Determination in Equestria

by Phill9876

Chapter 3

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After A few moments...a few screams and yells, then a pitch black alicorn wearing armor that had a EE-cup walked out then more ponies yelled and screamed and a few even actually cursed

"What none of you even know who I AM I am hurt""

"I do" Me and Twilight said. "You are the Mare in The Moon/ Night Mare Moon" We said in unison "Your goal is to bring Night time eternal." We said together

Night Mare looked at us with a sadistic grin and an unsettling look in her eyes "Looks like there are SOME..beings that know who I am." She said "But what in TARTERUS ARE you?" She asked me with clear knowledge and venom in her words and bringing the focus of the room to me.

"I am Nick Fitzgerald, a Human, I was brought here by a mysterious force that is unknown to me while I slept in my world, friend to those who believe in me, under service of Celestia, Omnivore, however non-pony eater, friend of Twilight Sparkle, and finally since you have clearly done something to Celestia: ENDER OF YOU!" I said loudly, mildly both embarrassed and proudly, and yelled the last two parts as loudly as I can and pointed at her.

"Oh why would you trust Cel-" she started but I cut her off

"Because she was the first one in this land to give me a chance to explain it all....to except me, her guards ran at me with weapons, and even some residents of PonyVille have looked at me like a monster however the princess,...she didn't even think twice before looking at me as a friend! AND YOU HAVE HARMED HER THEREFOR I CAN NOT FORGIVE YOU!!!" I said with quickly rising, unyielding rage.

"HAHAHA then I will see you in the Everfree forest." She said in an almost seductive tone as she teleported away.

I could tell all eyes were on me as I left, I felt their BURNING stares "What, I could see your looks, some confused, some distrusting, some couldn't care less! Well guess what, either you accept me or you don't, I don't care, I WILL get Celestia back! I SWEAR it, With my heart, soul, MY EVERYTHING, I will die before I let her get her way!" I yelled as I ran out.

I was right in front of the Everfree forest when I heard "STOP!" It sounded like...Twilight, "Wait for us!"

"So you will all be coming?" I asked without looking back "All 6 of you?" They all nodded at slightly varying speeds. "Okay...just don't blame me if anything happens...you all came willingly. Okay?" They all nodded again. "Let's move then." I said, voice trembling from both gladness and something I couldn't quite identify and we walked in.

(the scene played identically to the show just with me there until now) a piece of the cliff fell apart and scent all but the two pegisi barreling down the new slope made. I stopped at the bottom and saw Twilight fall down then when Twilight let go and I heard voices I jumped down similarly to AJ. "Well that was odd to say the least." I said to nopony in particular.

(Once again similar to the show...I am lazy as well as that I can not put most of it to words accurately...and I not even going to try with giggle at the ghosties so don't try to get me to and I honestly if I have spoken out of my rear till now then know that this is the truth: I cannot allow myself to write the near-petty nature of the Rarity part of this episode. However I do offer a sincere apology to those who desire me to do so.)

We arrived at a broken bridge with a gap in the beginning that was too large to cross. "Well... this is trouble...maybe one of or the both of you can help?" I asked the pegisi. Fluttershy shook her head

"Wait here you guys. I'll be right back!" Rainbow said as he took the bridge's end and flew across and then fog closed off out view of Rainbow... but weirdly enough it also cut off our hearing. A few moments later she flies out with no rope end and we cross the bridge and then we see it.

The Castle Of The Two Sisters. (I write it this way out of respect and will continue to so don't bitch about it) We walked into the castle to see her looking and laughing at us, her face pointed at me. "What is so funny? I said I would be here." I asked calmly.

She slowly stopped laughing and looked at me "Because of what you said in PonyVille both before and after I left." She said with much laughter remaining in her voice.

"Well. I don't say words that I don't mean...that would be a waste of air. And so, I have come to deliver, I have said all I need to." I said calmly. "Except this: I vow, with my friends as a witnesses:The existence of the being known as Night Mare Moon shall end here for what you have done!" I said voice starting to shake from anger. I squeezed my hands into fists as hard as I could "Enough talk besides the is a saying in my world 'action speaks a thousand words' so I intend to say a couple hundred thousand to your face!" I said as I ran at Night Mare Moon and twilight ran right behind me to stop me but we both got teleported .


Author's Note

CLIFFHANGED!!! (and sorry this one was a little short)

AWW PHILL thats mean!
Pinky!!!...GTG BYE!

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