tired after I teleported inside of Petra’s room.
‘Mother…’ whimpered a child in my head.
‘Shut it you!’ I shouted at it.
I seriously need a new body, but for now this will do. It had feelings, it disgusts me! I hate it! I want to be fucking heartless! I felt rage coursing through my body and I sprinted towards Trey’s energy.
He was a human… Perfect! I leaned down my head and ran faster and shouted, “TREY!! YOU GET OVER HERE!!!”
I stabbed through his stomach with my horn, then it touched a glass object and poof! We were in another place.
I stopped when I saw the new scenery, but Trey was still feeling gravity and was flying back shouting in pain.
“GAH!” he grunted in pain as he landed on his back.
‘You are hurting him… Stop it.’ The child said again.
I shut him off from my mind and focused on the prize. Trey is going to die in my hands… Or hoofs. Blood from his body soaked my horn and was dripping down to my lips. I licked it. ‘Delicious.’ I thought.
Trey got up and his wound I gave him was gone and he did his Yin Yang transformation and threw himself towards me. I saw this coming and the next thing he would do is he would glow his fists and punch me.
Not this time… I teleported right in front of him and punched him with the same move, but twice as powerful. The punch consumed him is a black beam and he shouted in pain. I was smiling and laughing from this enjoyment, then I heard crying in my head.
The child I was taking over was crying and sobbing. Begging me to stop, telling me to take him to mommy. It made me freeze and I felt Trey copy my own move, but it was more powerful than me?
I landed on the ground on my back and it was painful. Wait. ‘NEMESIS!! WHERE IS YOUR POWER!’ I shouted from in my mind.
‘I am using my own magic against you. I am canceling out your magic and darkness.’ Said a girl
‘Who are you?!’ I shouted.
‘I am Trey’s sister. His side kick who kicked your ass.’ She said.
I could not believe this at all. Trey’s sister, Clover, should have died! I was not paying attention to Trey and got punched into the ground by Trey which caused a crater.
“YERT!!!!” He shouted.
I could hear Clover talking to the child I am currently controlling and she was comforting him.
‘Hey there kid, what wrong?’ she asked him
‘This guy is scary. He does things that are scary. I do not like it.’ He said.
‘Do you have a name?’
‘My mother called my Chris.’
‘That is a wonderful name. Do you know who this guy is?’ she said showing a picture of Trey as an Alicorn.
‘No, I do not know.’ He said.
‘That stallion is your father.’
‘He is?’
She nodded, ‘Yes and he is trying to get rid of this evil guy who is controlling you.’
I was frozen on the ground then being thrown all over the place, by enraged Trey. The pain was going everywhere, it was excruciating. They still continued.
‘Will you fight with me to get rid of him?’ she asked Chris.
‘I want to, but I am chained.’ He said revealing his chains to the ground.
‘You are truly a monster Yert.’ She said to me.
I snapped back to reality and punched Trey across the yard.
Trey smirked and wiped away blood from his lips, “What’s wrong Yert? Having second thoughts?”
I got up and sprinted with all of my might and fired a darkness laser at him. He blocked it like it was nothing and deflected it away from him. When it stopped firing he teleported in front of me and punched me silly.
‘That should do it. You are now free Chris.’ Clover said smiling.
‘Can you help me gain control?’ Chris asked.
Clover looked at me and grinned, ‘Of course.’
I felt my body getting weaker, I was now limping towards Trey trying to land a punch on him. He dodged everything. I was now shrinking slowly back into a colt.
“Your sister is a bitch.” I said to him.
He grabbed me by the throat and lifted me into the air, “You have no right to be here. Get back into my memory and be sealed.”
I smiled, “How are you going to do that?”
He got his blood and drew a picture of a brain and it was surrounded by blood chains on my belly. Now I knew what was going to happen. I felt my presence being absorbed into Trey’s arm. I was being sealed into Trey’s mind. Chains formed all around me chaining me into the farthest part of his brain.
“Trey you are a bitch. You know that?” I said.
“I am only a bitch to my enemies. Now back to where you came from.” He said.
‘Serves you right!’ said Chris sticking out his tongue.
Clover giggled and just waved as I blackout by suffocating in Trey’s reformed brain.
