Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
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Option 1 (Stay in the room - Flurry is more passive) - Technically won when the vote count hit 200 but then…
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My only solution: ...is a mix of the two! Hope you all enjoy.
Shining Armor fixed the bandoliers on his ceremonial uniform, the white crisscrossing straps boldly contrasting against the crimson red of his blazer as he checked himself one last time in the mirror before he headed down to the party.
“Are you sure that you want to go?” Cadence asked from behind him, helping set a part of his mane in place. “You know how Flurry can get with you around, I’m sure if you just waited up here she would be…”
“No… no I’m not sure.” he sighed, puffing his chest up in the mirror. “Hay, even a couple of hours ago I was convinced that I was going to stay in this room until the whole party was over… but I’ve changed my mind.”
“Oh really?” She looked at him with a smirk.
“Yeah… but Flurry would enjoy my being there - and don’t underestimate her, honey. She’s gotten a lot more control over her powers the last few weeks.” Shining winked at her.
“Hah! Listen to you!” she giggled, embracing him. “You’ve gotten to know Flurry so well over such a short period of time - now you’re teaching me things about our daughter.”
Shining blushed slightly. “Stop teasing me!”
“I’m not!” Cadence prodded him with a hoof. “I’m being serious - and I’m not the only mare around the castle that has noticed either…”
“Oh? Did some of the maids notice too? Or some of the female guardsmares?”
“...and then you remind me that you can be a goddamn moron sometimes…” Cadence groaned, smacking her face with her hoof.
“What?”
“Nothing, nothing…” she sighed. “Let’s just head down to the party - we should be there before Flurry makes her entrance…”
As was the case with most of the royal fetes, the atmosphere was a quiet and dignified affair. As Cadence and Shining descended the stairs, a servant called out with a loud thump of his staff: “The Crystal Princess and her consort! Mi Amore Cadenza and Shining Armor!”
Shining chuckled and whispered into Cadence’s ear, “...best consort ever, am I right?”
Cadence rolled her eyes. “You make that joke every time… I don’t think you even know what consort means, Shiny.”
Despite their antics, the crowd all turned to look at them as they descended the stairs into the grand ballroom. Shining instantly noticed the group of younger ponies off to the left side of the room, nearer to the refreshments… Flurry’s invited classmates.
Most of them had attended Shining’s… lecture… a few weeks prior.
He couldn’t help but blush as several of the fillies giggled and tittered amongst themselves as he walked down the steps. He could only imagine what they were saying, but his keen eyes discerned at least one or two of them mouthing the word cock.
He waved and smiled at the group, who waved and smiled back, before his hoof was brought down by his wife.
“Decorum please, dear.”
“Oh give me a break, this is a family party.” Shining groaned. “There are barely any dignitaries visiting, anyway.”
“Fine - but behave, please.” Cadence sighed as they reached the bottom of the stairs and began to mingle. “I know how you can get when you drink too much punch…”
Shining stuck his tongue out at his wife with a wink, then made his way over to some of the guests. After making his way through some old acquaintances and friends of the Empire, he saw his family congregated near one corner of the grand ballroom.
“Shining! Over here!” Twilight Velvet waved him over. Standing in a group were his father, mother, and ‘not-so-little’ sister.
“Hi, mom!” Shining squeezed her with a hug. “Dad.” He gave his father a nod.
“Hey, son, good to see you here!” Night Light chuckled and slapped him on the back. “Twilight here was saying that you might decide to spend the evening up in your own room - I’m glad you didn’t do that!”
Twilight harumphed, shooting a glare at her father. “Well, we’ll see if that was the right call, Dad. You’d think Shining would learn to take a mare’s advice when it came to things regarding mares.”
“Oh, please, it’s not like you have to be a mare to understand such things.” Night Light chuckled giving a little hip check to his wife. “I managed to bang the cutest mare in town.”
“D-dad!” Both siblings protested vocally.
Velvet giggled slightly, playfully swatting her husband. “Oh, dear, stop! But you needed my advice when it came to getting the cutest filly in town.” She raised an eyebrow and flashed her eyes at her husband, motioning toward Twilight.
“Uh… uhm…” Night Light stammered, sweat forming on his forehead.
“That’s right, daddy.” Twilight growled throatily. “Maybe we should share some stories of my sixteenth birthday?” She flicked her tail over to swat her father.
Shining noticed that his sister missed her target with her swat: generally ponies tried to aim for the recipient’s backside… but she had actually delivered her swat to their father’s under-belly, smacking into what would have been his groin.
“Hahaha…” Night Light laughed nervously before taking a deep swig of his cup. “I, uh… I don’t know what you mean.”
Velvet sidled up to the other side of Night Light, trapping him between his daughter and herself. “Oh really?” She blew into his ear. “I seem to remember somepony re-enacting the event in exquisite detail last night on the train in our sleeper car from Ponyville…”
Twilight’s eyes flashed wide at this, then narrowed with intent. “Oh really? You know, Dad…” Both Twilight and Velvet’s tails were flicking under Night Light’s belly, they both really had terrible aim - their swats seemed to make Night Light incredibly flustered!
Twilight growled playfully into his other ear, “...it has been a while since you ‘celebrated my birthday’ with me.”
“No, it hasn’t,” Shining interjected. “Your birthday was just two months ago, we all got together at that hay-burger place you like so much.”
All three of the ponies stopped and stared at him with a deadpan expression.
“Shining Armor…” Velvet began, shaking her head with what seemed like disappointment.
“...you really are…” Night Light groaned, still blushingly sandwiched between his daughter and wife.
“...a goddamn moron.” Twilight finished with a chuckle.
“H-hey!” Shining stomped a hoof, “what are you guys all ganging up on m-”
A loud thump of staff bottom on marble cut him off.
“THE GUEST OF HONOR - THE PRINCESS FLURRY HEART!”
All eyes were drawn to the lovely vision of the sixteen-year-old filly descending the stairs.
Shining’s breath was taken away.
Flurry hadn’t changed her manestyle or make-up… and though the blue-pink slip of a dress she wore was fantastic… there was something else about her.
She was growing up so fast.
Her smile as she spotted her friends and came to the landing at the bottom of the stairs lit up the entire ballroom.
“Hello everypony! I’ve never been much for, uh… speeches… but I just wanted to say thank you! Thank you for coming, thank you for being my friends, my family! Your presence is the greatest gift I could have ever asked for…”
A chorus of “d’awws” and polite applause filled the room.
“Now, with all due respect to the fantastic chamber music quartet who have been doing a wonderful job so far…” She motioned over to the stage at the far end of the hall where a few musician ponies sat, dutifully playing. “Let’s get this PARTY started!”
A booming club beat throbbed out of the speakers in the ceiling, all directed by a blue-haired unicorn wearing large purple sunglasses behind a DJ’s sound-mixer table that had hitherto gone unnoticed in one corner.
As the electric rhythms poured through the hall, most of the regal and stuffy ponies sat for a moment, stunned, unsure what to do next.
Then a certain pink pony jumped up in the air with a hearty cheer: “Come on everypony, LET’S PARTY!”
Half a moment later, everyone, from baron to serving-mare, was dancing and laughing to the beat.
It was two hours later, while Shining was bouncing up and down to the beat with Cadence, camped out in a slightly quieter area near the corner of the dance floor that the two finally ran into each other.
Emerging from a group of dancing revelers, Flurry Heart appeared with a joyful laugh on her lips and a light sheen of sweat from the night’s revelry. She looked so gorgeous in her dress and in such a happy state - Shining could feel the blush running to his cheeks instantly as she emerged in front of him.
Her eyes sparkled and lit up, recognition blossoming like a rose opening to the sun.
“D-dad? You came!?” Flurry remarked, dumbfounded.
Shining struggled for words, unsure how he could get himself out of this one. “Uh… y-yeah… I, uh… Sorry, b-”
“Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankou!” Flurry stepped in close, pressing her sweaty forehead right under his chin and nuzzling him affectionately. “I was so worried before, but now I’m so glad that you did.” Flurry looked up at him with a slight smile.
“I… uh… I wouldn’t have missed it for the world.” Shining grinned. “You look… stunning, Flurry.”
Flurry blushed, looking down at herself. “M-mom helped me to pick it out.”
Cadence grinned. “Oh no you don’t, missy; the only pony who gets credit for this is you. Take your father’s compliment. Celestia knows how hard it is to drag one out of him.”
“Hey!” Shining protested, looking at with a stomp. “I said that your hair looked nice tonight!”
“Yes, but it’s the same hairstyle that I’ve always worn, Shiny.”
“Oh… No way, really?”
Flurry, who had been staring at her hooves this time while blushing, looked up through her bangs at her father. “D-dad… you really think I look pretty?”
Shining nodded vigorously down at his little filly. “Flurry, you look… beautiful.”
Flurry bit her lip, her cheeks rosy with desire. Her eyes flashed over to her mother. “Mom… can I…?”
Shining saw his wife shoot their daughter a knowing look before nodding. “Of course, sweetie, it’s your birthday, and you’ve been very patient.”
Shining watched Flurry’s eyes sparkle and grow wider, like a child on Hearthswarming Eve that had just seen the present-laden tree.
“Wait… can she what?” Shining asked Cadence, before suddenly being jerked by his bandolier with Flurry’s magic toward the dance floor.
“C’ mon dad,” Flurry licked her lips as she jerked him toward the throng of dancing ponies, “I wanna dance!”
Cadence waved with a predatory grin at Shining as he was dragged away. “Have fun you two! Remember to be gentle Shiny - it’s her first time~!”
‘Her first time dancing? I’m sure that I’ve seen her dan-’ Shining’s thoughts were cut off as Flurry whirled around on him, stepping right up to him so they were chest to chest. Her eyes were burning with fiery excitement. Just as she grabbed his hoof the music paused and switched to a new track altogether.
The song was an intense, upbeat anthem.
Shining tried to bounce along, but was quickly aware that he couldn’t hold a candle to his daughter, who dipped and dived, popped and shot, spun and jumped with perfect timing and enthusiastic energy… not that it mattered how good he was, his rule was always simply not to be the worst on the dance floor… something that he clearly was not.
Twilight Sparkle had already knocked several ponies down with her rather… unique style.
Shining’s attention was quickly drawn back to his daughter as she spun away from him, sticking her plot up in the air and wagging it left and right in time with the bumping club beat. He couldn’t see anything - the fabric of her dress got in the way of that… but the sight was simply too exciting and erotic not to imagine that his little filly’s butt was on display right in front of him.
A crowd gathered around the pair, enthusiastically cheering the two on - mostly, Shining suspected, because of his daughter’s fantastic performance.
With her gyrating, tight-little butt still up in the air, Flurry began to waggle her way backward to Shining, until she was pressing her fabric-covered rear against his chest, grinding against him in a way that could only be described as erotic.
The crowd hooted and hollered.
Shining looked down at Flurry’s pressing bottom. With a wry and naughty grin, the filly pressed her rear right up into his face, burying his nose in her tail hairs, all the way down to her wagging little dock. Shining’s blush grew twice as bright instantly as he took in a whiff of his daughter’s tail. Though the fabric of her dress might protect her body from his gaze, it could only partially prevent his nose from smelling her arousal… especially through the purpose cut slit meant for her dock… which seemed to also be tantalizingly larger and lower than it ought to be.
She must not be wearing any undergarments!
Just as quickly as he caught that snuffle of her musk, the filly brought the side of her tail with a light *thwap* against the side of his head, making an overly playful shocked gesture at the crowd before swirling away.
The crowd loved it. All around him the ponies cheered - especially Flurry’s classmates, with many a “You go, filly!” and “Get’im girl!” jeered at them.
Flurry loved it.
Whirling on him with a predatory smile, she began shuffle-walking toward him, dancing up to his side as he nervously bobbed to the beat. Then suddenly the rhythm stopped a pause just before one of the song’s signature bass drops.
The whole crowd went silent.
Then the beat resumed with twice as much intensity.
Flurry slipped under him, lithe as a cat, pressing her back up against the underside of his belly and scooching backward, snuggling her rump up against the inside of his hips… then beginning to tilt her hips up and down wildly - twerking better than even the professional dancing mares on Sapphire Shores’s musical tours ever could.
The crowd erupted with excitement, the little princess filly doing a sexy breakdown that was explicit enough to be more appropriate in an X-rated movie.
Shining groaned, stumbling, trying his best to maintain the pathetically inadequate bobbing of his hooves to the beat… as his daughter practically simulated vigorous pony-style sex with him. Her silk-covered plot ground up against his sheath… not just bouncing against him but rubbing, dragging, pressing into him. There could be no doubt what Flurry’s aim was.
And she was succeeding.
His black appendage began to spill from himself, throbbing painfully into the pink-blue silk of his daughter’s dress as he became more and more erect.
“Y-yeah! I can feel it!” Flurry shouted out, an innocuous statement to all but him and her.
The tip of his half-erect penis bounced off the back of her silk covered butt, right in the area that would have resulted in penetration, had her dress not been in the way. He winced as his stiffening cockhead slid downward, between her legs, so that it was pointing toward the ground.
“Oops!” Flurry grinned, then began to walk backward.
Shining groaned, stumbling back as his little girl’s plot pushed against his cock… until he found himself bumping against a chair and falling back into a seated position - with his daughter sitting right on his lap.
The whole crowd erupted with a cheer. Flurry looked over his shoulder at him with a wild, toothy smile; she’d planned this little development!
With the beat still pumping out, his little Flurry Heart began to ‘dance’ on top of him. Her rear hooves were still on the ground, and her forehooves were balanced on his knees, as she bounced her tight plot up and down, left and right, twerking and grinding.
This wasn’t just a dance.
It was a lap dance.
Shining gripped the edges of his chair intensely moaning out and throwing his head back. His cock was bouncing fuller and fuller now. He wasn’t sure why he hadn’t already heard the shocked gasps of the crowd at being fully exposed. He looked down…
And only saw Flurry’s sweaty lower back.
The filly was sitting on top of his stallionhood. Which mean that his erect shaft was concealed in her dress folds from everyone’s vision. Out of the corner of his eye, he could see that Flurry was even holding up the hem away in front of her, lest the obvious log-sized tent in front of her give it away.
Shining let out a sigh of relief before he felt another grinding impact against the base of his stallionhood. Only this time… it was wet.
‘Wait. If she’s holding her dress up and out… and she’s not wearing panties… that means that what’s currently grinding against me is…’
The wet, sticky heat pressed against his lower abdomen again, grinding and leaving a slick trail in his fur as it pressed against his now fully rigid cock-base.
‘ThaT’s FluRry’S fiLlyhOod oN mY dIcK!’
His mind swirled with overwhelming emotion as the filly continued to bounce and grind on him, pressing her pussy against his lower body, sometimes rising up his shaft, trailing a wet kiss from her cunt against his shaft before sliding agonizingly down his shaft.
Flurry was biting her lip extra hard now, and her eyes were shut tightly. She was really having a good time now.
Shining clenched his eyes shut as well, his hooves digging into the wood of the chair, audibly creaking the material as he resisted the raw pleasure he was feeling - every once in a while Flurry would bounce forward, sending the tip of his rigid cockhead bouncing off the bottom of his daughter’s ribcage and sending a shuddering pleasurable tremor through the both of them.
“D-dad… s-stop with the hover hands… j-just grab m-my ass!” Flurry whispered through clenched teeth.
Shining obliged.
He pressed down on his Filly’s hips, mashing her wetness against his steel erection, grinding her erect clitty against his obsidian horseflesh.
“D-dad!” Flurry groaned out, her words only reaching his ears through the thumping, hypnotic beat.
Shining quickly looked around them, worried that her sexually flushed face might betray what was really happening under her dress.
All around them, the ponies that had been watching and cheering had devolved into sexually charged dances of their own. Any couples that had been dancing before were now passionately making out on the floor, groping with hooves and magic. One pair had even started to simply outright buck - a duke outright pounding into his date… who Shining noticed was not the duchess.
He even spied Twilight Sparkle and Night Light embracing, walking toward one of the side rooms, the pink-colored glow of Twilight’s horn matched by a glow that was between Night Light’s legs doing… something.
His mother, Twilight Velvet, was not far behind the duo.
“D-daddy!” Flurry’s whisper reached his ears, as she began to lose her rhythm, spasming in little jerks against the hot, thick, base of Shining’s fat black shaft. Then he felt a hot, winking, wetness…
It started on the bottom of his cock, then over his balls, spilling over the inside of his legs, then over the edge of the chair and down to his hooves.
Flurry had just climaxed… on him?
“Oh, d-daddy…” Flurry hunched forward, shuddering.
Shining reached up to pat her back, comfortingly, but before he could the filly’s hooves took hold of his erection through the fabric of her dress… and began to pump.
Shining could only moan out again, clenching down on the girl’s rump as she brought him even closer to the edge that he had already been trotting upon. The feel of sopping-wet silk against his glans, pumped and squeezed by the excited and unskilled hooves of his daughter, his little-filly had him shuddering and moaning.
“G-give it to me… d-dad…!” Flurry groaned over her shoulder at him. Her horn snapped alight, and Shining could feel a comforting warmth envelop the bottom of his shaft and his balls, pulsing more than pumping, and not enough to hurt or arouse… just the gentle tentativeness of an amateur.
But it was more than enough.
“Un-ungh….!” Shining leaned against his daughter’s back, his hips awkwardly trying to thrust, even though they were pinned between the chair and Flurry’s plot. Underneath the fabric of the dress, he felt his flare fatten and expand, jerking and throbbing as pulses of hot virility raced up his fat pipe.
Then he exploded.
Great, messy gouts of steaming cum shot from him, messily splattering against the inside of his daughter’s birthday dress with rope after rope of thick batter.
“Y-yes! Yes… daddy!” Flurry enthusiastically encouraged him, her hoof still pumping, coaxing his white hot seed from him.
Shining could only hold on, overwhelmed by the emotions, the tension leaving him, his own debauched wetness covering him, splattering against the dress, his daughter’s belly, his own thighs.
Rope after rope. Throb after throb.
Until he lost count.
Until it finally trickled out of him.
Until he collapsed into a puddle against the back of his chair. Panting.
“W-woah…” Flurry breathed, shocked. “W-wow…”
“Unghh….” Shining wanted to say so much more… so much more. But this was all he could manage.
“D-daddy… uh… I think we’ve both made a bit of a mess…” Flurry giggled, lifting a sticky hoof from her soaked dress. “I think maybe… we should go to my room to change?” Flurry looked around.
Shining tried to look at what she was looking at, but in his state could only sense dim shapes and groans, thrusting and panting ponies all around them.
“I… uh… don’t think anypony will miss us…” Flurry giggled, charging her horn.
*POP*
And just like that. They were alone. In Flurry’s room.
On her bed.
Shining groaned and rolled, accidentally squishing his soaking stallionhood against his daughter’s body as he did so, a sticky mess of a dogpile as he tried to keep his weight off of his little giggling girl.
“Dad! W-wait! Just… hang on!” Flurry protested, making him pause. With careful use of her hooves, she began to peel off her soaked dress, rolling inch after inch of the slick, now-transparent fabric off both of their bodies, revealing her matted chest hair fur and his slimy, half-erect penis.
“And… there.” She slid the last of her dress off, slinging the bundle behind her shoulder, where it landed in a wet pile with an audible *PLAP*. Flurry turned to look at the wet splat on the ground and covered her mouth before she laughed.
“I guess getting a little wet, runs in the family huh?” She grinned, sitting up - then looked down at Shining’s stallionhood. Her once predatory glance faltered a little bit - the cocksure attitude that she’d sported just a moment before dissolving. Suddenly she was a little girl again. “W-wow… this… this is really happening, isn’t it?”
Shining felt his emotions rush back to him at the sight of his scared little girl, who was swallowing nervously while eyeing his semi-tumescent erection, ears splayed back in trepidation.
“W-what? No… no Flurry, it doesn’t have to happen if you don’t want it to - in fact… it really shouldn’t happen!” Shining began to pick himself up. This was when he had to be strong - to do the right thing… to resist these animalistic urges and be the father that he knew he could be.
“W-wait! Dad!” Flurry’s hoof reached out to snag one of his, keeping him from standing up and leaving his bed. “I… do want this. I want this so badly… you have no idea how bad I want this.” Flurry couldn’t meet his eyes.
“I… I don’t think you do Flurry.” Shining sighed sitting back down and wrapping a hoof around his filly. “I think this is just… your powers… your hormones… and I don’t want you to make a big mistake about something so special - I love you, Flurry… but there’s going to be somepony, some colt who will make you so happy.”
“Dad.” Flurry sighed, gripping his hoof even tighter. “I know all this stuff - I know what my power is trying to tell me to do - I know what my body is trying to tell me to do - what my head is saying… what society is saying… but most importantly, what my heart is saying…”
“Flurry, sweetie… I… I worry that you don’t r-”
“Shush dad, just… give me a minute OK?” Flurry stared at him fiercely. “I do understand. I know it’s crazy, that it’s taboo… but I don’t care. I’ve known how I felt about you since… forever... “
“Flurry, that kind of love and the love for your father can be-”
“I said shush.” Flurry extended her wing, covering his mouth. “I know that too dad. Don’t you think that one of the first things I did was to consult the foremost expert on love in the history of Equestria? It was tough - but I spilled the beans to mom… and she helped me sort through things.” Flurry looked up at him with a meek smile, “...and it turns out that I really do love you, Dad… completely.”
Shining swallowed, his brows knitting together.
“I… I don’t understand. All those years of you being grumpy and moody, of ignoring me and keeping me at a distance.”
Flurry chuckled a bit, then looked at him with an accusatory glance. “Are you implying that I was anything but the picture of pleasant happiness?”
“Uh… n-no not… not at all!” Shining stammered, only to be cut off by Flurry again.
“That's OK dad… I was a bit of a… well… a brat.” She sighed. “But you have no idea how hard it is to control those emotions swirling around inside you - to be so close to the person you love and not be able to do anything. To have the person you love leave you for work week after week, only being with you for a short period of time, time and again.”
“S-sorry…”
“Every time you hugged me I wanted to jump you, dad.” Flurry sniffled. “Every time you said you loved me, I wanted to confess to you… it was killing me. I guess all I could do was act out - to keep you away so that you wouldn’t drive me crazy by being close to me.”
“But why wouldn’t you tell me, sweetie? If you were hurting so bad…?”
“Mom made me promise.” Flurry grinned, clearing her nose with another sniffle. “She wanted to be sure. She told me if I could wait until my sixteenth birthday, and if I still felt the same way - it would be certain…” Flurry grinned a little bit, “I guess it would also be legal…”
“So, that’s why she changed the age of consent laws three years ago to sixteen!” Shining confirmed by pounding a hoof into the other with realization.
“I was so pissed when she did that! I had only a couple of days to go until I turned thirteen, and she moved the goal posts out a whole ‘nother three years! Totally unfair!” Flurry rolled her eyes and flopped backward on to the bed.
“Well… thirteen is pretty young.”
“Not if you’re an Alicorn princess who specializes in lust.” FLurry groaned from the bed, waving her arms up and down on her sheets.
“So you love-loved me… even three years ago?” Shining asked.
“Longer than that, Dad… since… forever.” Flurry softly spoke up at her ceiling.
“But… why?”
Flurry pushed herself up onto her elbows to look at him. “Who knows? Mom thought at first it might be because of how close I was with her when I was in the womb - a magical power like an alicorn’s, wrapped all around a tiny, still-forming soul? Maybe there was bleed over and I got some of her type of love in my own heart. Celestia knows she loves you dearly.”
The filly sighed then went on.
“...but it’s not I'm the only filly who wants to make love to her father… from what I can tell, half the mares walking around out there have a daddy complex - and a good number of them want it as bad as aunt Twilight does.”
“H-huh?”
“...but…” Flurry cut Shining off before he could even begin, “I think it’s because you’re… you. You’re… amazing dad. You care about me so much. And all of your family. And your friends. And the whole kingdom. You’ve always been there for me - your love has always been like… a warm hug - there to embrace me no matter how I feel.” She was drawing circles in her bedsheets with her hoof now, an embarrassed blush plastered across her face.
“…but the why doesn’t even matter, now. All that matters is here and now.” She looked up at him, hopefully. “And I hope… I pray that you’ll say… you love me too - that way.”
Shining’s mouth dropped open, his little girl had just bared her heart to him. Animalistic? Wrong? Needing to be strong?
What the hell was he thinking?
He did love her. She was beautiful, smart, cute, affectionate… she was everything. If the only thing stopping him was the fact that she was his daughter… was that really the right thing to do?
“I-I…” he opened his mouth but his tongue felt heavy in his jaw, slow to move… what had Cadence always told him? When you’re unsure of what to do, you can always trust your heart…
“I… love you too. Completely.”
Flurry brought her hooves to her mouth, covering it to hide her smile as small tears of joy formed at the edges of her eyes. “D-dad…”
“...b-but!” Shining interjected, holding up a hoof, “I… I’m ashamed to admit this… but… I... I’m having trouble getting over the… wrongness of it… I want to do this for you Flurry, but…”
Flurry wilted a little bit.
“... I was hoping that you could maybe help me a bit, with your power?” Shining sighed.
Flurry let out a little squee of happiness behind her hooves. “O-of course! No problem! I was hoping you might ask that.”
“I hate that I have to… I wish I could make love to you without needing any magic… but I guess I’m too much of a coward.”
“Shush dad, taboos can be a big mental blocker… that’s why I have this power, anyway!” Flurry began to charge up her horn, though it seemed to be more of a rosy red than her usual pink energy.
Shining winced away from the glow. “Not too much, just enough so I can get over it… I want to be with you Flurry - not be some animal with you.”
Flurry simply smiled in response, letting the red aura expand and fill the room before it slowly dissipated away.
Shining blinked.
“Th-that was it?”
Flurry nodded.
He didn’t… feel any different. Maybe that lingering uncertainty in his gut really, was gone. He looked down at himself with a half-grin then up at his daughter.
“So was this your plan all along?”
“It… was what I had hoped for.”
“So are you telling me… all these years… all the stress I went through… all I ever had to do was sit back and you were going to come after me on your sixteenth birthday?”
Flurry grinned. “Sorry, dad… you always were a bit of a…”
“Goddamn moron.” Shining shook his head at himself.
Flurry giggled and leaned forward, giving him a little peck on the cheek. “... I was going to say ‘a goofy cutie-butt.”
She slunk back, and her face fell again a little bit. She looked nervously up at him.
“Uh… d-dad… I have to say… even though I am the princess of lust…” she stared down at his groin, where Shining’s staff was already starting to spring back to life, “...I’ve… uh… never done this before… and you’re freakin’ huge. Can you… uhm… help?”
Shining smiled and nodded.
He knew just how to choose what to do next.
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by half a point!
Currently the meter is FULL FULL FULL!!!
1)Eat Flurry Heart out. The stallion should take the lead in these things. If Flurry is feeling unsure about things, it’s probably best to start things off by showing her just how talented we are with our tongues. That’ll help to get the filly loosened up and having a fantastic time.
2)Help Flurry Heart to give you a blowjob. Show her how to please a stallion - her dad specifically. Gently coach her on how to lick and suck, when to swirl and when to pump. This will stiffen you right back up and give the filly a full dose of vitamin D before the main event.
3) Push her down and rut her. Love and foreplay can come later. If this filly is anything like her mother she needs a good dicking before the really passionate sex can start. Once she’s squealing you can do some slower things, like making out or oral… but a true stud takes his mare, pony-style, right away.
4) Let’s slow things down a little bit. Pour the filly a glass of wine, get her comfortable, and start off with some nice, slow smooching and massaging. If she’s frightened or has totally cooled off since her little dance number… we need to work her up slowly.
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE
Vote for your choice! Unlike usual, these scenes are going to come rapid-fire so vote quickly! I'll announce in the comments once the poll is closed - it may only be 50 votes or it may be more or less!
Shoutout to Freglz for his help with proofing this chapter... check him out!
We're actually literally there!
I was writing this epic of a final scene out, hoping to get the whole thing done before the end of the month, and the deadline for the father's day contest, which had been the driving force for the whole fic from the start.
Then as I passed 4000 words I realized I was losing energy... I just flew back from Hong Kong yesterday... and I really didn't want to do anything other than my very God damn best on this fic, which has really grown on me.
So I did a quick check of the contest rules and... guess what!? It got extended to July 8th!
So we have a little more time together! Instantly my thoughts turned to how to extend... should I just hold back? Write a multi-parter and update with the bits that I had just finished? Then it hit me like a ton of bricks: why not let you guys decide just how the clop will unfold?
A true CHOOSE YOUR OWN CLOPVENTURE! Just like in your hentai games!
That said... I want to wrap this story up tomorrow, July 1st Canada Day. That means that I'll check in tomorrow morning, see what option is winning, close the poll and write that scene out. Once that quick little bit is done, I'll throw up the option for the next progression, give you a half-hour or an hour... then move to the next one, and on and on... a whole day of CLOP!
By the end of the day we should (hopefully) be all wrapped up!
I'm thinking we'll probably get through three, or four scenes... otherwise poor Shining and Flurry will probably start to get sore!
So make them good ones!
And feel free, as always, to suggest different ideas for what should happen next... now your comments may really get incorporated!
You guys are awesome and I hope this shows just how awesome I think you guys are: I'm trusting YOU with the ultimate clop-scene! The money-shots! They're yours!
You get to choose!
You better make sure that Filly nuts!
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