To Hell and Back

by Vasto Lorde

Twilight Vs Twilight

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The three Princesses and Prince made their way inside of the castle. Inside they made their way towards the throne room and once inside Celestia closed the large wooden double doors with her magic. Celestia went to sit on the throne, while Luna went to stand at her side. Twilight decided to stay on her hind legs and was standing in the middle of the room with Blueblood still in her grasp. She dropped him and walked over to a wall to lean on it, with her arms crossed.

"So my dear nephew, what has led you to try and kill Twilight and her...uh friend?" Celestia asked. Blueblood only stood still looking at the ground.

"The Princess asked you a question asshole, I suggest you answer." Twilight said in a commanding tone.

"That is so your favorite curse word." Dying said.

"What? No it is not, just shut up alright." Twilight said.

"The amount of times you've used it proves my point." Dying said.

"No it doesn't." Twilight said.

Dying smiled."Yes it does."

"Does not."

"Does to."

"Does not."

"Does to."

"Does not!" Twilight quietly yelled.

"Twilight could thou stop bickering like a foal with thou friend, tis giving us a headache." Luna said.

"Oh sorry." Twilight said rubbing the back of her head.

"Yay, I win." Dying yelled and Twilight rolled her eyes.

"Continue Blueblood." Twilight said.

"Because she insulted the nobility and threatened my life." Blueblood said.

"Which you drove me to doing." Twilight said.

"I'd have to agree with Twilight." Said Celestia."You did pressure her into doing it."

"Like I said before my dear aunt, we deserved to know where she has been. I mean you can't tell me that you and auntie Luna don't have your own questions?" Blueblood said.

"Tis true that we and our sister have questions, but we would ask her when the time is appropriate for all of us or when she wants to. Tis her desicion to tell everypony of her travels." Luna replied. Twilight ht smiled at her comment.

"We're you alone when you went to kill her?" Celestia asked. Twilight immediately froze.

'Not good, soooo not good!' Twilight thought.

"Welp we're screwed." Dying said.

Blueblood smiled when he saw Twilight's reaction to the question. "No is was not. Before the plan was set in motion I met with the nobles that were present at the meeting and after the plan was set in motion we all met at the abandoned warehouse and there were also fifteen of my guards present. When me and the nobility entered she had vanished. Then she appeared out of nowhere and she was standing behind us. We turned around and then she turned into that monster of hers and then murdered the other nobles with giant crystals that shot from the ground. Then the bodies of the nobles were sucked into the crystals, and when the crystals went back into the ground that monster said that they left a bad taste in her mouth."

Celestia stared wide eyed at Blueblood and then she looked over towards Twilight. "Is this true?" Celestia asked.

Twilight just stood and stared at the ground. She knew she had to give her an answer and there was no way she could lie her way out of this because of the way she reacted when Celestia asked Blueblood the question about him being alone. What was she to do?

"Just tell her the truth, there's no point in hiding it." Dying said.

Twilight took a deep breath and spoke."Yes, yes it is true." Twilight replied. Both Celestia and Luna had looks of horror on their faces. Blueblood on the other hoof had a big smile on his face.

'Yes, this is sure to get her stripped of her title.' He thought.

Luna smiled. "Huzzah!"

Celestia turned her head towards Luna, Blueblood and Twilight also turned their attention towards Luna."Luna!" Celestia screamed.

"What? Thou too should be very overjoyed, thou court shall be shorter, and thou can get to thou's cake and bananas faster." Luna said. Blueblood and Twilight's jaw hit the floor. "Also thou shall not have to deal with all of those snobbish foals. Well most of them anyways."

"While that may be true, they were still murdered and from the sound of it...eaten." Celestia said.

Twilight sighed and spoke."It actually more like they were absorbed." She said.

"Actually that is what that was." Dying corrected.

"Oh, that's exactly what it was, absorption." Twilight said.

"What happens when you absorb a pony?" Celestia asked.

"Well first a pony or creature must be already dead. Then the absorption process begins. The body of the victim then becomes part of the weapon they were killed with. Whether it be a sword, gun, fists, or crystals the body will be absorbed into the weapon. Well actually if you were to use a gun then you would have to walk over to the body and then absorb it. That would be the only way possible when using a gun. After the absorption the memories, strength, intelligence, endurance, and whatever else is added to the ponies own strength and other things mentioned. You can also gain certain attributes or abilities from the absorption. For example you see how I walk like a bipedal creature?" Twilight asked. The Royal Sisters nodded." I got this when Dying absorbed one of my enemies form my...trip." Twilight explained and shivered when she mentioned her trip."I also have some other abilities, but some are a little horrific."

"Ha! Your talking to two ponies that have lived for over two millennia. Anything you can do won't even scare them an inch." Blueblood said doubting Twilight skills. Twilight smiled.

"I bet you two-thousand bits that I can." Twilight said.

"Deal, but if you can't not only will you not have those bits, you'll have to be my servant for twenty-four hours." Blueblood said.

"Deal." Twilight said."Celestia, Luna are you ready?"

"Bring it on." Luna said.

"She meant to say yes." Celestia said.

"Alrigt here we go." Twilight said as her eyes started to glow red.

Canterlot Maze, Near Twilight's Crashed Ship

The maze in the garden was usually quiet and peaceful, with the exception of the ship that was still falling apart piece by piece slowly.
The wind in the area started to pick up. The loose leaves and branches on the ground started swirl around in a circular motion in the middle of the circular motion a yellow rift opened and out fell an alicorn made with a heavy thud the rift closed behind her and everything quieted down. The mare looked around and saw the crashed ship.

"Why the fuck is there a ship in...the maze in Canterlot. The mare got up a dusted off her battle worn armor with her right hoof. She walked around the ship and saw a emblem on the side. A planet with the same ship leaving from it with a white streak following behind it. The ship's dark green color matched her armor. There was three girly screams heard from behind her. The mare whipped around and saw that it could only be coming from one place."The Castle!" The mare said as she spread her wings and took off towards the castle. She flew through the air and opened her pocket dimension to take out her singnature weapon. Her SMG that had runes floating around it. She burst through the window to the throne room and landed on her hooves. She switched to biped mode. She readied her weapon and aimed at her...target? Infront of her stood a tiny foal with a white coat and blue eyes. The foals mane was red and had some blue strips running through her mane. She looked around the throne room to see an unconscious Blueblood and the Royal Sisters starting wide eyed at the foal.

"Ok what the fuck is going on here?" The mare asked. No pony answered. The mare stared in confusion at the two sisters and then looked back at the foal. Said foal started singing a song The commander took a cautious step back.

"Slender Man, Slender Man dressed in the darkest suit and tie." The filly sung in a voice that seemed to belong to some song. The way the filly was staring was starting to unerve the commander.

"Slender loves little children. He likes to take them home with him. He likes to make them his children." The filly said as she started to shift into a tall man. Wearing the darkest suit and tie, his face pale, no noticeable mouth, nose, eyes, hair, or ears. The commander was covered by the shadow of the man. Her vision started to get fussy. Then suddenly everything was over. The commander opened her eyes and looked around. Celestia and Luna finally snapped out of their trance and looked around. They saw Twilight of somepony that looked like Twilight standing off towards the side of the throne room.

"Wow Twilight you weren't kidding when you said horrific." Celestia said.

"Um, excuse me?" The commander said."What the hell was going on here?" She asked.

"You don't remember your deal with Blueblood?" Celestia said confused.

"What deal?" The commander said.

"Me and Blueblood made a deal." Twilight said dropping down from the ceiling.

"And that deal was?" The commander said holding her SMG towards the ceiling but still had her finger on the trigger.

"If I could scare the living shit out of the Princesses over there Blueblood would give me two-thousand bits, if I couldn't no bits and I had to be his servant for twenty-four hours, and I sure as hell made sure that wasn't happening." Twilight explained.

"Ok, well how the hell did you do all that crap. The fuzzy vision, the transformations?" The commander asked.

"Long story short, I can do some crazy shit. And judging by your cybernetic limbs and eyes so can you." Twilight said.

"How the fuck do you know about cybernetics?" The commander asked.

"Lets just say I took a trip and came back with information and abilities that most ponies would veiw as crazy, horrific, or awesome." Twilight said. The two sisters watched as Twilight talked to Twilight.

"Nice scar." The commander said looking at her counterparts eye.

"Same to you." Twilight replied.

"Thanks got em escaping a fed base while rescuing my commanding officer." The commander said.

"Got mine returning home and then got ambushed by some of my captors. Also got wounded on my right leg." Twilight said.

The commander looked down at her counterparts right leg she saw no wound, scar, or scab.

"There's no evidence that their ever was a wound there." The commander said.

"I have the best healing factor in the world." Twilight replied.

"How come you still have the scar then?" The commander asked.

"I chose to keep it, as a reminder of my faliure to get my anger under control." Twilight said her mood diminishing a bit.

"Hey take it from a soldier, you don't want to beat yourself up over your mistakes, makes you sloppy and inefficent." The commander said.

"Well that's what happenes when I get angry. I become sloppy and unable to think." Twilight said.

"Or you turn into me, did you forget to mention me?" Dying said.

"Yes Dying is forgot to mention you." Twilight said aloud.

"Who the fuck is Dying?" The commander asked.

"Oh yes let me introduce..." Twilight said as smoke started coming of her body.

"Dyyyiiing Pheeeeonixxxx!" Dying said as she stood on her hind hooves and formed her crystal fingers and posed.

"What the fuck!" The commander yelled as she readied her SMG to fire.

"There will be no need for that Commander Sparkle. Of the EDF, short for the Equestrian Defense Force. Rebel soldier, Second in command to one Thomas Clancy of The People's Free Democratic Republic or PFDR for short." Dying said. The commander stared at her in confusion.

"How the hell did you know that?" The commander asked.

"Fought a fifth dimensional being, killed his ass absorbed him and then I knew pretty much everything about the multiverse." Dying explained.

"Hmmm, well that's interesting." The Commander said. "So you know everything about me? Like everything, everthing?

"Yes all the way down to your daughter to your mental problems, don't worry I can keep a secret." Dying said whispering towards the end of her sentence.

'Great another pony who knows how crazy I am. The Commander thought. "How do I know your not lying?"

"Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye." Dying said as she preformed the motions and promise.

"An pinkie promise, how do you know about that? The Commander asked clearly surprised.

"Twilight taught me everything she knew about her friends, Equestria, and those bastards that took her away from her home, and those who...who..." Dying said trying to hold back a sob.

"Who what?" Commander Sparkle asked.

"Who ponynapped and murdered...Rarity and many other unicorns." Dying said as she burst into tears. "Twilight was so distraught, so angry, she wanted revenge, she wanted blood. So I was born from her anger and dark magic and took control and we almost escaped before I let my own anger get the best of me and we got captured again. Then the torture and tests began." Dying explained, still crying her eyes out. Inside Dying's head Twilight too was shedding tears. The Commander had also froze when she heard the word 'tests' escape Dying's mouth.

"You both were experimented on?" Commander Sparkle asked.

"No, Twilight had to experience the torture and tests. But me and her are connected, so it was like I was there experiencing them with her. I try not to bring the subject up as it really hurts Twilight to talk about it, and she must be feeling so terrible right now, oh she's so..." Before Dying could finish she found her self in a tight hug from the militaristic mare.

"In all my years of traveling through the multiverse, I have never met another mare that went through the same hell I did." The Commander said showing her more emotional side. Suddenly the two mare found themselves both in the embrace of large, warm, white wings. Both mares turned their head to see Celestia with her own tears falling. Luna stayed back and went over to see if Blueblood was still alive. Thank Faust he was. Luna looked over to the three Alicorns were all sharing a group hug.

Celestia looked over to Luna and motioned her over to them. Luna nodded and made her way over. Dying had turned back into Twilight. While Twilight she was still bigger than Commander and Luna, but still just a couple inches away from being taller than Celestia.

There was a knock at the door and a guard entered."Princess Celestia, Princess Twilight's friends have arrived and...are requesting permission to....enter." The guard said as he stared at the scene before him. Celestia lifted her head and spoke.

"Let them in." Celestia said. The guard nodded and left the room. The three alicorns ceased the hug and stood."Are you both alright?"

"Yes i'm fine." Twilight said.

"Yeah i'll be alright." Commander Sparkle said. Celestia nodded. The doors to the throne room were once again opened. Twilight's friends walked in. They stopped and took in the scene.

"Two Twilight's? I knew I shouldn't have drunk all that cider before we left." Rainbow Dash said as she rubbed her eyes.

"Uh, which ones our Twilight?" Applejack asked.

"This one right here silly." Pinkie Pie said as she pointed her hoof at Twilight.

"So who's the other one?" Fluttershy asked.

"Commander Twilight Sparkle of the Equestrian Defense Force, the Princess of Friendship and the Element of Magic." Commander Sparkle said saluting.

"What is the Equestrian Defense Force?" Rainbow asked.

"The army used when the Royal Guard can't handle the situation. Such as a monster attack or large scale attack." Twilight said.

"So your like the better version of the Guard?" Fluttershy asked.

"Yes." The Commander said.

"Cool." Rainbow said."So what do you guys do when your not saving Equestria?"

"We train, spend time with family, or sometimes in me an the majors case fill out paperwork and go to meetings with annoying nobles." Commander Sparkle replied.

"Can anypony join?" Applejack asked.

"Yes they can. As long as their eighteen and up. And before anyone asks they can be of any nationality."

"Does that include bat ponies?" Applejack asked.

"Yes that does include bat ponies. There just ponies who were born differently and were shunned by their parents and others. Let me tell you now I am no fan of racism." The Commander explained.

"Same here." Twilight said.

"Oh, well I can guess that some ponies didn't like that idea, did they?"

"No, there was a group that formed and they started killing bat ponies when they were off duty or they went to burn their houses down." The Commander said sullenly.

"That's terrible." Fluttershy said.

"Yes it is, but we took care of them. Nopony fucks with my people and get away with it." The Commander said and smiled. There was a groan heard and everypony present turned their attention to the stallion that was waking up. Twilight smiled and walked over to him. He looked up and started to back away.

"No, no, no, no,no, no, stay away from me you beast!" Blueblood said as he back up into a wall."Don't touch me!"

"Shut the fuck up and give me my bits." Twilight said.

"I don't have them on me right now. They're back at my home." Blueblood said.

"Well hurry up and go get them. You have five minutes starting...now!" Twilight said as Blueblood got up and ran as fast as he could out the door.

"What was all that about?" Rainbow asked.

"I'll tell you later, right now I have some news about Rarity."

"Really, where is she, is she hurt?!" Fluttershy, Pinke, AJ, and Rainbow all asked in unison.

Twilight took a deep breath. "Just breath and tell them what happened." Dying said.

"Rarity is...dead." Twilight choked out. Pinkie Pies mane instantly deflated, Fluttershy started crying, both AJ and Rainbow only stood staring wide eyed.

"Say it ain't so." AJ said.

"I'm sorry but it's true." Twilight said head hanging low. "She was taken to a place called Earth, the same place I was for twenty years. She died in a brutal fashion. The humans were doing tests on all the unicorns they had captured, none of them survived. I got their revenge though, I made sure none of those bastards survived." Twilight said she with tears falling from her eyes.

The gathered ponies sat in silence for what seemed like hours. Blueblood finally came back with a bag full of bits in his blue magical aura. "Here you go Princess." Blueblood said as he threw the bag of bits at Twilight who caught it in her magenta magical aura.

"Thanks, now get out of here." Twilight said and Blueblood bolted out the door. "Anyways lets have a race Commander."

"What, huh?" The Commander said caught off guard.

"A race." Twilight said.

"Uh,sure I guess." The Commander replied. "Where at?"

"Your normal run route whenever your in Canterlot. Three laps." Twilight said. "And after that there are a few other things I would like to go against you in." Twilight added.

"Well ok, meet you there in five minutes." The Commander said.

"Gotcha." Twilight said as her and the others left the throne room leaving behind the other two Princesses of Equestria.

Twilight and her freinds walked down the hallway that was going to lead them outside the castle.

"So Twi what was your bet with Prince Blueblood?" Applejack asked.

"If I could scare the Princesses, Blueblood would give me two-thousand bits, if I failed no bits and I would have to be his servant for twenty-four hours. " Twilight explained.

"So that would mean you would have to do anything he wanted you to do?" Rainbow said with a smirk.

"Yeah, but in the end I came out victorious,'I also plan on keeping my virginity thank you very much.' Twilight said and thought as she walked down the hallway.

"How long do you plan on keeping it?" Dying said.

"DYING!" Twilight yelled out loud.

"What, a mare has her needs." Dying said sadly.

"We'll talk about this later." Twilight said.

"Uh, sugarcube who ya talking to?" Applejack asked.

'Dammit!" Twilight thought. 'See what you've done?'

"Hey it was you that formed the thought." Dying replied.

'Whatever, hope you got your explanation ready.' Twilight thought.

"I have and I am ready." Dying said.

'Good cause your about to be on.'

"Eqquis to egghead, you there?" Rainbow asked.

"Yes I am. I would like to introduce someone else before we meet the Commander.

"Ok, where is this pony?" Pinkie Pie said as she looked around the others had joined her after a little while.

"Right here, you silly fillies." A voice called from infront of them. The four ponies turned their head to see a alicorn mare five inches taller than Celestia herself. With a scar on the right side of her face. Her coat was a dark shade of purple and her eyes were a red violet. Her wide smiled showed off her sharp fangs and some other pointy teeth she had. She had a curved red horn that became black the farther you went down, a cutie mark that resembled Twilight's, and Princess Celestia's, there were also purple tendrils that were a lighter shade that connected to the points of the main starburst, there were also mini starbursts around the main one and the orange sun. Her wings were also dark purple but near the edges of her wings there was an orange that faded into a light red.

"Who the buck are you?!" Rainbow said.

"The names Dying Phoenix, friend of Twilight and her brainmate. In other words we are two ponies who share one brain, but we are still one pony, Twilight Sparkle." Dying explained.

"Is anypony else confused?" Applejack asked. Pinkie Pie instantly raised a hoof.

"I already told you who I am. I'm a friend of Twilight, I helped her while she was gone. I helped get her through... some rough times. She taught me everything about you guys and Equestria while she was gone. You were her drive, you all kept her going." Dying said.

"That's sweet and all,but how do we know we can really trust you?" Rainbow asked.

"Applejack." Dying replied. The ponies all turned their attention towards Applejack. "Am I lying?"

"Well, no I can't say that y'll are." Applejack said.

"AJ never lies." Pinkie said.

"Fine, but i'm still keeping my eye on you." Rainbow said.

"Alright, now lets head to meet the Commander." Dying said as they all continued their walk.

A little while later they were outside waiting at the starting point for the race.

"Alright, lets get this thing over with." The Commander said as she arrived. Twilight noticed that the Commander was still in her armor.

"Hold on a sec Commander need to make this fair." Twilight said as she opened her pocket dimension and took out her own armor. "There we go." Twilight said as she put on her armor.

"You guys have the pocket dimension spell here?" The Commander asked.

"Yes we do." Twilight replied.

"Finally another universe with the same spell." The Commander said and smiled.

"I knew you would say that. Anyways lets head over to the front of the gates. The Commander nodded and headed over to the gates with Twilight.

Both the Commander and Twilight got in position and waited for Rainbow Dash to give them the signal.

"Alright eggheads I want a good clean race, no magic or wings."Rainbow said. Both alicorns nodded in response.

"On your marks...."

"I'll go easy on ya Commander." Twilight said.

"You'll be eating my dust." The Commander said confidently.

"Get set..."

"We'll see about that Commander, we'll see." Twilight said as she smiled.

"GO!"

As soon as the word left Rainbow's mouth the Commander pushed off the ground and was on her way.

"Uh Twi, ya know y'll were supposed ta go right?" Applejack said.

"I'm just giving her a head start." Twilight replied. She looked and saw the Commander a good distance away and decided it was time to go. She pushed off the ground and was off. Her start caused a small sonic boom and the wind to blow her friends bodies and manes backwards.

Up ahead the Commander was going at full sprint not even bothering to look behind her. Her augmented hearing caught the sound of a boom. She loooked behind her to see her counterpart right behind her almost at her side.

"You seemed shocked Commander." Twilight said.

"What no." the Commander said.

"It's alright Commander, you don't have to lie." Twilight said and smirked. The Commanders reaction was to increase her speed.

They were halfway through with the first lap when Twilight overlapped the Commander.

"Come on my fellow Sparkle, what's wrong, am I too fast?" Twilight said.

"You are so asking for me to make you eat your words." The Commander replied.

"You'll have to catch me first." Twilight said as she increased her speed a little.

Five minutes later the two alicorns were halfway through the last lap. The Commander in the lead till Twilight once again overtook her.

"Come on Sparkle move it!" Twilight yelled in Mendezes voice. The Commander looked at her confused. "What's keeping you down, move faster you piece of shit!" Twilight said (still using Mendezes voice).

The Commander sped up once again and overtook her counterpart. A little while later the finish line came into view. The Commander was just about to pass it when her counterpart dashed past her and made it first, the Commander only a step behind her.

"Damn." The Commander said. "How did you do it."

"What was it Mendez said?" Twilight asked as she put a hoof to her chin. "Oh yeah." She said as she cleared her throat. "The day I lose to a big eyed freak like you, is the day the sky falls." Twilight said exactly like Mendez had all those years ago and in the same voice. The two alicorns shared a small laugh together leaving the other ponies present very confused."Want to get something to eat Commander, girls?" Twilight asked. The Commander smiled.

"Sure that's fine with me, but first i'll need to change into my uniform." The Commander said.

"No problem Commander, we'll meet you in the mess hall." Twilight replied.

"Will do." The Commander said. After that the gathered ponies went their separate directions.

After forty-five minutes the Commander was making her way down the hallway leading to the mess hall. As she entered the mess hall she saw her counterpart and her friends sitting at a table in the middle of the room. She made her way over to them. "Hello all." The Commander said and smiled.

"Hey Commander." Twilight said. "I took the liberty of setting up your lunch for you, i'm pretty sure you'll enjoy it. I actually ordered the same thing. The staffs faces would have made you laugh your ass off." Twilight said as she remembered the staffs faces when she put in her and the Commanders orders. The Commander took a seat next to Rainbow Dash and the group started talking some more about the EDF and it's history, the Commander having to use the word classified or coming up with some white lies on more than a few occasions. Their meals finally arrived and the smell of meat hit the noses of all present, two with their mouth's watering (technically three if you consider Dying), the rest recoiled in disgust.

"Is that meat?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Yes, yes it is!" Both Twilght's said excitedly and then facehoofed. "Dammit." They said in unison again. "I should have know this was bound to happen." They looked at each other and laughed leaving the others confused once again.

"Not again. Damn that hasn't happend since I met the Princess." The Commander laughed. Their food was set down infront of them. The Commander and Twilight had some chicken with some peas, along with a side salad. The rest of the group ordered some salads. The Commander took a nice long and slow bite of the chicken, watching in satisfaction as her counterparts friends cringed at the sight. She looked over at her counter part who also started eating her chicken. She caught a glimpse of her counterparts....sharp teeth. "Why do you have sharp teeth?" The Commander asked.

"I can form them, whenever I need them I just think it and there they are." Twilight explained.

"So what do you plan on doing after we eat?" The Commander asked.

"I was going to see if you and I could spar in the Royal Guard training room. Would you like to use weapons or just hoof to hoof, or in our cases hand to hand." Twilight said as she formed her crystal fingers.

"Well that's a thing." The Commander said examining her fingers. She herself had clawed fingers as well. "No weapons I guess. I don't think your Equestria has a sword strong enough to not be sliced in half by my hoof blades."

"Equestria might not, but I do." Twilight said. "I call her Slicshia, the hoard killer."

"Hoard, as in zombie hoard?" The Commander asked.

"No, not zombies. Xenomorphs." Twilight replied as she started eating her peas.

"What the fuck is a Xenomorph?" The Commander asked.

"It's an alien species that has a hard exoskeleton, acid for blood, can climb walls, hide in dark places, a long tail withthe end of it being strong enough to break through armor as strong as what the EDF wears and stronger, and have a secondary mouth that can shoot out and go right through bone, muscle, and flesh. They have a queen who lays the eggs. The faceuggers who can impreagnate almost any living thing in existence, drone to build the hive, warriors for battle, preatorians for the queens personal guard. Also there's the chestburster, you should have a clue to why it's named that. Their a well organized killing machine, like the EDF just on the more savage side. As I heard one of the scientists say it's the perfect bio weapon, which is what some of the aliens there were for, bio weapons, the rest testing." Twilight explained."The Yautja, which are a technologically advanced race view them as one of the greatest prey to hunt. Early humans veiwed them as gods. They saw it as an honor to be impregnated by the facehuggers, as they were the hosts that would provide their gods with their prey." Twilight said.

"Sounds like something out of a nightmare." The Commander said.

"They are a nightmare. Especially if they multiply." Twilight replied."Also Commander I could show you some of the Yautja's weapons after we spar."

"That sounds fun." The Commander said with a smile.

After they were finished eating they made their way to the Royal Guard traning room. Twilght's friends decicded that they were going to talk to the Princesses, while the Commander and Twilight made their way towards the training room. As they entered the room they found some Royal Guard that were off duty. Said Guard turned their heads to see the two alicorns. Despite being off duty the Guards did salute.

"Stand at rest." Twilight said. "This is informal and me and the Commander are just here to spar. So treat us as your equals." The Guards looked between the two alicorns and saw that one was taller than the other, and that they both were standing on their back legs, also that one had a flowing mane while the others was cut short. The Guards continued to train. Twilight and the Commander went to one of the blue rectangular training mats. "So am I taking care of the music or are you?"

"Guess you could." The Commander replied. Twilight opened her pocket dimension and pulled out the phone and put a enchantment on it that would make the sound increase by seventy-seven percent. She scrolled through the playlists that Dying somehow set up. She picked a song."So, lets begin." Twilight said as she also grabbed her armor form her pocket dimension and put it on. The Commander did the same."You first, I insist." Twilight said. The Guard in the room turned their attention to the two mares once the music had started playing.

If the Commanders counterpart wanted her to go first who was she to to not take the offer. The Commander lunged forward and tried to connect with a right hook, but missed as Twilight side stepped her. The Commander turned and tried to sweep her legs and missed as Twilight jumped over her and rolled and got back up and brushed her armor with a hoof. The Commander noticed this as a taunt. She ran up and started throwing punches. Twilight started easily blocking the attacks with her hooves. Finally she caught the Commander hoof and smiled."My turn." Twilight said as she gave a kick to the Commanders gut. The Commander stumbled back, but recovered enough to block a punch that was aimed for her jaw. She ducked and was actually able to kick her counterparts legs from under her. The Commander turned and gave her counterpart and buck which sent her flying back, but Twilight recover digging her crystal fingers into the ground, she fell and got back up. She cracked her knuckles and started running at the Commander with an unnerving smile on her face. She jumped in the air, while using her wings to balance her she delivered a series of kicks that the Commander blocked and then dropped and connected with an uppercut."Had enough yet?"

"I'm just getting started." The Commander replied as she lunged at her counterpart giving a punch to the ribs with her right hoof, and a punch to the gut. The Commander then delivered a quick uppercut to her counterparts chin. She then brought her left hoof hard into the mares stomach causing her to bend over and clutch her stomach. The Commander took the opportunity to head but the mare and then grab her by the neck and her fist collided with the other mares face as she had pulled her head down when she was holding onto her neck. She then brought her knee into her counterparts gut one more time hefore stepping behind her and delivering a quick elbow to the back of her head. Twilight feel face to the ground. As the next song played Twilight stood up and her hoof started tapping to the beat of the song, and then preceded to start singing along with it."Cha cha cha charisma." She said as she lunged at the Commander."Gas Mask breath bitch uhuh, shit i'm to much, too much my damn self!" She sand as she delivered a punch to the Commanders gut."The streets go hand and hand I place that paper like dance steps." She sang again as she delivered an uppercut to the Commanders jaw which sent her flying into the air."Try bitch imma teach you bout drumming and blowing trumpets, that's band camp." She said as she jumped into the air and grabbed the Commanders leg."I'm only coming to tell you sweet dreams, bitch i'm the Sandman!" She sang as she the the Commander on the ground hard enough to actually make her bounce off of it. Once the Commander got up Twilight dropped to the ground and delivered another uppercut that was significantly weaker than the last one she did. The Commander recoverd cast and drew her twin fourteen inch blades. Twilight smiled and summoned her own blade Slicshia. The two mare stared at each other until the Commander made a move aiming her left blade for the mares body. Twilight parried her blade and then ducked as the Commanders second blade came over her head. She jumped back and summoned another blade made of pure diamonds appear on her other hand. The two mares clashed again. Both meeting in the middle of the training mat.

The guards in the room watched in amazement as the two mares fought. They looked to be equally matched. One of them either parrying or attacking with their blades.

Twilight and the Commander stared at each other as they were locked in our combat. Twilight swung her crystal sword above the Commanders head as she had ducked. The Commander took the opportunity to sweep the other mares legs from under her. Twilight fell but she used her wings to push off the ground and back into combat. Both of the mare seemed to be enjoying the fight as they both had smiled on their faces. They clashed again and then the music suddenly stopped.

"Enough!" Yelled Celestia. Both Twilight and the Commander turned their attention to her."That's enough sparing you two."

"Sure I guess." Twilight said as both her swords and armor disappeared in a flash. The Commander also put her blades away."Sorry about the uniform Commander."

"Nah, it's fine. I always carry a spare with me." The Commander replied.

"Anyways, want to see those weapons?" Twilight asked.

"Sounds good with me." The Commander replied as both the mares walked off leaving behind the stunned Guards and Princess Celestia.

"What happened to you Twilight?" Celestia whispered as she left the training room.


Author's Note

Weep here it is. Sorry it took so long, real life has kept me busy. Hoped you enjoyed.

And if any of you were wondering what Twilight's unnerving smile looked like here you go...


(Could you imagine a smile like that in Twilight's cute furry face. Just sends chills down my spine thinking about it.

Also I planned on having the Commander be part of the story from the beginning. And the part about the batponies is my version of a future EDF that has them included. This is also a future version of the Commander as her current version is still stuck in the Empress Twilight dimension(I'm waiting for that new chapter I know your going to read this Scorch215, hurry up man my anticipation is killing me! Sorry bout that your probably busy IRL).

Anyways hoped you enjoyed and see you next time.

One more thing! Twilight will be admitting her feelings to somepony speacial next chapter... I wonder who it could be?

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