Demise in Equestria

by inuboy7

The History of the Entites

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Authors note: If your reading this story you are reading the sequal. You don't have to but it would help. Read the first story in this series, it is titled Paradox in Equestria. Otherwise you may not understand the referances used here.

Entites are powerful creatures capable of altering reality. More powerful still than the Draconequis', they have the ability at points to be able to corrupt the Elements of Harmony themselves. But an Entite does not begin as a being of such great mass on its own. There are three known forms of the creatures known to be able to become these Gods of power. They are called Wysps, they begin as an unseen, weightless matter of power. They take no form, and no shape. Which is why they are so hard to stop. A Wysp, when it absorbs enough power can become a Whysper, they take the form of a gassious smoke like substance. They can shapeshift into other creatures they have taken power from. The next step up is obviously the great Entite. A massive ball of energy these celestial creatures can take possetion of the body and force the soul into a secluded area of the mind.

But there are only three known Wysps with the ability to do this, one is known as Hate. Hate feeds on, as you've guessed, the hatered fuled between argument and conflict. Demise feeds on the sadness and sorrow of a creature. And Sin, is known to have the most plentiful food source. He is known to have been able to absorb from the seven deadly sins: Lust, Greed, Envy, Gluttony, Pride, Sloth and Wrath. With these elements in his possetion he is known to be nearly invincible. When the two great Gods Galactica and Univera (the very creators of the universe) came to put a stop to the destructive rampage of this beast all they could do was improson it.

The only known key to releasing this behemoth was for his two lesser brothers to be destroyed. Thus the Entites were all sealed away, depleating the chance of the Entites coming back to wreak havoc in our world.

I finnished the story about the Entites. They did seem very powerful indeed, not even the creators of the universe were able to stop Sin. I became interested in the subject because we'd recently had a run in, well sort of, with a similar creature. Nopony else remembered it it seemed except for myself and Fluttershy. We were living in a dystopian empire run by Parydan Nox, who had enslaved a race of cyborg equines that we named NineVolts. They killed eveypony we once knew, I swear if it wasn't for trying to scrap parts to bring Fluttershy back from the brink of death I would have went insane just like all of my friends as well.

Parydan was apparently two brothers, Parydan and Equin Nox. Parydan the black stallion, had become obsessed with black magic. When his brother came to his door dying he apparently used his body as a sacrifice to gain the power to leave into a different world to find acceptance. Unfortunately in doing so he opened a portal into the Dark World releasing a Wysp known as Hate. Hate fed quickly on the twins' differences and quickly evolved into an Entite and consumed the bodies of both Parydan and Equin. He killed Princess Celestia, and ran Luna into hiding.

Finally after twenty five years we had regenerated Fluttershy and she snapped our friends back into reality. After an intense battle with Rainbow Dash, we defeated Parydan and his brother and him, now back to their original states, returned Equestria back to it's natural state twenty five years prior.

And that's where this story began. I was suspicious of the strange things that were happening in Equestria lately. Some of the residents seemed down, as if the happiness was drained out of them. I didn't want to rush to any conclusions, but after reading this book my suspicion was about as good as confirmed. Demise was in Equestria, and he was getting stronger.

I am the runt of my two brothers, I know that, they know it too. I was never powerful, but I hated these equines more than EITHER of them. These filthy uptight creatures belived they were better than me. I am the Wysp of Demise, I bring sadness to this land. For the past few days since my release I scoured the land and wraught on wretched desease to the world. Cursing those who crossed my path, I was in an awkward stage though. I seemed to be caught between a Wysp and a Whysper. It appeared I could WILLINGLY change my form AND not even be seen at all. It was strange but I used it to my advantage.

I hate these creatures more than my two brothers, probably because of my experiences. I remember it well, about six thousand years ago. Idiotic creatures.

Six thousand years ago...

I was then and I'm a runt now, I can't feed as often as I would like because these creatures seem to not be unhappy very often. I scrounge around getting anything I can. At the moment the land is barren, a wasteland. My two brothers have ravanged it. Nopony to feed on. The gods have warned them, though they have not heeded. I'm starving now, on my stomach crawling. Suddenly a hoof stomps the ground in front of me, I look up to see the Goddess of Creation, Univera. I latch on to her ankle trying to feed anything I can, nothing.

She shakes me off easily.

"You leeches will pay for your insolence!" she shouts at me, I cower before her powerful loud voice.

"We have warned you to leave this land and yet your petty attempt to destroy it continue!"

"Please..." I beg her, "I only mean to exist, it is not I that ravenge this land I hunger for just meager sustinance!"

"And yet if given the chance you too would pillage my creations out of greed," I have no time to protest, "NAY! I say to you begon knave!"

I am suddenly thrust into a world where I am just immobilized, nothing. I have nothing.

I do hate these creatures, which is why upon second arrival I notice the land has flourished. It seems the more powerful brother Sin is still captive, Hate on the other hand I feel his presence no more. This world is mine, it has nothing to guard it but a mere princess. HA! I demise will rule this land and ruthlessly gut it for everything I can, and when I am done the God and Goddes of creation will kneel before my power. Demise of this land of Equestria.

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