The Fall of Cloud

by Cloud_Piercer

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"Someone wake him up" I felt pain on my muzzle, I awoke coughing. "sorry about that Cloud" my vision was foggy I couldn't see who I was talking to. "Who's there?" I asked "it's me BlueMint... are you blind or somethin?" He said "a little" I said, my vision slowly returned. We were in the testing chamber with the cages. "BlueMint is he awake?" I heard "yeah he is" he yelled, we were in a cage suspended by a chain. "Cloud, look down" it was NightShade, Snow Piercer, and Lunar Lights in a cage below us "what the hell happened?" I yelled "from what point?" She yelled back "when did I loose you guys?" I yelled "the last time I saw you was after I uhh bit off your cock" she yelled. "That's super kinky and super disgusting" BlueMint said, I glared at him "How do we get outta here?" I yelled "Cloud Piercer, if you try to escape all of your friends will die!" Boomed out of the speakers "they're monitoring us" I said to BlueMint "no shit" he said. "Hey can I speak to Chrysalis?" I yelled "not until she arrives" boomed the voice. "Damn" I said "your son would like to speak with you" the speaker boomed. The cages slowly went down and landed on the ground. Two of the creatures came out from the doorway they blasted BlueMint, Snow Piercer, and Lunar with a green glow from their horns, me and NightShade were the only ones standing. The cages opened and I ran to her, I hugged her "everything's gonna be okay" I whispered "hey, you two follow us." One of the creatures said, the hallway was a charcoal color filled with holes. We made it to the mess hall "hello father, mother" there he was the fuckup, the child that shouldn't have even been a thing. "The funny thing about family is that you're supposed to know your family members, but I feel like you don't know me at all." He said "like for one thing you don't even know my actual name... depressing isn't it" I wanted to strangle him. "You give off a aura that makes me want to kick your ass" I said, he stood up. "How can you defeat me, you're weak, I'll kill you so many times that there will be nothing to come back as" he said. He was giant compared to me, bigger than Celestia. "I challenge you, but you gotta be as equal as me" I said "hmph, challenge accepted... someone get him a LSD" he said waving at a creature "these changelings will do anything if persuaded correctly" he said. "Why do you want to destroy me son?" I asked "haha!" He yelled "you really believe that I am your son, I am the current prince of the changelings." He said "I snuck into your compound to see If you were a real threat to the changeling empire... but as I thought you're just a pony revolved around too many rumors." He added, as a changeling came in with a vial of the blue liquid. "Take this" he said hovering it over to me "you're going to die" I said drinking the concoction "we shall see" he said. I started to grow in stature, I was staring down at NightShade. My horn appeared on my head, he blasted me through the wall. He flew at me through the hole in the wall "like I said you're weak" he said pinning me to the wall by my throat. "I'm not weak you're just stupid" I said blasting the ceiling causing it I collapse on us. He was under rubble and I was a champion. I started looking through the rubble to find a way out of the cave I buried myself in. He came out of the pile on the ground causing debris to go everywhere. He was a giant changeling surrounded in green fire "I'm not that easy to kill." He said charging at me, I jumped out of the way and he impaled his horn on the wall of rubble. I heard a snap, he was standing before me with a broken horn "you're just pissing me off now" he said. I shot a bolt of red energy at him, the fire surrounding him turned a bright crimson. He ran and bit at me, I held up my foreleg "you cannot beat me, give up" he demanded "not till one of us dies" I said ramming my horn into his chest. My horn was engulfed in red flames, my mane shortly after. I pushed my head into the ground trying to put it out. He bit my backleg, I kicked him full force only causing a split in his face. "You're all sorts of fucked up aren't you, fucking your mother and your sister and trying to kill your own son, Equestria would be a much better place without you." He started laughing maniacally, I felt the burning rage inside I had only one time before. I hit him with my forehoof "you are not my son, I didn't know she was my mother and I believe she's my clone not my sister." I said angrily, the insane me was out once again "you've just made the biggest mistake of your short existence." I said menacingly "sure I did" he kicked me back. I felt my insane side snap, my teeth felt sharper in my mouth. "You're going to die now" I said charging at him, I jumped onto him and sunk my teeth into his neck. I was burning and I could smell it, he threw me off of him and stomped on my face. "HAHAHAHA!" I yelled "what the hell is wrong with you?" He said burning and cutting my face every time he stomped. My horn snapped off "thank Celestia" I said shooting a blast at him. A lot of the energy backfired and went into my body. He was launched off of me, he was on the ground. I bit into his eye and pulled it out. He screamed and kicked my legs, the left back one felt broken. My body was trembling "it appears you're not as weak as I thought" he was standing over me "it's a shame, we could've been allies" he said before kicking my chest with all his might. I started coughing blood "how are you not dead?" I asked "how are you not dead?" He replied "that's a simple one, I have the will to live." I said "but what does it matter when you're a psychopath" I said before grabbing the end of my horn with my hoof and jabbing it into the bottom jaw of the creature. He started coughing more than I was "h-how" he said before the red and green flame died. I died shortly after, I awoke in the cave still, the creature was dead. I found a way out of the rubble filled room. My horn and mane were restored, I blasted the two changelings outside the hole with my energy. "NightShade?" I said "Cloudy!" She yelled running to me "I didn't know who I was going to see come out of there" she said holding me. "Did you really doubt me?" I said "a little" she said, a changeling came into the room "the accursed prince has been slain" he screamed, more changelings followed him into the room. "Hail, Prince Piercer" he yelled, they bowed in unison. I started laughing "what is it my prince?" He said approaching me "you all need to take down all this black stuff then leave" I said "but a prince needs his castle" he said "no, I'm no prince" I said blasting the creatures head off. "Now listen to me, if you believe that I am your prince you will do as I say and leave this place now!" I boomed, the room was cleared out in a matter of minutes. Snow Piercer came into the room "we've found the other scientists" she said. "Then release them" I said "right away sir" she said running off. "That was weird, she never listens to me" I said staring at NightShade. "Maybe it's because you're a quote on quote prince" she said, I started laughing, she leaned in to kiss me "wait" I said "what?" She asked staring at me with her bright emerald eyes. I took my horn and made a small cut on her foreleg. It was red "ow you ass" she said "the hell did you do that for?" She asked "I wanted to see something" I said staring at the cut as it healed over itself. "It is you" I said "yeah no shit" she replied. I jumped on her and kissed her everywhere, she was laughing. "That's not what I was expecting to see when I got out of that damn cage" it was NightShade's father "good work Cloud" he added "oh shi... uh, thank you sir" I said standing straight. NightShade got off the floor "hi daddy..." she said "I'm just gonna lock this door and pretend I saw nothing" he said as he left the room. "This might sound sorta crazy but... maybe we should get married" I said to the mare laying on me. "Wait what did you just say?" She said "I mean yeah I kinda wanna fuck more mares but every time I do it becomes a problem" I said "I've noticed, and I'm a bit clingy" she said "yeah but you're cute and fuckable" I said as I kissed her again. There was a pounding at the door "hey, guys stop fuckin we got a problem" it was Snow Piercer "were not, not anymore at least" I yelled. "Before we see what this is what is your answer?" I asked NightShade "to the marriage thing?" She said "yes" I replied "of course I will" she said. We exited the room and followed Snow Piercer outside, Chrysalis was standing in the middle of the meadow surrounded by copies of me. "Cloud Piercer!" She boomed.

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