Revival of A Guy Who Cares

by falconstrings

Welcome to Ponyville

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'Well I can safely say I didn't expect this' I thought inside the cage of purpleness. I should probably explain what happened before now. It all started when I walked into town, the sun was shining. the little ponies were playing, and a rainbow flash decided I need a bad time. but here are the details if you want that.


"Welcome to Ponyville!" Zecora smiled and walked across the bridge connecting the road to the town. 'Well this will be an adventure' as I cross the bridge, I look around everything is just full of color even that silent movie theatre. I stop at a crosswalk and look around I see the CMC and their sisters running around, the CMC looks to be about 14-16 years old. While 3 of the mane 6 looks to be 20-something. Applebloom wares that pink bow as a holder for a small ponytail. (the irony is not lost on me) She also wears a yellow-green t-shirt with blue overalls. next to her is Applejack wearing the EG outfit. next to them was Sweetie Belle and Rarity as I observe them I see something interesting 'they don't have horns? how do they tell if they're unicorns then?' and then Scootaloo with Rainbow Dash their wings flapping methodically trying to get Scootaloo in the air.

"Well isn't that a thing?" I said not understanding what was about to happen. this next part's a bit confusing, but please try and follow along. first I turn around about to go and find either the library or the friendship castle then I trip on a suspiciously placed banana peel, the next two things that happen is me falling, but while falling I throw a ball? I couldn't tell with the sun in my eyes. The ball lands on a ramp and goes down it, it drops onto a mint-green unicorn who throws the ball away in anger. The ball hits a lamppost and bounces off it. next, it does a rimshot off a drumset and lands directly on a shy pegasus and the ball pops, causing the yellow pony to jump onto a pink one. the pink one revs like a racecar and speeds off into the playing CMC somehow forming a ball made of pony that then crashes into one Twilight Sparkle... and somehow after this ridiculous display. I was the "reincarnated spirit of chaos" because I laughed at the scene I caused. Well, this was pre-alicorn twilight so the EoH(Elements of Harmony) were still very much active. so, in the end, I got to taste the rainbow... it wasn't very tasty.


Pov third person

As the mane 6 power down, the "new discord" was sealed in stone through the expression it made wasn't one of shock it was one of amusement and disappointment. as twilight got up she spoke to the baby dragon next to her.

"Spike take a letter!" this is the letter as written by Spike the dragon:

Dear Princess Celestia,
We have faced a new enemy to Equestira, we believe it to be a new Discord since the one we know has been reformed. with quick response to a problem it caused, we used the elements on it to seal it way until you decide what to do with it.

Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle.

with a quick bout of green flame, the letter was off and the path was set... let's see what happens next.


Author's Note

Hey, everybody, I hope you all are doing well. I know that this is a bit late to say so but this is my first story on this site and quite frankly I thought it would never pass the grammar check because of my horrible writing skills, but I'm glad it did. now my policy on comments are:
if it's meant to help the story become better then go ahead, constructive criticism is welcome! if you just can't read my story because of reasons then that's ok at least you gave it a shot that's all I asked for. and please tell me your opinions I like to see them good or bad. now I hope to see you in the comments and next chapter until then i'll see you next time.

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