Submissive of the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well

by ManicQuill

Maid to Order

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Sunset Shimmer sighed as she walked down the slow streets of Canter City, the snow falling freshly blanketing the city. Sunset blushed as she felt the cool air waft from the fresh frost up her legs, she grimaced as the cold penatrated her black pantyhose, wickedly teasing her flower. At this moment she regreted following her mistress's orders only to smile at the thought; following her mistress's orders.

No wearing jeans or panties, you can only wear skirts and tights.

Keeping the first rule in mind, Sunset tried to walk normally as she kept her eyes open in case of ice on the ground. Sunset was a few feet away from Rarity's parents shop when someone bumped into her from one of the shops, knocking her to the ground causing her to show her little secret to Ditzy Doo, or as others called her, Derpy.

"Hey Sunset. I think you might have forgotten something this morning." The blonde said to the flame haired girl with a genuine smile. Sunset gave a nervous laugh as she tried to play it off.

"Yeah, I kinda realized it too late and... Well, you saw." Derpy helped Sunset up as she looked around.

"Luckily for you, it seems I'm the only one who saw. You know, you should go over to Rarity's. Did you know she lives close by? What am I saying, of course you do." She beamed with a smile, a complete contrast of how she was a week ago. Thinking about this, Sunset spoke.

"Hey Der- I mean Ditzy, I never apologized about before the Fall Formal. I was just such a bitch and you were only ever nice to me." Sunset expected alot of things, the one thing she didn't expect was a hug from the blonde.

"It's okay Sunset. You've saved us from those Siren and then-" Derpy paused as she thought about what to say. "We hurt you...All of us...you saved us and we just believed you turned evil again because we were still mad." Sunset sighed as she hugged Derpy a little tighter.

"It's okay, Ditzy. If you can forgive me, I can definitely forgive you." Derpy was now crying as she shook her head yes with a smile. "Good. Now, I need to go. It's a little too cool out here." She said with a embarresed smile. Derpy didn't understand at first then realized What Sunset was hinting at and blushed.

"Oh! Yeah, sorry about that, Sunset. I'll let you go now but we should talk later. Merry Christmas." Sunset wished her the same as she made a brisk walk to Rarity's. Sunset thought it was intresting how Rarity and her family lived above their shop, making the trip to and from work nonexistent.

Sunset Shimmer entered the shop, the bell above the door ringing as Sweetie Belle stood at the counter. Both girls looked at each other, neither having spoke since the reveal of Anon-A-Miss. Sweetie Belle looked as though Sunset would set her on fire without a moments hesitation.

"H-hi Sunset. Rarity's upstairs." Sweetie Belle whispered as she figited with something on the counter. Just hearing her voice, it was like the younger girl was trying not to cry.

A part of Sunset wanted to dig into the girl about her hand in the fiasco, wanting to make sure Sweetie Belle knew just how badly she messed up. While she wanted to do it, that was a bit of the old Sunset Shimmer not the new Sunset. It seemed like Sweetie Belle needed a reminder of that.

"I'm sorry you guys couldn't stay in Vegas. What happened exactly, Rarity never said." Sunset asked as she walked over to the counter. Sweetie Belle smiled softly as she sat on the chair behind the counter.

"Yeah, apparently the hotel gave away our other room and were trying to make Mom and Dad pay more so Mom and Rarity talked and we all agreed that Mom and Dad should stay while Rarity and I came home with at least some of the money they got back from the hotel room for the plane tickets and for food. Because I'm still in trouble though, I need to help Rarity run the store till Christmas." She then looked out the window and sighed. "I don't know how good an idea that was though, anytime someone from school walks in they either leave or yell at me, then leave."

Sunset shook her head as she knew what that was like. "It's easier to deal with when you have people with you. Trust me." She said reassuringly.

Sweetie Belle looked at Sunset Shimmer in disbelief.

"Sunset... Why are you being nice to me? After what we did, you should hate us." The small girl whispered, seeming smaller then she was. Sunset Shimmer was no longer smiling as she asked a simple question.

"What would change if I was? If I'm being honest, I haven't forgiven you three for what you did. Hell, I may never be able to forgive you, but I can still be kind to you when you need it." Sunset Shimmer stated as she made her way to the stairs. "It's easier to be mad, but if I want to get to a point where I can forgive you, I need to be kind." Sweetie Belle said nothing as Sunset Shimmer walked up into the Belle family living room.

Sunset scaned the room for a sign of Rarity, finding a folded paper on the kitchen counter with her name on it. Sunset snatched it up and read aloud.

"I'm waiting in my room with a surprise. Kisses, Rarity." Something was off about the message, shrugging, Sunset Shimmer walked down the hall and opened the door finding an odd sight.

Scattered across Rarity's normally clean floors were Rarity's normal outfit, even her bra and panties were discarded with the other cloths. Sunset walked over to investigate when she saw it. Sitting on Rarity's bed was a sketch of the Maiden-Do-Well costume. In the top corner of the page was something else that made Sunset curious. Versions: Spandex,
Faux Leather, Latex. the idea of three prototypes of the suit made Sunset kinda horny.

"Is this your way of telling me something Rares?" Sunset asked as she walked over to the walk in closet. Maiden-Do-Well stepped into view, leaning on the door frame as both women looked at each other.

"Yes, it is a way." She said cooly as Sunset rolled her eyes.

"In hindsight, I should have guessed you were Maiden-Do-Well. That costume screams your creative flare." Sunset said confidently. "I was hoping you'd drag the game out a little more." She stated glumly, sitting on the bed as she left her legs open.

"Oh Sunset, you were only half right." Maiden-Do-Well stated as she walked over to Rarity's vanity, sitting backwards in the chair. "Yes, Rarity did make my costume after I begged for her help. So, even though you one part right, you've still used up one guess. Well, you do deserve a consolation prize." Maiden-Do-Well ended, bringing her hands together in a quick succession of three claps. Sunset became aware of footsteps coming out of the closet.

Sunset leand forward, shocked by what she saw stepping out. Rarity stood in a black mini dress with a sheer white lace underskirt, a white apron tied around her waist while her sholders were covered in puffy black sleeves. A black chocker with white trim was tied around her neck while atop her head sat a white cap. Rarity's legs where covered by white hose that lead into black open toed heels locked onto her ankles, a muzzle gag strapped over her mouth as she held a feather duster, her hands tied in front of her with a leather belt.

"Wait, what?" Sunset asked as She looked Rarity up and down, the fashionista blushing as she tried to cover herself. Her leg stopped by the small chain connecting her legs together.

"Rarity's fetish, she likes being a bondage maid. Being made to clean while her mistress torments and belittles her." Sunset's mistress stated as she then pulled out a controller, the moment she pressed a button Rarity began to moan as she pressed on her skirt. "Rarity. Bring out your toys, I think it's time we play with Sunset." Maiden-Do-Well ordered.

Sunset and Rarity looked at each other, Rarity looking down a little at Sunset's open legs: Sunset realizing her friend had a clear view of how wet she was. Rarity's eyes gave her a look of excitement, Rarity bowed to Maiden-Do-Well then walked to the bed, looking at Sunset as she pulled a suitcase out from under the bed. Rarity opened the case, holding a magic wand vibrator while Sunset saw some of the dildos, gags, and plugs Rarity had as well as another certain toy.

"Really Rares? Vibrating nipple clamps." Rarity merely blushed as she walked over to Maiden-Do-Well, handing her the wand vibrator. "So, what happens now?" Sunset questioned.

"It's easy darling. Our little Rarity here had agreed to play with us for a bit, her hope being she can earn you forgiveness through penitence. If not, she fears you will never forgive any of them for Anon-Anon-A-Miss. So it's up to you to decide."

Sunset looked to Rarity surprised as the fashionista motioned at her gag, Maiden-Do-Well shook her head then took it off.

"It's true Sunset. We don't talk about it, but we all wish we could make up for how we acted. When she came to ask me about the suit, I asked her if we could do this as well and suggested some of the other girls who'd be more then happy to take this offer up." Rarity stated as Maiden-Do-Well handed Sunset the gag.

"I mean, well..." Sunset struggled for a moment then closed her eyes. She reopened them and looked at Rarity as if the fall formal never happened. "If that's the case, pull down your top. Now, slut." Sunset ordered Rarity with a fierce attitude. Rarity had a large blush on her face as she did as she was told, Sunset tracing one of Rarity's pert nipples with the cool metal clamp.

Rarity let out a gasp as Sunset made small circles around Rarity's nipple, soon turning into a moan before Sunset quickly latched one onto Rarity's nipple, the pale girl crying out in pain. Sunset Shimmer smirked, leaning forward as she then began to suck on the other nipple.

"Ah! Mmm, Mistress." Rairty purred. Sunset stopped as she then gave a twist to the clamp, Rarity crying out as Sunset applied the other clamp, both sets of clamp teeth biting into her tender flesh. Rarity had tears in her eyes as Sunset asked.

"What do you say, slut?" Sunset demanded with a sinister smile. Rarity sniffed as she looked at the clamps then to Sunset and Maiden-Do-Well.

"T-thank you mistress, for giving your slave attention. I-I am not worthy of it." Rarity hiccuped as Sunset turned on the vibes, the clamps shaking in a way that would not cause Rarity bodily damage.

"Oh Rarity, you are worth it. You are worth the time it takes to edge you, just to deny you release." Sunset Shimmer said with a crazed look as she turned off the vibes, Sunset quickly shock her head then looked to the ground. "I'm sorry. I can't." She whispered, standing up.

"Sunset please!" Rarity cried, grabbing Sunset's hand. "We got away with hurting you... I got away with hurting you. I need to make up for it, and if sharing a fantasy I've wanted to try can make it right then I would be more then happy to revell in the taboo." She begged, Sunset holding Rarity's hands as well.

"I can't Rarity. I'm scared that if I do this I'll go to far... That's not what this is supposed to be." She said, motioning to the restraints. "When people decide to practice this together they agree do so following the three words: Safe, Sane, and Consensual. Right now Rarity, I fear I won't be able to do that." She stated, tears rolling down her face.

"Then let me take over." Maiden-Do-Well said after watching the the two silently. "The both of you will be bound together, sharing both pain and pleasure. You both trust me, you know I'll keep you safe, and you know I'll be sane about how we'll play... So why not give me consent?" Maiden-Do-Well asked as she graced Sunset's cheek with a side of her hand lightly wiping away a tear.

"Please mistress... Use this slave." Sunset whispered the words as if afraid their volume would shatter this dream, her body trembling in excitement. Both girls looked to Rarity, mascara falling down the fashionista's face.

"I have made my stance quite clear already. Either as my mistress or as my slave sister, I will be more then happy to participate in this session."

Maiden-Do-Well walked to Rarity's closet, picking up a belt she then tightened it, creating a loud snap.

"Then let's get down to business." Maiden-Do-Well stated to her subs.


Author's Note

Hey look! A new chapter to a story I bet you all thought was dead. Well now that Sunset has had her fun with Rarity, whose next? Stay tuned.