"Ow, my head", Thom groaned as he got up off the ground. He had woken up in a forest, which was weird considering he was last at school. Luci his twin had also been transported to the location.

"Hey look, tracks" Luci pointed to the ground. There were some hoof prints in the dirt, with nothing else to do they followed them. Because "an animal must have water so follow the tracks to the source", Luci told her brother.

They reached the edge of the forest by nightfall, what they saw was unbelievable. A small town with ponies of different colors, most were not normal horse colors. Then, they blacked out.

Fluttershy was busy tending to the animals when she saw the two large bipedal creatures. She quickly hid behind a tree silently whimpering while watching them. Then, they just fell with a thud. Ignoring the urge to scream and rush inside she very carefully, and cautiously carried them to her house. Then, she tied a note on Angel,

"OK, Angel go get Twilight and the others". The little bunny quickly scampered away towards Twilight's castle.

Author's Note

so there is the first chapter of this story tell me anything i need to fix. and if you have any suggestions i wouldn't mind hearing them .