Author's Note
this is my first story because i'm a beginner of making stories and the problem is i don't have a proofreader and its going to have bad grammars and don't make sense of whats happening so yeah. tell me at the comments to what do you think of my first chapter
An old box
It's a Friday afternoon and the School is over and The Young 6 were having a normal day at the library. Gallus and Smolder are playing chess , Sandbar sits on the table watching Gallus and Smolder playing , Silverstream is reading books about equestria and always goes to Gallus , Sandbar and Smolder to obvious facts which annoys them. yona and Ocellus are at Twilight Sparkle's office fixing The Headmare's window because they got into trouble for doing a dangerous stunt of Ocellus calculations of Yona wanted to fly but instead Ocellus uses a catapult to Yona but suddenly Ocellus didn't notice that it's the worst spot that it's in front of the Headmare's window when the catapult launch Yona smashes it and the window has a big spot and the headmare is not happy and Ocellus and Yona had to go to the closet to find supplies for window fixing and the headmare hired the baby dragon called spike to watch for not making any funny business.
"Found anything yet" Ocellus Asked.
"Yona have not found it yet" The yak answered trying going deeper on the top shelf. then ocellus found it and tells yona to go but Yona found something at the top shelf on the side. "Wait yona found something".
Yona was just about to get out of the top shelf but she founds out that she's stuck on the top shelf "Yona need a little help please!" she started to struggle and Ocellus and Spike went to the top shelf to try to get her out as harder as they could but when they finally got Yona out Ocellus and Spike on the ground being squished by Yona.
"YAY YONA GOT OUT!!" Yona cheered when she sees that Spike and Ocellus are on the ground.
"Yeah you got out but can you please get us out first" spike asked. Yona stand up and she has the box on his hoof and when she tries to find a name that's on the box she founds the name called the Mane 6 which is their professor's and the headmare.
"Spike did you know about this" Ocellus asked when spike saw it.
"it's my friends box did you see the name on the box" Spike answered.
"yeah i know that but what's in the box" Ocellus asked again.
"What's in the box is my friends old stuff that they don't need anymore" Spike answered.
Ocellus and Yona are amazed that its their own professor's old box. "Can we see what's inside".
"I mean i guess it can be ok i mean i haven't seen that in the box yet i mean i still can't get over the fact that Rarity told me not to open the box even Twilight" spike said thinking about.
"And you agreed on that?". Yona Asked. "yes i mean you i have a crush on Rarity you know" Spike anwsered.
"Yes thanks spike i have to show this to the others and also for you Yona" Ocellus said.
Yona said "YAY".
and they're just about to get out but when spike said "AHEM" the two of them realized they got work to do.
Ocellus said "After we fix the Headmare's Window first".
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" Oh come on Gallus that's totally a checkmate" Smolder argued with Gallus because of the queen can go everywhere they want and the king side of Gallus got it.
"Come on at the very least that the queen can go anywhere is that it can't go backwards" Gallus replied back to smolder.
"Dude the queen can go anywhere you just said because your a sore loser" Sandbar added to Gallus. "No i'm not it's just the queen can't go anywhere right" Gallus asked.
"If Cozy Glow was there she would say that the queen can go anywhere" Smolder said.
Suddenly Sliverstream dashed in "Hey Guys!!" and the 3 of her friends groaned.
"we don't want to hear another obvious fact about equestria you annoying hippogriff" Gallus replied.
"Aw come on" silverstream replied "you know me i haven't been out in the equestria world ever since the storm king is here but now he's defeated and now i need to see facts about equestria which is the library".
"We know that and we do not wanna hear it" Smolder replied.
"TOO LATE!!" Silverstream said while her friends groaned once again.
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after 10 minutes of silverstream being annoying as usual about equestria Ocellus and Yona arrived with the old box form the mane 6 and Gallus reliefed saying "FINALLY!!".
"What's inside there" Silverstream asked.
"Oh well this is our professor's old stuff" Ocellus answered.
"And our professor's are okay with it" Sandbar replied.
"Actually i asked spike and he asked headmare and she's okay with it" Ocellus said. "
"I wanna see what's inside" Silverstream can't wait to open but her friends tried to tell her not to excite too much when they started to open it but silverstream jumped in anyway and the box was fulled with old stuff from their adventure's.
"Woah look at all this stuff!!" Silverstream said and got the stuff one by one.
"WAIT" Ocellus stopped Silverstream. "You can't just get out the stuff that we didn't see yet".
"But there all awesome and i've never seen all of these before" Silverstream replied.
Ocellus just had the idea "We will just pick out of the stuff one by one each turn".
Everyone agreed but Silverstream just sigh "Fiiiiinnnnneeee".
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Gallus goes first and when something got out he saw a plushie that looks like one of the professor named Pinkie's pet Gummy. "Why would that be in the box" Gallus asked.
"i don't know but it looks so cuuutttteee" Silverstream squeaked when she gets the plushie out on Gallus's hands
"HEY". Before Gallus could speak Silverstream got the plushie and hugged it in her chest. Gallus had nothing to say but sighed "nevermind".
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Yona saw something on the box and it has a 2nd place trophy from the Wonderbolts. "What is this?" Yona asked.
and then Ocellus knows what this is. "its a Trophy of the Wonderbolts" Ocellus has been a fan of the Wonderbolts ever since she's at Rainbow Dash's classroom and Rainbow Dash told the students about the Wonderbolts and about being awesome (she is still a fan of the Wonderbolts when The Washouts came and plus The Washouts got cancelled).
"Can it be at least be Golden" Gallus said.
"Well there's a Golden one which is 1st place and i guess they lost" Ocellus wondered. "i guess that's why its in a box.
("Why did they go on second place" Ocellus thought).
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Ocellus got something out on the box and its a Fire Ruby Necklace. "Its some kind of crystal necklace" Ocellus said thinking what this is.
"Wait a second" Smolder pointed it out "did Rarity mention of that Fire Ruby necklace where Spike gave Rarity as a gift". everyone looked at it and everyone agreed.
"Now that explains why Rarity told Spike to not open the box" Gallus replied.
"Should we tell spike" Silverstream asked.
"i think Spike would just kill himself" Smolder said it in a joke way.
"Yeah maybe a great idea not to tell spike" Silverstream said and everyone nodded.
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Sandbar got something out of the box and its an old dirty pony toy. "WHAT THE HECK IS THIS!?!?" Sandbar said horrified by how ugly and scary looking that is. everyone looked at it being horrified.
"It's a toy" said Yona "An Ugly toy".
"THAT TOY SHOULD BE BURNED ON FIRE!!!!" Silverstream said while she uses Smolder as a defender.
"Hey am not burning this thing it would be best that we should throw it on the trash" Smolder said and everyone nodded while Ocellus used her horn to teleport that horrifying toy on the trash.
"Well yona found it disturbing" Yona said.
"Yeah lets just forget what happended and its Silverstreams turn now" Sandbar said and everyone nodded once again.
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Silverstream got something out of the box and she saw a Nightmare night costume which looks like a bat. "oooooohhhhh a Costume" Silverstream looked at it what it looks like and she found out that its a bat costume. "AAH A BAT COSTUME!!!" Silverstream gasped when she holds it in to Gallus.
"Relax its just a costume" Gallus said trying to get silverstream of from his body.
"And its a pretty good costume as a bat" Sandbar said "one time at Nightmare Night i dressed as a spider and it gone pretty well everypony is afraid of me and i have the best costume ever".
"But who the heck throw this best costume from nightmare night" Ocellus asked.
"Maybe its for the best not to talk about it" Smolder said.
everyone said "Yeah".
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Its Smolder's turn now and then when something got out of the box he saw something very shiny and looks like a ring and when he saw it and it looks very familiar from Rainbow Dash's classroom. "Huh this looks familiar" Smolder showed the others.
"Huh your right" Gallus replied.
"Wait a second is this what Rainbow Dash is talking about the time where she helped A.K Yearling from the lost ring" Ocellus asked suprised.
"That would be sooooooo cool!!!" Silverstream said.
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When they looked at the ring to see what this is they wondered that this is the Lost ring from the Daring Do Book or its just a ring from a shop.
"I can't stop think about what this thing is" Gallus said.
"We all do!!" Sandbar replied.
Then Ocellus got an idea "How about i show this to Professor Rainbow Dash and she would look at it if its really the Daring Do's Lost ring" Everycreature nodded and Ocellus uses her horn to get it and rushes to go to Professor Dash's.
"I wonder what Professor egghead is gonna say" Gallus said
"We don't know" Silverstream said "But i hope she says its the lost ring"
And Everyone waited for 10 minutes later and Ocellus come back
(To Be Continued)
Ocellus is back with her friends from the library because the rest of the Young 6 are searching inside their professor's old box from the closet that Ocellus and Yona found and but when The Young 6 are trying to see what stuff their professor's when Smolder encountered a Golden Ring that looks like the book from Daring Do and Ocellus went to Professor Dash and came back.
"Ok so i went to Professor Dash and show this ring and i think she said its the ring from the Daring do and the Lost Golden ring" Ocellus said.
Ocellus and her friends are amazed to see a Golden Ring in her hoofs because when they're at Rainbow Dash's Classroom Rainbow Dash talks about The Daring Do and how she's friends with them and Help A.K Yearling getting The Golden Ring because any legend says when you hand of the evil ponies it will rule it all and when you save the Golden Ring they became the "legend of the ponies" and now the Young 6 are a fan of A.K Yearling.
Smolder then thinks that its just a replica from a souvenir shop so he interfered and said "Oh come on its just some sort of replica that i think Professor Dash just got it from the souvenir shop or a Daring Do Convention".
"Actually she said that it's not an actual replica this is the Golden Ring from A.K Yearling" Ocellus once again showed the the ring to her friends.
"Wait Wait Wait!!" Sandbar said trying to think "Are you saying that this ring is actually from Daring Do!!.
"Oh come on it's not like it's a magic ring" Gallus replied. "Is it?".
"Did you even see the art at the start of the book she is with Professor Dash and did you read the whole story" Ocellus replied trying to explain the story of the lost Golden Ring. "when they went to the temple they got the ring but when Ahuizotl try to get the ring and he succeeded and when he tried to take over equestria Daring Do and Rainbow Dash worked together and the only thing to Destroy the curse is too snatch the ring and the only way to defeat Ahuizotl and now Professor Dash got this ring as a gift".
"Everycreature" Ocellus once again show the ring again but in a dramatic entrance but raising high of the ring "This is The Actual Golden Ring".
Everycreature are amazed once again and Smolder and Gallus believed it and The Young 6 started to say the legend.
"One ring to rule them all" Ocellus said.
then Smolder "One ring to find them".
Then Gallus "One ring to bring them all".
Then Sandbar "and in the darkness by them".
then Yona "but legend says that if you got it".
And Silverstream "You will be the legend of all".
They stared at the Golden Ring of how amazing the ring this is. but after 5 seconds Smolder suddenly snatch out of Ocellus's Hoof and said "MINE!!"
"Hey we got that ring together" Ocellus said while she snatched the ring from Smolder.
"Yes but i found it in the box first and im already the legend when i first saw the actual ring" Smolder once again snatch the ring from Ocellus.
"Look just because you saw the ring first doesn't mean you can have it" And of course Ocellus snatch the ring from Smolder "And beside i found the old box and it's inside so im the legend".
"Okay you guys stop snatching each other for a second" Sandbar said while its his turn to snatch the ring from Ocellus. "How much is this Actual ring".
"According to the Golden ring i think it must be 10,000 bits or more" Ocellus answered.
"Great so maybe dudes that this is great for the ring to buy what i want , like Our Professor's Picture from the castle".
"Why would you want to sell it when you'd be the legend of ponies" Gallus asked.
"Well selling for money is better than bragging about being a legend" Sandbar answered.
Then Silverstream snatch the ring from Sandbar "Were not selling it! , were keeping it and when i keep this ring i'll clean it and polish it and love it forever and keep this in my room and sleep it like a pillow and it will always be with me forever!!".
"Do you even know how creepy that is!!" Ocellus pointed it out".
"Really?" Silverstream said "This ring really means to me already and this ring is my love of my life!".
"Don't be creepy you Hypogriff maniac" Gallus said while he snatched the ring from Silverstream "When i get this home from the world of griffon's i'll show Grandpa Gruff that i'm the legend in all of griffons".
Yona then snatched the ring from Gallus "No Yona not accepting it when i get this to my room Yona will keep it on my hoof and guard it for the rest of my life and show this to my yak friends".
"No were not doing that" Ocellus then snatched the ring from yona "Look i like this ring but i found it first and i keeping this until i show this to King Thorax and he'll be impressed".
"That's a stupid idea" Gallus said.
"No it wasn't. i'm going to be a legend" Ocellus replied while she puts down the ring from the table.
"Ok we all want to do something of the ring but all your idea's are stupid and i want a picture of the 6 professor's" Sandbar said.
"Sandbar your not selling the ri-". Ocellus paused because the ring she put down disappeared. "Where's the ring".
"You mean my ring?" Smolder said while the ring magically got it from his claw. "it was just sitting on the table anycreature might steal it , proof... i did it".
"Look Sandbar were not selling the ring and getting our professor's picture is a stupid thing to buy" Ocellus pointed it out to Sandbar while she snatched the ring from Smolder again.
"Look i wanted it and keep it to my room" Sandbar replied.
"You and Silverstream are CREEPY!!" Smolder said.
Then Gallus snatched Ocellus behind her and said "Yeah you guys are creepy creatures" and then he puts the ring on his claw.
"all I want is the ring" Silverstream said "i don't understand while you guys argue i never get in my way!".
Then Gallus turned into to Silverstream with a shocked expression. "YOU ALWAYS GET IN YOUR WAY!!!".
"Really" Silverstream said "give me an example why i always get in your way".
"LIKE THE PART WHERE YOU KEEP GIVING US OBVIOUS FACTS ABOUT EQUESTRIA WHILE WE DO SOMETHING IMPORTANT OR PLAYING CHESS!!" Gallus answered with an angry expression.
It's true that they always get in their way while they do something important they've been friends for months and sometimes they get annoyed by Silverstream for months and after Cozy Glow's defeat it's even worse when she always can't help herself when they saved Equestria she starts talking to ponies from the school of friendship and also her friends.
"Okay i'll stipulate to that if you give me the ring!!" Silverstream replied.
"There is no way im giving you the ri-". Suddenly the ring disappeared again in Gallus's claws.
"Looking for something?" Smolder once again magically got it from his claw. "Next time look at your surroundings when somecreature is trying to secretly snatch it".
But suddenly trouble is starting to come in when Gallus said "GIVE ME THE RING!" He tried to snatch the ring from Smolder's claw but Smolder won't let him.
"NEVER!" Smolder said.
"NO ITS MINE!!" Ocellus then tried to get the ring but Smolder and Gallus got their claws to the ring together and Ocellus got her hoof on the ring and didn't let go.
"NO THE RING IS MINE!!" Silverstream then tried to get but then the same thing happened.
"IT'S FOR ME!!" Sandbar said while the hoof got it from the ring but he didn't let go.
"YONA WANT IT!!!" Yona then did the same thing.
Now they realized they got the ring together and now it's stuck in the middle and the Young 6 are now in a circle.
"LET GO" Smolder said.
"NO YOU LET GO" Gallus replied.
"NO ALL OF YOU LET GO I'M SELLING THIS IF THIS IS THE LAST THING I DO!!" Sandbar yelled.
"No this ring WILL BE MINE!!" Silverstream replied.
"YONA WON'T ACCEPT IT THE RING WOULD NOT CHOOSE A CREEPY HYPOGRIFF LIKE YOU" Yona said something a bit hurtful to Silverstream.
"You take that back!!!" Silverstream said.
"Yona will not give it back!!".
"THIS IS GETTING RIDICULOUS!!" Ocellus said she palms her other hoof in her face.
"Then let go" Smolder said.
"IM NOT LETTING GO ALL OF YOU LET GO!!!" Ocellus replied.
Then Ocellus got an idea "ok i have a competition whoever lets go of the ring is out and the last creature doesn't let go of the ring will keep it forever".
"I Accept the challenge" Smolder agreed to the challenge and every creature nodded.
"should we do this at the dome first" Ocellus asked.
"Okay , but first... let go of the ring" Gallus said while he smirked quietly.
"Okay it starts now!" Ocellus then started the countdown "GO".
The Young 6 are all standing up and they walk slowly to get out of the library and they have to walk side to side because the ring is in the middle and the young 6 are on a circle.
"Wait" Silverstream said while her friends stop "My book!"
"Then let go of the ring and get it" Smolder said.
Silverstream is not pleased "i'm not letting go of this ring". While her friends continued and walk slowly out of the library.
"Something tells me that it's not going to end well" Sandbar said.
"Then let go" Gallus said.
"NO im never letting this go".
and Sandbar is right. it's not going to end well.
(To Be Continued)
Author's Note
sorry about the grammar again because i still have a hard time to find a proofreader and now i have 4 dislikes of my first chapter so sorry that i have bad grammars again.