The Ultimate Mare's Trip
Meet Bright Macintosh
Previous ChapterNext ChapterAt the Smokey Mountain Lake, Cookie Crumbles, Pear Butter, and Twilight Velvet are in the water, swimming around; while Cookie Crumbles is wearing her red and silver one piece, Twilight Velvet is wearing a blue tankini, and Pear Butter is wearing green swim trunks and a white shirt with a pear on it.
Cookie Crumbles said while laying on her back in the lake"The water feels great."
Pear Butter said while she is keeping herself afloat "I know right. It's like my aunt Sparkle Pear said to me when she visited this place once."
Twilight Velvet said after she used a nearby tire swing to jump into the water "Cannon ball!"
Cookie Crumbles said "I could stay in this water forever; I don't care if my skin prunes up. However, I'm amazed at how clean this water looks."
Pear Butter said "According to my aunt, this water is said to be one of the 10 enchanted lakes in all of Equestria that wasn't affected by the Great Magic Shut Down that took place 1000 years ago. The lake not only feels good on the skin but it never gets dirty no matter how many ponies use it. She's says that this is her fifth favorite lake of the 10."
Twilight Velvet asked "What's her number one favorite lake?"
Pear Butter said "The lake that is said to give a pony a eternal youth."
Twilight Velvet asked "She's been to a lake like that?"
{ear Butter said "No. She's only heard of the lake through some ancient book she read during a trip to Manehattan; that lake is said to have vanished 990 years ago and hasn't been found even when magic returned to Equestria 660 years ago."
A brown earth pony shouted at them north from where they are now"Hey! Excuse me, ladies."
Twilight Velvet said "I wonder who that is."
Cookie Crumbles said "I don't know but he looks handsome."
Pear Butter said"He sounds like he needs help."
The three of them swam back to shore and approached the brown earth pony.
Pear Butter asked the brown earth pony "Is something wrong? Who are you?"
He responded "My name is Burnt Oak and I was wondering if you've seen my friend around here; I think he might be in trouble."
At the flower fields, Rain Flower is studying all the different flowers in the field. However, she is trying to find the flowers that glow in the dark when the moon starts to show itself like it is now. As she is doing this, she notices a yellow earth pony walking toward her and he's bleeding. Rain Flower walks up to him to check on him.
Rain Flower said while panicking a bit"What happend to you? Who are you?"
The yellow earth responded before fainting "Bright Macintosh."
Rain Flower shouted "Oh dear. Help! Somepony help!"
Rain Flower's yells for help could be heard by Cloudy Quartz and Windy Whistles so they ran to her location. When they arrived, the found her with Bright Macintosh and brought him back to their campsite.
Back with Pear Butter and the others, they are heading back to the campsite while listening to Burnt Oak's explanation on how he and his friend were separated on the Smokey Mountain trail because they were attacked by some of the wildlife; but the strange thing about the attack is the animals eye's turned red.
Pear Butter said with a confused tone "Their eyes turned red?"
Burnt Oak said "Yeah. We figured that they were put under some sort of spell since the animals, according to the park ranger, aren't suppose to be hostile unless you attack them first and we didn't attack them."
Twilight Velvet asked "Have you talked to the park rangers about this?"
Burnt Oak said "Not yet. I wanted to find my friend first."
Cookie Crumbles said"We're almost back at our campsite. Once we get back there, we can ask the rest of our friends to help find your friend."
Burnt Oak said to Cookie Crumbles "Thank you. By the way, haven't I seen you somewhere else before? "
Pear Butter said "Looks like we're here. Is that your friend over there?"
Burnt Oak said running toward his friend "Bright Mac."
Bright Mac said "Burnt Oak. Good to see that your alright."
Cloudy Quartz said "We've managed to stop the bleeding but it won't last long. Windy went to the nearest ranger station here to get help."
Rain Flower asked "Pear Butter, don't you have that remedy that can stop bleeding instantly? "
"I do and I should be able to make it easily inside."
Pear Butter took Bright Mac inside of the RV, had Bright Mac sit down on the couch, and began making the remedy he needed to treat the wounds.
Pear Butter asked "Apart from bleeding, how are you feeling?"
Bright Mac said "Aside from bleeding and a pain to my back, I'm ok. "
Pear Butter said mixing some pears and some herbs "Your friend told me that you were attacked by the wildlife and they had red glowing eyes."
Bright Mac said "Yeah. It was like they were possessed by something or someone. I got them to attack me so Burnt Oak could escape; I escaped too, but as you can see I didn't escape unscathed."
Pear Butter said while placing the medicine on the wounds "Well, you'll be fine in a few more minutes; but I'm going to warn you now, this stuff will stink for a while."
Bright Mac said "It smells like pears. I haven't smelled those in a long time."
Pear Butter asked "Are they your favorite fruit?"
Bright Mac said "Not really; I prefer apples, but I do think pears taste good. If you my mom, she hate's pears; says that they leave a bad taste in her mouth."
Pear Butter said "Well, everypony has different taste; that's what my mom used to say."
After Bright Mac was bandaged up and the pear medicine was applied to his body, they walked out of the RV where one of the head park rangers, Big Daddy McColt talked to Bright Mac and Burnt Oak about what happened.
The next morning, the girls woke up to begin their day around the park but not before eating breakfast.
Twilight Velvet asked "Has anypony seen Cookie Crumbles?"
Cloudy Quartz suggested "Maybe she got up early for an early morning walk."
Windy Whistles said with a note addressed to them"That's exactly what she did. It say's so right here; she's even having energy bars for a snack."
Rain Flower said with a worried tone "She should have gone with one of us. Given what happened to Bright Mac, it sounded like it could be dangerous out there."
Pear Butter assured Rain Flower "Ranger McColt said that they are investigating what happened in the area that Bright Mac and Burnt Oak were attacked and they told us not to go in that area for a while until they've confirmed it's safe. But the rest of the Smokey Mountains is said to be safe."
Cloudy Quartz assured her too "There's nothing to worry about, Rain Flower."
In another part of the park, Bright Mac is walking toward a huge pink mansion like tent that is being guarded by muscular stallions in suits. They let Bright Mac pass and he walked and called out the name Spoiled Milk. She responded by saying that she is on the top floor and allowed him to come upstairs. When he arrived, Spoiled Milk is completely naked and in a hot tub.
Spoiled Milk asked "What do you want? Do you have it?"
Bright Mac said "No. It's like the report said; we can't go near the cave without being one of the legendary alicorns or the proper element bearer. "
Spoiled Milk said while drinking a bottle of wine "But the mage said that you're an element bearer; if that's the case then you should have been able to get the element. "
Bright Mac said "Maybe it's not the right element for me to bear."
Spoiled Milk said "Then I guess we'll have to try another place."
Bright Mac said "There aren't any other places, Spoiled; the order hasn't found the other elements yet. All we can do now is have the order protect this place twenty-four seven until we find the right element that works for me or until one of the other potential bearers comes forth."
Spoiled Rich said before standing up "I guess. By the way, what about those mares I told you about over the walkie talkie; should I send a squad to eliminate them?"
Bright Mac said "No. They're just here for a vacation; they're civilians, Spoiled, not our enemies."
Spoiled Milk said "Alright then. We'll leave for Manehattan in a few hours."
Bright Mac said before leaving "Ok."
Spoiled Milk said grabbing his hand "Where are you going? Now that the important stuff, we can have a little fun."
Bright Mac said taking his hand away from her"Forget it, Spoiled. We broke up. Period."
Spoiled Milk said pushing her breast on his chest "That doesn't mean we can't have any fun."
Bright Mac said getting away from her "I said, no."
Spoiled Milk said "Fine. Then I'll ask Burnt Oak."
Bright Mac said firmly with a slightly angry tone "He went to get breakfast. Besides, I won't let you hurt my best friend like you hurt me. Our families may work together, but that doesn't make us your play things."
Spoiled Milk said with a smug tone "She doesn't remember you doesn't she? You know it's not possible for her to remember you."
With that said, Bright Mac left the tent.
Elesewhere, in an abandoned cabin in the woods, Cookie Crumbles is making out with Burnt Oak. The other night, Burnt Oak remembered where he's seen Cookie Crumbles before; she was on an old issue of playstallion magazine and she was an amateur porn star. Her porn star name was Betty Bouffant; she was one of the best amateur porn stars a few years ago before leaving the scene for some reason.
Burnt Oak said after he stopped making out with her "Wow, it's like playstallion says, you are an amazing kisser."
Cookie Crumbles said "It's amazing that I still have a fan out there. Am I everything you expected?"
Burnt Oak said "No, your more than what I expected. How come you disappeared?"
Cookie Crumbles said "I wanted to get a higher education and hopefully move on to more "serious" acting projects. However, I do miss the porn industry just a bit and being the fantasy girl of all the stallions and mares of Equestria. Am I fulfilling a fantasy of yours?"
Burnt Oak said "Having sex in an abandoned cabin in the woods with one of my favorite (ex) porn stars? Yeah, your fulfilling my fantasy; now it's time to make it a reality."
Burnt Oak kissed Cookie Crumbles passionately with all of his might and they fell onto a carpet. As they made out, Burnt Oak stripped Cookie of her shirt and pulled down her pants. He stopped kissing her more a moment to gaze in awe of her black lingerie. After he had enough looking, he began to place his face in her big breast and started to lick his tongue all over her cleavage, but that wasn't enough. He undid her top to fully expose her breast and started sucking on her right tit. Cookie moaned in pleasure and joy of his licks. She loved how his warm-wet tongue circling around her tit and how he nibbled on her breast; she felt the same way when he switched to her left tit.
As she moaned, Cookied begged Burnt Oak to give her his dick. He complied to her wishes and pulled down his pants and underwear, revealing his long dick to her. As he stood, she got on her knees and rubbed on his dick with her right hand before she placed it in her mouth. She moved her mouth in and out of his cock, kissed on it when she needed to breath, and then sucked and kissed his balls too. Burnt Oak loved having her mouth and lips all over his dick and balls; it was like a dream come true having his favorite porn star suck him off. He placed his hands on her face and pushed her mouth on her dick because he wanted her mouth on his dick to last as long as possible. Eventually, he cummed in her mouth and Cookie swallowed it all.
Burnt Oak said "I can't believe I cummed in Cookie Crumble's mouth. This really is the best day of my life."
Cookie Crumbles "It's about to get better. Do you know what time it is?"
Burnt Oak said "It's time for the "Big Cookie Time"."
Cookie Crumbles said "You really are a fan of me."
Once Burnt Oak laid on his back on the rug, Cookie crawled onto his body and turned her body around to place her butt on Burnt Oak's face so he can lick her pussy. While he licked her pussy, he placed his hands on her butt too and began squeezing it then slapping it afterward. Cookie let out yelps like a dog would do from his tongue swirling around her pussy. She could feel how he moved his tongue all around her pussy in a circle and then up and down. Burnt Oak then pointed his tongue inside of her pussy as far as he could and Cookie let out an even bigger yelp as a result. Eventually, she orgasmed from his tongue and all the slaps on the ass she received.
Cookie Crumbles got on all fours for Burnt Oak while he positioned himself to place his cock in her pussy but not before putting on the condom that Cookie provided him. Once he put the condom on, he placed his cock inside of her pussy and started thrusting his cock in and out of her as fast as possible. Cookie moaned and groaned from how his long cock is; it felt as if his cock hit her womb. She begged him to ravage her, tear her up, make her feel pleasure and pain. He granted her wish by slapping her butt countless time as hard as he could, he would then squeeze her breast and then twist her tits, and nibble on her neck. Cookie turned her head around and made out with Burnt Oak passionately.
After enough thrust, Burnt Oak took out his cock and took off the condom. He stroked his cock for a while and released his cum all over Cookie's ass; some of it even got on her face since she had her head turned around.
A few minutes later, Burnt Oak is laying on the ground in exhaustion while Cookie is putting on her clothes but not before taking a few nude pictures of herself with a camera he had; she gave them a kiss with purple lipstick on a few of the pictures.
Cookie Crumbles said while putting on her shirt "That was fun Burnt Oak but I have to head back; my friends are probably wondering where I am. Are you going to be alright?"
Burnt Oak said looking at the erotic photos "I'll be fine; I just need a couple more minutes of rest before I meet up with Bright Mac. Also, are you sure it's ok for me to have these photos of you?"
Cookie Crumbles said "I don't mind; consider that a gift from me to you."
Burnt Oak said "That's very generous of you."
Cookie Crumbles said giving Burnt Oak one last kiss on the mouth "Bye, bye Burnt Oak. If we ever meet again, let's have more fun."
Burnt Oak said "I'd like that very much."
In another part of the Smokey Mountains, Pear Butter and Rain Flower are at the flower fields checking out the flowers that are glowing brightly under the sun; Twilight Velvet, Cloudy Quartz, and Windy Whistles are going mountain climbing somewhere else.
Rain Flower said looking at the flowers with a magnifying glass"Amazing. So these are Celestia flowers."
Pear Butter asked "How can you tell?"
Rain Flower said "You have to look really closely to find those type of flowers; it's not as easy with Luna flowers. These flowers are said to have survived the Great Magic Shut Down; the same applies to Luna flowers. I wanted to study them more last night but I'll have to make do with Celestia flowers for now. It's a shame that I can't take any with me to study."
Pear Butter asked "Why can't you?"
Bright Mac said walking toward them"Because the moment you do then they will wither away in an instant; that's what my granny told me."
Rain Flower said "What he said, except for the granny part."
Pear Butter asked "Bright Mac. How are you feeling?"
Bright Mac said giving Pear Butter a bouquet of buttercups "A lot better. While the doctors say I'll be fine in a few days, I've been feeling a lot better after you patched me up. I just wanted to say thank you with these."
Pear Butter asked "Are these buttercups?"
Bright Mac said "Yep. I hope that's ok."
Pear Butter said "I love these; they make my chin glow."
Bright Mac said "They sure do, Buttercup."
Pear Butter said "That's my nickname."
Bright Mac said with a surprised tone "It is?"
Pear Butter said "Yep. I don't remember who gave it to me, but I've always liked that name. I wish I could remember who it was that called me that for the first time."
Bright Mac said "Anyway, I have to go now; Burnt Oak and I need to head back home."
Pear Butter said "It was nice meeting you; maybe we'll meet again some day."
Bright Mac said "Yeah; I'd like that." He then said to Rain Flower "Rain Flower. Thank you for bringing me to the campsite to get treated; it was really kind of you."
Rain Flower said "Of course."
Bright Mac said "I noticed last night that you were studying Luna flower. Am I correct?"
Rain Flower said "I was. I wanted to study them more last night but I'll have to wait for the moon to rise to do that."
Bright Mac said "Well, what if I told you that you can study them right now during the day."
Rain Flower said "That would be amazing, but that's not possible; Luna flowers only glow during the night."
Bright Mac said pointing north "True, but I know a place where they glow during the day; a friend of mine told me about this. There is a waterfall a few miles north from here and there is a cave behind the waterfall that has Luna flowers that glow even during the day. I've actually seen them."
Rain Flower said running in the direction Bright Mac said "Really. That's great. I need to go check them out now."
Pear Butter said giving Bright Mac a kiss on the cheek before leaving "I'd better go after her to make sure she doesn't overdo it. Bye, Bright Mac."
Bright Mac said after she left "Goodbye, Buttercup."
Author's Note
This was longer than I originally anticipated but what can you do.
I have two questions that will affect the next few chapters.
Which of these stallions do you want to see make an appearance the most? Pick One. Night Light, Bow Hothoof, Fancy Pants, or Gladmane.
Which of these mares do you want to see make an appearance the most. Pick One.
Ms. Peachbottom, Ms. Harshwhinny, Prim Hemline, or Sapphire Shores.
