My Only Chance

by Derpy Forever

Chapter 5

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A/N Ok everypony quick note in the next chapter there is going to be a big question for everypony about which way the story is going to head so be ready once chapter 6 comes up, so be on the look out!


Chapter 5

I was standing next to the tub and she hoofed me the washcloth, and then she turned around with her side to me. ‘Well here goes…everything’ I thought to myself. I put the cloth on her back and started to scrub around to get every inch of her back. As I was getting closer to her lower back I noticed her start to become fidgety and her breathing shallow, but I just surged it off as her being embarrassed from not being able to wash herself. I got down to a little bit behind her wings and started to scrub.

I noticed her wings ruffle around a bit at that so I thought she liked it and kept scrubbing around in that area. If only I would have seen her face being a very bright red, I would have stopped but I couldn’t see it because I was focused on cleaning her. Then I started to notice a few things, 1. She was breathing quickly and it was still shallow, 2. Her wings were getting very jittery, 3.her back became very taunt and her back legs were completely stiff. These were just the beginning, as I kept washing I had finally moved back some more not knowing the tension that was building in her body.

As I continued I stopped to add some more soap to the rag but I didn’t know that Scootaloo had looked at me out of the corner of her eye worried that I had stopped, once I put the rag back on her she shivered under my touch, “Oh, sorry I should have dipped it to make it hot again, woops.” I said trying to be sincere. “No…it is … fine.” She said breathlessly. That should have been setting of flags and alarms everywhere but I was too oblivious to see the signs. Needless to say I kept going, I was now right above her tail and continued to scrub. After I was done her back it hit me what I might have to do, I took the rag off of her and put my arm on the side of the tub, “You can’t reach back there and you need me to clean it don’t you?” I said in a depressed tone. “Yes, Please.” She said in a begging tone, which I didn’t pick up on. I sighed and dipped the rag in tub.

I added a bit more soap to it and suds it up, she moved her tail out of the way and I looked away. I slowly put the rag to it and scrubbed lightly, little did I know what was going on inside of Scootaloo.

Pov in Scootaloo eyes,

It felt like my blood was on fire and acid was being pumped through my veins and me washed me, at first when he was just doing my back it felt good but now this feeling is driving me wild to the point of me not wanting it to stop, I looked away from him because I could feel myself drooling and I could tell my face must have been very red because I could feel the heat radiating off of it. But now that he was touching me there I was sent it to a swirling pool of pleasure that then erupted from me, and my brain felt like it was mush at this time and I sat there panting wanting even more.

Back in Nicks eyes,

It wasn’t a few second as I was washing her there that I heard a loud *whoosh*, when I opened my eye I saw Scootaloos wing why spread out as far as they could go then I heard a somewhat quite moan come from her. It felt like the rag was on fire from what must have come out of her, I sat there dumbfounded by what had just happened and I caused it, “Scootaloo did you jus-“ I got out but she had cut me off. “Yes.” She said trying to get away from me. I could tell she was about to die from embarrassment and I couldn’t let her stay like this,(HAHA, I knew you could do it I’m so proud of you.*Sniffle*) “Scootaloo I’m sorry it was my fault I should have noticed the signs and stopped but I didn’t see them.” I said hanging my head in shame. “No, Nick it wasn’t your faul-“ I cut her off before she could finish, “Yes it is my fault.” I said sternly because I didn’t want her to blame herself. And she had no choice but to accept it, and she nodded.

“Come on let’s get you dried off.” I said standing up. “No, Nick I will..” I cut her off again. “I started this I am going to finish it, that and I’m not going to let you get sick on my watch.” I said grabbing a towel. I dried her off and we went about our business for a couple of hours, till I went up to my room to see if she was hungry, I opened the door. “Hey Scoots, you hungr-“ I was cut off yet again today not some someone cutting me off but from what I saw. Scootaloo was lying on my bed with one of my shirts I wore the other day just smelling it, nothing else just smelling it. “Umm, Nick do humans have pheromones.” she gasped still smelling the shirt. “Um, yeah but there are nothing like they used to be, we evolved out of that a long time ago that I know of, but there are very little traces left in us.” I said a little confused. “Well you might want to wash your cloths and shower very often for awhile.” She said still gasping for breath. “Why?” I asked confused. “I’m going into my third heat and since I have never done anything with anypony it will be the strongest one yet, and it will only get worse.” She said eyeing me out of the corner of her eye. “How long will it last?” I said with a hint of fear in my voice. “A month.” She said, and my jaw burst through the floor and was heading to the first floor.

I ran in the room and grabbed the dirty clothes basket, “Can you leave me this one please?” she asked pleading me to leave it there for her. “I’m sorry I can’t.” I said grabbing it. I almost died at what she did, her eyes were tearing up but I had to fight through it for her. I turned and ran out the door to the laundry room and threw everything in the washer and started it. Then I ran upstairs to take a shower with the strongest soap and shampoo I had. Once I was done I went down stairs and put everything in the dryer and started it. ‘thank god that’s it for now’ I thought to myself.

I went back upstairs to see if she was hungry again, “Hey, Scootaloo you hungry?” I asked standing next to the bed. “Yeah, I feel like I’m starving.” She said jumping off of the bed. ‘I wonder why you could be starving, oh wait I know why.’ (And you said you didn’t think like that.) ‘I didn’t you bastard now shut up.’ (You do realize I am you deepest desires right, you feed me with what you want but are too afraid to admit. So I will be here forever.) ‘it was an accident I didn’t even notice what she was doing.’ (Are you sure you didn’t notice, or did you notice but you wanted to keep going so you ignored them so you could get your fix?) ‘No I am positive it was an accident, now leave me.’ Wow am I still auguring with my other self?

“Well what do you want to eat?” I asked walking into the kitchen. “How about some pasta?” she asked. “Sounds good to me.” I agreed, after about a half an hour I had everything prepared and on the table. “Come and get it.” I called to her. I heard hooves impacting the floor at a fast rate so I knew she was running, she came blaring around the corner and sat straight in the seat. “Wow! You’re fast, ok dig in.” I said sitting down at the table. I watched her pick up the fork, ‘wait, how did she do that?’ I thought. “Um, Scootaloo how did you pick up the fork with a hoof?” I said looking at in amazement. “You know I don’t really know, you would have to ask Twilight to get an answer for that one.” She said smiling back at me.

After we were done she thanked me and ran back up to my room. So I washed the dishes real quick and joined her because I wanted to finish my drawing, and I’m sure she would like to watch more of the show. I turned on the TV and started the show up while I sat in my chair and started to color in my drawing. After about two hours I had finished, I was about to put it away when I was stopped. “What’s that?” Scootaloo asked pointing a hoof at the sketch pad. I was caught, hours upon hours of drawing and coloring and I get caught now. “It’s my sketch pad.” I responded. “Can I see it?” she asked with a smile on her face. ‘AHHHH must resist the D’Awwww…at all cost’ I thought. Then she stuck out her bottom lip to add to it. Beep…beep….beep…beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, Hhhnnnnnnnngggggg.

“I have to warn you it might freak you out a bit.” I said slowly handing it to her. She opened it and backed up a little bit from it then leaned back in consumed by the drawings inside. “Did you draw these?” she asked still looking through the book. “Yeah.” I responded. She would look at a drawing then flip to the next one and study it for a little bit, but she was dead silent. “What do you think?” I asked breaking the silence in the room. She didn’t answer all she did was look up and smile. ‘Well I hope that is a good sign.’ I thought.

I sat there for awhile just looking at her then I came up with a question I have always wanted to ask anyone of them if I ever got the chance, “Umm, Scootaloo would you mind answering a question of mine?” I asked trying to piece together the question. “Sure, shoot.” She said still looking at the book. “What are saddles for in your world?” I asked looking at another one of my sketch pads. After I had asked that I heard her gasp for air and then started coughing. “Are you ok?” I asked concerned for her well being. “Yeah I’m fine. *Deep inhale* you really caught me off guard with that question, But I will tell you, but first what are they used here for?” she asked looking at me.

“Well we use them to help us ride horses better, gives us a better grip when the riding gets rough.” I said looking at her. Her cheeks looked like they could burst into flames at any second she was blushing so hard. “Well then it looks like we use them for the same purpose then, but we also use them as coats in the winter if it is really cold.” She said looking back at the sketch pad. “Hold on so you all sometimes ride each other around town to get to places?” I looked at her confused. “Umm, no we use them when we are mating also known as riding sometimes.” She was looking right back at me with confusion all over her face.

“OHMYGODNO! I didn’t mean we used them like that here, we use them to get around from place to place, but… um thank you for that information.” I said trying to get everything right, all she did was give me a smirk and return to the art in front of her. Then I noticed she was getting close to the one that I just finished of her. Not but ten seconds later did she flip the page and just stared at it. “Nick, did you just do this one?” she asked, her eyes never leaving the page. “Yeah.” I responded. “Do you think you could do another of me?” she asked now looking up at me. ‘What was that, was that a glint of something I just saw there? Na I’m just being a bit paranoid.’ “Sure I could do another one of you.”

Right after I answered she stood up on the bed and stretched. “Will you draw anything I want you to?” ‘I wonder how she will pose, she will probably just sit or try to make it look like she is running or flying.’ “Sure just pose and I will get a mental image of the pose.” I said looking up at her. She came close to the side of the bed and turned around. Hmm I wonder what she is………………..’‘ I tried to think but what I saw literally fried my brain, ‘Please insert new brain here… thank you, now starting reboot process… please wait.’

She was still on my bed her back towards me, she had her front legs folded under her while her back legs were straight and stiff. This meant that her hind end was in the air with her tail partly to the side almost showing herself to me, she was looking back at me with that same glint in her eyes. ‘damn this is going to be a long month.’ I thought to myself. “Do you really want me to draw you like this?” I asked hoping and praying to god that she was just joking. “Yep! But I also want there to be a saddle on me in the picture.” She responded. ‘I’m not even going to make it a month at this rate.’ I said to myself, in my head of course.

I had got the outline and the other building blocks I needed for the picture, I looked up at her one last time and I saw something drip onto my bed. I looked up to see that she must have been incredibly wet; something in my pants was making itself know as I stared at her. Quickly shaking my head I looked back down at the paper. “Okay you no longer have to pose I have what I need.” I said looking back up at her. When I did I could have swore I saw disappointment on her face but I ignored it. She went out of the room, it sounded like she went to the bath room.

I looked down at my pants and saw the traitor. “You almost made me do it you prick, I was close to almost listening to you, but I over came you and won the battle.” I said looking straight at it. Then it did a tiny twitch. I could only take that as you may have won the battle but not the war, MUHAHAHA. “Oh my god I am losing my mind.” I said to myself as I held my head in my hands. Then I heard something, it almost sounded like Scootaloo was walking but the sound wasn’t getting any louder, it stayed constant. I got up and went out of the room and went over to the bathroom door. I listened and sure enough it sound like she was paw…hoofing at the ground. “Scootaloo you alright?” I asked. The sound stopped. “Yeah I’m fine.” She replied. But it almost sounded like she was crying or upset. “Are you sure?” I asked. “no.” came the small reply which I could barely make out.

“Can I come in to talk to you about it?” I asked through the door. “yes.” She responded. I opened the door and walked in, she was near the sink. I walked over and hopped up on the counter. “So what’s going on?” I asked trying to break the ice. She looked up at me with tears in her eyes, at first I thought my heart stopped but then I felt it again so it must have skipped a few beats. “Everything is going on my life is a total mess I no longer have my parents since they died three months after I was born, I end up on your world, and to make matter worse I am going into heat, everything is wrong.” She said hysterically and sobbing. “Scootaloo I wish I could help, but I cannot with any of those. I’m sorry.” I said rubbing her back after I got down from the counter.

“Why can’t you help me with this stupid heat? It is driving me crazy!” she sobbed. “Because you are to young if you were my age, sure.” I said patting her back. She looked up at me confused. “What are you talking about when mares in Equestria first go into heat they are considered fully grown and are allowed to mate.” She said looking at me confused. “Hold on, what age are some couples in Equestria and I mean married and living together?” I asked with a blank expression on my face. “I have seen a married couple living in their own house at thirteen years old a year younger than me. Why?” she asked me looking confused. “Do you think Twilight will be coming to get you?” I asked still with a blank expression. “Yeah, by now the girls have told her and she should be here so…”she was stopped by what sounded like an explosion right beside her.

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