Shiny vs Sunny
Chapter one: A wish gone wrong
Load Full StoryNext ChapterShining Armor. the prince of the Crystal Empire, was bored out of his ever loving mind. He was standing in a long meeting with the nobles, all talking about boring, dry topics like taxes and trying to obtain trade contracts for trade routes. He tapped a hood on the ground eyeing the clock overhead as he tried to pay attention. He could feel a pressure in his bowels and squirmed a little needing to poop really bad. All that morning coffee had gone right through him. He turned to see that the clock overhead indicated he had to endure two more hours of this.
All the while, Sunburst was reading statements form the new bill of trade as the nobles asked them questions. He was also fidgeting, needing to use the bathroom as well. Sunburst fixed his glasses and cleared his throat. “Well, that‘s all we have to do for now. We’ll give everyone a ten minute break and meet back here. Okay, everypony?”
The nobles all started to get up from the table and they were walking out talking amongst each other, as Sunburst got up and chuckled seeing how drowsy Shining looked, so he teased. “So, Shining, looks like you’re still alive, somehow.”
Shining gave a yawn and nodded. “Yeah, but how much longer do we have to endure this? My back is aching.”
Sunburst chuckled. “Well, we still have two more hours of this.”
Shining groaned, rubbing a hoof down his face. ”I would rather do hours of drills than this.” He got up from his chair running a hoof down his mane.
Sunburst fixed his glasses and began. “So, I guess we have ten minutes to go take a break…”
Shining groaned as he felt his bowels beg for release and squeaked as he ran off. “Well, I have to go use the bathroom! I’ll be back soon!” He rushed off as Sunburst shouted. “Hey, I have to go pee! Let me go first!”
In another part of the castle, Princess Cadence was busy training her two daughters in basic magic skills. The two foals were using their magic to float little toys around as Cadence watched with a keen eye, making sure they didn’t have any magic surges.
The two fillies were as happy as could be as Flurry Heart cooed and flapped her wings, shooting sparks from her horn as she lifted her whammy snail plushie. Fizzlepop was concentrating as she grunted and was trying to raise her bunny plushie.
The princess couldn’t hold it any longer, and took both foals into her hooves and snuggled them together as she cooed. “Oh, you two are just too cute! What did I do to deserve such adorable foals like you?” They both giggled and kicked about, making their diapers crinkle audibly. She nuzzled them and kissed them both on the forehead. “Well, you two did such a good job. But Mommy needs to go see how Shining is doing at that boring meeting.” She gave each foal a boop on their nose and stood up to leave as the foals watched.
Flurry Heart turned towards Fizzlepop and asked. “Hey, Fizzwepop, wana pwactice mowe magic?”
Fizzlepop nodded and babbled. “Yeah, but we pwactice awot aweady. I wana show what we weawn to Daddy.”
Flurry Heart squealed in delight. “Yeah! Tat sounds wike a good idea! But we need to do someting speciaw.”
Fizzlepop tapped a hoof to her chin. “Wememba when we had magic suwges?”
Flurry rolled her eyes. “How could I forget? We dwove Mommy ad Daddy cwazy.”
Fizzlepop then asked. “Wha if we made wishes, wike ta fawiy in ta stowie Mommy wead us?”
Flurry giggled and replied. ”We can’t do tat, we have little contwoow ovew owa magic suwges.”
Fizzlepop pouted as she crossed her hooves and mumbled. “Bu we bettew with magic now, I bet we can do it.”
Flurry tapped a hoof to her chin in thought. “Otay, but we needs to be cawefuw and make it a smaww wish.”
Fizzlepop nodded, and then they both went to the nursery door that was closed shut and Fizzlepop sighed. “Wew, I wish we can open tis door fow stawtews.”
Flurry got on her back legs, waddled to the door and grunted as she lit her horn thinking about the request. In a burst of magic it hit the door and a small pink door opened beneath it, Flurry opened it! “Yay, it wowked!”
Fizzlepop giggled. “Wow! If we can do tat, we can do anyting!” The foals then waddled off down the hall, giggling while thinking of things to wish for for their family.
Cadence walked down to the conference room in the back of the castle and turned to Sunburst who was waiting patiently outside a bathroom, jumping up and down, clearly holding in the need to pee. Cadence giggled and asked. “Oh hey, Sunburst. Is Shining hogging the bathroom again?”
Sunburst growled as he jumped around. “Yeah, and he’s taking forever! It’s not fair!”
Cadence smirked and knocked on the door. “Honey, are you okay in there?”
“I’m fine, Cadence! I’ll be done shortly,” Shining called from the other side of the door. “Tell Sunburst to wait, geez! It’s like he’s a little kid.”
Cadence giggled and cooed, “Okay, Shiny, but do you need any help? You sure you don’t need Mommy to wipe you?”
Shining groaned back and whined. “Of course not! Stop babying me, Cadence! I’m not two!”
The princess laughed and turned to Sunburst and asked. ”Alright. So, Sunburst, how’s the conference going?”
Sunburst pranced around the place and whined. “We got everything you wanted finished. We’re almost done. We just need to finish it off by having the nobles sign the deals.”
Cadence nodded and blushed. “Shining, you might wanna hurry it up. I think that Sunburst is going to burst.”
Shining groaned. “I’m done! Tell him to wait a few more minutes while I get cleaned up.”
Sunburst whined and exclaimed. “Shining, come on! You’ve been in there for ten minutes! You’ve gotta share!”
Cadence couldn’t help but burst into laughter at that. When she got her composure she lightly giggled. “You two have fun in there. I’m going to go back to play with the foals.”
Sunburst rolled his eyes and continued to dance around. “Alright. I really need to work on my teleportation skills, then I don’t have to wait for Shining to finish hogging the bathroom all the time.”
Cadence laughed as she walked down the hall. As she turned the corner she didn’t notice Fizzlepop and Flurry coming around the same corner.
The foals peeked around the corner and watched Sunburst doing a potty dance in front of the bathroom door and knocking. “Come on, hurry up!” He whined anew.
Fizzlepop bent down to her sister and whispered. “So, wooks wike we needs to hewp Daddy, he needs help with going potty ‘cause he’s been in thewe so wong.”
Flurry nodded, looking on. “Yeah, bu we needs to hewp Mw. Sunny fiwst. He’s gonna pee-pee aww over ta floow if we dun hewp him.”
They both nodded together as they lit their horns and concentrated on Sunburst. Then a beam of energy hit him, as a cloud of magic poofed around his rump! The stallion blinked in confusion and looked down to see himself wearing a thick diaper with his cutie mark printed on it. He saw how the diaper sat around his rump with cute little smiling suns printed on it. He looked around the hall making sure he was alone, then all of a sudden he started to pee inside the diaper. He sighed in relief when he was finished and with a thick blush on his face, waddled off quickly to get changed.
The two foals then waddled to the bathroom door and Flurry cooed. “Otay, now we help Daddy. Hope he didn’t faww down da howe.”
Fizzlepop nodded and they both shot their magic at the door, just like before a small pink door appeared at the bottom. They both went through and saw Shining Armor sitting on the toilet with a newspaper in his hooves.
Flurry blinked in surprise (she didn’t understand why you would read while using the bathroom) and Fizzlepop rolled her eyes. “Daddy dun need hewp, he just being wazy and a meanie to Sunbuwst.”
Flurry shrugged. “Well he may stiww need help ow somethin, I mean he wants to sat on ta potty longew.”
Both foals turned and big smile formed on their faces as Fizzlepop asked. “Weww, wha if we use owa magic to help Daddy stay on ta potty wonger?”
Flurry gave Fizzlepop an odd look and asked, “How we do tat?”
Fizzlepop shrugged. “I dun know, but ouw magic sugwes wowked so faw with Sunnybuwst and the door, so I tink we can hewp Daddy.”
Flurry lit her horn and babbled. “Otay, wew…one…two…three!” They both shot a beam of magic at Shining, who squeaked as he felt the weird magic wash over him. When it faded, he looked around and saw that he was now a small foal with his cutie mark moving over his crotch area. He tried to touch it but it blew up into a diaper like material that went around his legs. It poofed up, but instead of tabs it went around his rump like a pair of pants.
He squealed, falling backwards and plumping on his padded rump. Then he watched as the toilet shrank into a small plastic potty. He got up, watching in amazement upon seeing the plumbing had all vanished, leaving just a cute foal’s training potty Then the diaper like material fell between his back hooes and he squeaked, stumbling back onto his small plastic potty. He whimpered, hugging himself as he whined. “Wha is going on hewe?! Why’s evewyting changed?!”
Shining looked up to see Flurry Heart and Fizzlepop approach him, laughing. Fizzlepop cooed. “Hi, Daddy, awe ya in potty twaining?!”
Shining pouted. “No, of couwse not!” He squeaked at his high pitched voice and whimpered “H...how did tis happen?! Wha ya do to me?!”
Flurry laughed. “We thought ya need hewp with ta potty, but we didn know this wouwd happen!”
Shining whined. “Ya two awe in big twobwe when Cady finds out!” He got up and tried to waddle over to the foals, squeaking as he tripped over the padding and fell down. Fizzlepop and Flurry both came to Shining and together helped him back onto the potty. Fizzlepop then saw his newspaper had turned into a silly picture book and plopped it into Shining’s hooves. “Thewe, ya wead ya stowie whiwe goin poopies and dun get off ta potty ow ya gonna go in ya puww-up.”
Shining blushed as he scrunched his legs. “Bu..but I awawy went poopies! I was just twying to wead.”
Flurry blushed. “Well, ya a foaw now and ya might need to go potty mowe. I tink I go potty mowe than you ow Mommy do.”
The prince rolled his eyes and sighed. “Fine, but aftew I go potty I gonna caw Cady and ya two awe gonna fix this.” He crossed his forelegs and gave a pout, still a little embarrassed at using the potty in front of others.
Then they all heard a cry as a little chubby orange coated foal (who was extremely chubby) waddled into the bathroom through the door the foals had left earlier. “Wha happened to me?!”
Both Fizzlepop and Flurry blushed as Fizzlepop explained. “We wewe twyin’ to hewp Daddy with goin potty. Sowie, Mw. Sunbuwst, we didn’ mean to tuwn ya into a foaw too. We just twied to hewp ya so you wouwdn’t pee-pee on ta gwound.”
Sunburst blushed, seeing his diaper was soaked yellow and sagging around him. He blushed and whined at the foals. “So ya magic tuwned me into a foaw?!”
Shining couldn’t help but laugh as he scrunched his legs together. ”Hehe, at weast I owdew and can use ta potty. See?”
Sunburst got up with a cute pout and shouted! “No faiw! Why did ya two change him into a toddwa and me into a foaw?!”
Flurry took a closer inspection at the diaper and giggled. “Tat’s not a diapee. tat a puww-up! Ya pee-peed in ya puww-up, siwwy.”
Sunburst looked down. “Weww, at weast I as owd as Shiny, I tink.”
Shining laughed. “Aww, wittle Sunny can’t use ta potty, he pee-pee in his pants!”
Sunburst whined anew. “Onwy beasue ya hog ta potty, ya desewve to be a wittwe foaw!”
Shining roared as he got off the potty and tackled Sunburst to the ground, shouting. “Ya gonna take tat back, ya poopy head!”
Sunburst stuck his tongue out. “Not a chance, ya big baby!”
Just then, Cadence came into the bathroom with hooves on her hips. “Hey, what’s going on he-” She stopped mid sentence seeing both Shining Armor and Sunburst in their foalish states as Shining got up. “Cady! Owa foaws tuwned me into a toddew! Tuwn me back, and then tey need to go to timeout!”
Cadence snickered and asked. “Oh my, how did that happen?“
Flurry blushed. If Shining and Sunburst could be understood by Cadence, hopefully she and Fizzlepop could be too. She babbled. “Weww...ya see, Mommy, we just wanted to hewp Daddy.”
Fizzlepop nodded and explained. “Yeah. He said he need hewp going potty and ya said owa magic was bettew, so we tiwed using magic sugwes to hewp. We weawwy sowie.”
Cadene eyed her foals, somehow she’d understood every single word of that. “That was really naughty!” She scolded. “Just because your magic is getting better doesn't mean you can just use unstable magic surges on ponies!” They both whimpered and Cadence sighed. “Alright, well the good news i, I think that your magic teacher from Canterlot has a antidote for this stuff. I’ll get her to send me a few samples of her potion. In the meantime..” She turned to both Shining and Sunburst. “I’m going to have to continue the meeting, so I need you two to stay on the potty until I say otherwise.”
Shining whined. “Bu I aweady went poopies and Sunburst peed his puww-up.”
Cadence just took both colts into her hooves, took out another training potty, and placed it next to the one already there. After taking care of Sunburst’s wet pull-up and cleaning him and Shining up, she slipped down their pull-ups and plopped them on their respective potties, while setting a timer. “Now, I’m going to finish up the meeting and be back before this timer goes off. You two just sit on your potties. If you two don’t then you will also get a timeout.”
Shiing growled. “Come on! We not foaws!”
Sunburst whined. ”Yeah, no fair! Come on, Cady.”
But she looked down at the two colts and put on a strict, motherly tone. “Now now, stop that behavior. You two will do as I say until you’re adults again,” They both blushed now seeing how strict and motherly Cadence was. The princess of love then cooed. “Now, if that’s all, then I’m going to finish this meeting. Don’t worry, I won’t tell them what happened. I’ll just tell the nobles you’re indisposed at the moment,” She then turned to the two fillies and lifted them with her magic. “Don’t think you two are off the hook either, misses. You’re both in big trouble when this is all over.”
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