
Fall of Equestria: The Hunter
It's fast, strong, silent, and has no remorse. The Rake has arrived in Equestria.
One year after the Caribou conquered Equestria, the mares of Ponyville tried to adjust as best they could. Some willingly offered themselves to the males, while others resisted. The later were beaten and raped.
Something, though, would eventually change that. A creature, one's whose purpose is to kill the Caribou King Xensor. Unfortunately, it doesn't care about the mares' well being, a strong feeling of apathy to their plight.
It's claws are sharp. It's body is malformed. It's eye's are soulless. It is the Rake.
Oh boy, another story I probably won't finish. If you have known my other profile, badassgrunt, long enough, you might have seen a story similar to this one. That's because I feel my level of writing has improved since then, and decided to remaster it. No, it's not exactly the same. In fact, it has more differences than similarities to the old fic.
As with most Fall of Equestria stories, it contains darker themes such as [spoiler] Rape, violence against mares, misogyny, and general abuse.[/spoiler]
Also, I'm going to try to really hone in on the horror. Tell me how I can improve in that area.
The CMC are aged up, as per the rules on this site.
2353 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read