Fluttershy takes much needed relaxation time and walks through the woods.

First one-shot all criticism is welcome, I'm only doing this to improve
:Edit: Written in an hour, not planned, stupid ideas that came as I typed in word things. To be honest I didn't even read it over, but since I got 3 likes overnight I guess it wasn't that bad (according to what I usually get ) Still, would someone PLEASE comment! I'm near desperate, nobody is commenting and I don't know what I need to improve on!
Editor: None
Kudos to my cover image creator, whoever you are...good art