The Diamond in the Gear

by Patachu

First published

On a lonely night, Nyx and Diamond Tiara get abducted. After dealing with a foreign military group, they end up a couple of days later in a strange country at the antipode of Equestria: Industria.
More like a prison, ruled by technology and bureaucracy, where magic is strictly illegal, and a complete indoctrination of their ponies to obey and conform to the party's ideology, even rejecting their own nature.

The irony being, despite unicorns and pegasus being banned, and seen like dangerous beings, Lorelei Kernav, the president in chief of Industria will see in Nyx a potential ally to achieve the world domination, as being the key element of a global conspiracy, with the intention to eliminate magic from the world, ( and ensure it to be replaced by their technology and culture )

Instead of being simply executed, after revealing she’s of no use and not related to Nyx, Diamond Tiara is integrated in a brainwashing program to test how foreign ponies gets assimilated into Industria's citizenship, but she won't give up holding with the reality of the world she lives in, and try to not lose her mind.

That story was started as a greentext story a long time ago as DiamondTiara, instead of Anonymous, initially so the story is written from her point of view, but the two stories are just completely different and the point of view could change, from Anon, a human who knows our world, and DT, an Equestrian who discovers a different part of the world.


It's about sixfirst chapters and more will come in whenever I get the inspiration to work on it, and practice more writing.