Determination in Equestria

by Phill9876

Chapter 4

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Author's Note

Look I am sorry that this chapter was short for my standards BUT next chapter will be a little longer than usual. I Pinkey promise, Cross my heart, hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye.


Chapter 4

After the teleportation we were in a completely different room and we saw some rocks but they had symbols....those elements that Twilight was talking about. (I heard the words elements and harmony used together) She ran to the room I saw her Night Mare Moon, and she did NOT look like she wanted us to get these elements. "Twilight! Get the elements, I'll keep her away!" She nodded

"You really plan on fighting ME? How foalish." She said

"Well it is better than doing nothing, then I would be a bad friend...but we can stop this here and now...just surrender and bring Celestia back." I said with a voice filed with hope and the desire to see Celestia again.

"HAHAHA sorry but that is not going to happen." Her voice was calm.

"OK just know....I tried to prevent it but....your about to have a bad time." I said. I ran at her, full speed. She...somepony said something but I didn't listen, I didn't care.

Then i was hit in the side of my head, blood slowly coming from it...then I am on the floor and I see Night Mare Moon about to throw a spear of darkness at Twilight, so I did what any good friend would do. I took the spear for her, It landed an inch or two above my belly-button.(Yes I AM being serious.) Then weirdly...the spear vanished leaving....little to nothing that I could see..the pain, still there.

I grunted loudly at the pain. "Sorry...It will take a little more than that to bring me down." I said with a little blood starting to gather by the sides of my mouth. "Now then...the REAL fight begins!" I announced

I half ran half sprinted at her with one thing absolute in my mind I WILL GET HER BACK! when I got up to her I slammed my fist into her face with everything I had but....she didn't seem so much as phased by the hit.

"Is that Really all you have....shame I was looking forward to a challenge...Oh well" she said, voice filled with boredom. she started to hit me, I kept up with her. (I was trained in hand- to-hand combat) I got a moment to rest and I noticed I weird and... dark power inside me...and it was growing! (NO IT IS NOT AN INUENDO....asshole) Night Mare Moon ran past me to get to Twilight but on the on the way stabbed both my shoulders with swords...shewas going to kill Twilight...and her friends.

I felt my anger burning inside of me. "I WILL NOT LET YOU!" I yelled as I ran and caught up to her and put her in a full nelson and held her horn.

(end the song here....If you wanna)

"Hold me all you want but I will get out once you tire. Then I WILL kill them...they don't even have there precious elements." She said

"You are wrong. While the stones are destroyed, the spirits live inside them, Honesty: Apple Jack, Loyalty: Rainbow Dash, Generosity: Rarity, Laughter: Pinkey Pie, Kindness: FlutterShy, Magic: Twilight Sparkle. You have all shown those elements since you got here!" I said as the jewel of each element secured itself to the corresponding pony in a necklace, except Twilight who got a crown/tiara. (Im not gonna argue over witch one it is.) "Now use the elements and end this right here and now!" I said

"Move out of the way then." They all said.

"I can't let go, the moment I do she will unleash a spell that will knock all of us out of commission. Just know that if I was destined to die here then I am happy that at least I went out doing something good." I said calmly with tears of joy running down my face.

They fired a beam that looked like a rainbow upon the both of us, and we both yelled in agony. When the beam faded I saw the princess appear. She along with my friends approached me and a new alicorn that was next to me. I smiled at them, then every thing went black.

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