There are 2 things that I hated most in life. First is having to face the sun’s blinding light when waking up. Second is being dragged to somewhere without knowing where the hell I was being dragged to.

I woke up that day facing the blinding sun. I groaned as I slowly scanned the area with a morning daze only to realize that the place wasn’t close to home. I was always intuitive, so I assumed that whoever gave me that briefcase, drugged me and dragged me to god knows where.

But, the only question that bothered me was…. Why didn’t they kill me? Better yet, arrest me?

I continued to come up with assumptions and logical reasoning as to why but brushed it off as it was only wasting my time. I picked myself up and began to analyze my situation carefully. The time was mid-day, somewhere around 11 am. The setting that played before me was a forest. It looked a little…. cartoony…. Like everything was brighter than normal. It wasn’t something that I hated, just something that I don’t see every so often. Or maybe it’s just me seeing nature. I have been standing on city streets and corners that I forgot the true beauty of a naturalistic environment.

I sighed and checked my pockets. My knives were still intact along with my phone. I checked my other pockets and a small bump popped out in my pants. I removed the object and as it hits the sun, it revealed itself as the note from the briefcase. Irritated, I crumpled and threw it on the ground, hoping that it won’t disturb me along my adventure back to my cozy house.

That’s what I hoped that’d happen….

Few minutes into walking through the forest, I came across a dirt path that might lead me to civilization. But, being a skeptic, I followed the dirty path hopping from tree to tree. Hours into trying to find at least somebody to tail, the road stopped in front of a massive wasteland.

Bones of whatever remained here were scattered around. There seemed to be what looked like a deer carcass and skulls of a lion. It reeked of rotten flesh and decomposing bones. I was going to ignore this place as it got nowhere close to where I wanted to go. But, a certain voice called out in the rotten vale.

It was sort of mature… No… A kid?

The voice was muffled until eventually it turned clear, “Help please!” It shouted.

Without seconds of hesitation, I ran through the animal carcasses as fast as I could and hopped over a slope to see the seen unfold before me.

My eyes grew wide with disbelief.

What stood on the yellow rotting ground was a monster that would only come out of horror novels. It had blue scales that covered his entire body, spikes that emerged from its back like a Spinosaurus, a snake like tongue, and a massive mouth that caved in an abundance of razor-sharp fangs. Not to mention its size, it wasn’t small, almost the size of a full-grown horse. It walked on its 4 legs with the forearms having massive spikes poking out.

It was staring down at its prey. Its prey that screamed for help. A prey that is…. A colored person with tails and ears? It looked to be younger than I thought. Its eyes wide with agony and horror. Tears flowed down like it was his last moments on earth.

I was speechless as to what I was seeing. It was a situation that I was unsure on what to do. Should I help or should I run? Should I stall or should I defend? Should I take its attention or watch it die?

Before the decision was made, the monster roared and stood back. Its mouth grew wider and wider as more fangs could be seen circling his inner throat. That mouth was big. Hell, big enough to even swallow me whole.

It leaned back and got into position to devour the poor fellow creature that stood in front of it.

I wanted to hold it in and stand my ground, but a part of me kept screaming to fight. For all my years, I killed people for contracts and my own sake of gaining money. Sometimes for revenge. But this time, I needed to use my skills to defend. To defend someone who I didn’t know.

I jumped out of cover and began to unsheathe my weapons. A long sharp knife at one hand and a karambit at the other. I screamed to get its attention as I ran behind it.

“Hey blue shit! Over here!” I shouted gaining both of their attentions. The monster looked at me like it was another of its prey. The creature that covered his face in fear looked at me with shock.

I jumped towards a giant burnt tree and leaped onto the monster’s back. I stabbed it with my dagger and slashed it with my kramabit. The scales were hard to pierce bot was able back out instantly and got ready for round 1. I guess you can call this a ‘cheap shot’, but at this point, I need all the advantage I can get.

The monster roared in pain as blood spurted out from behind his back. The color of its blood was dark blue. But, what caught my eye was the smoke that came with it. I wasn’t sure as to why but assumed that it was toxic or something. I looked at my blades and noticed that they were completely fine. I guess it doesn’t affect metals?

The creature turned his massive body towards me and rushed with a moment’s notice. I dodged instinctively to the left and it got stuck on the slope that I came out of. Holy crap that thing is fast!

It seemed that his jaws got stuck on the sides of the slope and that gave me enough time to aid the downed kid.

“Hey, you okay?” I asked as I checked back on the monster then back at him.

“Y-Yeah, I’m fine.” He said with a bit of shock.

“C’mon get up and find someplace to hide! That thing might be as fast as a bullet train for all I know!” I ordered.

He nodded his head and began to make his escape. I sighed in relief. For the first time in my life, I was able to move my legs and save someone. But I shouldn’t be worrying about that right now….

Because the real fight isn’t over yet…..

I turned around and stared at the monster who had just gotten its mouth out of the dirt. I gripped my two knives and looked at it with a sharp glare. I quickly scanned his body, trying my best to find its weaknesses.

It turned around and came rushing at me with the same speed. I was able to dodge it swiftly. In the middle of rolling to safety, I noticed a giant white spot under its belly. It wasn’t covered in scales and it flailed around like a giant sac.

When we both regained our balance, I braced myself and got ready into position. I had to, in my first time ever, trust in my instincts to kill something. I twirled my dagger around into a reverse grip and held them both in front of me like an X. The monster came rushing at me once more, but this time, it arched its back and opened its mouth wide like he did to the kid before. As it came down, I rolled forward and there I saw the white spot from before. I pierced my dagger into it, making it flinch backwards, exposing its belly even more. Then I began to slash it with my karambit.

Blue blood gushed out as I made really deep cuts into it. I rolled out of the way just in time before it crashed down on the ground. Of course, it roared but I was so tired to even care for it.

I caught my breath turned back to see its body drowned in the blue gooey blood. Minutes later, my adrenaline stopped and a slight burn, that was similar to the burn I got from my finger, radiated from my shoulder. I looked to my side and saw a portion of that blood cover the side of my shoulder.

My eyes widened with agony and my entire right arm trembled from the burning pain. I looked around for any kind of help but shook it off as I needed to take of myself first. Dammit, this shit hurts like hell!

I ripped a piece of cloth from my shirt and clutched my right shoulder in pain as I tried to leave the area and find a less open spot to treat my wound. I stepped over the boundary of the rotten vale and came back to the green grass that I remembered. I leaned against a giant ass tree that gave a ton of shade to hide me well enough from any enemy. I removed the cloth and saw the blue blood evaporate into smoke. Suddenly, the burning slowed down and I was able to catch my breath.

“Holy crap….. Holy crap….” I said out loud in each gasp, not caring to what was out there to catch my voice.

In front of me, a bush rustled. I turned my attention to it with a focused glare. My arm was well enough to be used again as I grabbed my alternative knives from my other pocket. In an instant, I got up on both legs with my knives in the same X position.

Suddenly, the kid from before came rushing out. “P-Please don’t hurt me!”

I sighed and dropped back into leaning against the tree. I looked back at him and carefully analyzed his body. He was about a height of an 8-year-old child. What was most surprising about his appearance was the color of skin… or rather, fur. It was coated white with brown polka dots sticking here and there. He wore plain white shirt with brown shorts. What I found interesting was his courage to even come here in the first place.

“Umm…. Sir, are you okay?” He spoke again.

“Y-Yeah. I am. What about you kid? You seem to be brave enough to even venture out to places like these.” I said.

Oh right, his accent was pretty cute for a kid. A heavy British accent if I may.

“I got lost in the woods when I was trying to get a ball back for my friends! And then that thing came out of nowhere and started chasing me!” He exclaimed.

That was a pretty cliché ‘how I got lost in the woods’ type of thing, but I’ll let it slide for now.

“Calm down kid. You’re safe for now. I don’t know how more are out there, but my guesses are that they are on the hunt for food.” I said.

He looked at me with a worried look, “Does that mean that we’re going to be meeting one soon!?”

“I’m not sure. But, if you could take us back to your town before sun down, we have a better chance of surviving as to now.”

“I-I can try find the way.”

I smiled softly, “Sounds like a plan then.”

He returned it back with a smile of his own.

“When are we leaving?” He inquired

I got up and stretched my body. The burn from my right shoulder was still present but am able to move and flex my entire arm.

“We’re leaving now.” I said.

“What about your wound?” He pointed to my shoulder that had smoke coming out from it.

“I’ll be fine. As long as the blood wasn’t as potent as I expected.” I replied.

He nodded. We were about to make a move on but he stopped and turned around to look at me.

“Before anything else, may I know your name? I’m not very comfortable with somepony I don’t know.” He asked.

Wait, somepony? What does that mean? I’m either tripping balls or actually talking to a half horse half human. Well, pony, since they were way smaller.

“My name is….” I stopped midway and remembered about my identity.

My mouth was left agape as I tried to think of a name.

“Shad….” I finally spoke.

“Shad? That name sounds really cool!” He widened his smile.

“Heh, thanks kid. How about yours?” I asked back.

“My name is Pipsqueak! I came from Trottingham and moved to Ponyville with my parents!”

Ok… Hold on. Trottingham as in Birmingham? And what the hell is Ponyville? Who the hell calls themselves Pipsqueak? If that were me, I’d blame my parents for giving birth to me.

My head ached to the information given to me and the amount of thinking I had to do. To think this was real is just absurd, but the possibilities are endless. I sighed and shook the thoughts out of the way and focused on the main task, getting the hell out of here.

The kid looked at me with a raised brow, “Why do you look so distressed Mr. Shad?”

“I’m… I’m not in distress. Just a little too much thinking is all.” I said as I pushed my temples.

“Well… Okay. The way back to Ponyville should be that way!” He pointed towards a direction.

“How sure are you that it’s there?” I asked.

“I can navigate my way through places like these! Trust me, it’s a skill of mine!”

“Again, how sure are you?”

“Very sure!”

I was very unsure of this but hey, gotta make use of what’s available because I don’t know where the hell I am.

“Alright, let’s get a move on. Time is of the essence kid.” I said.

“Hey! I know that phrase!”

We moved through the trees and came across the previous trail from which I followed. How do I know this? The paper that I crumpled was sitting on a patch of green grass at the far-right side. I ignored it continued to follow Pipsqueak. Along the way, we talked about his past.

Apparently, he was considered a ‘blank flank’ as the symbol for his skills hasn’t been revealed yet. He showed a part of his butt which was…. Very unnecessary, and pointed to where the symbol is going to appear. They are, how you say, a ‘Cutie Mark’. It sounded more of a magic tattoo that will show up on your butt once some sort of special action is done. I chuckled at his story and treated it as some sort of kid’s fantasy. If this is what kids think these days, I will be very grossed out by the upcoming generation. Why does it have to be the butt?

He asked me about my past and I shrugged it off as I changed the topic by pointing to random animals present in the area. I don’t want this kid to know about me….

I wasn’t a smooth talker at all. Especially when it came to kids, I don’t have anything to talk about except for the game of tag that I used to play with my friends back in 3rd grade. I didn’t know what they liked or what they were specifically interested in.

“Say, Mr.Shad?” He questioned.

“Yes, Pipsqueak?” I replied back.

“How did you find me in the first place? If you were roaming the Everfree forest, you must have come from somewhere, right?”

Everfree forest, that’s this place’s name I believe.

I didn’t know how to answer that except for making up an excuse.

“I came from a giant city. I wanted to experience the sensation of being in an environment full of nature. So, I settled on taking a camp in the Everfree forest since that was closest to my location.”

“Camping? Where are your bags? If I recall, tents are like the size of 3 massive trees!” His hands expanded to elaborate the size.

Seriously? How far has the world gone to?

“I left them when I heard your cry.” I answered.

“Well… Shouldn’t we get them? I mean, the sun is still high up.”

“No thanks kid. After that thing showed up, I don’t have the energy left to fight again.” I looked at my right shoulder to notice that the burn is well gone and the blood has evaporated.

“That reminds me! The way you fought that thing was amazing! I’ve never seen anything like it! You sliced something then BOOM! It fell to the ground! But, I kind of looked away from all the blood that came out…” He acted out the fight that I had while walking with his hands crossed like an X. Reminds me of when I was small….

“That was pure instincts and thoughtful thinking. I didn’t know what was happening at that exact moment because it felt so fast your body kind of reacts to it automatically.” I explained.

“Either way, that was so cool! I wish you could teach me how to do that someday! Then, maybe I can get my cutie mark for fighting bad guys!” He was getting excited about his future plans.

I chuckled at his behavior. He sounded like me, acted like me, hell might’ve even had the same kind of personality as me. But, this only applies to my past self. The present me had to take some shots to the exposed heart and heal it right away. It was something that I couldn’t avoid.

Another hour or so passed of walking and the sun was still high up in the sky. I don’t know why, but 5 hours of daylight seemed like 30 minutes. We continued walking and finally came across a gravel path. I sighed in relief that civilization was nearby, but my expectations fell instantly when Pipsqueak said it was only 1/3 of the way there.

A question bugged me about the kid. How the hell did the ball get that far?

I wanted to ask him but wanted to take a rest from all that’s done today.

Another hour or so passed, he continued to bombard me with questions on how I learnt how to fight, who my iconic figure was, and my lifestyle in general.

“One more thing I want to ask you Mr.Shad.”

“Go ahead.”

“What are you supposed to be? I mean, I can tell a hairless ape from a pony, but you’re a mix of both!”

Hairless ape? That’s a little rude. And wait….. Pony? So, my observations were correct.

I wanted to tell him whether he was joking and wearing that ear, fur, and tail as a prank. But, we’ve spoken well enough for me to believe that he was who he is… A pony. An anthro pony.

I sighed and spoke, “I am what you call a human. I assume that you don’t know what they are?”

“Not exactly. We’ve been given lectures in school about Equestrian history and little did they lecture about humans. The only thing I’ve heard was that they lived over 3000 years ago!”

Equestria?

I nodded slowly and placed my hand on my chin, “The possibilities are certain….” I said softly.

“What did you say Mr.Shad?” Pip asked.

“O-Oh, it’s nothing. Just another…. deep-thinking session.”

What if…. This was a new world…. What if I just had to accept that fairy tales are real? I mean, with that thing I fought a while ago, the amount of greenery here as opposed to Earth, and the kid I’m talking to now has no knowledge on humans and their industrial innovations, this has to be a message….

Equatria…. That has to be what his world’s called.

I showed him my phone and asked if he knew anything of the device. He shook his head in denial. I can’t be tripping balls... But, there’s no evidence of my coming here. If I was drugged, I would have remembered who drugged me. The last thing I remembered was that stupid ass letter….. Wait, maybe that has a connection to this. Well, it’s gone now since I left it.

I sighed and tried to shake off all the thinking I had to do and began to create a mindset. A mindset to focus on what’s ahead of me and stop leaping to sudden conclusions. It has costed me before, and I’m not willing to risk it now.

“Hey, Pip. Mind if you tell me more about Equatria’s history?” I said.

“You mean, Euqestria?”

I’ll keep that in mind.

“Yeah, this place.”

“Well, sure. But, I’m going to warn you, I’m not the best in history.” He looked down in embarrassment.

“You did remember that humans lived 3000 years ago, I believe you can tell just the important bits of Equestria.” I reassured.

He smiled and began a lecture from a kid. Apparently, this place is ruled by two princesses who controlled the sun and the moon. I don’t know how the hell ponies even began because he didn’t remember so well, but I understood. I’d have to treat this like a bible with ponies appearing out of nowhere. These two princesses were named Celestia and Luna, wow, very anticlimactic. They were the strongest living beings left in Equestria and uses their magic to rise and fall the sun and moon. I went in disbelief and told him how that was possible. He then talked about the different types of ponies, one who could fly, one who had absolute brute strength, and one who could control magic. Magic? I wanted to ask him but wanted to find out by myself later.

Then there were the 6 elements of harmony, ponies that befit their duties to repent evil as they each represent the elements of laughter, loyalty, kindness, honesty, generosity, and magic. The magic bit kind of confused me but had to accept it either way. They have beaten enormous villains such as that of ‘Discord’, who had the powers to change the plains of space and time. He sounds a little bit too overpowered to me. They all lived in a small village named Ponyville. A little confusion came to me as to why the supposed heroes of Equestria lived in such a tight space when they can solve other dangers such as theft, murder, maybe even rape. But, from Pip’s understanding of Equestria, ponies were made to bring peace and friendship to the world. This meant that all ponies were to abide in peace. It sounded very controversial as there were always those who despises following the rules of certain beliefs. Look what happened to my grandfather, he exposed his idealism and the public despised him because of it.

Anyways, that was the gist of all he said, there were more to the story such as the Princess of love and other shenanigans, but I told him to stop. I’ve had more than enough basic information to know about this world, but reading a book about it would’ve been great.

Finally, what felt like almost a day, we reached a sign that read ‘Welcome to Ponyville’. It was interesting on how they named such a place. If there was a place on Earth named ‘Humanville’, I’d shoot myself in the mouth.

“We’re here Mr.Shad! See you can trust me!”

This was never the case of whether I trusted him or not. I never trusted him from the start and wish not to. But, he trusted me so much and even kept his promise on leading us to civilization. I didn’t know what to say but just had to thank him, for the first time in my life thanking a person… Er, pony.

“Thanks kid, really appreciate it. And by the way, just call me Shad, no formalities.” I patted his head.

“No problem, Shad! Now c’mon! My friends are still waiting for me!” He continued walking.

I followed suit and soon after, a gigantic tree like crystalline castle was in view. I was amazed, shocked almost. But I kept my calm demeanor.

Soon enough, the entire village can be seen. Rows of cottages and some weird designed houses were built to attract the eye. By that I mean literally rape it with colors. The anthro ponies went about doing their chores, buying food, and chatting with each other. A part of me still wanted to see this a dream or some sort of hallucination, but I leaned into what laid in front of me.

Pip ran through the crowd of anthro ponies who chuckled at his childish behavior. I joined the chuckling as I entered and follow soon after. Though, I was uncomfortably gaining so much attention. Some glared at me, others had lust, and the rest went about their daily business. Maybe it was because of my human aspect, or the way my weapons hanged from my body. Either way, I wasn’t welcomed. I mean, it’s not every day you see someone walking with knives on his body.

From the outside, the village looked really small. But once you enter, it becomes a whole different place. The houses were average sized but what peeked my interest was the boutique and cupcake shop…. Though, the cupcake shop was too obvious to notice because it is shaped like an actual cupcake.

Before I knew it, I was lost. I looked around in hopes to find Pip but he never showed up. I felt like a kid who got lost in a gigantic mall in panic of finding my parents.

But, I’m not going to let that stop me from exploring this place. I walked around the village and tried not to brood over the situation I’m in. So, I walked around and tried to make a mental map of the place in case I get left out again.

So far, nobody wanted to talk to me and when our eyes did meet, they averted right away. I was still unsure of what to do except to find the mayor of this county. But, I needed to find Pip first. He may be useful when I want to know certain locations of this place and probably meet some important people while we’re at it. Though, I’m still skeptic about my whereabouts and all of this being a prank. Hopefully my appearance doesn’t blow my cover if that’s the case.

I stopped at a gigantic apple farm that had quite a ton of fresh apples. I never knew big farms still existed. I thought that machines did the work under artificial sun. My tummy growled from hunger and decided to try steal some fresh-looking apples.

I hopped over a fence somewhere on the right far side of the farm and quickly snatched an apple from what looked to be a full-grown apple tree. I wouldn’t want to harm the ecosystem in here so I picked out the fattest apple out of the bunch as it was a sign that it was ready to be harvested. I bit unto it and holy crap…. My mouth has never tasted something so sweet and succulent since my mother’s cooking. I kept chowing down on it until the seeds remained.

After finishing the good treat, I heard a familiar voice.

“Hey! Stop that Applebloom!” Pip’s laughter echoed through the abundance of apple trees.

I squinted my eyes from the same direction the voice came from and lo and behold a tree house hanging from a generous looking apple tree. It had stairs to get on and fences to look almost natural. The house itself was pretty damn big for a tree house. It looked to fit more than 10 small kids in there…. That sounds weird to say….

In front of it were Pip and 3 other girls his age. One had orange fur and magenta emo hair. Another had a bright yellow fur and red long hair with a pink ribbon. The last had a mixture of bright pink and bright violet curly hair accompanied by her white fur. Their attire was sort of casual with the magenta girl having a boyish attire, the red-haired girl had a western vibe radiating from her attire, and the curly haired girl had a more formal attire with a shirt and a short jacket.

I walked over to them as I ate an apple in one hand and placed my other hand in my pocket.

“Hey, Pip!” I shouted to get his attention.

“Oh, hey Shad! What took you so long! I thought you were following me!” He looked at me with a little concern.

“Umm… I don’t know who started running away?” I questioned as I chewed on an apple.

“O-Oh…. Right, sorry about that. I was just so excited to come back home after all what happened today…”

I chuckled and patted his head, “Don’t worry about. I just happened to find you along the way here.”

He smiled back at me.

“Hey, Pipsqueak… Who’s that?” One of the girls asked.

I turned to them and saw them looking at me with wide eyes. Was it because of my charm? Or was it because of my weapon loadout? Either way, they were surprised to see someone like me.

“Oh right, forgot to introduce to you guys. CMC, this is Shad, the person who saved my life in the Everfree forest. Shad, this is the CMC, or also known as the Cutie Mark Crusaders!”

“What’s up?” I offered a hand.

I feel like I’m accepting this place way too easily….

They were hesitant at first, but took the offer after minutes of looking at each other, “Well… If you were the one who saved Pip here, then I guess it’s alright…”

“For starters, would you girls introduce yourselves?” I asked.

The girl with curly pink and violet hair spoke out first, “My name is Sweetie Bell.”

The girl with red hair came second, “My name is Applebloom, howdy do partner?” She greeted me with a warm smile.

The last girl came to me still hesitant. “My name is Scootaloo….”

“What’s wrong young lad?” I raised my brow.

“It’s just that…. You look a little sketchy to me… Something like an assassin on the loose.” She said.

I looked at my outfit and saw it damped with dirt. My blades could be seen all throughout my body. I was the ideal killing machine of the night. I understood where she came from and agreed with her.

“I understand as to why you would think of me as this. I have my reasons but it is not allowed for the public to know. I just saved your little friend here and he led me to your village. Of course, I needed to thank him for his duties and his trust that he gave.” I said.

She looked at me with a hint of relief.

A furious stomp echoed through the apple trees. I turned my head and saw a girl who looked to be just about the same height as me just taller, walk towards us. She had orange fur, a yellow ponytail style hair that was toppled over a western hat, and bright yellow freckles.

I looked at her then looked at the apple I held in my hand. I did this about 3 times until realization hit me. I stole these fucking apples.

She stopped right in front of me with a blazing gaze. I wanted to settle this through negotiation. So, I extended my arm and came through with my attempt.

“Hey, name’s Shade. Sorry about your apples, I felt so hungry so I just-“

“Steal it?” She finished my sentence.

The area around me fell to zero degrees in temperature as I felt some sort of danger approaching.

“You fillies step away from him right now!” She ordered.

The group behind gave me a worried look as they did as they were told. I stood my ground and gave them a simple nod as well as a soft smile.

“Okay… Like I was saying, I wanted to apologize-“

“You be quiet! Ah’ heard what other ponies said about you and what came out was nothing but trouble!”

I began to give her a cold stare. I sighed heavily and spoke.

“Oh... So, you’re basing off your judgements through the views of others?” I questioned.

This lady was getting on my nerves. She was the basic interpretation of anybody who suspected me. And this whole basing off through observation kind of thing? Disgusting. It was something I despised the most.

“Then what are those knives for? A’hm pretty sure you’ve taken lives.”

“What if I did? That wouldn’t mean I’d hurt someone I don’t know.”

“Sis… He-“Applebloom tried to help me but was cut short by the girl who I assumed to be her sister.

“Now is not the time to talk Applebloom! Ah need you and the rest of your group to get to home this instant! This is a serious matter we’re dealing with.”

Just like that, they all ran. Now it’s just me and her.

“So, what are you going to do now killer? There’s nowhere left for you to hide. Ah know this place better than you do.” She said.

“I’ve never killed anyone here. There is no solid evidence that I did. These knives were meant to keep me safe from the Everfree forest. If that’s not the information you want, then what is?” I tilted my head.

Suddenly, a giant red man locked me into a bear hug. I tried to escape but my actions were futile. He was big, large, and muscular. I then see the girl rushing to me with her hands curling up into a fist.

I got ready for the punch as I tensed my body up. But, this punch just went through me like butter. The impact and damage dealt a massive blow to my body. My breathing stopped and I could feel that my ribs were torn to pieces, like a gigantic elephant just stepped on me.

I was released and sure enough fell to the ground like a ragdoll. In the distance I could see a white blur running to me, shouting out words I couldn’t understand. The only words I could make out were,

Leave him alone!

Author's Note

Hope you guys enjoyed Chapter 2! I wanted to do some sort of fleeing method at the end but thought of a more interesting direct approach on how Jacob sees the Elements of Harmony.

Point out anything that is grammatically wrong, spelling check, or just paragraphs that doesn't make sense.

Thanks and enjoy your day young bloods!