Equestria's Finest: Reversed Reality

by The 14th Doctor

Prelude: Break Out

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    It was night time in Avalon, Canterlot. All was quiet, too quiet. A dark blue pegasus with a comet cutie mark was sneaking his way through the streets. Guards were roaming, and the pegasus knew these guards belonged to his tyrannical brother, Galaxy. Galaxy had succeeded in taking over Canterlot a few years back, and now he was making his way to Ponyville. Comet wasn't about to let that happen. His radio went off and he heard a mare's voice. "Comet! You've been quiet for almost two hours now. I need a status update!" The voice belonged to Vanilla Mocha,, a member of Comet's small band of rebels. Comet was planning to break somepony out of Galaxy's dungeons.

     "Mocha, I need to keep radio silence. I'm nearly to the rendezvous point." He hissed into the radio. Mocha's voice was stern, but understanding.

      "OK, just make sure you radio base when you've got the target. Over." She replied. Comet rolled his eyes and shut off his radio.

      "OK Comet." Comet said to himself. "Time to use that charm mom gave you." He said to himself as he strolled up to the doors where a mare guard was standing. The mare lowered her spear and growled.

       "Halt!" She ordered. Her voice was gruff. Underneath her helmet were magenta eyes along with a rainbow mane and tail. "No one allowed in the streets without King Galaxy's approval!" The rainbow maned mare ordered. Comet chuckled.

        "I'm the king's brother, dearie. I happen to have power to overrule his approval." He smirked. The mare raised her spear.

        "My...my apologies. I had no idea." She blushed nervously. "You know, you're....pretty good looking for the king's brother." She stammered nervously. "I'm Rainbow Dash." She smiled. Comet shook her hoof.

        "Comet. Say, Dashie, may I call you Dashie? You don't happen to know where Cell 575 is, do you?" Comet asked in a seducing way. Rainbow blushed and threw him the keys, whispering in his ear.

         "Down the hall, first door on the left. Make sure you aren't seen." She whispered. Comet nodded and walked down the hallway, looking for cell 575. Soon, he found it. He unlocked the gate and was greeted with a sight.

          "Ah, there you are, Quillton." Comet smiled. Quillton turned around, his coat bruised and dusty, along with a black eyepatch over his eye. "Let's get you out of here." Comet said as the two fled without being seen by any of the guards. Meanwhile, in his palace, Galaxy was furious.

          "No. No, no no no no no!!" Galaxy yelled as he threw a table, scaring some guards. "My brother got away with Quillton!! With him, he'll have a tactical advantage!" His red eyes glowed. "Find him, now!!" He ordered. The guards nodded and scattered out to find Comet.

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