The Ultimate Mare's Trip

by Mirror Star

Let the Vacation Begin

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Author's Note

Rain Flower is the name I gave Mrs. Shy since we are not given an official name for her; the same will apply to Mr. Shy when I introduce him


Let the Vacation Begin

In a room filled with posters, books, and other stuff, a unicorn is fast asleep in her bed with a book titled "The Adventures of Star Burner and the Lost Tribe of Alicorns" in the nude. While she sleeps, her alarm is going off and she doesn't notice it. As the alarm goes off and she still sleeps, an earth pony with orange hair walks into her room.

The pony said while rubbing the unicorn "Twilight. Twilight. Twilight Velvet, wake up."

Twilight Velvet said in her sleep "Five more minutes, mommy. "

The earth pony whispered in her ear "Fine. But that means you can't have any of my special Pear Family Breakfast."

Twilight Velvet said as she finally woke up "Pear Family Breakfast. I love those. Pear Butter, what are you doing in my room?"

Pear Butter said grabbing the red book"I came to wake you up. From what I can tell, you fell asleep reading this."

Twilight Velvet said, defensively"What? Star Burner is one of my favorite adventure stallion characters."

Pear Butter said "I can tell. Anyway, breakfast is ready and Cloudy doesn't like that fact that you're holding us up from eating."

Twilight said getting out of bed "Alright. Alright. Let's go. "

Pear Butter said while giving her a red and pink robe "Robe."


My name is Twilight Velvet. I'm a unicorn from Canterlot, a Junior attending Ponyville University and I major Writing with a minor in Equestria English. I like to read adventure novels and do very fun and interesting things, such as bungee jumping, barrel riding, and other interesting things. After graduation, I plan to write my own adventure novel series.


Twilight said "How come I can't walk down naked? It's not like you and the girls haven't seen me naked before."

Pear Butter said "I know that. But my brother, Roast Pear, could show up early and I would prefer it that he not see one of my friends naked; besides, you know how Cloudy is about that sort of thing."


This is Pear Butter; also known as Buttercup. She's from Ponyville and is in charge of the Pear Family Farm located here. She goes to Ponyville University too and majors in Child Development. She was the first friend I made here when I came to Ponyville and let me and the others stay here while we attend college; while we don't have to pay much rent, we do help her around the farm during our stay.


A gray earth pony said to Twilight "About time you showed up. Why do you have to be so late?"

Twilight said as she sat down"I overslept, Cloudy Quartz. No big deal."

Cloudy Quartz said "We have a schedule to keep, Twilight."


This is Cloudy Quartz. She's the serious-responsible mare of our group. She's from a village in Western Equestria called Rockville. She's a geology major. According to her, she works on a Rock Farm; I never quite understood how that works. She's the silent, responsible type of our group; she always keeps us on our toes when it comes to getting up for classes, doing chores around the farm, and paying our rent to Pear Butter on time.


A yellow pegasus pony said "Calm down, Cloudy. We're not leaving for another three hours."

A blue pegasus pony said "She's right. Also, this is our vacation; we can go off script just a little bit."


Rain Flower and Windy Whistles. They pegasus ponies from Cloudsdale. They were originally from Cloudsdale University, but they transferred to Ponyville University together. While Rain Flower transferred because of the Botany program here being better than the one in Cloudsdale, Windy Whistles transferred because she wanted to stay with her friend and cheer her on since she can continue her studies in Sports and Fitness Administration here. The two of them have known each other long before they met any of us so they have a closer bond with each other than any of us.


A pink unicorn said while eating a pancake "Pear Butter, these pancakes are really delicious today. Did you add something else in them?"

Pear Butter said while drinking her pear juice "Not really. But the syrup for the pancakes have a special type of sweetener that Chiffon made, so you should be thanking her more than me."

"I'll be sure to do that before we go.


Cookie Crumbles. Like Pear Butter, she is from Ponyville too. When I first met Pear Butter, I immediately met her afterwards. She's an Acting Major and the life of the party of our group. She helped bring us together during one of her dress rehearsals at the school's theater that Pear Butter brought me too; Cloudy Quartz was there because she had some free time, and Rain Flower and Windy Whistles were there because of a mix up for a meeting that they were suppose to attend brought them here.


Windy asked Pear Butter "Speaking of Chiffon, are you sure she doesn't want to come with us? We have room enough for her on the RV."

Pear Butter said "I asked her if she wanted to come with us but she said that she had other plans"

Rain Flower asked "What kind of plans?"

Pear Butter said "I don't know; she didn't say."

Twilight asked Pear Butter"So, what time is your brother suppose to arrive?"

Pear Butter said "He said over the phone that he would be arriving sometime around 9:45. So, he will be here in about an hour."

Rain Flower said after eating a grape "It was real nice of him to take care of the farm while your away. But, won't it be hard for him to run the farm all by himself?"

Pear Butter said "He'll be fine. My brother is bringing a long a few of his friends whom I've met before and they are going to help him. He told me that all I had to do was focusing on having fun."

Windy Whistles said "He must be the best brother in all of Equestria."

Pear Butter said "He really is."

Cloudy Quartz said "I wish I had a brother like that."


Last summer, the girls and I decided that we should go on a road trip all over Equestria for our next summer, which is now. However, we would make this a month and a half long summer trip and do all sorts of fun things together. Unfortunately, a trip like that would cost a lot of money; so we all took part-time jobs, sold some things that we no longer needed, and Pear Butter, Cookie Crumbles, Rain Flower asked for small donations from our families; Cloudy Quartz and Windy Whistles's parents couldn't donate money for different reasons. Anyway, our plane is to spend at least two-three days in various locations in Equestria. We each picked places that we all wanted to visit and made plans on what to do there; mainly, Cloudy did the planning in terms of organizing and scheduling.


After they finished breakfast and cleaned up the kitchen, everypony gathered their things and brought them all downstairs to pack the RV with their stuff. While this is going on, Roast Pear finally arrived at the farm with his friends and greeted Pear Butter along with helping them pack their RV.

Roast Pear asked Pear Butter "So, where are you all heading first?"

Pear Butter said "Our first destination is going to be Smokey Mountains Park; we're going to camp there for a few days before heading to Fillydelphia. When we get to Fillydelphia, I'll find a phone to contact you."

Roast Pear said giving his sister a hug "Alright. You be careful but have fun too."

Pear Butter said before getting on the RV "We will."

Windy Whistles said to Cookie Crumbles"I'm driving."

Cookie Crumbles retorted "No, I'm driving."

Windy said "I'm the best driver."

Cookie said "But I'm the one who got us the RV."

Pear Butter said taking the key from Cookie "That's enough you two. Rain Flower is driving."

Cookie and Windy said at the same time, then Rain Flower said "What!?"

Cloudy Quartz pointed out"She's the more "responsible" driver between the two of you."

Rain Flower said "Um, ok."

Twilight Velvet said with a pumped up tone "Alright girls, next stop the Smokey Mountains."

Rain Flower started up the RV and they headed for Smokey Mountains Park; Roast Pear and his friends waved goodbye to them. Lucky for them, traffic wasn't heavy at this hour so it was easy for them to get on the road. While Rain Flower is driving, Cloudy Quartz is helping her with directions. Windy Whistles, Cookie Crumbles, and Twilight Velvet are playing strip 52 pick up; Twilight Velvet is wearing her red lingerie and panties, Windy Whistles has her shirt on but her pink panties are exposed, and Cookie Crumbles just has her purple bra on. Pear Butter is looking out the window, taking in all the sights and the billboards

Cookie said "Hey Pear Butter, are you sure you don't want to play BS with us?"

Pear Butter said "No thanks; I prefer to look out the window for now. Besides, last time I played you all lost so it might be a bit unfair for me to play."

Windy said placing a card in a pile of cards "7 of hearts. No kidding."

Cookie Crumbles said "Queen of Spades."

Twilight said "BS."

Cookie Crumbles said taking"Dang it."

Twilight said "Jack of Clubs."

Windy said "10 of Hearts."

Pear Butter said after looking at billboard titled "Manehattan Falcons vs Mustangia Muskrats" "It looks like the Manehattan Falcons are going to face off against the Mustangia Muskrats are going to face off."

Cookie said getting up from her chair "How do you know that?"

Pear Butter said "I saw it on the billboard; a few of the players are were on the billboard."

Cookie asked "Was Hondo Flanks on the billboard?"

Pear Butter said "I don't think so; but then again I don't know what he looks like."

Cookie said after she used her magic to bring a photo of him out of her purse"This is what he looks like. "

Pear Butter said "I take it that he's your favorite football player, Cookie.

Cookie said "He's in my top 10 stallions who recently joined the E.F.A (Equestria Football Association).

Windy asked "Have you seen him play before?"

Cookie said "A few times. He may be a rookie player, but he's an amazing running back; he's also a hunk. I wouldn't mind giving him a ride on the Cookie Crumbles express."

Twilight said "You want to fuck him, don't you? Like you did the captain of our school's football team two weeks ago."

Cookie said "Yeah, I wan to fuck him."

Cloudy said to them after turning her head "I wish you wouldn't use such language, Cookie."

Cookie retorted "You use "that language" all the time."

Cloudy retorted "I don't use the F-word. "

Windy said "That's bullshit; I've heard you use the word "fuck" before."

Cloudy asked "When?"

Windy said "That time when you brought that stallion over to the barn during midterms."

Cloudy said "We were re-reading a book at the time and it simply used that word at the time. Wait, were you spying on us?"

Cloudy said "No. I just happened to be walking near the barn late that night and overheard you two."

Cookie asked Rain Flower after she walked up to her "How long until we reach the Smokey Mountains, Rain Flower?"

Rain Flower said "According to the map, we should be arriving there in about 2 and half hours; however, the traffic is very lite today so odds are we may arrive a few minutes early."

Twilight said looking at the map "That's good to hear."

Cloudy said "Cookie, Twilight, cover yourselves. You could get us pulled over for public indecency."

Twilight said pointing out the male drivers next to them who notice Twilight and Cookie "They don't seem to mind."

Pear Butter asked Windy "Aren't you going to join them up there?"

Windy said "Nah. I ran around naked in high school during my senior year with the cheerleading squad; once you've done that, flashing your boobs out like that is nothing."

A few hours later, they finally arrived at the Smokey Mountain Park. As Rain Flower is driving through the campsite, they looked at all the giant trees, the wild animals roaming around, and the Smokey Mountains. They arrived at the entrance to the camping grounds, checked in with one of the park rangers, and headed to their assigned camp ground. When they arrived, the unpacked the RV with their camping supplies and set up their two tents for three of them to stay in; tent one will house Twilight Velvet, Windy Whistles, and Cookie Crumbles, while tent two will house Rain Flower, Cloudy Quartz, and Pear Butter.

Pear Butter asked everypony "Well, now that everything is set up, what should we do first?"

Rain Flower said showing them a park brochure-map"The park ranger said that the safest places to go to at this time and when it gets dark are these places: flower fields, the lake, and the playground."

Twilight asked "What about the Smokey Trail?"

Rain Flower said "He says that we could go there but the trail is suppose to be closed in about two hours and the entire trail takes about 5 hours total if you wanted to walk the whole trail."

Windy said while resting on a cloud "So our choices are limited for today. That's lame."

Cloudy said "We'll just have to make do with what we can do now and do more tomorrow morning."

Cookie said taking off her clothes with her magic, revealing a red and silver one piece swimsuit "I don't know about all of you, but I'm going to head to the lake for a swim."

Twilight asked "You were wearing that underneath your clothes this whole time?"

Cookie said while showing off her swimsuit"Of course. I came prepared with my lake swimsuit. What do you think; isn't it sexy for swimming in a lake?"

Pear Butter said "It sure is, but you look good in anything, Cookie."

Cookie asked everypony "So, who else wants to go swimming with me?"

Twilight said running into the RV to get changed "I'm game."

Pear Butter said "Count me in."

Rain Flower said "I'll pass. I want to check out the flower fields when night falls."

Windy said "I'm just going to chillax up here for a while."

Cloudy said "I'll stay here and prepare dinner in about an hour; be back here in an hour and half before it gets cold."

With that said, everypony went their separate ways to do what they wanted to do. What they didn't know, is that they are being watched by a pink earth pony with a purple mane.

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