Chapters Before the dark change
A long time ago in the magic lands of Equestria there was purple mare who used to go by the name grape sweets. It wasn’t a great time but good enough for her and her family. When grape sweets got old enough to speak her parents enrolled her in the local school. At school grape sweets was considered a bad influence by many students due to the fact she didn’t have her cutie mark, she was kept from the lunch table, pushed out from playing with others on the playground, and ignored by all but one student who also didn’t have a cutie mark. Grape sweets had become close friends with this student whose name was simple and easy to remember.
“Grape Sweets”
The pony replied
(My name is Trixie)
“Grape Sweets”
Trixie looked at Grape Sweets with a face that spoke for her.
“Grape Sweets”
The two ponies easily became friends and spent every school day together, eventually started hanging out after school and on weekends.
“Whaehonah” (Why did I do that, I know they were bullies but they didn’t really deserve that.)
After The Dark Change
Whaehonah didn’t stay sad when she became an adult. She still didn’t have her cutie mark even as an adult pony. This being the case she was nothing but a mare of anger and her heart had become even darker than King Sombra’s. This made Whaehonah nothing but a heartless wretch. Her eyes were no longer white with red iris but all red with black pupils and her mind was set on one thing alone, to kill all fillies who just recently got their cutie marks.
Since it was at the school where her friend had gotten her cutie mark and left her to get her’s all by herself she figured that was place to start watching for new cutie marks to appear.
“Young pony”
That was the word that ended the young stallion’s life. The young pony jumped into the bushes only to see the evil mare staring at him with her mean red eyes. Whaehonah bit his vocal cords right out of his throat before he could cry for help, she stomped his head flat on a rock causing his death but she wanted to make sure he was dead, Whaehona beat his back eventually shoving her front right hoof through his spine and out through his stomach. Whaehonah silently said,
“Whaehonah”
Whaehonah give the boy a kiss and ran off, back into the everfree forest.
It wasn’t long before the students and their teacher came out and smelled the odor of blood coming from behind the bushes. The teacher went over to the bushes telling her class to stay where they were. When the teacher got closer it wreaked of blood smell and flesh, but what disturbed her even more was what the smell was coming from. She had just walked up to a horrible and devastating sight. Her student who she hadn’t even knew was absent from class was dead right outside the school yard boundary. She called for royal guards and ponyville officer and sent the rest of the students home with their parents and family but one mother was kept at the school only to hear about the horror that had occured.
The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 2
The royal guardsmen questioned the student’s parents asking them questions that pointed to them being suspects. The parents were shocked, they asked why they were being asked such a question.
“Parents”
“Guards”
The parents just answered the questions as calmly as they could.
“Guards”
“Parents”
“Guards”
“Parents”
“Guards”
“Parents”
“Guards”
“Parents”
The guards looked at the parents of the young pony, they knew who the parents were talking about but didn’t say anything about it. They just said to stay in their homes.
Years passed with more murders but no answers, Whaehonah had been getting away with ruthless filly murders and no answers or justice. The only thing that was getting done was attempted pony protection no arrests, ponies of interest were never collected or even hunted. Whaehonah had claimed yet another victim. A group of five fillies had been plotting against Whaehonah in hopes of finding her. They didn’t know her name but had seen her appearance, purple body, lite pink mane and no cutie mark. These five ponies knew what this pony was capable of but they had no idea what they wanted face. The evil pony had been appearing around the school the most so the five ponies decided to perform an investigation starting at the school as a start.
“Apple Bloom”
“Diamond Tiara”
“Scootaloo”
“Diamond Tiara”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Silver Spoon”
“Apple Bloom”
Silver Spoon seemed to be the only one taking things seriously. She actually found the file on
“Silver Spoon”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Diamond Tiara”
The five ponies went to Trixie’s cart just outside of Princess Twilight’s castle.
“Trixie”
Trixie screamed. She asked the fillies why they were asking so many questions about an old file from the school.
“Trixie”
“Apple Bloom”
“Trixie”
“Sweetie Bell”
So with this new found information, the cmc, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon believed they had a motive, but they didn’t have enough and with the murders getting more gruesome as each occur in addition to the royal guards not seeming to be doing anything about it they were at a lost cause.
The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 3
The cutie mark crusaders continued their search for answers, mostly dead ends but Diamond Tiara had an idea that just might give the five of them a lead.
“Diamond Tiara”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Diamond Tiara”
Sweetie Bell looked back into the file in hopes of finding the names of Grape Sweets’s parents.
“Sweetie Bell”s
“Diamond Tiara”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Diamond Tiara”
The five fillies went to the town hall in hopes of getting further information using the new information they got from the thin school file.
“Mayor Mare”
Apple Bloom lied right through her two front teeth to make sure the information didn’t get to the royal guardsmen.
“Apple Bloom”
The mayor could tell Apple Bloom was lying but wondered what kind of truth her lie was hiding.
“Mayor Mare”
“Sweetie Bell”
Sweetie Bell was cut off when her sentence was just being started.
“Mayor Mare”
“Apple Bloom”
“Mayor Mare”
“Apple Bloom”
Mayor Mare was shocked at what she had just heard but felt she should at least try to help.
“Mayor Mare”
Sweetie Bell handed the mayor the school file and the Mayor quickly noticed something about the pony in the picture she looked at.
“Mayor Mare”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Mayor Mare”
The five fillies had even more questions to ask but many were unable to be answered. Luckily they had a hit, the pony’s mother and father were located. The cmc, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon went out and looked for the residence of Grapefruit Gary and Pawpaw Tart.
“Apple Bloom”
Silence was waved over the mare at the door.
“Sweetie Bell”
More silence was blown the five filly’s way.
“Scootaloo”
The pony actually uttered something that time.
“The pony”
The pony was Whaehonah’s mother.
“Apple Bloom”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Scootaloo”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Diamond Tiara”
The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 4
The fillies had went into a state of confusion. Why was Pawpaw Tart expecting somepony to come and ask her about her daughter especially in a remote area of Ponyville such as this.
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Apple Bloom”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Silver Spoon”
Pawpaw Tart then followed the fillies to the more populated part of ponyville to meet up with the one pony witness that had most of the story and Pawpaw Tart was shocked at the information that she had just gotten. She was also unaware of her daughter being bullied over her blank flank. Why did Whaehonah keep this from her own mother? That information was causing the investigation to take an unknown turn.
“Pawpaw Tart”
But before Trixie could respond a group of royal guards and Ponyville police came running and flying through.
“Guard”
Pawpaw Tart had confirmed her name and wanted to know if they were looking for her daughter.
“Guard”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Guard”
“Pawpaw Tart”
“Guard”
Pawpaw Tart was devastated. Her daughter was a heartless killer and she had no idea of the whereabouts of her.
“Pawpaw Tart”
Pawpaw Tart and the five fillies decided to search for Whaehonah in the everfree forest in hopes of her mother being able to talk some sense into her.
“Whaehonah”
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The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 5 The Final Showdown
The Final Showdown
The five fillies then realised what they had been wanting to face, but knowing the royal guards weren’t doing anything they had no choice. So first they tried conversation in hopes that Whaehonah would listen to reason.
“Diamond Tiara”
“Whaehonah”
Whaehonah flew straight at the fillies and their accomplices, knocking them right into the counter she made. Trixie blasted Whaehonah with unexplored amounts of power from her horn and sent her flying into a tree. Diamond Tiara tied vines around Whaehonah’s legs in hopes of restraining her. Unfortunately that didn’t last but five seconds. Whaehonah broke free of the restraint and kicked Diamond Tiara and Trixie into the bushes.
“Whaehonah”
“Apple Bloom”
Apple Bloom threw the counter top at Whaehonah knocking blood from her nose.
“Apple Bloom”
That only made Whaehonah mad. Whaehonah ripped the dining table she had constructed out of a large stump and threw it at right at Apple Bloom. Luckily Apple Bloom was able to dodge the attack. Sweetie Bell came out from hiding and asked Trixie if she could combine magic with her.
“Sweetie Bell”
Trixie raised up to listen to Sweetie Bell.
“Trixie”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Trixie”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Trixie”
“Sweetie Bell”
“Trixie”
The two unicorns combined their magic into a super attack that got Whaehonah’s attention, but before Whaehonah could counter attack or defend herself Sweetie Bell and Trixie unleashed enormous amounts of magic, amounts that could not be measured by even the best wizard in Equestria. The attack had Whaehonah on the ground in agony. Whaehonah started to get up but Apple Bloom wrapped her up in vines, then Scootaloo tied her back legs up and Silver Spoon tied her front legs up then Diamond Tiara tied the four together.
“Whaehonah”
“Scootaloo”
That’s when Pawpaw Tart stepped in.
“Pawpaw Tart”
Whaehonah looked at Pawpaw Tart with confusion. She was trying to remember who this pony was to her.
“Pawpaw Tart”
Whaehonah gave Pawpaw Tart another confused look and started to question who she was to Pawpaw Tart.
“Whaehonah”
“Pawpaw Tart”
Whaehonah actually started to shed tears for the first time in years. She realised who Pawpaw Tart was to her. She was being spoken to by her mother.
“Whaehonah”
“Pawpaw Tart”
Whaehonah broke down and started crying.
“Whaehonah”
Whaehonah had started to show signs of change once more. Her eyes went back to the beautiful silver color and her heart had gotten the gold sparkle back.
The fillies returned the school file back to it’s drawer in the file cabinet
The end.
