Moon's Vale

by OtakuBrony47

Chapter: Two. The Bathhouse.

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Elric followed down the dimly lit hallway, a feeling of concern building up inside of him. His stomach feeling tight. He wondered were this creature was taking him and what she had in store. Soon enough, the two arrive at a tall wooden doors. Could this be where she was leading him to? Moon slowly opens the two doors, making a loud creaking sound, as behind them, revealed a large marvel bathroom. Complete with a massive pool-like bathtub.

"Were here" she declared.

Elric watched with awe. He had never seen a bathroom this massive before. Decorations of roman style pillars, and walk hangings made of gold. The marble floors, so polished, allowed you to see your reflection on them. A light fog escaping from the bath, implying the water to be heated. And tinted windows with black silk curtains, contrasting with the paint of blue that the walls had. A small group of servants soon came greeted them.

"Welcome Mistress" they said in sync.

Eldric looked at them curiously, wanting to know how a specific species acted as servants. He was still new to this world.

"How may we assist you your highness?" asked a one of the servant.

"I require bathing and grooming supplies." Giving her orders, Moon clapped her hands together.

The servants bowed in response, separating quickly, gathering the things Moon and asked them for. She slowly turned back to view Eldric. He stared at her innocently, lightly blushing a bit. "Should I wait outside while you take a bath?" he asked. The dark skin mistress shook her head slowly.

"No" she said firmly.

The servants soon returned. One carrying a tray of various soaps. Another a set of dry dowels. And other with a tray table of combs, brushes, a pair of scissor, and other items.

"Is there anything else my lady?" they all asked.

"A change of clothes" I requested. "Both for me and my guest."

Eldric kept quiet and wait.

"Have a maid deliver them and set them on the counter, over by the sink."

"Yes ma’am. Anything further?" they asked.

"No. I plan to bathe myself in privacy. You are all dismissed for the evening."

"Yes milady!"

Eldric stands awkwardly, his stomach filled with butterflies, as he watches with anticipation. ’Oh man, I’ve never seen a girl in bathing before.’ He blushes at the thought of bathing with this dusky beauty. As the maids cleared out, Nightmare began to undo the straps of her gauntlets. She turns to Eldric as she removes one of them and toss it aside.

"You too" she commanded, "Undress!"

Eldric blushes at the command he was just given. Delight and fear raced through his mind. He slowly and nervously undressed himself to his underwear. His body trembling as his stomach felt like it was in knots. Nightmare Moon removed her other gauntlets, now proceeding to her chest plate, undoing the straps. She carefully removes it from her body and gently tossing it aside, along with her gauntlets. From there, she proceeds to remove her helmet.

Elric blushes, as he finishes undressing. Not wanting to be completely nude however, he hides himself in his bathrobe. He turns to Nightmare, immediately being stunned by her bewitching beauty, as she removed her helmet, revealing her long dark blue hair. It was so puffy, and wavy, and glowed like the moon itself. His stomach became tighter, and he soon left himself getting... Stiffer.

Her helmet now off of her, Moon unstraps her shin-guards, and thigh plates, and her crouch guard. With the layers of her armor now gone, she proceed to the suit of chainmail that was under them. As she does, she looks back to Eldric. He blushes, trying to hide his Stiffness from her. Moon looks at him with an angered face. Eldric became nervous. What happened? Did she notice?

"Hath thou have cotton in your ears!?" she yelled at him. "Undress yourself!" she demanded, "UNDRESS!".

Eldric blushed red with fear. 'She meant fully!?' his thoughts yelled out to himself. He reluctantly undresses until he was completely nude. He cover his genitalia shamefully, looking away from her as he trembled. Moon giggled at him. She was really amused by his innocent. Removing her suit of chainmail, exposing her underwear, Nightmare turns to Eldric. She smiles at him, with lust in her eyes.

"Don’t be shy child. I don’t bite." Nightmare teased.

Playfully unhooking one of the clasps of her bra, Nightmare gave him a little wink. Eldric swallowed nervously. She undoes the next clasp. Smirking at Eldric’s. He was unable to look away. She unhooks the final clasps, and slowly pulls down the shoulder straps. She turns around, giving Eldric her back, before finally removing her bra, and tossing it the side. She looked to Eldric with a smirk. "You seem very tense, my dear Eldric" she teases.

"Well... you’re inhumanly beautiful. Prettier than all other girls I’ve seen combined..." he said nervously.

Still staring at him with that teasing smirk, she pulls down her underwear. She was now bare naked. Stretching her arms, legs, and wings, and vigorously rubbing her hands through her hair. She slowly turned toward Eldric, his eyes widened with awe, her bare body now in full view.

"Ah" she sighed, "It feels good to rid myself of such heavy attire."

Eldric's eyes sparkled as he admired her majesty. "What a magnificent creature."

Moon approached the rounded bathing pool, and dipped a toe in the water. It was freshly heated. "Perfect" she declared. She walked over to the table tray the maids brought in and grabbed some supplies before heading back to the pool. She looks to Eldric as she passes him by. "Well?" she asked him. "Are you going to get in?"

"Ladies first?" Eldric said shyly.

With a chuckle, and another smug smirk, she sets her supplies down on the side if the bath, and enter the water slowly. Submerge herself, and resurfaced slowly, pushing my wet mane back from my face. "Your turn, my dear" she said, staring at Eldric with more lust.

Eldric nods, and does as he is told. He dips his tow into the heated water. With a deep breathe, he slowly sits down of the edge and slowly slips in. The water caressed him with soothing its heat. "This is nice" he sighed. Moon nodded, and reached over to the corner where she had laid her supplies. She grabbed a sponge and a bar of soap.

"Over here boy!" I instructed firmly.

Elric scooched over towards, "Okay mom." Eldric says playfully.

"Mom?" She laughed, dipping the sponge and soap into the water. "You a little Mama’s Boy?" she asked, jokingly.

"Wouldn’t you like to know?" he replied with a chuckle.

Moon rubs the bar of soap across the sponge, getting it all nice and soapy. Once she had a desired about of soap, she placed the bar back with her supplies, and proceed to scrub Eldric's back. "I would" said Nightmare Moon. "But it doesn't really matter anyway." She scrubs his back firmly, working her way up to his shoulders. "I'm gonna be your mom now anyway" she declared.

"That would be weird, moms don’t make their kids heart flutter like you do" said Eldric with a chuckle.

At this point, she began to scrub his neck; the sponge slowly creating a small lump of suds on him. "Mothers also don’t normally bathe with their children" she added. "But where we are."

Eldric raise and eye brow. "Yeah, why are you doing this anyway?" he asked. "Are you lonely or something?"

Moon stopped scrubbing Eldric, and was lost in a sudden daze. She lowered her head, lost in her thoughts, not knowing what to say or how to react. Eldric frowned, and looked back to view her. "I’m sorry" he said apologetically, "I get lonely too…all the time actually." He turns back and lowers his head too, thinking about the memories. Moon slowly leaning in closer to him.

"You do?" she asked.

Eldric nodded. "This is the nicest anyone has ever been to me in my life."

Moon felt a bit warm inside, hearing that. She reached over for the bar soap, rubbed it some more on the sponge. "Um, Yes... Well... You barely woke up, and you looked rather dirty and tired..." she said timidly. "I figured this would help you feel refreshed and clean." Once the sponge was good lathered up again, she went back to scrubbing more of Eldric’s back and shoulders.

"Thank you Moon" Eldric said with a blush. "Would you like me to scrub your back when you’re done?” he asked.

"That be lovely" Nightmare replied. "But first let me get you cleaned up."

She raised one of his arm up, and began to scrub his armpit. The sponge slowly making small bubbles on his skin.
"Are you enjoying this?" she asked.

Eldric nodded in response. "Yes I am. Thank you."

"I’m glad" she sighed. "Needless to say, this isn’t something I'm use to, or normally do for anyone."

"I figured. Thank you for this, it’s nice."

She smiled and rubbed his arms gently. The sponge made small bubbles on them as she hummed a gentle tune. "When was last time you had a bath?" she inquired suddenly. Eldric turned back, a bit surprised by her statement. "Your body isn’t lathering enough," she added. "Normally this means your skin is too dirty.” She finished one arm and moved on to his other. Eldric looked away, embarrassed as he answered her.

"A week…week and a half, maybe..."

"Yes, I can tell" said Moon playfully. She stared at Eldric’s pale skin as I scrubbed him. It was so light compared to my dark blue skin. "You have very pale, by the way," she told him as she dipped the sponge into the water and ringed over his back to rinse him off.

"It is…like paper or the moon." he replied in a lax tone.

"Yes" Moon said with a heavy sight. "Almost as white as the beautiful moon."

I dip the sponge into the water, rubbing the rinsed sponge across his back and shoulders, rinsing off any remaining soap. "I don’t know what you are. But you sure are intriguing." Nightmare leaned in and gave him a kiss on his shoulders. Eldric recoiled lightly.

"Thank you. I’m a human, and you’re a good person."

Moon clench her heart tightly. She turned away, blushing red. "N-No one h-has ever told me that before," she said softly.

"That sucks, a girl should always be showered with praise."

Her eyes widened and her wings extended widely. "Y-Y-You… Your m-making me blush..." she chuckled, covering her bare chest with her arms, hugging herself.

"I hope so, a girl especially needs to feel special."

She turns back and gives him a playful smirk. She swam over to the corner edge of the bathing pool where her supplies rested, and grabbed the bar soap, handing both it and the sponge to Eldric. "Well, now’s your chance," she said with a smile. She pulls her damped hair over, in front of her, and covered her body with her wings, so nothing would be in the way of her back. She turns around, exposing her now bare backside to Eldric, who slowly begins to scrub her back, working on the point where her wings met the body. She lightly flinch as the soapy sponge met her skin. I sensation was so sudden, it caused her to moan.

"Oh my!"

He kept scrubbing, gently working his way down by her waist. Her tail twitches from under the water, and my wings recoil slightly. "Goodness" she said. She lets out another moan as the sponge firmly brushes against her waist and upper thighs. "Mmm! This feels amazing!" she cried.

"I’m glad you like it." Eldric smiled and shift to her shoulders and neck.

"I m-must say E-Eldric. You sure know h-how to… M-Make a lady feel special. Uh! AH!"

Tilting her head, and tighten her shoulders to a shrug, the sponge slowly meets her neck. The soapy lather tingling on her skin, as she hugs her body tighter. Her wings twitching, and face blushing red as she moans with great pleasure. She stats to giggle, lightly jerking around as she was rubbed down. "Why am I being so ticklish!?" she thought to herself. Eldric blushes as he reaches to scrub her sides and belly. She shivers as the sponge slowly brushes down her left side abdomen. She bites her lower as she feels heat building up inside of her.

The sponge soon meets her belly and bellybutton. I lets out a pleasureful sigh. Unable to handle herself, she turn around and wraps her arms around the young male. She stares at him lustfully, blushing as he stared with nervous eyes. She slowly leans in for a kiss...

"Your Majesty?" called out a maid, sudden . "I... Oh!"

The two blush and move back and away from eachother. Eldric covering himself shyly, as Nightmare Moon sank herself into the water, staring up angrily at this little maid who had appeared out of nowhere. "Uuuhh, I a-apologize if I’m interrupting your bath your m-m-majesty!" she said, nervously. "B-B-But I have the c-c-c-clothes y-you re-q-quested from us... Your highness."

Nightmare rolled my eyes, and stood from the bath, letting her bodily glory be seen. Eldric blushed and looked away, sinking himself into the tub. "Excellent. Place them by the table counter by the sink" she instructed. An irritated and angry tone was in her voice. She turns to Eldric with an apologetic look. Turning back Nebula, Nightmare watched as she placed the clothes on the countertop. "Is there anything further you require, Your All Mighty Gloominess?" she asked.

"No" Nightmare replied.

"Very well. Forgive my intrusion."

With a bow, and not a single word more, Nebula left the bathhouse. Nightmare shook my head and sat back down in the bathing pool. Looking at Eldric with a blush and nervous smirk. "My apologies" she sighed. Eldric didn't seem to mind it however.

"It’s fine. It’s your castle, not mine.”

"Yes. I love my loyal subjects. But they can be real dingbats at times." She submerged herself into the water, and resurfaces, pulling wet hair out of her face. "And that Nebula is by far the biggest one of them."

"I see... " Eldric rubs his neck, feeling embarrassed by the wakward situation. "Should we get out now?" he aks.

"Not yet."

Using her magic, Nightmare levitated a glass vial from by corn of supplies, into my hands. Popping the cork, and sniffing its contents. I slowly approach Eldric. "Submerge yourself into the water" I instructed. He does so, wondering what she had planned. As Eldric resurfaces, Moon ran her fingers through his hair, to ring out any excess water. Then came a sudden surprise as he felt a colt liquid being poured onto his hair. "No offense, but you really need this" Nightmare said.

"It’s fine, thank you Moon." he said shyly.

Once a desired amount of liquid has been pour, she began to scrub his scalp, slowly creating a small amount of suds. The human cooed as he felt relax. For a creature with the word "Nightmare" in her name, she was a pretty gentle and caring person. He lets out sigh as her fingernails cleanse his head.

"Such a mess" she commented, scrubbing harder at his root. "If you’re going to be serving me Eldric, then you need to learn the rules."

"What are these rules thou speaketh of?" he said trying to sound posh.

Moon giggled as she tilted his head sideways, and began scrubbed his sideburns.
"You’re experiencing one right now" she said playfully. "Rule Number: One. All servants must be clean, and look presentable." She began scrubbing more vigorously, moving back to his roots. Smiling as his hair began to lather up. Bits of suds falling from his head to the bath water.

"Alright, I can do that…wait, I’m not a servant." The human said with a pout.

"I know dear" she said with a devilish smirk. "You are my PERSONAL servant." She grabbed a soaked sponge, and ringed it over his head to rinse off the soap I poured in his hair.

Eldric's blushes, "O-okay…I can live with that."

She submerges him back into the water, and pulls him slowly back up, rubbing her fingers through his hair. Making sure it was properly clean and free of excess soap. Once she finished, she handed him the vial and submerged myself. Resurfacing, she looked at him with a playful smirk. "Rule Number: Two" she began, "My word is God. You must follow every order I give you without question." Whipping my hair back, and brushing my hands through it to ring out the water, I bow my head in front of him. "Now... Wash me" Moon commanded.

Eldric chuckled lightly and nodded his head. "Yes Mastah!" he said playfully, making his voice sound like Igor. She giggled at Eldric’s little impression as he hands got to work scrubbing her long goddess hair. Shivering as the suds tingled on the skin beneath her hair, she hummed a wordless tune. Small piece of soap and bubbles ran down from her hair to my shoulders.

Moon lets out a sigh, as the aroma of the soap washing my hair meets my nose. "Don’t stop my pet" she moaned softly. Eldric replies with a playful bark. Moon laughs at his behavior, no doubt amused by it. She soon finish washing her mane, his hands feeling a little sore. He clenches his hands softly as he twists his wrists to make circles. "Alright, I think I’m done" he claimed.

Nightmare turns back to Eldric and swims up to him, and caresses him in her arms. "You did well my pet." she whispered, and gave his cheek a kiss. Releasing him from her grasp, she swam over to the edge of the bathing pool and rang her mane and tail out of excess water. She flaps her wings dry and turns back to look at Eldric, blushing shyly as Moon stared at him with a smirk. She walks over to the bathroom counter by the sink and grabs a towel to dry off.

"So... What now?" asked Eldric as he swam out of the bathing pool.

"Dry off, and do as I say" she commanded, levitating a towel towards him. "We have much more to do."


Author's Note

Hope you all enjoyed this chapter. Chapter 3 will be out soon.

And for the rest of you wondering, yes, I am still working the next chapter of I'm the Pincess of Equestria.