Collarblind: Red Scare

[An outline of the remaining chapters that were never written.]

Flitter is a red collar pegasus who wants to go visit her sister, Cloudchaser, who she hasn't seen since they were separated during the Fall. Her owner, a pegasus stallion (I was thinking Thunderlane, but if that doesn't work it could be anyone), doesn't even know where her sister is, so he tells her she can't do that. It happens that her owner is one of the few stallions left out there who's still too soft and squeamish to punish his mares, and up until now he's been keeping Flitter obedient by being nice to her and giving her toys and treats. So when he finally tells her she can't do something, she gets angry and stops respecting him, and he calls for professional help.

Flash arrives, talks to the owner and Flitter, and gets a handle on the situation. He teaches the owner a valuable lesson about how punishment is an essential part of proper mare ownership, and then tells him that to fix a mare as spoiled and arrogant as Flitter he's going to have to take drastic action. Out of curiosity, he researches Cloudchaser and finds out that she's been put to work in some brutal place like a warbeast breeding facility or a rape vine farm. He concocts a plan to "scare Flitter straight": he tells her they're going to visit her sister after all, and she gets really excited.

But when he takes her to the nightmarish place where Cloudchaser has been sent, instead of letting her talk to her sister, he just makes Flitter watch while she's grotesquely raped and abused. Flitter is terrified because she's never seen abuse like this before, and she promises to do anything her owner says as long as he doesn't send her to a place like this. However, Flash insists that he doesn't think she's going to learn her lesson until she experiences for herself the punishments that bad mares get. So he leaves Flitter there for a few days, and when her owner comes back to pick her up she's been traumatized and is completely servile.

Flash goes back to his office and congratulates himself on another job well done, and then at the very end Caribou or some other messenger of the government shows up to offer him a job taming a blue collar to tease at the next story in the sequence.