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Bearing the Weight

by JackRipper
Sweetie Belle wants to be just like her sister, as beautiful as she is, but she doesn't know how much danger she's in.

I just wanted to be as beautiful as my sister. She told me that I was still young, and that it was normal to be pudgy at my age, but I disagreed. She was angelic compared to, whatever I was. I knew that she kept her slim figure by eating less, so I tried to follow suit.

I'm so tired all the time and I feel like I can hardly support my own weight, I get stared at when I'm at school and Rarity is becoming more anxious around me.

What did I do wrong? Why didn't I look like her? Why was I still so... ugly?


Contains heavy themes, be warned.
A re-written version of the original, by Evictus.
Cover art by NyonHyon on Deviantart.

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Sad
Drama
 
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1671 words: Estimated 8 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. There's more to beauty than how you look. 2017-05-02 04:20:07 UTC
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