War and heartbreak story 1 the beginning

by Nightwing32

Part 1: the new guy

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Hello my name is max and this is my story about becoming the most feared pony ever. It was like 5:00 am and the alarm went off. the day was a Monday, and I had to go to the lab to get my soul transferred to a body that I could get into Equestria with. The body was a Pegasus with a crimson mane, and a black coat. My undercover name was Nightwing and I was a blank flank.

“Time to lay down to get you in your new body.” the lead scientist said.

“Finally I can get out of hear.” said max as he laid down.

A few seconds later and I was in a weird gel like substance and was a pony.

“There you are I was looking everywhere for... “ the general began to say, then looked at the scientists “the process is complete good. Get him out of there I wish to speak with him.”

I was let out and ran to the general’s tent to talk to my lifelong friend. When I got there I got papers and a phone and was thrown to the outskirts of the town called Ponyville were I meet a pink earth pony that was jumping around me saying something I couldn’t understand.

“What?” I said. then out of nowhere a purple glow surrounded it and then began to float in the air.

“Sorry about her”, a purple unicorn Pegasus said, “she loves making new friends.”

“What are you, and what’s your name?” I said

“Oh, I’m a alacorn, and my name is Twilight Sparkle, and what’s yours?” Twilight said

I hesitated before answering. “My name is Nightwing, and do you know were I can.” That was all I was able to say before being thrown in the everfree forest, and meet a pack of wood wolves. “Oh fucking hell are those Timberwolfs, well get out of here.” to my surprise they left, I looked at my flank and found a microphone, and timberwolfs with red necklaces on them and I yelled so loud I bet that everyone in Equestria could hear. “That’s my talent fucking giving orders. Anyways I need to find a place to stay for the night.”

After walking around for what felt like hours I found a nearly abandoned castle. The only thing living there were timberwolfs. “Ah fuck it they seem like they don’t want to hurt me so why not.” I said as I was making my way to a empty space on the ground before falling asleep.


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