The Pony Scrolls: Equestria

Hey everybody Clonetrooperkev here,

Well this story has certainly come a long way since I started this on a fling based on a conversation with a fellow Brony. Thank you all very much for all the tracks and comments. I am going to continue on with this so no worries there.

But I do have a request. I need people to edit this thing. I need you (yes you) to take the story apart. This is your chance to be BRUTALLY honest. Find anything wrong with it, and then tell me in an email to clonetrooperkev@yahoo.com. Full credit will be given to you. No need to hold back. Essentially, to you nitpickers, this is what I'm offering to you,

So please everypony, rip this thing apart. If you find anything wrong with it, point it out.

And now to answer a few questions.

While this is based on Skyrim, the story will be going it's own way. I do need help coming up with names of Alicorns however, since there will be thousands of them. Shoot a name or two at me and I'll try to integrate it in.

People have also been asking about the Romance the story will have. Orion and Twilight will have a romance that I know for sure, and there will be other romances too, I just haven't thought of any yet. Now then there's another question, will there be "Clop" involved. The answer is that it's up to you. I'm not going to write it, but if you the reader want to contribute and do something that's fine too. I'm not looking for something that's just, you know, sex. Add some emotion in it.

Thanks for reading and a new chapter will be up in a day or two.

• Clonetrooperkev