Determination in Equestria

by Phill9876

Chapter 7

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Author's Note

OK...This chapter (If you didn't read my last note) will have clop. My first time writing it at that... Give me feedback! Even if it is as little as I ran out of ideas too, so some of thos would be good too.
With that out of the way(....I hope you) enjoy


Chapter 7

Luna teleported us into her room then I saw her grab her her dress. "Wait Luna, before we start...Can I take a shower first, I smell awful! I never got to clean myself since I got here." I asked. "You can even be in the bathroom, but no funny stuff."

"Sure." Luna said

"Thanks, I'll finish as soon as possible." I said. (Not writing about shower.) After I got out of the shower I examined myself, my brown hair that I style into my usual "Bed head" as I dry it, I then look at my scars on my torso and upper arms. I then walked out (No use in getting dressed.) I see Luna has already undressed. "Alright, I'm ready...are you?"

"Yes, yes we are" Luna says sounding excited

"Luna,...I'm gonna be blunt, I've never had sex before so I need you to guide me. Is that okay?" I asked

"Well...we never have either.." Luna says with a voice full of shame and a large blush to match.

(Clop starts)

"Then we will take it slow until we figure out what we like best." I said as I walked up to her and brought us both to the bed. I then begin to grope her left breast and say "Well come on, we don't have all day." I said. I then start to slide the fingers of my right hand into her soaking wet marehood.

After about a minute passes. "Come on let us start the main event" Luna said and I complied. I stop groping, remove my hand from Luna and get myself into position. I then slowly take the plunge into Luna's marehood as she moans.

"Well, no regrets, we both desired this of each other? Or is this the heat?" I asked

"Honestly, a little of both...why?" Luna asked

"No reason." I lied as I slammed into Luna and I felt blood dripping from within her. "That's why." I confessed.

(Clop end, I have no ideas)

After about three hours of sex Luna says "Wow, stallions only last a few minutes, and only cum once." Luna said.

"Well, I'm no stallion." I said, felling confident as I went into the bathroom and cleaned myself. I walked out and got cloths on and grabbed my things. "Well...what now?" I asked. I waited but she just looked at me. "Well if you don't know then I guess we can talk." I proposed.

"I'll start...I grew up without parents. Or at least without my real ones" I took a moment to prepare myself. "When I was four, my parents and I were walking but then I heard something heavy fall and saw my mother dead, blood seeping from her body. Then the man attacked my father, I slammed at the attackers leg, what exactly it did I will never know but my father was able to stop the attacker and the authorities took him away. But my father started coughing while they were questioning him. They called and ambulance and loaded him on it, but he wouldn't make it to the hospital. On the way there he saw me bawling my eyes out, his last words both haunt and comfort me to this day, ... 'Don't worry son, I'll be okay. I love you'. Shortly after saying that to me, he started severely vomiting blood and died due to blood loss." I took a moment to compose myself. "For the next 3 years I was on the street, long story, then for another 3 I was in an orphanage getting turned down because the people looking had seen me on the street. Then...hell happened, I was taken in by a young couple who seemed to be okay. But then they took me in, after about a year the husband turned into the stereotypical abusive drunk, with a twist. He would beat me and his wife, but then she would beat me for what her husband did to her. After about five or six years I ran away from them, taking as much money I can hold, I used the money for necessities and training in hand-to-hand combat and with the weapons I know how to use. Then I came here." I said, voice full of sadness, anger, and a little of regret.

"Finally, Luna, I need to tell you something about the demon I am related to." I said.

"What is it Nick?" She asked.

"She is the same demon that...made you..... become Night Mare Moon." I said hesitantly.

"What?" She asked as if she didn't hear me.

" I....said 'She is the same demon that...made you..... become Night Mare Moon.'" I said more hesitantly.

What happened next caught me off guard, she ran at me, grabbed me by the neck and started to beat on me. "BASTARD!!!!!" She screamed-no wailed at me, voice full of pain and sorrow.

"Whats going on!!??" Celestia said as she barged down the door, then she saw Luna beating me. "And put Nick down NOW!" She yelled.

"NO THIS TRAITOR IS RELATED TO THE DEMON THAT CAUSED ME TO BECOME THAT AWFUL PONY!!!!!!" Luna wailed, with more anger.

"......What?" Celestia asked.

"You heard me!!" Luna said, getting exhausted.

"Nick...is this true?" She asked, eyes tearing up. I slowly, hesitantly, against all things telling me not to, nodded. "Why....didn't you say anything?"

"Because....Faust told me not to." I said as Luna let me go and passed out from exhaustion. "I'm so, so, so sorry!" I said tears and my blood running down the entirety of my body.

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