The old world

Ok, so, this being my first fic, it is, looking back after 2 years of writing practise and tutoring, horrible. Thus I am going to be re-writing this entire story from the ground up. The basic story will be almost the same, but i shall focus much more on character development and flow. I will also be SLOWING IT RIGHT DOWN! thanks for reading, all and any feed back is appreciated. (yes it has been a LONG time but i have got my writing grove back for now.)