Equestria's Greatest Warrior (Rewrite)

Chapter Five

Chapter Five: Finally Meeting the Locals.
-Story Start-

I've decided, I'm going to summon Naruto Uzumaki to train with, literally just gonna get Shadow Clones and Rasengan Variants. "Mentorship"

please State a Universe

"Naruto"

state a specific part

"Shippuden"

Contacting chosen character...
What is this? Hello? Bee?

"Yo, Naruto, this blue box over here, name's Hikari"

Uh, why is everyone frozen?

"While I am talking to you your universe will be frozen in time, I've come to ask you for training. I want to learn the clone jutsu and variations of the Rasengan," That and the massive stat gains I'll get from training with him.

oh, well I guess I could come and train with you since time is frozen here...

"Sweet, I'll transport you right now."

Transportation Initiated...

He appeared the usual 2 meters in front of me, I immediately used observe and was shocked.

Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze
Lvl 250

Health:5,000
Chakra:10,000(Kyuubi Influence)

Str: 500
Spd: 600
Agi: 550
Mind: 30
Arts: 250
Int: 25
Wis: 150

Weapon(s) 20 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 3 Fuhma Shuriken, 10 explosive tags

Holy shit, I mean, he's nowhere near Goku, but still.

"Hey Naruto! No time for chat let's get started!" I said.

"Yeah, let's get started!" He yelled as he launched himself at me, guess we will start with a spare.

Results of training year:

Unlocked Chakra and Chakra Regen

Leveled Two Skills:
Rasengan:
Lvl 12(350/1300)
Spiraling Sphere, a ball of pure Chakra that swirls in all directions randomly. Has a drilling affect before exploding.
Costs 15 Cha minimum to create. No upkeep costs, can add more Cha in for greater damage
Damage: Minimum Cha = 60 damage

Chidori:
Lvl 8 (650/900)
Lightning Blade, a failed attempt to add lightning chakra to the Rasengan, mainly an assassination just. Has a powerful Piercing affect
Costs 15 minimum Cha to create, no upkeep costs.
Can add more Cha in for greater damage
An increase of +6 speed when in use
Damage: Minimum Cha = 50 damage

Gained Five Skills:
Gained:
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu:
The ability to make a solid copy of yourself using pure chakra.
Clones memory is transferred to original upon “death.”

Odama Rasengan:
Bigger more destructive version of Rasengan
Costs 30 chakra minimum to create, can add more chakra for more damage.
Damage: minimum chakra = 80 damage

Futon Nature Release:
The ability to use the Narutoverse version of wind manipulation.

Raiton Nature Release:
The ability to use the Narutoverse version of lightning manipulation.

Futon: Rasengan:
Lvl 7 (650/800)
A Rasengan infused with futon Nature Transformation, creates little wind blades in the Rasengan that increases its overall deadliness.
Costs 50 Cha, you cannot use more Cha than necessary, or it may destabilize.
Damage: 150 on initial impact, 10 damage/sec touching enemy

Gained Buff:
Sage:
You have become a Sage, you currently have access to:
Toad

Sage Mode(s)
When in Toad Sage Mode
+50 to physical Stats
+20 Con
+10 Arts

Mastered 200x gravity
+New stat, End(Endurance) starts at 10, Gaines all previous stat bonuses
+50 to all physical stats

It was a few hours before my training time was up in the HTS Chamber when Naruto had to leave, we had exchanged goodbyes and given each other a gift. He had given me one of only five of his father's kunais, saying he never could figure them out anyways. I gave him something he would need, I taught him the Chidori, do give him an edge, and had a talk with him about how some people just don't deserve a second chance. He didn't take my words seriously, but I hope he realizes it soon.

It was now that I remembered something important, I am the Gamer, that means I have an Inventory. I decided to have a look right now.

“Inventory,” nothing happened, “hmm, Menu?” There we go.

Profile
Inventory
Options

“When I hit the button for Inventory, I found out that I had taken pretty much everything that I had bought with me, my phone, TV, PS4, my entire desktop computer setup along with my computer desk and chair, and something called “Instant Room Capsule” which I assumed was a copy of my room from the house I lived in.

I decided not to mess with that right now as I went back and chose Options.

Difficulty:Easy
Rating:Mature
Sound
Box Color

Looks like Yami wanted me to have fun, in two ways. Whatever, I'll do what I want during my stay here, from what I saw of the void, I'm pretty sure this game is some kind of “Game of the Year” edition. That means I'll have multiple different characters to choose from, different bodies, and different types of this universe instead of just anthro.

HTS Chamber set time limit reached.
Beginning transport to original position
…

And I am now back where I was… and I was surrounded by guards. All of them around 1.6 meters tall and wears Royal gold armour.

“You there! What are you and how did you get here.” One of them shouted, must be the Captain.

“I just got back from a training session in a pocket dimension, and I am a Saiyan. The name's Hikari” I replied, I decided to just go with me being a Saiyan instead of saying Mix.

“You expect me to believe that?” He asked in a deadpan. Yeah, I wouldn't believe me either.

“He is telling the truth,” a new voice spoke “but what I want to know is how you got here, specifically this world.” The voice said as a figure of about 1.7 meters walked out of the wooded area. She had shining white fur a horn at least double the size of the unicorns here, wings much larger than any pegasi here as well, wearing what seemed to be Royal clothes, and flowing multicolor hair. I already knew this was probably Celestia.

“My Princess” the pony from before said as he kneeled. “I did not know you were coming here as well.”

I decided to interrupt this, “ Yea, this is good and all, but uh, I got things to do. Like sleep for 2 years and 360 days.” That made the smaller ponies stare at me weirdly.

“ Why should you do that?” Celestia asked, “Don't you have other things to do to do?”

“ Well one, because I'm immortal, and two, to help you with a certain moon problem later.” I replied, “Actually, more like assisting you student.”

She seemed to immediately understand what I meant. “Guards, go back to the castle, he means no harm. From what he had said, he plans to aid us in a future event.”

The guards complied, albeit reluctantly, and went back towards a castle on the side of a mountain you could just see from where we were. She gave one last look before turning and walking towards that way as well.

“I'll be sure to thank you, if you really do aim to help me get my sister back, “ she said. Then her wings burst open and flapped forcefully as she shot to her castle at at least mach two. I caught her with an observe as she left.

Celestia
Lvl 300
Health:2,800
Mana:4,800

Str:280
Spd:250
Agi:300
Mind:500
Int:450
Wis:450
Arts:240
Per:120
Con:450
End:150

Weapon(s): n/a

Huh, so she's kinda badass. Ok then, time to go do shit for a couple years. What to do, what to do… I could spy on Canterlot and the castle. Yeah, I'll do that.

Spying, Secrets Discovered.
Year One, Months One-Six

So apparently Twilight isn't as big of a social outcast and overreacter as seen in the show. Maybe something causes it? I'ma make a Kage Bunshin to watch her, to prevent whatever made gain those horrible traits.

I think Celestia knew I was here, must be because of her high Per stat. I'll have to find a way to get that up. But even though I am fairly sure she knew I was there, she seemed to try to… tease me? I know it sounds weird, but every once in a while she would look directly at my and grin, as if she knew I was getting frustrated at not getting any dirt in her.

Finally, I watched the court sessions, well not me, a Kage Bunshin did. It was mainly a bunch of snobs trying to get outrageous and blatant get richer bills every session, a couple even had the balls to hit on fucking Celestia. They lost those balls soon after, were thrown in a dungeon, and not heard from again.

Oh, I also used Fiction Adaptation a few times before Yami decided It was too overpowered and upped the recharge time to monthly.

Four new skills learned:
Gained:
Wood Sage Mode:
A version of Sage Mode used by the First Hokage, Hashirama Senju. It is unknown if he created this variant or if he learned it from a long lost Summon Clan.
+80 to physical stats when in use
+50 to Con when in use
+45 to Arts when in use

Wood Clone Jutsu:
Created by Hashirama Senju, a clone technique using wood as it's main element, greatest durability if all clone techniques.
Costs 80 Cha per clone

Tenseigan:
Evolved version of the Byakugan, improves on all uses of the Byakugan and gains a chakra cloak.
+40 Per
Costs 10 Cha/min when active
Chakra Cloak:
A green cloak of chakra is gained.
When in use:
+30 to all stats
Stackable with other types of Chakra Cloaks.

Big Bang Kamehameha:
Super Saiyan 4 Gogeta's choice of Ultimate Attack.
Focuses immense energy to one point making a condensed ball of Ki, the unleashes it in the direction of the enemy by forcing the energy to break through the shell of one side of the ball.
Costs 600 Ki to charge, 100 more to fire
Damage: 800 - 1000 depending on how the wave hits the enemy.

I think I am ready to at least hold off Nightmare now. I'm not stupid, I saw Celestia's stats, Nightmare's will most likely be similar to Celestia's level of power, probably a bit more. Although, I have a use of Fiction Adaptation now, and I think I might be ready for Mastered Super Saiyan, if not, I'll just get regular Super Saiyan. I try to think of Goku and Gohan just hanging out as Super Saiyan.

You have gained a Special Skill.
Gained:
Mastered Super Saiyan:
The mastered version of Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan:
The Legendary power of the Saiyan's said to only come about once every thousand years.
This transformation Increases you power by 50x but due to having mastered it, your power increases by 60x.
+120 to all stats when on use
+ New System Bar, Rage:
Rage increases your power by 100% when filled and activated. The bar is filled by dealing and taking damage. Rage can be filled and activated automatically if thrown into an actual rage by an event.

An entire new System Bar? “Status”

Hikari

Level:18
Exp:(1250/1900)

Race:Mix
(Saiyan, Human, Arcosian, Namekian)

Power Level: 200,000

Mastered Super Saiyan:12,000,000
Tenseigan Chakra Cloak:400,000
Wood Sage Mode:350,000
Toad Sage Mode:300,000
Valor:240,000
Wisdom:220,000
Limit:260,000
Max Power:
Limit, Tenseigan Chakra Cloak, Wood Sage Mode, Mastered Super Saiyan:60,600,000(Limit+TCC+WSM x60)
Cannot stack Kaioken on Super Saiyan.

Health:1,910(Str x10)
Ki:1,950(End x10)
Rage:0%
GKi:locked
Cha:1,280(Str+Mind/2 x10)
Rie:locked
Mp:1,500
Ki Regen:125 Ki/min(Arts+Con)
GKi Regen:locked
Chr Regen:138(Wis+Con)
Rie Regen:locked
Mp Regen:135 Mp/min(Mind+Con)

Str: 191

Agi: 194

Spd: 196

End:195

Mind: 65

Int: 73

Wis: 68

Arts: 55

Per: 120

Con: 70

Chr: 30

Status Points:190

Buffs

Minor Namek Regeneration:
You can now regrow all body parts other than the head/brain and heart
Regrow limbs within 2 hours
Regrow organs within 6 hours
Can cut Regen time in half by focusing on regrowing the limb and/or organ

Arcosian's Innate Power:
Do to you being, even slightly, related to the Arcosian race, you get their Innate ability to use ki and their Innate power
+15 to all physical stats
Ki usage gained

Saiyan Warrior Race:
Do to being at least 45% Saiyan and it being your dominant race you gain all Saiyan traits and access to obtain the ask transformations.
+5 to physical stats

Human's Strength of Will:
Do to being at least 45% Human, you gain human's minor survival instincts, emotionally affected power level, and rational thought processes
+10 to mental stats

Natural Ki User:
Do to learning about Ki from master you have become very adept at using Ki.
+Ki Skill:Ki Control
+ Stat Con(Control)
+10 Con
+2 to physical Stats

Fighting Adept:
Due to being taught by a master, you have become adept at fighting
+3 to physical stats
+Stat Arts
+5 Arts

Elemental Adept:
You have become an Elementalist with 7 controllable elements with a few months, you are extremely aware that this unheard of by other Elementalists.
+10 to Con

Debuffs

n/a

Neutral Buffs

Speed over Strength:
You have a naturally speed based build but you also have never (willingly) worked out in your life other than when forced to.
-5 Str but due to frequent forced exercise the penalty was lowered to -2 Str but also +3 speed and +2 Agi.

… Maybe I've gained more power than I thought. I mean, over sixty million power level? I should be able to fight Nightmare myself and quite possibly win. Although she would still need to be hit by the Rainbow Friendship Cannon to turn back into Luna. Maybe I'll Pull and Abridged Goku and go, Full Nelson! Yeah, I'ma do that, see what happens of I get hit by the RFC.

And with that I went back to watching Celestia. Thinking about it, maybe I should approach her about Magic Training. I mean, the only spells I have are my AP Round and the Chore spells from Donald. Yep, train from Celestia it is.

I dropped down from the ceiling after about two hours as the last session ended. “Yo, could you teach me Magic?” Blunt and to the point, yay me!

“Of course, it might be fun, and give young Twilight someone e to practice with.” Celestia replied.

Speaking of twilight, those bad behaviours of being over paranoid and socially awkward apparently came from being isolated. No one would talk to her from fear of the princess’s retaliation if Twilight is somehow hurt. Instead of letting that continue, one of my Clones encourage a few kids to talk to herm Twilight herself as 17 right now while the kids I sent her way were between 15-18 years old. Thankfully, it worked, otherwise I would have used extreme measures. Which was to send my clone to be her friend.

“Alright then, I'll come by at the start of next year to start, see ya!” After I said that, I jumped up to the ceiling and crawled away. I had decided to use the next half a year to unlock Rietsu myself. I'm pretty sure I know how to, just meditate till I see the strands of energy.

I went out to the garden and sat next to Discord, “Yo.” That's all I was going to say to him, I had no idea if he could hear me or not anyways. I crossed my legs, closed my eyes, and just sat there for a bit. I tried my best to clear my mind, but it was really hard to do for me. It was about half an hour later when I finally got the skill for it.

New Skill Learned:
Gained:
Meditation:
Lvl 1 (0/100)
To concentrate on oneself's innermost mind, allows user to feel his own energy and learn to use them better
+5 mental stats
+2 Con

I continued to meditate until the skill reached around level seventeen before I was interrupted. “Who are you?” I opened my eyes to see Twilight Sparkle in front of me.

“Just a friend of Celestia's, I came out here to meditate. Your welcome to join me, it helps you learn to control your Magic better.” I replied

“Oh… I think I will join you, I do still have slight control problems when it comes to more complicated spells.” She said as she sat down next to me. “ I understand what meditation is, but I'm not exactly sure how to start.”

“Just close your eyes and focused inwards, clear your mind of all unnecessary thoughts.” I said as I went back to my meditation, “Don't get discouraged if you don't get it right away, it took my the better part of an hour just to clear my mind.”

We sat like this for about an hour, meditating. I Leveled it to twenty-five before I felt the little strands of energy. I also felt that Twilight had got it and was now actually meditating.

Meditation:
Lvl 25 (1750/2600)
To concentrate on oneself's innermost mind, allows user to feel his own energy and learn to use them better
+15 mental stats
+10 Con

There were five strands, three of them were glowing. Oh, that's right. I never told you the colors of my energy. My magic is black while my Kids is a dark red with a black outline around it. Chakra is always blue, but it's shade is different depending on its density. Mine is a very dark blue as my density is off the charts. Then there were the other two strands, one was in front with the other three and was a glowing red with a blue outline. I was sure that it was my Rietsu, but the color surprised me. The other was really far back, out of reach, and was a sparkling red. I was sure that was the God Ki, and it would be a while before I was strong enough to get that.

I grabbed my Rietsu strand and it immediately glowed and I felt a weight on my lap. I opened my eyes to see a Zanpakuto, a Zanbatō type actually. How much Rietsu do I have? “Status”

Hikari

Level:18
Exp:(1250/1900)

Race:Mix
(Saiyan, Human, Arcosian, Namekian)

Power Level: 200,000

Health:2,210(Str+Chr x10)
Ki:2,500(End+Arts x10)
Rage:0%
GKi:locked
Cha:2,710(Str+Mind x10)
Rie:2,510(Mind+Int+Wis)
Mp:1,500
Ki Regen:135 Ki/min(Arts+Con)
GKi Regen:locked
Chr Regen:163(Wis+Con)
Rie Regen:168(Int+Con)
Mp Regen:160 Mp/min(Mind+Con)

Str: 191

Agi: 194

Spd: 196

End:195

Mind: 80

Int: 88

Wis: 83

Arts: 55

Per: 120

Con: 80

Chr: 30

Status Points:190

Buffs

Saiyan Warrior Race:
Do to being at least 45% Saiyan and it being your dominant race you gain all Saiyan traits and access to obtain the ask transformations.
+5 to physical stats

Human's Strength of Will:
Do to being at least 45% Human, you gain human's minor survival instincts, emotionally affected power level, and rational thought processes
+10 to mental stats

Natural Ki User:
Do to learning about Ki from master you have become very adept at using Ki.
+Ki Skill:Ki Control
+ Stat Con(Control)
+10 Con
+2 to physical Stats

Fighting Adept:
Due to being taught by a master, you have become adept at fighting
+3 to physical stats
+Stat Arts
+5 Arts

Elemental Adept:
You have become an Elementalist with 7 controllable elements with a few months, you are extremely aware that this unheard of by other Elementalists.
+10 to Con

Debuffs

n/a

Neutral Buffs

Looks like some things were changed… Yami is probably always looking over the Game and changing things to make it “interesting” to her. Alright, the next few months are definitely going to going into learning my Zanpakuto's name. That and hanging around with Celestia, and now Twilight since she saw me.

It was around hour later that Twilight opened her eyes, then they widened. “How long was I doing that?” she asked while looking over to me. “And what's with the weird sword?”

“You were out for about two hours, and the sword is a manifestation of my power.” I replied, “You should probably go see Celestia, I'm headed that way too.” I got up and started walking towards the throne room. Twilight falling in step beside me.

When we got close to the castle I turned to Twilight and spoke, “I have to sneak in so go on yourself, the other ponies don't know about me yet. Just a few guards, Celestia and you.” She just nodded and I slinked off to crawl across the ceilings to the throne room.

By the time I got there Celestia and Twilight were talking. It had taken me a bit because of a few detours to avoid being spotted. Celestia looked up to where I was, Twilight following her gaze to me. I just waved to them before dropping down to the floor

“I see that you know you way around the castle quite well.” Celestia said. I just nodded as I tried to look away from Twilight. She was just staring at me for some reason and it was weird. Then she started to walk towards me.

Twilight? What are you doing?” She was getting close to a run now. “No seriously, what are you doing?” She jumped at me. “Twili!?-umph” I yelled as she crashed into me, in a hug?

“Princess Celestia told me what you did. You were the one who convinced the others to talk to me. Thank you.” She said, hugging me tighter. Now I have received and been giving hugs before, but only by family and close friends. I did not know how to react to this. On Earth, Yea the girl would be thankful that she had friends, but not enough to tackle hug me. I just awkwardly returned it with a one arm hug.

“Uh sure, it was the least I could do for you in that situation.” I said. When she finally let go of me I stood and quickly took a step back. That was a bad move, she seemed to get a little sad. I knew that was probably because she thought I didn't really like her. “Don't confuse me backing off for dislike, I'm just, not used to shows of affection like that.” She seemed to perk up when I said that.

'what does he mean not use to affection? He has to be at least eighteen, at that age he should have had at least one marefriend.’ Celestia thought as she watched the interaction between her student and the new being. 'Maybe I should have a more in depth talk with him later. Trade information on Equestria's history for his history.’

“Well I will be going now, I need to train a bit more. I'll be back at the beginning of next year for those magic lessons.” Have said. Then he jumped up to the ceiling and quickly crawled away. 'How does he hold onto smooth marble like that?’ I wondered for the fifth time since I met him.

“Princess” Twilight said, gaining my attention. “What did he mean by not being used to affection? And, Magic lessons?”

“I do not know about his past, my student, but the lessons we're something he asked for. He just wants to begin next year for some unknown reason.” I told her, she seemed to reluctantly agreed to my first point.

She left after a few more minutes if talk. Then the court started. “Sigh, first session.” I say

“I would like to propose that my family get a annual stipend from the roya-”

“Rejected” I interrupt Pocket Picker.

“Wha-” he sputtered

“Rejected” I state again and he was escorted out. “Next session”

I had just left the throne room. I decided that I would go into my HTS Chamber, but set it to 1 day/1 day and just train my physical stats for the next few months. Well stats and Advanced Turtle Hermit Fighting Style, and hopefully I'll max it out. I clicked the HTS Chamber Capsule and the green box appeared.

Hyperbolic Time/Space Chamber
Please choose a Time Dilation

1 day/1 day selected
By doing this you won't be kicked out on a time limit, instead you can be inside for as long as you want.

Transporting…

Ahhh, the white space again. I head over to the building and open the gravity settings. I set it to 210x and start my training

“To the dungeon with this one!” A guard yelled as he pulled away Fake Love. The pony had tried to make an unwanted move on me before I slammed him against the wall on the other side of the room. I was really getting sick of today's court. It had been a month since Hikari went into training. He had somehow left the barrier around Equestria again and had disappeared. I knew he would come back, though I wish he would have stayed. He made these courts interesting by messing with the ponies who come here for their own gain. Hell would usually somehow take a stallion's belt making their pants fall, one pony he did that too was discovered to be wearing Celestia face printed boxers. That was not a flattering sight. Sometimes he would help the poor ponies get closer to the front of the line to help them out. Other time he would just slinked down from the roof, get right behind some of the snobbiest ponies,and copy their movements. I always had a hard time keeping my stone face with him around. But for now, I'll have to deal with the ponies myself.

“And that's why the richer families in Canterlot should be able to buy any property owned by a poorer family.” Bloody Rich finished.

“Rejected” I said, using telekinesis to set him close to the door, before one of the guards pushed him out

“Sigh, next"

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