Undermare: Your Underground Adventure!

by FNAFBRONY

Fallen Down

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ACT I: The Ruins

You wake up on a bed of yellow flowers. They felt comfy, but you got up anyway. The room was dark, except for a bright hole in the ceiling, which showed the bright, blue sky of your home. You look around, but nothing else screamed out at you to take a closer look at. The only thing to do was to follow the grey path away from where you landed. You proceeded to do so.

After a bit of walking, you came across another bright room. A patch of green grass was placed in the centre of the room. But it was the thing on the grass that really caught your eye. On the grass, smiling happily, was a small, pink pony with a pink mane and tail.

“Hi,” you hear the pony say in a high pitched voice. “I'm Pinkie! Pinkie the pony! You don't look like a pony. But I still love making new friends. Will you be my friend?”

You nod your head up and down, telling Pinkie the answer is yes.

“Yay! We're gonna be best friends forever! But first, since you’re new, I must have to teach you the ways of the underground! This is how we like to, umm, get to know eachother better! Let's begin!”

You see a small bow appeared in front of you, with a red heart in the centre. You look down to see Pinkie, still smiling.

“This is your soul, the thing that makes you different from everypony else! In fact, if you try hard enough, you can make your soul move! Try it!”

Almost immediately after trying out what she said, the heart began to move throughout the box.

“Looks like you got the hang of it,” she said with a giggle. “Now, in order for your soul to survive down here, you need to gather more ‘LV.’”

You open your mouth and was about to ask the pony a question, but she answered it for you.

“What's LV? It's LOVE, you silly filly! How you gather LOVE is up to you to find out. Now since your LOVE is unbelievably low, I might as well give you some myself. It's the least I can do.”

She giggled as something soon appeared in the box that contained your soul. It looked like a cupcake, except it was pure white.

“Here, have a delicious cupcake! It's fresh from the oven!”

You move your soul towards the treat. Almost immediately after touching it, you feel a sharp pain in your stomach, where your heart is. The cupcake was now missing, leaving only your soul in the box.

“You IDIOT!” Pinkie Pie shouted at you. You look down at her, noticing immediately that her name was now straight rather than curly.

“You REALLY thought you could be friends with a pony? In this world, IT’S KILL OR BE KILLED!”

More white cupcakes soon appeared around your soul, slowing getting closer and closer. You felt as if then and there, you were actually going to die.

But that didn't happen.

Before you could face your end, the cupcakes around you disappeared, leaving only your soul in the box.

“Huh, that's not supposed to happen.” Pinkie Pie said, looking utterly confused.

“Well, I guess you win this time. I'll see you soon, new best friend!”

Before you knew it, Pinkie was gone. After a few seconds, the box that contained the heart disappeared, leaving you in the dark room. You notice what looks like a doorway in front of you, saying this is the only way out. So, you did what anyone would do in this situation; you went through it.


You found yourself in a larger room than before. It made from purple bricks and the flooring was also purple. Red rose petals covered most of the floor. But the one thing that really caught your eye was the figure standing in the middle of the room.

“Oh, umm, hello,” it said with a smile as it walked towards you. “You’re a human, aren't you?”

Taking a closer look at the creature, you realize it was another pony. It had light yellow fur, with a light pink mane and tail. It wore a blue robe, with small hole on the back for its wings to stretch out.

You nod your head, answering the pony’s question. “Oh my. Well, do not be afraid. I'm here to help. My name is Torishy. I'm the guardian of these ruins.”

She went up to you and held out a hoof for you to hold, which you did, feeling safe. “Let me guide you through to your new home.”

You walk out of the room, holding the pony’s hoof. She seemed to be nice. At least, nicer than that Pinkie Pie you saw earlier. Whatever the case, you felt like it's going to take a long time to get back to the surface. But you felt something in your heart that made you feel safe.

You were filled with

DETERMINATION!

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