Firstly, if you don't like the story please tell me why so that I might endeavour to learn from my mistakes. Secondly, the first chapter is kinda haphazard, but iv gotten into my stride now Later chapters are much more structured and coherent, if you hang in there and actually read through.

Shining armour has retired from the royal guard and has reenlisted in the Royal Equestrian Navy (REN). He is still plauged by memories and nightmares from the war. Can he overcome his past and protect his sister as he sails for the horizon? When they land on the shores of the forgotten world, many dangers await, but so do opportunities to make friends and bring glory to Equestria.

Not all the characters listed are in the pilot chapter.
I take no credit for the amazing work done by the artist of my cover picture.