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The Diamond in the Gear

by Patachu
a foreign intelligence agency organizes the kidnapping of Nyx, and DiamondTiara, who was wandering with her is also being caught, and stuck in a place at the antipodes of Equestria.

On a lonely night, Nyx and Diamond Tiara get abducted. After dealing with a foreign military group, they end up a couple of days later in a strange country at the antipode of Equestria: Industria.
More like a prison, ruled by technology and bureaucracy, where magic is strictly illegal, and a complete indoctrination of their ponies to obey and conform to the party's ideology, even rejecting their own nature.

The irony being, despite unicorns and pegasus being banned, and seen like dangerous beings, Lorelei Kernav, the president in chief of Industria will see in Nyx a potential ally to achieve the world domination, as being the key element of a global conspiracy, with the intention to eliminate magic from the world, ( and ensure it to be replaced by their technology and culture )

Instead of being simply executed, after revealing she’s of no use and not related to Nyx, Diamond Tiara is integrated in a brainwashing program to test how foreign ponies gets assimilated into Industria's citizenship, but she won't give up holding with the reality of the world she lives in, and try to not lose her mind.

That story was started as a greentext story a long time ago as DiamondTiara, instead of Anonymous, initially so the story is written from her point of view, but the two stories are just completely different and the point of view could change, from Anon, a human who knows our world, and DT, an Equestrian who discovers a different part of the world.


It's about sixfirst chapters and more will come in whenever I get the inspiration to work on it, and practice more writing.

Incomplete
Sex
Adventure
Violence
Death
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Thriller
 
DO

26324 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

6 Chapters:

  1. 1 - Ghosts 2016-08-22 12:36:56 UTC
    5122
  2. 2 - Prison City 2016-08-22 12:38:18 UTC
    4795
  3. 3 - Reformat, reinstall. 2016-08-22 12:44:00 UTC
    8107
  4. 4 - Underground 2016-08-22 12:50:25 UTC
    2352
  5. 5 The Weapon 2017-06-10 21:56:00 UTC
    1641
  6. 6 Enemy 2017-06-10 22:04:08 UTC
    4307