Submitting to the Great and Powerful

by Budget_Player_Cadet

Deeper and Deeper

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"So, how do you feel?"

Starlight blinked, shaking the last remnants of trance from her head. It was as though her mind had been on a tilt-a-whirl, then stuffed with cotton candy. Everything felt... floaty. Like she had just woken up from a wonderfully relaxing nap.

She yawned, stretching a bit in her chair. "Wow, that was really nice. Bark!"

Shocked to attention, she covered her mouth and giggled a little bit.

"What was that? Bark!"

"The Great and Powerful Trixie knows what she's doing," Trixie said, chuckling softly to herself. "I may have left a little post-hypnotic instruction in your mind. Isn't that right?"

"Yes, Miss Trixie. Bark!" She blushed and giggled. "Why am I barking? Bark!"

Trixie smirked predatorily, and explained, "Because Trixie left a few things inside you. Things like obedience. And Trixie likes the sound you make when you bark like an obedient little puppy. Now be a good girl and bark."

"Bark!" Starlight covered her mouth, giggling.

After a moment's pause, she released her hoof from her mouth, sure she wouldn't bark again, and said, "It's weird... But I like it, Miss Trixie. Bark!" Starlight couldn't help but break into peals of laughter. Her mind felt so odd, like at once that she wasn't quite all there, and that there was something new and foreign as well. Like words and actions were being pushed onto her body without her input or control.

She basked in the fuzzy feeling for a moment, before Trixie spoke again.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie commands you to walk over to the bed and lie down on it, then stay there."

It was such a queer feeling. Her legs moved before she had even fully processed what Trixie had said. Something other than her conscious mind had taken control, and even as she tried to take control back, she felt her legs moving inexorably beneath her.

Trixie must have noticed the expression on her face. She smirked. "Why are you trying to resist? It's so much more pleasant to just give in. You can stop barking now."

The words were like treacle in her mind, and as her legs moved entirely of their own will, she accepted it, and let Trixie's words deeper into her thoughts. "Yes Miss," she murmured, although she didn't feel like she said it - just like it didn't feel like she was making her legs lie down on Trixie's bed. It happened automatically, and she was just along for the ride.

And as she did, she noticed just how right Trixie was. It did feel good to give in. Her whole body felt... warm. A pleasant warmth spread through her, and one thought passed through the treacle of her mind - not her own thought, but a pleasant visitor nonetheless - I am a good, obedient girl, and obedience feels good. It swirled through her mind, pushing other, less important thoughts out of the way. Thoughts like resistance. Thoughts like fear. Thoughts like embarrassment. The dopey grin on her face widened.

"Good girl."

She sighed. Just hearing those words felt so nice.

Trixie stepped up to her. She ran her forehoof along Trixie's cheek, down to her chin, and lifted her head up to gaze into her vacant eyes.

Starlight felt that pull again, her mind gradually slipping into Trixie's eyes. She leaned into it.

"Good girl."

This time, she let out a soft gasp. As lost as she was, the words called to her mind, reminding her of her place. She wanted to stand up, to get closer to those beautiful, deep eyes and soft fur... But even more, she wanted to obey. So she stayed where she was.

"The great and powerful Trixie commands you to feel pleasure anywhere she touches," Trixie demanded. She smirked at Starlight, and ran her hoof along her cheek again.

Heat blossomed beneath her skin. She could feel her blush, and beneath that, intense pleasure, as Trixie's hoof left a trail of tingling sensations running down her cheek... Her neck... Her back...

"Feels good, doesn't it?"

"Yes, miss," she replied, her monotone cracking somewhat as Trixie's hoof found a particularly tense spot on her back. It loosened immediately beneath Trixie's ministrations, soothing the muscle and softening the skin.

"Every part of your body the Great and Powerful Trixie touches is becoming so sensitive," Trixie cooed. "So arousing. So soft, and warm." Her hoof traced a lazy circle above Starlight's back, and as Starlight whimpered beneath her ministrations, she continued, "Let the erotic feelings flood through you. Let them become more and more intense. The Great and Powerful Trixie is sharing her erotic energy with you, and it feels so good, doesn't it?"

Starlight's moans left little room for disagreement. She barely managed to force out a gasping 'Yes, Miss'.

"And you know that, awake or not, Trixie's words have power over you..."

Trixie's hoof slipped lower, gliding down her rump until it rested right above Starlight's tail.

"The Great and Powerful Trixie commands: head down, rump up, tail flagged."

Starlight gasped as her body complied, her hind legs springing up, while her forelegs folded beneath her. As hazy as her mind was, she still felt a pang of embarrassment as her tail flagged up, giving Trixie a clear view of her marehood. Despite that, the words rang, first through her mind, then through her mouth. "Yes, miss." Her mind wished for her to comply, and so, she would comply, shame be damned. It felt too good to not do it.

Trixie left her field of view, retreating behind her with a husky chuckle. "Trixie wonders how great and powerful this will feel," she said, much to Starlight's curiosity.

Her curiosity was quickly sated as Trixie's hoof brushed the fur of her left inner thigh, drawing tiny circles along her skin, leaving rings of fire that begged to be touched. She progressed bit by bit, closer and closer to the top, to the revealed core, and Starlight whimpered with need.

Words ran through her mind. Trixie's words. Great and Powerful.

"Every touch leaving you more and more aroused, horny, needful. Every touch poisoning you with passion, and forcing your mind further into submission."

And she did fall further into submission. It felt so good to fall into submission, particularly as Trixie's hoof got so close to her swollen marehood...

...And passed it by entirely, drawing wavy spirals down her other leg, only increasing her desire. She tried to move, but she was bound in place, helpless. It was torture.

Starlight let loose a desperate, horny whimper. "Please, miss."

Running through her head, along with the heat Trixie was sharing with her, came more words. "Every touch I give you, your body becomes more and more sensitive. More and more like your entire body is a marehood. And your marehood feels far better still."

It was true, of course. Trixie's ministrations were making her feel more and more like a sex object. The sheets against her face were like a piece of silk being rubbed along her dock. Trixie's gentle touches were forcing more sensual, powerful, sexual energy into her body, and the more she received, the more she desperately needed.

"You're so aroused. There's so much of Trixie's sexual energy inside you. It's combining with your desire within your loins, like a balloon filling up, bit by bit with pure pleasure."

Trixie leaned in close, to where Starlight could feel her breath on her ear. A throaty whisper. "Can you imagine how incredible it would feel if that balloon popped? Focus on that thought for a moment."

The thought ran laps around her fuzzy, empty mind. She could feel it. Her core was coiling up like a spring, building and building the arousal from Trixie's ministrations. She could feel it quite clearly as Trixie nibbled and licked her ear, and continued speaking.

"But you can't cum. Not without the Great and Powerful Trixie giving you permission. Good girls don't cum until they're allowed to. Do you want to be a good girl?"

Starlight answered in the affirmative. And Trixie kept touching her. She felt the maddeningly arousing touches along her legs, up her thighs, on her cutie marks... She felt her whole body grasping desperately for that release, as she clutched the sheets and moaned.

"The pain will fade very quickly, to be replaced by a deep, glorious pleasure. Which you will thank me for."

Before Starlight could even take a moment to wonder what that meant, she felt it.

Whack!

Trixie's hoof slammed down on her rump.

Like a bolt of lightning through her, she felt the ripples from Trixie's harsh spank flow through her body, and almost melted. The pressure within her built up again, as she felt first the stab of pain, then pleasure crash over her like a tsunami. She desperately wanted to let go, to give herself in to the torrent of pleasure, but more than that, she wanted to be a good girl. And... "Good girls don't cum until they're allowed to," Trixie's words helpfully echoed in her mind.

Instead, she merely gasped out between moans, "Thank you miss."

"Good girl," Trixie growled, as she slammed her hoof down again, coaxing moans of pain and pleasure from Starlight.

Whack!

"Thank you, miss." A little harder to get out this time.

"Good girl," Trixie roared. Tracing quick circles along Starlight's cutie mark, her voice becoming more and more intense, she spoke, "You want it so badly, don't you?"

Whack!

Starlight struggled to speak through the pleasurable moans. "Thank you, miss."

"You feel that energy just filling you up, and you just want it to burst, don't you? Just want Trixie's voice to push you over the edge."

Whack!

"Thank you, miss!" Her legs were spasming beneath her. Her ass stung,

"Are you a good girl?"

The strikes paused, waiting for an answer. Starlight gasped for breath. Her flank burned from the pain of the strikes, but far more than that, her loins burned with intense pleasure building and boiling within her. She nodded desperately into the bed. "Yes miss!"

Trixie's voice took on a cruel, mocking tone. "Then you can handle a few more."

As the beating continued, Starlight didn't even notice her tongue flopping out and drooling on the bed. All she could focus on was how good it felt, how wonderful it was, and how much fuller and larger the ball of pleasure within her was getting. She didn't even have to think to hear herself moaning, "Thank you, miss," after every strike.

"Becoming more aroused. Becoming 10 times more aroused." Trixie tugged roughly at Starlight's tail, and struck again, this time far closer to Starlight's dock. The sensation was unbearable.

"Such a good, obedient girl. I think you're good and ready, aren't you?"

Starlight moaned out something vaguely resembling, "Yes Miss Trixie".

I'm going to let you cum," Trixie grinned. "Five more strikes..."

Whack!

"Four... You want it so badly."

Whack!

"Three. Such a wonderful subject. Triple your arousal..."

Whack!

"Two more, hotter and hotter, harder and harder...."

Whack!

"One more. Feel that ball of pleasure within you. It's full to bursting. It'll burst on the next strike. I'm going to give you the orgasm you so badly want. Are you good and ready? Do you really want to cum?"

Desperate, gasping, Starlight forced out, "Yes Miss Trixie!"

Trixie moved to where she could look Starlight in the eye, and gave her a nasty smirk. "The Great and Powerful Trixie commands: beg."

The words came out, slow and unstead at first, but gaining speed as she spoke.

"Please, Miss Trixie, I need to cum. I really really need it! I'm so desperate and horny and want it so badly! I've been a good girl, haven't I? Please, Miss, I need to cum!"

Trixie's smirk widened. "Good girl." She pulled back from Starlight.

"Zero."

WHAM!

Starlight's eyes rolled back in her head. She saw stars as the pain rushed through her body, so sharp, so fierce, to be followed immediately by...

"Cum for me."

The pleasure surged through her body. It was as though the hypnotic rope that tethered her to the edge of the cliff was finally released, and she was finally allowed to fall over the edge, to sink into the sea of pleasure. She could virtually hear the pop as the balloon of pleasure burst, spreading those intense sexual feelings through every part of her, to every part of her body Trixie had touched, rocketing pleasure through her. Her body twitched and spasmed, her fluids leaking onto the bed below. Her legs wobbled, but refused to collapse beneath her. She gasped for breath, screaming in pleasure. Trixie was saying something about how good it must feel, and how long it would last, but Starlight's conscious mind didn't hear any of it - all she could feel, her entire world, was the release of orgasm crashing through her.

And it kept going. Her entire mind was drowing in pleasure, every instant dragging on in bliss. Somewhere, in the back of her mind, she knew she should have stopped cumming by now, that she should have come back down. But the far greater portion of her mind was lost in hypnotic pleasure, the bliss pressing forward, going on and on. Her mind fell into bliss, and the last thing she could feel running through her mind before she vanished completely was, "I obey."


"...4, take a nice, deep breath, and 5, all the way up, thoughts returning, feeling wonderfully relaxed, refreshed, and satisfied."

Starlight blinked. She was lying face-down in a bed. She shook the last remnants of trance from her head, noticing a warm forelimb over her barrel. She looked to the side, and saw Trixie cuddling up to her. It was as though her mind had been on a tilt-a-whirl, then stuffed with cotton candy. Everything felt... hazy, and warm. Like she had just woken up from a wonderfully relaxing nap. She wasn't sure what was going on, but it felt nice. There was a dull, throbbing pain in her flank, but as Trixie stroked her back, it receded somewhat, leaving a lovely tingle. She leaned into it, closing her eyes and nuzzling up to Trixie.

After a moment, Trixie spoke.

"How do you feel?"

The memories came flooding back. Her mind, like a toy in Trixie's hooves. Being manipulated. Spanked. Forced to cum until her mind vanished completely. Her cheeks took on a much deeper shade, and she giggled to herself.

Turning to Trixie, she laughed. "I feel amazing," she chuckled, beaming. "Thank you so much, Trixie!"

"You are very welcome. The Great and Powerful Trixie does enjoy toying with the minds of lovely mares like you."

Starlight took a deep breath. "Phew! That was intense, though. I couldn't resist, even when I wanted to."

"Trixie knows," Trixie said, matter-of-factly. She sipped her tea, and grinned. "And that's just the first session. The more we do, the more powerful it becomes." She paused for a moment, and smiled warmly at "Would you like to do it again, Submissive Starlight?"

Starlight's eyes glazed over; her mind followed suit. The words came as though spoken by another. "Yes, oh Great and Powerful Trixie, you command and I obey."

Her thoughts came back an instant later. She stared at Trixie, and they both burst out into laughter.

"Good girl," Trixie said, gently stroking Starlight's mane and smiling sweetly. “The Great and Powerful Trixie is going to have so much fun with you. Doesn’t that sound fun?”

Starlight didn’t even have to think about her answer.

“Yes, Miss Trixie.”


Author's Note

And that's a wrap.

Thanks again to The Town Crier for proofreading. Any feedback is more than welcome. :twilightsmile: