After challenging Chaos_Eclipse to a friendly writing game, a lightning bolt struck a man's computer (Don't ask me how). The result was a dimensional portal that sucked in several games. This created an alternate universe (Again, don't ask me how). The man saw terrible images, and now you can read all about it! Horray for you! This is my first story, give me critique.

(Another note: The format I use for character conversation is used because it saves time and just looks neater. And it not only saves my time, but also your time. For example:
John: What's this?
Jack: Looks like a ball.
John picks up the ball.
John: This this is filthy!
Looks a lot better than: ""What's this?" John says. "Looks like a ball" Jack says. John picks up the ball. "This is filthy!" John says.
I'm not trying to submit this as a script, but it looks a lot better this way, especially since this story is a bit dialogue focused. Thank you for understanding.)